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Hopeful Soul

Hopeful Soul #3 · Jan 8th, 2015 · · ·

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1598585 Well, thanks

Unkownname

Unkownname #2 · Jan 8th, 2015 · · ·

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1597539 Well, the story is good. I was lately checking a bunch of stories and out of this one I found this the best. Pretty much the idea is good and the story itself is good. Though I'm not a good critique so you should ask other people. :P ( By that I mean I'm being rushed right now. ;3 )

Hopeful Soul