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Watching old pony videos makes me compare....... · 2:54am Nov 15th, 2014

the arabic one....

FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDY'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

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Well, the birth scene is a bit weird, but it flows with the story. Besides that, it's not that bad.:rainbowhuh::moustache:

Dont worry! My older brother is now my permanent editor! :twilightsmile:

955326 That's understandable. First-time efforts are never the best things we'll ever write. The blog and kindle ebook Write Good Or Die is a good book for the budding writer, even in the realm of fanfiction. See also How Not To Write A Novel. These are good books for authors to read. They may help you.

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