This is a random story, I really had nothing else to do, I did this just for fun. You may rate it and comment it as you please just nothing too negative please. If you want to make a request on which pony I should tickle next, say in the comments or message me, If I have time I would be happy to fill out your request. (I will tickle Orignal Characters if you want me too, just make sure the owner of the charecter says yes)
Vinyl Scratch was shackled to the table where she lay, she was shackled in an X position.
“Ugg,” she tried to break free “where I’m I!?!? Leme go!!!”
“Nah… I don’t feel like it, but I’ll tell ya what, you admit my classical music is better than your “cool” music, and I let you go.” It was Octavia and standing beside her were two Minicons (miniature transformers)
“I’d rather eat glass.” Vinyl shouted
“Suit yourself.” Octavia said The two Minicons came toward her and put their hands on her stomach, Vinyl immediately broke out a smile; Vinyl knew she was death ticklish, if someone were to even touch her stomach, she might start laughing. The black Minicon started gently stroking Vinyl’s sides, and she broke out in uncontrollable laughter.
“Wow Scratch, I haven’t truly even started yet and already taking it harshly.” Octavia calmly said
Aahahaha I’ll never admit that your noise is better hahahaha.”
The Minicon that was tickling her sides moved onto her stomach, Vinyl regained control over her laughter and started just giggling slightly.
“Hee…hee…stop…I’m really ticklish, and I mean really you heeheeheehee have to stop…”
The Minicon that tickled her belly moved back to her side and Vinyl broke out in laughter again, the other Minicon started tickling her underleg (underarm) Vinyl broke out in tears, and more laughter
“Stop PLEEHEEHEEHEEASE You don’t know AAAHAHHAAHAHA know what you’re doing!”
Octavia ordered them to tickle her faster so she wouldn’t have to hear her pleas, both Minicons moved to her ribcage, Vinyl started struggling in her shackles .
“GAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA STAAAHAHAP!!!!”
One of the Minicons stopped tickling her ribcage, it got out a feather and stroking her back hooves. Then another Minicon came in and started tickling her lower stomach, now there were three Minicons tickling her.
“YOU’RE KILLING ME!!! AAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!” Vinyl wouldn’t say that Octavia’s music was better, no matter what she did to her.
All three stopped, one Minicon came and sat on top of her, he leaned and tickled her stomach, hard, Vinyl begged for this torture to stop, she said she would do anything, expect say Octavia’s music was better. The tickling only intensified, now rivers of tears where under the table.
It was going overboard, It was too much for her, her ribs started to ache, she was losing her voice, and she was dehydrated.
“Octavia ha…ha… please its…starting to hurt…”
Octavia paid no attention to Vinyl, and signaled them to tickle her lower body, Vinyl’s upper body hurt a lot. One of the Minicons tickled her waist, one tickled her thighs and the third tickled her hooves.
Vinyl broke out in hysterical laughter again, no more tears came down her face, because she was dehydrated, and her voice was fading away.
“Please Octavia heehee…,” she was trying to speak, “Your hurting…me...my throat hurts haha please at least can I have some water…”
“Haha you think I’m falling for that, the tickling doesn’t stop until you admit that my music is better!” Octavia shouted. Normally Scratch would just get over with it but she didn’t, she was stubborn when it came to music, her music was great, she wouldn’t say something like that, she wouldn’t lose her pride.
She started coughing, but the tickling did not stop, her laughs became, coughs.
“I can’t breathe,” she moaned while faintly laughing, please Octavia you really haha are going to kill me… for real…”
Octavia chuckled she didn’t listen to her begging, but her face changed when she saw Vinyl’s face started to turn blue, she ordered them to stop.
Vinyl kept coughing for five minutes, but she was breathing, when she regained her breath she said
“WHAT THE HAY ARE YOU TRYNG TO DO, KILL ME!?!?!?!?” She screamed
“heh…heh… sorry didn’t know, but don’t think I’m done with you, I’m giving you an hour to rest…”
Octavia walked out of the room with the three Minicons. Vinyl stared up at the light that was staring down at her, she turned her head to the side and she drifted off to sleep…
****
“wakey wakey sleepy head!” Octavia said cheerfully
“An hour can’t be over yet…”Vinyl said in a very tired tone
“I gave ya two, cause I was feeling nice” Octavia said
One of the Minicons starting stroking Vinyl’s tummy with a feather he did it very gently, Vinyl giggled
“heehee…why do I haha get the feeling you’re heeheehee… just doing this hehheh… for your own pleasure.”
Octavia said nothing.
The Minicon tickled her thighs and waist again he switched every five seconds. Scratch was laughing helplessly, she was completely helpless to the tickling. The other Minicon got out a brush and tickled her hooves he held down her leg to prevent her from twitching in the shackles.
N—no more okay, I can’t take it, alright you music is better than mine, I admit it just no more t—tickling heehee.”
The Minicons unshackled her, and Vinyl sighed in relief, but they held her tight and strapped her to a frame suspended in midair, a Minicon came from behind her and put his arms around her and tickled her sides, another came from the front and tickled her ribcage.
“GAAAAAAHAHAHA NO MORE NO MORE WAAAHAHAHAHA THAT’S MY TICKLE SPOT! AAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!”
