Wacky Waving Inflatable Arm Flailing Tube Man! · 4:26am Jan 15th, 2015
Wacky Waving Inflatable Arm Flailing Tube Man!
An open-minded half-brony, impressed with what MLP has to offer beyond the shows... and with an... interesting... non-stoped daydream constantly going on in the background...
Wacky Waving Inflatable Arm Flailing Tube Man!
Today is 12/13/2014, or 12/13/14.
This is the last incremental date until 1/2/2103, and I don't know about you, but I doubt that even if I do live to be about 106, that I won't really care that much.
I just thought that I should at least say something about this before it passes. So, have a good day, and for those who still have finals (like me), good luck.
Now I've got to get back to studying...
Yup, we're scary MFer's
So my new story has been denied twice because "It's not related to MLP universe" even though HALF OF CHAPTER 1 IS FROM TWILIGHT'S POINT OF VIEW!!! Also this morning I REALLY stubbed by toe and, 45 minutes later, still hurts...
First off, that's my job. *Starts running around in circles screaming*
While he's doing that, let me say that I'll be working on another story. Don't worry! I still plan on working on StarChaser, I've just ran face first into a brick wall of writers block on that one... My nose still hurts...
This will be more effective because it's not a pony image which causes Anti-Bronies to give it a chance, usually.
So my editor was shown a parody site that turns what you put into it into "Ghetto speak", so he ran the prologue of my story through it... this is what came out...
WARNING!!! Swear words ahead...
Todizzle was just not StarChaser’s day.
Just when tha Resistizzle (any mo' betta scams welcome) had finally thought dat it would be left ridin' solo tha Unicorn tribe had decided ta go n' fuck up every last muthafuckin thang again.
Exactly what the title says, I just want some feedback on how I'm doing on my story.
What I did right, what I did wrong, and what I "dun goofed".
That's it, I just want to improve.
Well, I finally got it started, I'm now writing a story!
Why don't you check it out? Remember, if you down vote it, please say in the comment section why you didn't like it so I can improve.