• Member Since 5th Sep, 2014
  • offline last seen May 4th, 2017

Burns


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Thanks for the Watch!

1733425 No problem! There's room for improvement, as there always is, but what's important is that you are definitely talented. In particular, I love your dialogue, because you write all your characters very realistically and I like how it reflects in their voices. From what I can see, there's improvement from previous chapters as well.

If you want to discuss it more in-depth, I can pick out specifics for you over PM :) Either way, I will keep reading.

Thank you for the favorite! :heart: It means a lot to me!

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Agreed. I write about them because they are older, and it's a niche that certainly is worth exploring.

1539054 Oh, absolutely :) It's adorable. I especially like the build up to the conflict. The insecurities shown are very real, very raw and that's what matters in a story like yours. I think it adds a whole new dimension to the Cakes, and not many people even write about the older background ponies.

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