This story is getting a little too close for comfort. It still has quit a few chapters left, and I have no idea if it can hold on. If the next few chapters can't save it, I will be taking it down for major repairs and resubmit it when it is ready. I can give a small example to what will be planned in a future chapter.

Hope you like it.

Never mess with that state. Especially if it comes to the tornados from last year. WBC found out the hard way, they will take no bull from them.

GO OKLAHOMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Sequel is almost ready. Just having it looked over.

the second chapter is under construction. I'll have it back up ASAP.

I would like to apologize for my last post. I was not in the best of moods and my anger went out on the wrong people. Sorry.

I'm going to say, screw looking for an editor. These are my stories, and I write the way I write. I'll look over these stories myself before trying to find an editor. I've tried millions of times to find one, and no luck. I'm taking matters into my own hands. People are welcomed to leave reviews on improvement ideas, but that will be it.

DarthRedbeard here.

I'm going to be doing a complete rewrite of this story. The story itself will remain up, but the chapters will be coming down to be worked on. Until further notice, this story will be under the incomplete category. The revised version will have more chapters and Chapter two will be a whole other story.