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Apr

2nd

2012

Urmm.... Hello.... I'm back.... kinda · 3:05am Apr 2nd, 2012

I'm back... and I'm not...

I edited The first chapter of Big Brothers (the second should follow shortly) and I'm planning of submiting it to EqD after the second chapter is edited.

It's not much of an edit, but some sections (one or two) have been streched a bit. I tried to slow a bit the action the best I could.
It's not much, but It's better... I hope.