One tickling her ribcage and another tickling her sides from behind was too much for her she took a deep breath in and sucked up all the breath left inside her lungs and screamed
"SOMEPONY HELP MEEE!!!!!!"
“Heehee, it’s a soundproof room Scratch nopony can here you.” Octavia chuckled.
It was too much Vinyl started crying (and laughing) Please,” she sobbed “AAHAHAHAHA I admitted you music was better please let me go heehee!
There was no response, Octavia looked at her with a grin on her face and signaled them to tickle her faster and harder The Minicons started to tickle her faster and harder . The Minicon in the back of her stopped tickling her sides and tickled her lower belly.
AAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA…CAN’T TAKE IT, CANT TAHAHAKE IIIT!!!!!”
Vinyl’s heart was pounding, she was panting and out of breath. The Minicon in front of her that was tickling her ribcage stopped, and got out two soft paint brushes, he started tickling under her front legs while the minicon behind her tickled her lower tummy then sides then upper tummy, he switched ever ten seconds.
Vinyl was completely helpless, and she laughed uncontrollably as she tried with all her little pony might to break out of the shackles.
“AAAAHAHAHA IT’S TOO MUCH TOO MUCH WWHAAHAHAHAHAHA I’M GONA DIE!!!!!! AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Octavia trotted over to her “Having fun Scratch, cause I sure am.”
“PLEHEEASE STAAHAHAHAAAAHAHA!!!!” Vinyl couldn’t speak in complete sentences anymore because her laughter interrupted what she was trying to say
“Sorry Scratch, can’t quite understand, you want them to tickle you faster? Well ok…”
“HAHA MAKE THEM STAHAHAHAHAHAP! MAKE THEM STAAAP!!!!” Vinyl screamed
Then they tickled even harder, Vinyl was shaking a million miles an hour in her shackles , she thought to herself “I can’t believe… I’m going to die… because of tickling…” She thought she was done for, she thought this was pure torture, she just wanted it to end, she just wanted to just die, death had to be better that this. Before she knew it they were tickling even harder and it was just too much for Vinyl Scratch and she passed out…
****
She awoke up on the porch next to the back door of her house the first thing she felt was pain, intense pain. Her ribs ached and the rest of her body as well
“Uhh…,” she couldn’t pick herself up to open the door, “well at least I ain’t dead…” she moaned
She tried crawling on her stomach to the door.
AAAARRRHHH!!!” she wrenched in pain
She rolled on her back and shook her head to get her purple glasses off, she looked up at the night sky. “I guess I’m here on my porch for the night, By Celestia my aching stomach.” She rubbed her tummy for a while and she looked back up at the night sky, and soon she drifted off to sleep.
“Who are you ponies?!?!” Rainbow screamed as she struggled
“I want to know more about you.” Something came out of the shadows it was something…it over hung from the ceiling
“What the hay are you!!?!” Rainbow kept struggling.
“ Stop struggling (Subject name here) you will want to save you energy, for the party that I have made for you.”
“What party! the room is completely white!” Rainbow yelled
“You’re not happy. I want you to be happy, this is your party you know.” It spoke a small claw came from the ceiling. And started scratching Rainbows belly.”
“Maybe I should stimulate you touch receptors, 72% of all subjects demonstrate cheerful emotions when touch receptors are stimulated.” It spoke again.
Rainbow couldn’t move as the small claw scratched her belly she was giggling a bit
“This…haha isn’t…funny… stop it!” she giggled
Another small claw came down from the ceiling and tickled her side, the other claw did the same thing.
“AHAHAHAHAHAH! CUT IT OUT!” Rainbow laughed
“You are enjoying this, your emotions signal that you are 99.99999999999999998% enjoying this, that is enough scientific information to not make me stop.
The claws that tickled her went faster
“PLEHEEHEEHEEASE NO MORE I’M REALLY, REALLY TICKLISH!!!!”
Rainbow Dash begged and begged for it to stop, tears started to rain down her face, and her tail was wagging back and forth.
“WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! AAAAAHHHHH!!!!” she screamed
Two more claws came down and started to tickle her back hooves. Rainbow burst out in uncontrollable laughter, she shook her head back and forth and tried to flail her legs but the shackles held her firm in place. Her back legs were completely immobile. She was totally helpless. The claws that tickled her back hooves moved to her thighs, which made her scream even louder.
“OH CELESTIA, PLEASE STAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!!!!!!” she laughed
“See you are enjoying this.” The overhanging robot said.
The claws tickling her sides started to move up and down her belly, they moved up and down, in a stroking motion, looking for a sensitive area to tickle. They settled with her lower belly and waist. Rainbow screamed and begged but it didn’t stop. The claws tickled faster.
“NO, NO, NO NAHHAHAHAHHA!” Rainbow Dash laughed
It was too much for her and she wet herself.
“You are really enjoying this; I will make them go faster, just for you.” It said
Then one big claw came down , one side of the claw was on one of her sides and one side on the other, the claw started vibrating. Rainbow started vibrating as well. She started to lose it,
“STAPIT! STAPIT! OH ICANTBREATHE!!!!!!” she yelled and laughed again.
Teas were just pouring down from her face, she tried struggling again but the shackles and the huge claw held her in place, while smaller claws tickled her belly and hooves.
“feeling comfortable?” It asked Rainbow responded in laughs and screams.
A machine then was activated to hold her head in place, it was like a neck brace, and on the back of It were vibrators which tickled the back and sides of her neck.
