661672 Oh, I'm not too good with criticizing stories. I just love to share ideas with others and help them develop those ideas before they make stories out of them.

660489 The Illogic? Thank you for the offer. I love Critiques
Feel Free to give ideas or critics on any of my stories.

Oh boy! A freshly arrived member! The Illogic has already set eyes on you. If ever yo need help with your stories or something, don't hesitate to ask me, especially with story ideas. I love sharing those.