Jan
14th
2014
Round 3: Fight · 3:50am Jan 14th, 2014
Hey guys, just thought I'd share what the next developments are as far as fic writing. The next one will be released in a shorter amount of time and will feature pegging, as well as some gay beastiality. It's difficult for me to write about straight sex as it's not something I'm too terribly familiar with (yet), but the gay stuff is, well, right up my alley so to speak. Based on the positive responses Thirty Minutes Late received, I can't wait to get started on my the next fic and
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I very much liked the story. You set out a premise and developed it well (albeit with a lot of puns). When I reached that final scene, it felt all the better having their relationship reach that point because of how much development the relationship received prior to that point. In short, few stories I read all the way through in one sitting, you're an exception.
As for which story to pursue, as much as I'd love to see your take on the Dusk Shine/Professor relationship, Dusk Shine and an educator of authority is a very common shipping thread. That's not to say you wouldn't do it well (I'm sure you would) but I'm significantly more interested in your Elusive story. The conflict of overcoming inherent dirtiness/dignity in pursuit of more physical rewards or say diamonds creates an interesting dynamic in itself that I'd love to see explored.
You really like Corporal Butterscotch? I have two other ideas, but I don't know which one to do first. Elusive in a very loose reinterpretation of Beauty and the Beast (the beast is a diamond dog) or Dusk Shine as a student attracted to his professor. Which do you think?
554342 Yeah, during the revision process I somehow failed to notice just how bulky the paragraphs were. That'll be fixed for sure if I write another. Meanwhile, I happy to hear you enjoyed the fic, and thanks for sharing that with me.
I appreciate it 
I really enjoyed your first fic! The detail was great and there was a good flow! But for your next fic, start a new paragraph after a character finishes talking or doing something! I hope to see more from you!