Re-writes but still progress. · 1:44pm Oct 31st, 2023
So ya, I got several chapters in, and I think I wrote myself into a corner. In the end much of it had to be scrapped in favor of a slower paise that lets new characters and settings get a better introduction, along with a subplot conflict. What I got down so far feels a lot better, feeling far less rushed.
Some things getting more attention are: