1069509 I just finished your story tonight. It was really a lot of fun to read! Your characters are really well written. Originally I found The Dusk Guard after reading Arad's Stardust.
My only complaint was that the whole Baltimare R&D centre was a little cliche I pretty much knew it was going to be dropped on something as soon as it was described and as a result, that scene felt a little forced. On the other hand, the fight where Steel reveals himself to be a Blademaster and challenges Blade felt realy cool.
and thanks for faving Lost and Blind!
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1069509
I just finished your story tonight. It was really a lot of fun to read! Your characters are really well written. Originally I found The Dusk Guard after reading Arad's Stardust.
My only complaint was that the whole Baltimare R&D centre was a little cliche I pretty much knew it was going to be dropped on something as soon as it was described and as a result, that scene felt a little forced. On the other hand, the fight where Steel reveals himself to be a Blademaster and challenges Blade felt realy cool.
Also, Steel is cool. Badass Uncle!
Jambo! Thank you for faving "The Dusk Guard: Rise!"