To anyone popping up to look for my story, I've revoked the submission on it for now. The overwhelming amount of negative criticism on it has really depressed me, and in all honesty, it's very unfair criticism, not constructive criticism. People complain about the main character being an alicorn, which, like I said, plays a big part in the story. There were complaints of mary sue characters and generic plots, which again is unfair because REALLY it's only been the first episode. That's not nearly enough time to flesh everyone out enough. It's really depressed me, so like I said I revoked the submission and I'm currently rewriting a few bits and I'm going to work on a few of the future episodes so I can get some more out quicker to prevent this happening again. For more details why I revoked it, just ask, I can copy and paste the comment I made on the post itself.

Hello there. I hope you enjoy your stay on this website. I'm sure everyone else will. Tehe....