Rainbow couldn’t move at all she was totally immobile, she now couldn’t even struggle. It was way to much than she could handle.
“MAKE EM STOP MAKE EM STOP!!!!!!!” Rainbow screamed it was way too much and she passed out. She woke up again almost as soon as she slipped unconscious.
“There you fell asleep but I woke you up with the magic of adrenaline.”
Rainbow shook for a while but then she became stable. The tickling began again.
“Please heehee I can…take this…I can take a lot…of things haha… but not this…”
Rainbow started to cry. Her cries became sobs. She BEGGED for it to stop.
“Now your emotions say that you are not enjoying this. Well boohoo, I don’t feel like stopping.”
The claws moved to her ribcage, Rainbow shrieked, her ribs were her tickle spot. Rainbow was still immobile, so she couldn’t even twitch. They slowly stroked her ribcage while her tears made a large puddle under the table. Her heart pounded really fast in her chest.
“Stap….” Rainbow panted “I can’t do this….anymore…I’ll do anything…if you JUST STOP!!!
WWWWHHAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”
The overhanging robot continued to torture Rainbow Dash for hours. But Rainbow didn’t know that, because she had lost her sense of time, she had no idea if this had gone on for two days or two hours.
“I CAN’T GO THOUGH THIS ANYMORE!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH”
They tickled her waist, and her sides, there was absolutely nothing she could do.
“Do you want to go home?” It asked” then it stopped tickling
“Yes…yes…please…I…wana….go….home.” Rainbow was sweating.
“Well I know you want to go home, but I don’t want you to go home, so there.” It started tickling her again
They stroked her soft ,sensitive, light blue coat over and over again.
Rainbow then passed out AGAIN. But it just gave her more adrenaline and she woke up again, and the ticking resumed.
“Stop passing out its very annoying, because I have to find another shot of adrenaline, and there very hard to find you know.” It said
“STOP THE TICKLING AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!”
“My wings” she thought to herself “I forgot about my wings!” she beat her wings furiously and managed to hit the button on the bottom of the table she shot up and flew off at amazing speeds. She flew for an hour and then got out of the building she didn’t stop flying until she reached her cloud home, she panted as she laid on her bed, she laid there for an hour, before falling fast asleep.
Dusk walked over to four stakes which made a square.
"lay in the middle." Dusk said to her,
Applejack walked over to the middle of the stakes and laid down on her back. Dusk tied Applejack's stretched out front hooves and hind hooves tied the stakes so she was in a stretched out spread eagle position.
"Now time to make you laugh." Dusk said.
"So tell me why you want to do you want to do this?" Applejack asked, Dusk smirked and got out a box of tickle tools.
Dusk got two feathers from the cardboard box and tickled under Applejack's front legs. It made Applejack laugh and squirm around. Dusk then tickled Applejack's belly with his tail making her laughter increase a lot. Dusk levitated two brushes and made them hover over Applejack's back hooves and began to brush them. Applejack's laughter sky rocketed. Dusk then blew a huge raspberry in her belly making her squeal hard with laughter.
Dusk then got out two feather dusters and he tickled Applejack's sides making Applejack laugh really hard and buck in her bonds.
“All right, quit it, it ain’t funny no more! Hahahahah.” Applejack said
Dusk tickled her faster, Applejack started shaking, and He moved the two feather dusters from her sides to her thighs. Applejack laughed uncontrollably. She kicked her four legs, but Dusk kept the feather dusters on her thighs.
“Heh, heh, heh, I’m beggin ya, no more, pleheeheeheese!” Applejack begged “This was only supposed to be a game ya no, you’re turnin it into torture!”
Dusk stopped tickling her thighs and got out a spinning brush mechanism. Applejack looked at him in horror.
“No please don’t, we were only playin, this has gone overboard.” Applejack begged again.
“So what do I care, your tied down, and completely helpless, I can do whatever I like with you.” Dusk said tauntingly. He switched it on, and put it on Applejacks belly. Applejack thrashed around, kicked and begged. But he wouldn’t turn it off. Applejack was laughing helplessly. She was squirming everywhere
“Stop squirming!” he said
“WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH CUT IT OUT STAP IT!!!!!” Applejack screamed “I AM SO TELLIN YOUR PARENTS AAAAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!”
Dusk moved a rotating spinning brush slowly to her waist. Applejack thrashed some more, tears poured down her eyes.
“if you threaten tell my mom, I’ll just tickle you harder, my mom’s outa town until tomorrow, maybe I could do this aaaalllll night…” Dusk taunted her again
“YOU LIL’ BRAT AAAAAAAAAHHH AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!” Applejack yelled at him.
“Dusk turned off the sander. Applejack panted and breathed heavily.
“You sure are more ticklish than I imagined…heh heh…” Dusk said calmly to her “What should I do next…..hmmm” Dusk thought.
“I’ll tell ya’ll what you should do next, untie me from these here ropes and let me go!” Applejack yelled again. “But that would be…to boring.” Dusk said
Dusk got out a thick, soft paint brush with his magic and stroked her chest lightly, it made her giggle only slightly, when he found out it wasn’t effective enough, he moved back under her front legs. Applejack’s giggles became, laughs. Dusk stroked up and down. Dusk then moved the stakes farther apart, now the stakes were in a rectangle, and Applejacks front legs were high above her head. Applejack couldn’t thrash around as much now. Dusk continued to tickle under Applejack’s front legs for five minutes. Then he moved again. The filly then sat on top of Applejack and put her hooves to her belly, he rubbed her belly gently, then harder
“Cut it out, ya brat, GHAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHH!!!!!!” Dusk tickled her even harder to block out her pleas and begs for mercy.”
