How To: Avoid Blatantly Mary Sue-ish OCs · 1:26pm Mar 7th, 2014
Hello. Here's a checklist of some elements that I have found in Mary Sue pony OCs.
-Alicorn status.
-Popularity.
-Always agreed with, even when harsh or wrong.
-Alpha B**** status.
-Red and black, darker or washed-out color scheme
-Related to a main character that we see featured in episodes.
-Unrealistically Tragic Backstory Syndrome (UTBS)
-Speaks several languages fluently
-Blinding beauty
-Smarter than Twilight (because she's smartest pony.)
-Infallible
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