Long ago about 1 million years before Celastia there was nothing but chaos.So a group of brothers and sisters came together to restore balance and 500 thousand years later chaos came again.but now there is nothing but order and harmony so the group must restore balance by killing one of the most powerful beings on the planet.[I'm gonna say this i am thatguy44 but i forgot my password and any how this is my second fic ive written and i am looking for critisizm
The three little fillies known as THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS were walking in a dark damp cave. “CUTIE MARK CRUSADER EXPLORERS…. YAY.” The three little unsuspecting fillies ventured deeper into the cave “where in tha hay ar we goin and it’s a little creepy in here?” Applebloom stated completely bored.
“I don’t know and this place is disgusting.” The white unicorn Sweetiebell said stepping over some fallen rocks. “Come on girls Rainbow dash wouldn’t be scared of this place and neither should we.” Piped in the enthusiastic orange pegasus Scootalu.
All three of them stopped and stared at the metallic door infront of them. “Come on lets open it I bet there’s treasure in there.” With the combined effort of the three little fillies they pushed open the door and walked up to a computer console with a blinking green light. “What in the hay is this thingy?”
Applebloom looked at the console then at the screen. “I don’t know maybe Twilight might know.” The two continued to stare at the screen as Sweetiebell looked up and screamed. The two others looked at what their friend was looking at and gasped in horror at what they saw. Staring at them hanging from the ceiling was a body of an Alicorn with bits of flesh missing.
“Is it asleep?” Scootalu gulped and looked at it further wishing she didn’t because at closer inspection the body was suspended by spears through its body. “I don’t think that pony will be waking up” said a very nervous Scootalu. A mysterious wind came out of nowhere and freaked them out. “What in the hay is that racket?” They suddenly heard the sound of rusty old metal tear flesh. They all three looked up in horror to see the body struggling to free itself. It quickly stopped struggling and turned its head towards them. It started talking in the dragon’s native tongue. “What’s it saying?” Sweetie and Applebloom just shrugged then it spoke again.
“હું એક છે કે જે તમે દાંડીઓને તમે જ્યારે હું ઊંઘ બધા એકલા છોડી છે ખાય છે અને તમે મારી આગળ ભોજન આવશે છું”
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“You three should not be here.” When it spoke it surprised the three little fillies. Not because it could speak like them but it sounded so smooth and feminine it completely betrayed the creature’s looks and earlier voice. But it still looked like the same threataning creature
It quickly noticed their fear leave there expression. “Hahahahaha you must think I won’t hurt you but once I get down you will be my first meal from awakening.” The three fillies gulped and started backing towards the exit. The creature saw this and worked with the first blade. After 1 second it got its front hoof free and just smashed the other blades off. The three fillies where already running as fast as their legs could carry them. The creature landed with a thud and its horn glowed teleporting it outside of the cave and waited on the top of the inside of the cavern.
The three fillies ran under it unaware that it was hiding but quickly became aware of its presence as it jumped down and grabbed Scootalu. The creature dragged Scootalu into the darkness of the cavern and into a secret room and got to business ripping apart her flesh and devouring it.
The remaining two didn’t notice Scootalu was missing until they were on the outskirts of Ponyville. “Uh w-w-w-where’s Scoots?” Sweetiebell gulped and just continued towards town with Applebloom in-toe. They continued to Twilight’s house which was the public library. When they entered the library they were crying because they were thinking of what happened to their friend.
Twilight was there in the middle of the library surrounded by her friends and all of them where looking at the dirty duo that were crying. “Applebloom wat’s tah matter?” Applebloom shared a glance with Sweetiebell then replied “Scootalu Sweetiebell and meh were explorin tis cave we found and we found a monster and it dragged Scootalu away.” Applebloom busted out into tears after she said that and was sobbing on the floor with Sweetiebell. Rainbow dash felt weird like something was watching her from the window but when she looked through she saw nothing. Then a sudden knocking was heard at the door along with a feminine voice “children open up I have candy for you and I am so terribly cold and hungry please let me in.”
The two fillies recognized the voice and screamed “that’s the creature that took Scootalu!” Applejack and Rainbow dash both got up quickly and went to the door while twilight and rarity closed and locked all of the windows. “You think barricading the door and locking the windows will stop me psh I move with the shadows hence my name Shadow.” Twilight thought about what it said then went quickly to get her crown of Harmony while rainbow and applejack and rarity, using her magic, tried to stop whatever was banging on the door.