Dusk got off the tired Applejack. “So, Applejack…where’s your tickle spot?...” He asked with a grin on his face.
“I ain’t got none.” She muttered
“Everypony has a tickle spot. Even you.” Dusk chuckled
Dusk continued to torture Applejack for hours on end.
“Please….”she groaned “no more, I won’t tell ya mom, just please let me up…”
Dusk totally ignored her, And he laid out a whole bunch of brushes out in front of her, Dusk picked four. Dusk used his magic to tickle Applejack’s thighs and back hooves. Applejack started to tear up again, she slammed her eyes shut and tried to resist, she thought “Maybe if I don’t laugh…he’ll stop.” She used her effort to stop laughing, but the tears came natural, tears came in waterfalls down her face, she couldn’t take much more resisting.
“You can’t resist forever Applejack…” Dusk slowed the speed of the brushes tickling her thighs an increased the speed of the brushes tickling her back hooves. Applejack started shaking, the slow strokes to her thighs were just torture, she could feel all of the hairs of the brush stroking her thighs and it really, really tickled. Applejack started sweating. She used all the strength inside her to utter out a sentence without a giggle.
“Ya know, this…doesn’t….tickle…..ugg…” It was hard to utter out but she managed to do it.
Dusk saw that it did tickle, so he made it harder on her by making the brushes on her hooves stop, and move to her thighs, but first he stretched out the stakes some more so she couldn’t twitch her hind legs. Dusk slowly and gently tickled her thighs with four brushes. Applejack shook even more “Don’t know how long I can resist…” she thought to herself. More tears came from her face.
“C’mon Applejack laugh, you know you wana.” Dusk said to her
This wasn’t making it bored for him, it was making it fun for him. Dusk slowed the brushes again. All those soft hairs on her thighs, just tickled to much, way to much, it really, really, really, really tickled and Applejack burst out in uncontrollable, helpless cackling. She tried to thrash around.
“That’s right Applejack just laugh…” he said
Dusk got out two more brushes, and he moved them over her ribcage. Now there were four brushes tickling her thighs and two one her ribcage.
“PLEHEEEHEEHEEASE I’LL GIVE YA ANYTHING, JUST NO MORE, PLEASE NO MORE GHAAHAAHAAHAAHAA!!!!!!!” Applejack screamed
Then Dusk moved all the brushes on all sides of her waist. He stroked her waist very fast. Applejack squealed,
“SOMEPONY HELP MEEEHEEHEEE THIS LIL BRAT KEEPS ON TICKLIN MEEEHEEHEE!!!!!”
Applejack used all of her might to snap the ropes that held her in place. But whatever they were made of was impossible to snap. Applejack shook her head so much her hat flew off her head, Dusk could see the tears flooding down her cheeks, and he snickered at her.
Dusk stopped stroking her and out right pounced on her; he used his hooves to tickle all over her belly. Applejack could be seen with the sight of laughter, but she uttered no sound, Dusk used his hooves faster, Applejack shook from all the pressure that Dusk was putting on her. She regained her voice
“I’LL DO ANYTHING FOR YA, JUST STOP THE TICKLIN PLEASE WHAAAAAAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!!!!!”
“Then how about you just stay tied here, while I tickle you.” He said calmly
“YOU ARE ONE EVIL LIL’ FILLY YA KNOW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!” Applejack was cut off by her own laughter
“and You are one ticklish big pony you know that?” Dusk taunted back
Dusk tickled her faster with his hooves. Dusk just smiled at Applejack.
“BWHAAHHAHHAHAH TOO MUCH TOO MUCH HAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA…UH…uhhh….ug…uhhhhh…………………….” Applejack passed out.
“Applejack?” Dusk asked “Oh…no…I-I…think I killed her… Gotta get outa here!” Dusk ran as fast as his little legs would carry him.
****
“Jackie…? You alright?” Applejack slowly opened her eyes, It was Big Macintosh.
“Uhhh….” She could move one leg Macintosh was biting the ropes that held her down.
“Somepony was ticklin me Big Mac, I’m totally beat…” Even though she was untied she still lay on the ground. Macintosh scooped her up and her hat and carried her on her back, back to her bed. Applejack was already asleep, as Macintosh tucked her in her bed, and left the room and closed the door behind him
“Night Jackie.” He said before blowing out the light.
Note: Dusk is one of my orignal characters. If you want me to tell which pony I should tickle next, just say so in the comments or message me, I would be very happy (if theres time) to fill out your request. I request that you do leave a comment on which pony I should tickle next, cause I can't decide which pony I should write about being tickled.
“I’ don’t think I wana do this…” she spoke very softly.
“I can’t here you, you don’t speak loud enough!” It was Rainbow Dash she was tying Fluttershy to her own bed. She was tightening the bonds so she couldn’t flail around.
Rainbow looked at the immobile Fluttershy, and grinned at her. Fluttershy gulped again. Rainbow Dash pulled out one of her wings and stroked Fluttershy’s belly, Fluttershy giggled.
