Star of the Show 'rewrite' · 11:43am Oct 24th, 2023
The first chapter of this story was what bothered me the most, so I think subsequent rewrites will be less entire chapter overhauls and more akin to editing pieces of the chapter that I don't vibe with. With the exception maybe of the chapter where Nemesis storms Ellura HQ in Manehattan, that one may get some significant rewrites. I can't tell when that'll happen of course, I'm on vacation at the moment visiting my home state.
*boops your snoot*
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You're a better floof
Tigpaca! You're a good floof!
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I know that I'm replying to a 2 year-old comment, and with the story being cancelled, but wouldn't it be good to put this story up for adoption or maybe find someone who you can trust to finish it? The latter might help a lot.