Well, I'm looking at Everfree Crusaders, and looks like nopony actually cares for it. I was going to write at least a couple more chapters, but if I'm not going to get readers or helpful responses I'll just leave it as is. The only reason I put it on here was for some sort of feedback, but I guess that's what ponychan was for. If somepony out there actually wanted to read the thing send me a message or something.