; cool thanks bro.

982095

I'll look into it.

I could also use a review of my other FOE stories as well; particularly Fallout Stalliongrad since it is my main story. When you get a chance that is.

980477

Thanks for clarifying this. It makes a lot more sense that it is part of a series, than just a stand alone story. I'm sad to hear that your story is made on the X-box. That must be hard, and I commend you for what you done. Sadly, at this time I can't point you to a credible author. All I can do is tell you how to find an editor. Primarily, going onto different groups and requesting help. I would recommend trying one of the few FoE groups, as well as the writer's group. (You can find a link to that group on my page here under the: Groups tab.)

979355

Yep! >:3

Thanks; and that is just one part of a seies of stories I am working on. There are 3 stories prior to that one; I probably should have told you that first lol, my bad. If you want to check those out then go ahead, it`d make a bit more since to you. The stories are; A very merry wasteland Heartswarming Eve, New year changed heart, and New Years night. Also I am working on another story called Fallout Stalliongrad as well. Everything I do is done on my xbox as well; I try to correct what I can when I can via our office computer; but it only has word 2010 on it, so even then I`d like a credible editor to go through my stuff to make it... better. If you could point me in the right direction for one it`d be great.