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Pendragon552


A world of Order's no fun at all. But with just Chaos it will soon fall. A perfect balance must be made, else your world will surely fade.

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Rewrite is up! · 11:38am Jun 30th, 2015

So, remember when I said I would rewrite A Nightmare's World? Well, if any of you didn't see, the rewrite is up! This one is a very different, written not as what Nightmare's World was, which by the way was a memory from Shadow, instead it's actually written like a proper first person story. With the addition of Nightmare Star into the card game, I'll likely be tweaking Nightmare Sun's name into that. That being said, there will be a few similarities, though I'm looking for this one to be a

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Welcome to Fimfiction.

Your not brand new but relatively new and I want to do my best to make have a place here:twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the welcome, and I wish to assure you that I take no insult from the review. In fact, I actually appreciate the review and encourage criticism, and he has given me a multitude of ways to make my story better.

Shockwave— As leader of the Rage Reviewers, I wish to welcome you to our society. Please enjoy all the reviews you wish to see, and partake in your own reviews.

I understand your story was recently reviewed. I only wish you take his harsh words as encouragement to continue and do better. That is what we are here for: to give authors the push they need to get better by being brutally honest.

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