“Does this tickle?” Rainbow asked, as she moved her wings to her sides. Fluttershy squealed with laughter.
“Heeheeheehee!” she squealed
“Choochie! Choochie! Coo! Rainbow said as she got on the squirming Fluttershy and put her hooves to her sides.
Fluttershy laughed helplessly, she shook in her bonds as Rainbow tickled her sides, Rainbow then moved her hooves up under her front legs. She used her wings to continue tickling her sides
“Ahahahahha! Rainbow Please….” Fluttershy still spoke in a soft tone Rainbow then blew a raspberry on her belly, which finally made her break out in loud laughter.
“WHAHAHAHAHAHAH HEEHEEEHEEHEEHEEHEE!” Fluttershy beat her wings as Rainbow kept blowing raspberries on to her belly.
Rainbow then nuzzled Fluttershy’s tummy with her nose. Fluttershy’s laughter died down a bit.
“What? That doesn’t tickle, I can fix that.” Rainbow then tickled both of her back hooves with her wings, it made tears come down her cheeks.
“What are you doing to poor Fluttershy?” Twilight came in the room.
“Tickling her…” Rainbow said
“Can I join in?” Twilight said
“Sure.” Dash said to her
Twilight came over to Fluttershy and levitated a brush and started stroking under her front leg. “Sorry Fluttershy.” She said as she tickled
Rainbow rubbed her tummy, while Twilight started to tickle both of her sides. Fluttershy shook around, in a pathetic attempt to shake them off. Her mouth was wide open, laughing really loud
“GUYS YOU HAVE TO STOP, I’M REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY TICKLISH!!!!! GHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!” She squealed.
“Shouldn’t have told us that!” Rainbow Dash laughed and she started to rub her tummy faster.
Twilight moved to her lower body, where she used brushes to tickle her hooves again. Fluttershy was laughing and screaming at the top of her lungs, Twilight had never seen Fluttershy smile like this before, so she tickled her faster, Rainbow moved her hooves to Fluttershy’s ribcage. This made Fluttershy scream and try to push away Rainbow Dash with her wings. Twilight used her magic to control Fluttershy’s wings, Twilight made Fluttershy’s wings to stoke her ribcage so Rainbow didn’t have to.
“PLEASE, SOMEPONY HELP MEEEHEEHEEHEEHEE! ANGEL HONEY HELP!!!!!”
Rainbow moved one hoof up and down Fluttershy’s belly; Twilight stopped moving Fluttershy’s wings and tightened the robe so she was more stretched out. Twilight went back over to her hooves and used a different kind of brush, a thick and softer one to tickle her hooves. Rainbow blew more raspberries on to her belly.
“STAAHAAHHAAHAAP, PLEASE IT TICKLES, IT TIIICKKLLLES!!!!!”
“Duh, that’s the point.” Rainbow chuckled.
Fluttershy was very sensitive to tickling, she hated it when her parents tickled her, but her parents loved to tickle her. She remembered her daddy held her down, while mommy used her big soft wings on her belly, but this was a hundred times worse, her parents knew when to stop, but Rainbow and Twilight didn’t. Twilight levitated the brushes tickling her hooves to under her front legs. Fluttershy screamed with uncontrollable, helpless laughter, her friends were torturing her.
“Watch this Twi!” Rainbow said.
Rainbow pounced on Fluttershy and tickled her in every which way possible, Fluttershy laughed so much, she wet herself. But Rainbow didn’t stop.
“Tickle, tickle, tickle!” She said in an evil tone as she tickled everywhere around her belly.
Fluttershy wet herself again, as her laughter intensified. Twilight used brushes and feathers on her hooves, while Rainbow roughly tickled her everywhere. Rainbow grinned at her
“Having fun Fluttershy.” She laughed evilly.
“NOOOOOO WHHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!!!!! IT’S WAY TOO MUCH, I’M TICKLISH.”
“You already said that Fluttershy.” Rainbow said.
Rainbow Dash tickled faster and harder, to prevent Fluttershy from talking, and just laughing.
“Do you think we’re going over board?” Twilight asked
“Nah, Fluttershy can handle it.” Rainbow said
Fluttershy started panting and breathing heavily.
Twilight then pulled out an electronic spinning toothbrush and switched it on, Twilight put it to her waist, and Fluttershy just started screaming, scream after scream, the rotating hairs on her waist really tickled her, she tried to thrash around but her bonds held her firmly in place, so the two could continue their relentless, brutal torture on her. But twilight STILL wasn’t done; she pulled out two more electronic rotating tooth brushes, and taped them on her sides. Twilight switched them on at the same time and Fluttershy just shrieked her intense laughter sky rocketed to its peak.
“BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I CAN’T TAKE IT” Fluttershy moved her head around, Rainbow still tickled furiously on her tummy.
“Poor little Fluttershy, laughing her little whittle heart out, hehheh.” Rainbow taunted her.
“PLEASE DASHIE I CAN’T TAKE THIS I’VE WET MYSELF THREE TIMES WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHH!!!!!!!”
Rainbow tickled her ever harder. Fluttershy pleated and begged for Rainbow to stop the brutal torture. But it worked the opposite; she tickled faster and harder. Fluttershy hollered at the top of her lungs. Rainbow blew more raspberries on her sensitive tummy.
