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Straker


Dec
23rd
2014

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1383581 No problem. It's a good story so far. :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the fave! :pinkiehappy:

989433 Whoops! Missed your comment No problem. I really liked it. Lots of witty banter and I really enjoyed how you played Twilight and Trixie against each other. The story really deserves more than just a 16 upvote, to be honest.

1000581 You're quite welcome. I'm still reading through it to see how I really like it by the end but I didn't want to lose track of it. So far I really like it, even if Twilight is MAYBE a tad too bad-ass in it...though I can attribute that to her power levels going to 11 now and maybe making her a bit more...aggressive than she was as a unicorn but the intrigue is fascinating and I like the brisk pace the story sets because it's not long winded. Too many stories spend SO much time painting the picture of the setting that I eventually forget what is supposed to be happening, lol, and the characters are nice as well so there's that. I look forward to finishing the story.

Thanks for the fave and the comment on The Celestia Code! :twilightsmile:

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