Found someone willing to help me proofread for these chapters and the future ones, don't know when it will be done but working on it now.

Edit: Most (if not all) of the grammar errors are now done, just need to re-write a few parts so they both look better and and are more descriptive.

JUst finished and submitted chapter 2 should be up in a hour or so

The website said that I was Applejack, but what do you think. The way I see it I'm in the middle of a 3way tie with Rarity Applejack and Rainbowdash