Hi there! I was just here to make a little critique on your stories. Not insulting you, but here it is:
The grammar is terrible. You forget to add punctuation a lot of times, and you really need to make your stories longer and more interesting. It'll help you.
Hi there! I was just here to make a little critique on your stories. Not insulting you, but here it is:
The grammar is terrible. You forget to add punctuation a lot of times, and you really need to make your stories longer and more interesting. It'll help you.