I rewrote the back half of the third chapter, so do go check that out if you have the chance. I think I may have originally developed the plot a little too much before they even made it to the Gala, so I wanted to leave things a little more open so that things could happen at the Gala that weren't exactly possible beforehand. So please, do read that chapter again if you so desire. And comments are always appreciated, too. If you liked what I changed, why? If not, why not? I'm still a new

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