Hey, I'm still alive! I even have proof!

Late at night, inside the palace.
"...........You know... this isn't the kind of thing I do for anypony..."

"Well? Can you do it!? Can you please do it?"

"*sigh* Fine... but only a little, okay?"

The male human got behind the pegasus filly and started by grabbing her shoulders and rubbing them gently. Then went further down her back and started preening her wings.

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Thinking while writing has gotten me to think: this story is dumb!

First: I said I was going with the flow... the number one rule about writing, is that you don't write what comes to mind and leave it there. I almost ended this story on a bad note with chapter 13. Which I changed...

Second: I feel that my ability to write this story is highly challenged; I write actions most of the time and no text enhancers to go along with them. Read Humbucker's criticisms to understand.

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