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JohnBlue


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Thanks for the fav on The Warrior in a Mare's World! What did you like about it?

Thanks for faving Unlike Any Other!

2091594 no problem. Keep up the good work. Your story has a lot of great elements to it that makes me want to read it. All I can say is that you could "flesh" out the story a bit. Aside from that your writing is spot on and your ideas are great. I look forward to the next chapter

I appreciate the Fave for tDDGtE! Thanks for taking an interest! :twilightsmile:

2052156 I'm not entirely sure. There's something I enjoy about HIE's, and yours is pretty good. Im sorry that I can't give any constructive feedback right now. I guess the best I can tell you is that I like the "character" of your characters and the way that you had them integrate into pony land (minus the test with the princesses). Please keep up the good work, and don't be afraid to write to an extreme idea every so often. Sometimes it's the crazy stuff that gives a story its interest. Thanks for the story man.

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