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Kritten


Real life is for the stories you just can't make up.

Sep
6th
2015

First Impressions Critiquing -- Introduction · 6:57am Sep 6th, 2015

New writer? Want someone to critique your work with a quick response time? I'm always available to look at your works, so don't be afraid to hit me up. The length doesn't matter. As long as it's under 20k words, I'll do you a solid and give you a quick rundown on what to expect when the average user will give their first impressions while opening your story. Just the first couple of chapters will do, since there is no "First Impression" for return readers.

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Oct
10th
2014

First Impressions Critique: Luna's First Winter Back Home - by Morning Mist · 1:17am Oct 10th, 2014

First Impressions Critique: Luna's First Winter Back Home - by Morning Mist
Link to Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/220786/lunas-first-winter-back-home
Link to FIC - Lost in the Stars:
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/360156/first-impressions-critique-lost-in-the-stars-by-wackiestrolly

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Aug
31st
2014

First Impressions Critique: Of Ponies and Dragons - By NobleValor · 8:31am Aug 31st, 2014

First Impressions Critique: Of Ponies and Dragons - By NobleValor
Link to story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/206948/of-ponies-and-dragons
Link to Fimfiction's Guide to Writing: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

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Aug
28th
2014

First Impressions Critique: Of Time Lords and Ponies - By Arched Lightning · 2:54am Aug 28th, 2014

First Impressions Critique: Of Time Lords and Ponies - By Arched Lightning
Link to Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/210445/of-time-lords-and-ponies
Link to Fimfiction's Writing Guide: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

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Aug
16th
2014

First Impressions Critique: Love and Death - By morningMist · 6:58am Aug 16th, 2014

First Impression Critique: Love and Death - by morningMist
Link to Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/206756/love-and-death
Link to Fimfiction's Writing Guide: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
Link to Grammar Tips: http://grammartips.homestead.com/caps.html
Date Created: August 16, 2014

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Aug
7th
2014

First Impressions Critique: Lost In the Stars - By Wackiestrolly · 12:41am Aug 7th, 2014

First Impression Critique: Lost in the Stars - by Wackiestrolly
Link to the Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179071/lost-in-the-stars
Link to Fimfiction's Guide for Writers: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
Link to How to use Comma Splices:

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Apr
4th
2014

First Impression Critique - Reality check - By ColdHandsNoHeart · 11:42am Apr 4th, 2014

First Impression Critique - Reality check - by ColdHandNoHeart

Link to story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/178289/reality-check
Link to Fimfiction's Writing Guide: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
Link to How to Use Commas: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/GRAMMAR/commas.htm

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Mar
28th
2014

First Impression Critique - I'm Your Wing - by Metool Bard · 12:06am Mar 28th, 2014

First Impression Critique - I'm Your Wing by Metool Bard

Link to Fimfiction's Writer Guide: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

Link to Difference Between Dash and Hyphen: http://www.differencebetween.com/difference-between-dash-and-vs-hyphen/

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Mar
24th
2014

First Impression Critique - Fallout Equestria: Signs of Decay - by BusterBuizel · 10:13pm Mar 24th, 2014

First Impression Critique -- Fallout Equestria: Signs of Decay by BusterBuizel

Link to Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/177166/fallout-equestria-signs-of-decay
Link to Fimfiction Guide to Writing: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

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Mar
18th
2014

First Impression Critique: From Me, To My OC - By Pixel Berry98 · 3:06am Mar 18th, 2014

First Impression Critique: From Me, To My OC - by Pixel Berry98

Link to Story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162672/from-me-to-my-oc
Link to Fimfiction's Guide for Writers: http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

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