The door busted open with a powerful magic blast knocking it down onto Applejack and Rainbow dash knocking them out cold. Fluttershy was just a small ball in a corner while Pinkie tried to get the two little fillies away from Shadow. Twilight rushed back into the main room and powered her magic into her crown which shot forward a powerful magic blast.
When it connected with Shadow it didn’t even move it a bit. Shadow just stared at them then a smile stretched across Shadow’s face while it laughed “that tickled.” Shadow started to inch closer to Twilight when a blast of rainbow magic knocked Shadow across the room and into a bookshelf. “I bet that hurt” said a new voice that sounded muscular and then from the door and a tall unicorn stepped through. With further examination the unicorn was almost as tall as Celeastia and had a dark blue coat with a black mane and tail.
“You, I thought you where died.” The tall unicorn just laughed with a smirk on his face. While he charged another attack. “You can’t get rid of me that easily.” Shadow surprisingly made a large flash of bright light and escaped. The tall unicorn turned to the group that was now awake and shocked by his presence. He chuckled and turned to leave but teleported away to find Shadow.
Shadow was leaning against a tree next to a river bank after licking its muzzle after devouring a manticore. A flash appeared infront of Shadow as a tall unicorn stood out amongst the surroundings. The two glared at each other then slowly a smile appeared on their faces. The smile quickly broke into laughter as the duo hugged each other.
“Oh brother it’s good to see you again I am a little confused can you explain some things for.” Shadow said this while laying on the ground right next to her brother. “Of course sister and if you were wondering why I attacked you it was because you became unfocused in your blood rage and I couldn’t have you show your true form yet.”
The unicorn explained while also lying down while his little sister snuggled up to him. “First of all how have you been and second of all are we up to fight good or evil?” She said while still nuzzling him. “Hahahahaha I have been well I have also spoken with our younger brother and older sister.” The unicorn was now starting to laugh hysterically barely able to say his next sentence. “Would you stop that it tickles,” he exclaimed rolling on his side while his little sister continued to assault him with laughter.
“You always used to do this to me.” The unicorn had enough and was barely able to mange to lift his sister away from him. He then gave her a menacing glare but when she changed her eye color to a beautiful rose color they both erupted into another fit of giggles.
“All right you said you would explain some things for me,” she asked looking up at the midnight sky. “Yes and we are splitting into teams you and me will take this side while the other two handle the other side of the globe.”
“The other side of the globe what’s going on?” she asked completely confused.
“There is too much order and peace so we need to eliminate the world leaders,” he stated bluntly. Shadow looked up to her much older brother and rested her head on his hooves. “Shadowshifter I wish things could be as they used to be.”
Shadowshifter started to become a bit nervous because she only said his name when she was talking about what happened before they became family. His mind flashed of memories when he wasn’t his current size and when he was dating shadow. He violently shook the thoughts from his head and laid his head over Shadow’s and decided to use her full name this time. “Shadow Dancer I know how you feel; but like I said I’m not one to dwell on the past: yes I sometimes wish we could just go back to the way things use to be: but I’m sorry but duty comes first. Now let’s go to sleep.”
Shadow Dancer looked up at him through tired eyes and barely squeaked out “goodnight Shifter I love you.” He watched as Shadow Dancer adorably yawned and fell to sleep. He smiled to himself as he slowly pulled a fore hoof out from under her and softly stroked her it and humming a soft lullaby.
He chuckled to himself seeing one of his old fantasies right infront of his eyes. His love lying beneath him with him having the power to do anything. He sighed to himself for the isolation was supposed to get rid of those thoughts.
[Still she looks beautiful under the glow of the moon now that she fully restored her physical form.] He also noticed she was now a bit longer taller and thinner. He started to think more about what they once had and came to a conclusion once their task was done to ask her out…Again.
Having thought out what to do his smile returned and he stopped brushing her mane and kissed her on the fore head just below her horn and whispered softly. “I love you to I always have but I tried to deny it and now as soon as this is over we will be together again……my love.” After giving his little speech he dosed off unaware that Shadow Dancer heard everything.
Shadow dancer woke up with the sun high in the sky and looked around for her brother to no avail. She got up and took a drink from the cool rushing river beside her and took a better look at her reflection. She looked very dark and intimidating, so she changed her pitch black look to a look of the night sky and a dark blue mane and tail.
