2103553 Thermodynamics plays a fairly sizable role in patent law. If you see anything that claims to have energy efficiency of 1 or more, it just gets tossed in the garbage because we have laws of physics against that. I'm not a contract person. I'll offer what assistance I can, I just don't think it will really help that much.

Ironically, patent law IS what I originally wanted to do.

1944283 And you made me feel sad inside. Such is the cycle of life.

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Well now you've made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Thanks for the response. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

1942919 I'm just gonna make a list. It would be easier than the paragraphs
1) The conflict between Sweetie and Rarity felt real. It actually made me feel for both of them.
2) The open ending left me with a feeling in my chest that I can rarely feel from stories here that aren't written by ShortSkirtsandexplosions.
3) The fantastic use of symbolism and foreshadowing.
4) Your ability to make me simultaneously love and loathe every character involved in the story.
5) The fact that I, honestly, wasn't sure how the story would end until it happened. I constantly predict stories and absolutely love to be proven wrong.