“I think we should stop, Fluttershy is falling to pieces, we might make her pass out.” Twilight turned off the electronic tooth brushes.
“Alright….” Rainbow groaned “but I was having a lot of fun.”
Rainbow and Twilight started to untie the panting, tired Fluttershy. When she was untied, she thanked them for stopping the torture.
Rainbow and Twilight walked out of her house, Fluttershy still laid on her bed, for the rest of the night, but didn’t fall asleep, she was still trying to recall what the hell just happened.
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Celestia dragged the begging Luna in to her own room.
“Lay down on your bed Sis.” Celestia ordered
“But Tia…” Luna whimpered
Lay down Sis!” She shouted
Luna tried to make a break for it, she knew what was coming next, Celestia who was blocking the exit, stopped her and picked her up and threw her on her bed. Celestia then used her magic to hold her still while she tied her legs to the four posts of her bed. Luna knew that there was no escape now.
“Sis please…you don’t have to punish me like this!!!” Luna screamed.
“Hush up!” Celestia said as she got out a toolbox of brutal torture devices.
“Tia…” Luna started to tear up.
Celestia used her magic to remove of her Crystal shoes. Luna tried to make a small attempt to break the bonds that restrained her legs. Celestia opened her toolbox of torture, and laid feathers and brushes in front of the squirming Luna. Celestia pulled out a small brush and put it to her exposed back hoof, and grinned
“Any last words?” Celestia chuckled
“Please Tia, don’t do this to me.” Luna begged.
Celestia ignored the begging and stroked the middle of her back hoof up and down gently, Luna snickered and twitched, but resisted to laugh. Celestia paused and removed her other back shoe she pulled out another feather and put it Luna’s other hoof.
Luna slammed her eyes shut, her teeth showing from her wide smile, and she was breathing heavily.
“Hmmm… still not laughing, I can fix that!” Celestia snickered
Celestia stopped tickling her back hooves and walked around to her dark blue belly. Celestia removed her chest armor and put one hoof on her belly.
Celestia slid her hoof down Luna’s belly and slid it back up again, she kept repeating this, and Luna squirmed around, while giggling.
“Sis…Please heehee you know how ticklish I am!” Luna said while she struggled Celestia stopped stroking her belly and put both of her hooves to Luna’s sides and moved them in a circle motion, this caused Luna to break out In Laughter.
“Haha Tia….no….Heeheehee!” Luna laughed Celestia then plucked two feathers from Luna’s wings and stroked them under her front legs, Luna jumped, and her laughter increased, some tears came down her face. Then Celestia moved the feathers up and down her sides. Luna struggled some more.
“Ahahahahaha! Tia, no please, I hate this!”
Celestia paid no attention to this.
Celestia got out a brush and stroked her waist furiously, which caused Luna to squeal, she tried to kick her legs, but it failed to work.
Celestia tickled Luna’s waist harder and put the feathers that tickled her sides onto the sides of her waist. Luna shirked and jumped some more at the sensation.
“PLEEHEESE WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MEEHEEHEEHEE AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH!!!!!” Luna screamed Celestia took her tail and covered Luna’s belly, the glowing sparkling tail’s softness tickled her belly, Celestia didn’t even have to move it. Celestia continued to tickle Luna’s waist with the brushes and feathers while her tail tickled her belly, Luna had rivers of hers coming from her face.
Now, now, don’t cry.” Celestia laughed again.
Luna could only squirm while Celestia tortured her. Celestia moved back to her sides again. Luna pleated for Celestia to let her go. But Celestia ignored it. Celestia then blew a raspberry on the center of Luna’s belly, Luna screamed
“AAAAAAAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I CAN’T TAKE IIITTT WHAHAHAHAHAHAH TIA STAAP IT!!!!!” Luna yelled.
Celestia then used her wings on Luna’s chest, Luna was laughing helplessly, when Celestia did this. There was no place on Luna’s body Celestia’s wings could not reach, Luna cried laughed and begged but Celestia wouldn’t stop. Celestia started to rub Luna’s belly furiously, Luna kicked and screamed, and Celestia smiled at this and continued to torture Princess Luna faster.
“CEEELLLLLESSSSTIIIIAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! PLEASEEEE!!!!!!” Luna screamed again.
Luna then struggled and struggled until she broke on of her front hooves out of her bonds, she hopped up, Celestia trying to pin her down again, Luna broke her other front hoof out of the bonds and grabbed her elder sister and tried to tickle her. Luna broke out of all her bonds and pounced on her sister and tickled her furiously, Celestia did the same. Both sisters were laughing hard Luna pinned Celestia down with magic, while Luna tickled her sides furiously, Celestia screamed like a little filly, while Luna tortured her
“Not so funny now isn’t it Sis!” Luna yelled at her
“PLEASE LUNAHAHAHAHAH I’M SORREEEHEHEEHEEHEEHEHEE, PLEASE JUST STAAAAP!!!!!!” Celestia squealed
Luna held her in place with her magic, Celestia thrashed around while Luna laid on her belly, tickling her. Luna rolled Celestia over and wrapped her hooves around her, like a hug from behind. Luna then moved her hooves furiously on Celestia, Celestia screamed she couldn’t get up, Luna’s weight pinned her down, the only thing she could do, was thrash he legs around while Luna laid on her back, and tickled her belly.
“WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH LUNA I CAN’T TAKE THIS, I’M SORRY I TORTURED YOU, JUST PLEEHEEHEEHEESE STAHAHAHAAP!!!!!” Celestia yelled.
Tears poured from Celestia’s face. Luna then took some rope and tied Celestia’s legs to the posts. Luna rolled over Celestia again, and removed her chest armor. Luna could now tickle Celestia’s white belly, without her thrashing around and moving. Luna continued to move her hooves furiously on Celestia’s lower belly. Luna then took brushes and tickled her sides. Celestia shook her head franticly; she started to beg to Luna to stop.
“Why should I give you mercy, I mean I asked for mercy, but did you give me mercy, no, you decided to be a troll, so guess what, I’ll be a troll, and I won’t stop!” Luna said angrily.
Waterfalls of tears poured from Celestia’s face, she tried to mouth the words “please” but the only thing that came out was intense laughter. Luna moved the brushes to under Celestia’s front legs, it caused Celestia to shriek really, really loud. Celestia threw her head, and her crown flew of her head. But still Luna continued to angrily torture Celestia. Luna decided to stop tortured Celestia, when she started coughing, and wheezing “I can’t breathe, I can’t breathe.” Luna untied Celestia who was sweating.
“I’m sorry please don’t be mad with me…” Luna said Celestia got herself up and dusted herself off “I got what I deserved, now come on it’s almost time for dinner.
“Oh yeah and a package came for you today.” Celestia said while walking out of the room. Luna saw a big box on the ground she opened it, there was a burnt up white cube with a pink heart on all sides
“What the hay is this!?!?!?” she said in confusion and she walked out of the room to join Celestia for dinner.
Derpy is next, but that dosn't mean you should stop giving me comments on who to tickle next, after I tickle Derpy I will have no idea on which pony I should tickle, so..... in conclusion, keep telling me what pony I should tickle next.
Before I begin, this is my version of Derpy, She is not retarded, she just has an eye problem, she is a young mother, she is a little clumsy, but not stupid, she is a well-educated pony, it’s just an eye problem.
Note: I wrote this on paper before I typed it, and it was really early,
“Good morning muffin.” Derpy called out from the kitchen table.
Dinky ran downstairs and looked at her mom, she looked tired, the coffee wasn’t finished yet.
“are you tired mommy?” Dinky asked
“Yes muffin, I’m very, very tired.” Derpy said
It was so early it was dark out.
“I know to make you not tired.” Dinky said
“How muffin?” Derpy mumbled
“Lay on the table.” Dinky said
“Lay on the table?” Derpy asked “You sure muffin?”
“Yes mommy” Dinky answered Derpy got up and sat on the kitchen table, she then laid her head back. Dinky came over and moved Derpy’s legs in an x position.
Derpy thought to herself “What is she doing?”
Dinky got some rope and tied her mother’s legs down to the legs of the table.
“Muffin? What are you doing.” Derpy said worryingly
“You’ll see…” Dinky grinned
Dinky plucked a few feathers from her mother’s wings
Derpy finally figured out what Dinky was about to do “Muffin, you know how sensitive I am.” Derpy said. “I’m not tired anymore hon, please kiddo, see I up, not tired this is me, not tired!”
Dinky ignored it, she put a feather to her chest, she slid it down all the way to her waist. This made Derpy giggle slightly at the sensation.
Dinky then looked at her mother’s waist, she bent down and blew a huge raspberry, Derpy squealed really hard.
“MUFFINN STAAHAHAHAHP WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH!!!!”
Dinky blew another raspberry on her waist, this made Derpy jump and struggle in the ropes.
Dinky then went into the living room and came out with a belt and a feathery, fuzzy blanket, she wrapped the blanket around Derpy and wrapped the belt around her and the table, Derpy could not struggle as much now. Dinky used her magic to vibrate the feathery blanket, Derpy screamed and laughed at the top of her lungs, Dinky had never ever heard her mommy scream like that before. Tears came down her derp eyes. Derpy laughed manically, and uncontrollably.
“MUFFFIIINN PLLLEEEHEHEHEHEHEEHEESE NOO MOREE.
Dinky put two feathers under her front legs and stroked them, while the feathery blanket kept vibrating, parts of the blanket became wet, Derpy had wet herself, Derpy struggled to breathe while her own daughter tortured her. Dinky was getting tired of using her magic to vibrate the blanket with her magic, so she stopped. She took the belt off, then the blanket, revealing the thin slender, grey body of Derpy, who was sweating very hard, while panting. Since Derpy was stretched out, Dinky could see her ribcage, Dinky grinned and hopped on her mom’s belly, Dinky took two hairbrushes and slowly stroked both side of her ribcage, Derpy of course being super sensitive, wet herself again. Derpy laughed harder than ever, she begged Dinky to cease the infernal torture.
Dinky stopped stroking her ribcage and moved to her sides, Dinky started to gently rub her sides, in an up and down motion, Derpy just squeezed her eyes shut , and tried not to pee herself again. She laughed helplessly. Dinky grinned at the sight of her mother’s distress.
“Choochie, Choochie coo!” She taunted.
Derpy attempted to break free from the restraints, but to no avail, she was stuck on that table, Derpy had to make an excuse, and fast.