She was startled by a groan from the bushes beside her and out limped Shadowshifter branding numerous bruises and multiple open wounds and some ancient scars that reopened. Seeing her brother in a state she has never seen him in before she became very worried.
“Brother what happened to you.” Shadowshifter stared at her for a few minutes before collapsing on the ground. “Oh my brother are you ok,” said Shadow Dancer while pushing him into a comfortable position.
Shifter looked at his little sister with a worried expression written on his face. “Sister…run…get out of here…go find our brother and sister… go find Shadow Stone and Shadowglider.” She stared at him unsure of what to do before he pushed her away and yelled “run.”
Shadowshifter’s body suddenly began to change into a bi-pedal creature that they used to fight a long time ago, a human, but he was turning into something different. He grew large menacing claws and his mouth was extended a bit and large fangs jotted out of his mouth. He also grew claws on his feet and his eyes turned blood red making Shadow Dancer filled with fear, for not of her brother but of what she might have to do to him.
Shadowshifter let out a very loud and menacing howl being heard all around the world. He stared at his sister for a moment then darted off in the direction towards the most powerful ponies on the planet. He was heading for Canterlot castle. Shadow Dancer quickly snapped out of her gaze and flew into the air following her big brother. She had to fly at a pace that would have made Rainbow Dash jealous just to keep up with Shadowshifter that got significantly faster in his new form. In just 10 seconds flat he was on the largest street in Canterlot and was being stared at by over a hundred ponies.
He took a step forward but was stopped by his little sister blocking his path. Shadowshifter snarled and let out a mighty roar. Celeastia, Luna, the elements of harmony and 30 royal guards quickly landed and the guards blocked Shadowshifter’s escape.
“Human leave this place before we are forced to remove you,” hissed Celeastia. Shadowshifter chuckled to himself and branded his vicious looking claws. Shadow Dancer got in between Celeastia and her brother and everypony finally got a good look at Dancer.
“So my pray comes to me at last,” hissed Shadowshifter in a very snake like voice. Shadow Dancer quickly picked up on two other powerful beings that she recognized as her sister and other brother. Shadowshifter snapped his claws and music began to play while a mysterious wind blew from nowhere. He only managed a few steps towards Celeastia and her sister before getting tackled by all of the guards.
The pile of ponies began to grow until all of the ponies where forced off of Shadowshifter and he looked like a creature that made Shadow Dancer scream and a thought ran through her head [no no way I was for sure that we killed him there was no chance he could of taken over one of us].
Shadowshifter was transformed into the vicious demon lord known as Agromon. Agromon took advantage of his snake tail like feet and tripped all of his attackers then grabbed one of the bystanders and swallowed them whole. Fluttershy passed out, most if not all of the remaining none guard ponies ran around panicking, and the other Shadow siblings finally arrived. Shadow Stone having a natural link to nature energy picked up many of the cobble stone blocks and threw them at Agromon while Shadowglider grabbed Shadow Dancer and pulled her away from Agromon’s grasp.
Shadow Dancer looked up at her older sister seeing her fire like coat and her large wings that matched her size of being a few inches taller than Celeastia. She than looked over at her younger earth-pony brother and seeing that he toned his already large muscles. He still had his earthy brown look and a black mane and tail.
Shadow Stone continued to through large stones at Agromon making him angry while Shadow Dancer regained her hoofing. Pinkie pie, to everypony’s shock, walked right up to Agromon and started laughing in his face. Agromon looked completely confused “what’s so funny,” he asked.
Pinkie now fell over laughing hysterically which made Agromon angry and he picked her up and started to crush her bones. “Can’t laugh now can you because there is nothing funny to laugh about.” He squeezed Pinkie so tight she made a rubber ducky quack sound which made Agromon laugh so hard he dropped Pinkie Pie.
Shadow Dancer launched herself at Agromon and hit him hard in the stomach sending him flying. Shadowglider few above him and gathered a large cloud and, being a powerful being, made a overly sized humongous lightning bolt hit Agromon.
Agromon got back up and hurled large pieces of stone at the two flying beings and neglected to notice the very angry and very powerful earth-pony run towards him. Shadow Stone launched himself at Agromon and delivered the strongest bucking in history and, since he added a lot of nature energy behind it, launched Agromon out of Shadowshifter’s unconscious body.