Have any of you read "Derpy's finest hour" if so keep reading this if not read the story then puke then like or dislike then come back to this. I plan on making a remake of the story and i might need help for a proof reader or editor on this also would you all be so kind to give me ideas through out the story thanks.

P.s. I got permission to mess with story.
P.s.s. i copied the begining from the real story.
P.s.s.s I'm sorry =C