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GCU Poke It With A Stick


ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin

Jun
14th
2015

So, just watched episode 100. · 4:16am Jun 14th, 2015

That is all.

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Thank you for the watch!

Thanks for the follow!

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Admittedly, I have only read the first 3 chapters, but I do like what I see. There is good set up and I do like how descriptive you are with firearms. I eagerly await to see those...things go down in a hail of dakka.
One issue I do have is grammar. Nothing that slows down the story, but noticeable.
Other than that, it's all good. I look forward to reading more.

So you faved Battle of the blanks eh? What part of my story do you like?

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