I ain't dead and it looks like I failed my self imposed dead line. Work, writer's block and a faltering muse can really hamper progress, but with a soon coming five day long break from work maybe I can get this damn chapter out. Once again I apologize to those that are keeping tabs on my story.

Alright, third re-write of Chapter Eleven and I am feeling pretty solid about this draft. I'm giving myself a self imposed deadline of getting Chapter Eleven out before New Year's Eve, hopefully I'll be able to reach that goal if work doesn't bog me down.

Now that finals are done, maybe I can finally finish Ch. 11 or maybe i'll just dick around all winter long. Who the crap knows, but damn does it feel good to be done with another semester. School aside, the other reason why Ch. 11 isn't out yet is due to a feeling that my initial write up of it didn't really fit with what I have in mind, in shorter words I am basically re-writing it. Sorry to those that are actually following my story, but with Winter Break in affect now maybe it might be out

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After weeks of procrastination chapter eleven is ready to be edited. Wooohooooo.

Alright, I'm confident enough in my editing that I have (hopefully) managed to stamp out the blaring errors such as spelling from all my chapters. Gonna copy and paste the edited chapters in right now. Now that all this editing is done I can focus back on actually writing up the next bloody chapter.

Well I didn't make my set deadline of a week to finish my initial editing but at least I'm 10 for 10 now! Editing these past two weeks have really taught me that editing is your best friend. Seeing all the careless mistakes that have been pointed out to me had me cringing as I re-read my work. Now to go back and meticulously re-read all ten chapters again and hope I catch every mistake before I replace the older chapters.

4 out of 10 chapters down for my preliminary edit. Hopefully at this pace I'll have all ten chapters squeaky clean by next week then I'll follow it up with one more round of re-reading to see if I managed to nail down all the errors and see if anything else needs polishing.

Well, looks like I finally have enough time and drive to go through my story and act upon the critique by Not Worthy & DJ Pyro 3. Hope these past few weeks of my English class can help me not suck at editing.

Guess chapter Eeeven is gonna take longer than I thought and with school just gettin' back it might be a while. So I'd like to apologize to everyone that's been readin' and I'll do my best to try and follow a strict update schedule of one chapter per week once I drop #11 down.

Welp, I've gotten pass my general laziness/writer's block and enough free time to finally finish chapter ten but I feel that this particular chapter isn't really all that great. But maybe once I go through editing I'll feel a lot more comfortable with it.