I made some major revisions to the first part of my cutie mark story. I cleaned up the dialogue and many grammar errors as well extended a few parts of the story, attempting to overall make it more readable. I hope you all enjoy that and part two should be coming together shortly. I'm going to take a bit more time to make sure this one is a more polished product before sending it out to you guys. Also, on my pastebin are two unpublished stories which I would like some opinions and comments on

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