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Starry_Sky


Jul
28th
2012

Woah! · 6:51pm Jul 28th, 2012

Wow. Rainbow was received rather well. I really hope all the readers had as much fun reading it as I did writing it!

Now, down to business. I've mentioned this both in the story description and in several comments. But, for those of you who haven't seen it, I shall tell you here.

I can confirm I'm working on an alternate ending to Rainbow. A much more sadder and darker ending. So, as of now, the story status has been set to "Incomplete."

Here's a little sneak peek.

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After the pain stopped, I noticed everything was beginning to grow dark. Listening for the beeps, they came few and far inbetween. It was time, I could tell. And Rainbow Dash hadn’t appeared. I began to cry, I was so frustrated. My eyes began to close, as everything began to go dark. It was barely audible, but it could be heard. My final words.

"Please....appear....Dashie...."

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