Collab Half - Promotion: Filly Fooler? by JumbledThought · 11:57pm Sep 2nd, 2014
So... part of the collaboration between myself and JumbledThought is up now.
I sometimes pretend I have a posting schedule other than "sometime soon."
So... part of the collaboration between myself and JumbledThought is up now.
So, I did a Ctrl-F on 'that' after hearing the advice in a writing podcast yesterday... In a 25000 word story, I use 'that' close to 200 times. I was horrified.
This is a story that I helped to edit, and learned a lot in the process. I'm not so good at portraying and personalizing conflict and making a tense moment.
Mind's Eye is. This is how to do tension.
If you enjoy TwiDash with more than a touch of tension, please go read this.
This is going to be a bit different from my previous blogs on writing. This is about style, and style is completely up to the author. This is my preferred style to write in. The Silent Author style. I may do blogs about others in the future, but this is mine.
So, what is a plot hole?
Plot holes are what happens when a story contradicts itself.
This can come in a number of forms, and doesn't relate to just characterization, though that's often the biggest kind of plot hole. Let me define a few of what I consider to be major sources of pitfalls for writers.
1. World Building & Mechanics
The twist plot point. The twist ending. We all know them, and have read stories that use them. There's quite a lot of them here on Fimfiction, because its an easy way to drum up some tension and a surprise. Lead one way, then go in a drastically different direction, or even just a surprising direction by the end of the story.
First off, some terminology. I tend to have my own (sometimes wildly differing) ideas of what a word means from what others do, and this blog isn't meant to confuse.
I'm too exhausted to write at the moment, and I'll be going to bed early, but until then, and into the next couple of days, ask me anything. I'll answer. The answer may not be what you expect or want, but I will answer any and all questions.
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Edit: Currently watching PONIES, the Anthology. Because. Ponies. And silly. And crazy head tired thing.
Now that I have your attention. Let me actually posit an actually crazy idea for a story. Because truth in advertising.
First off, this would be Human in Equestria. Before you click "Unfollow," please let me explain.
It would be something that I thought up on the way home from work, polished before I actually write it. It would be multiple chapters, be a Lyra Heartstrings x Bonnie Bonafonte fic. Yes. Bon Bon is the human in this.
Premise: