First Impression Critique: Supernatural - By Saternaut · 10:51pm Mar 16th, 2014

Doing this again. Criticism is for the soul, I guess.
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Link to story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/174334/supernatural

Date: March 16, 2014

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Criticism of Guardian of Ponyville - by Jerry23 · 6:07am Jan 2nd, 2014

Thanks to the author, he took down the original post because he couldn't handle criticism properly. So now, I'm just posting it here in the meantime.
Here is the link to the story.
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Well, I guess the story itself has also been taken down. :\
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