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Nov

9th

2013

check out beanie's story · 6:29pm Nov 9th, 2013

here check this out. It is his first story and it's pretty powerful.

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MLP: FiM
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Slice of Life
When a human is sent to a world unfamiliar to him, what happens
Human
Celestia
Luna
OC
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Romaji

Romaji #10 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Oh, and sorry to disapoint you, but #1 is not crossed off.

Romaji

Romaji #9 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Hello, I am Romaji, the ~~person~~ set of entities tearing your fic apart because it had to be done, otherwise you'd stay a shit writer forever.
Sorry, but somethings have to be done for your improvement.

Anyway, since I'm taking the time to leave detailed comments on your failures, there is one thing you can do to redeem yourself: read and comment on every chapter of my fic, Mutant
Oh and put a link to it in the authors note of the next chapter.

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