2253858 Well, i´m not really a critic but i liked the world you created. At first Twilights Training and Missions on the alternate earth with the PFDR and the interludes back in Equestria. It´s much more interesting then the Shows Storyline.
I´m reading now "The Princess and the Soldier" and hope you keep up the great work. I´m interessted to see what adventures the Commander will have in the peaceful parallel universe world.
Journey to EquestriaThe only hope for three ponies who wish for freedom is a legend of a place called Equestriaby Aldrigold
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RocksOn the Pie family farm, there are only rocks. It's a life Pinkie moved away from. Back home, after a tragic event, her sister Inkie wonders if she should do the same. After all: it's hard to have a life worth living, with only rocks.by NTSTS
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Thanks so much for the favorite on Legacy! I appreciate it!
2253867 I'm glad you enjoyed her adventures on Federal Earth and I hope you enjoy Tue Princess andThe Soldier as well.
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Well, i´m not really a critic but i liked the world you created.
At first Twilights Training and Missions on the alternate earth with the PFDR and the interludes back in Equestria.
It´s much more interesting then the Shows Storyline.
I´m reading now "The Princess and the Soldier" and hope you keep up the great work.
I´m interessted to see what adventures the Commander will have in the peaceful parallel universe world.
That k you for adding Soldier of Magic to your Favorites.
Might I ask what you like about it?
Thanks for the fav! What did you like about the story?