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JoeShogun


Mar
3rd
2018

Nine Days Down continues to haunt me. · 6:38pm Mar 3rd, 2018

But in a good way. After much tinkering and fixing and general re-jiggering, it has been accepted to Equestria Daily! Huzzah! It should show up there...eventually. Within the next few days, or so I hear. In celebration, I published an extra chapter. It features the strange tale of how the world was born, who Gaia/Terra and Typhon are, and some details on the weird biology of the big Princesses. Hope you guys wanted some more exposition, 'cause that's what we've got.

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I totally missed it! For like, a year and a half! But this was awesome. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. Eventually. Because I'm bad at social media of all kinds.

I read Birds and Bees, so I thought I'd check out your other stories and--

wait.

that was your first story?

followed

I found your Bird and Bees story to be delightful.

I don't usually go in for sex-themed pony stories, but this one was both well thought-out and executed tastefully, with the kind of hilarious awkwardness that you would expect from this sort of situation. I liked your attention to details, and the little head-cannon bits that you added were both interesting conceptually and character appropriate (which in itself is nice to see in a piece of FanFiction).

It's exactly this kind of gem that makes taking the risk on an unfamiliar genre worthwhile. I hope that you'll keep experimenting with stories, and if you post any more of them here I will be interested to read them.

And the words are all escaping, and coming back all damaged

Should have shipped them through U.P.S. ...

Just kidding. I'm doing temp work with them right now, so that was the first thing I thought of when I saw that line.

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