“HON I GOTA GO TO WORK!!!!! YOU GOTAAHAHHAHAH LEME UP!!!”
“You think I’m stupid, it’s Sunday, the mail doesn’t run on Sunday heeheehee.” Dinky tickled her sides a bit faster.
Dinky moved her hooves to Derpy’s warm chest, she stroked her chest up and down, and it made Derpy in a state of total laughter. Tears just rained from Derpy’s face, it was too much for the Mail Mare. Dinky stopped to get a drink of water
“Muffin….stop…please……muffin…” she panted. Derpy caught her breath, as Dinky drank her water.
After Dinky finished drinking her water, she went back to her squirming mother, this time she tried to bribe Dinky with candy and toys.
“I don’t want those things; I just want to tickle you.” Dinky replied.
Dinky took one hairbrush and stroked the top of Derpy’s left back hoof, Derpy struggled some more, but that didn’t work. Dinky stroked her hoof up and down, Derpy threw her head back, trying her absolute best not to wet herself, but that was extremely hard. Dinky got out another brush and did the same with her right back hoof. Derpy screamed, she swung her head back and forth, she kicked all four of her legs, and she tried jumping in the ropes, anything, just anything, to get off that table.
“MUUFFFFANNNN PLEASE, YOU KILLING MEEHEEHEEHEE.” Derpy screamed.
Dinky stopped tickling her hooves, and moved the brushes over to her thighs, it was too much and Derpy wet herself again. Dinky then tickled her a little bit below her waist, that was Derpy’s tickle spot, she screamed and kicked, and begged. Dinky tickled faster; and then ocean of tears started to form below the table.
Dinky finally was satisfied, she had tortured her mom enough, she stopped and untied her.
“I’m sorry mommy, you’re not mad right. Derpy even though untied, still lay on the table, she was regaining her breath, and sweating
“No mommy’s not angry with ya,” Derpy panted
The sun was just coming up, Derpy eventually regained her strength and got up from the table,
“How…about we go out to eat breakfast….” She still panted.
And so they went out to eat, and went shopping and had a great time
I have no ideas at the momet SO tell me which pony should I tickle, message me or say in commets, If theres time I will fill out you request, I will do origanal charecters, just make sure the owner aproves.
Note: This might not be very long, and I’m sorry. I’m also very, very sorry it’s taking me a long time with writing these stories, its hard coming up with ideas, plus I’m also very busy with school and life stuff. I apologize again, sorry. The Great and Powerful Trixie gets tickled (Requested by CharginChuck and Sgt.Dash^_^)
Trixie laid on the bed, Twilight was in the room as well.
“I don’t know if I want to do this…” Trixie said
“You do want to prove that you are “great and powerful” correct?” Twilight said
“Well yeah!” Trixie yelled
Twilight took some rope and spread her legs apart and tied them to the posts of thr bed.
“Well can you move?” Twilight asked
Trixie tugged at the ropes. “A little bit, but I can’t really break free.” She said
“Good.” Twilight got out a big box.
“Are you ready?” Twilight asked.
“There’s nothing to be ready for.” Trixie said
Twilight walked next to the bed and started to gently rub the middle of her blue, soft, belly in a circular motion Trixie smiled and closed her eyes. Twilight rubbed a little faster, the smile on Trixie’s face, evolved into a grin. Twilight rubbed lower on her belly. It made Trixie jump, she started to twitch in her bonds. Twilight moved down some more until she was at her waist, Trixie let out a burst of uncontrollable giggles.
“oh…ticklish there are we…” Twilight grinned and put her other hoof at her waist and she rubbed both of her hooves on her waist.
Trixie giggled slightly louder
“Heeheehee…haven’t….smiled….like this in a heehee…long time…heehee!” Trixie giggled.
“Well you’re about to smile a lot more…” Twilight said in an evil tone.
Twilight slid her hooves up to her sides, and started to move her hooves up and down her sides repeatedly, Trixie started to laugh, her heart started to pick up speed, she started to struggle against the ropes that held her laid out upon the bed. Trixie tried to control the outbursts of laughter, but she failed.
Twilight stopped tickling her sides, and walked over to her back hooves, she got out a long, straight feather. She used her magic to levitate it, and she started to stroke Trixie’s back hoof.
Trixie tried kicking, but she was held firmly in place, so she tried to whack Twilight in the face with her tail. “How pathetic… and just for that stupid act I’m not gona show you any mercy…” Twilight got on the bed and sat on Trixie’s waist, she leaned over and tickled all over her belly, sides, under her front legs, It made Trixie squeal with laughter. “EEEEEEEEEE!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH CELESTIA MAKE HER STAAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!!!!” she screamed “Your more ticklish than I originally thought….hey you haven’t brushed your coat yet, I’ll do it for you.” Twilight said again in an evil tone.
Twilight took two brushes from the box and put them to her belly, she moved the brushes from her chest, all the way down to her waist then she would put the brushes back on her chest but in a different area and do the same thing. Tears started to form under Trixie’s eyes, there was no doubt that she was insanely ticklish. Twilight wanted to make Trixie suffer some more, so she used her magic to make two more brushes scrub her back hooves profusely. Tears rolled down her face and she swung her head up.
“HAHAHAHAHAHA PLEEEASE NO MORE NO, NO, NO!!!”
She then repositioned the brushes tickling her belly, to tickle the outside of her thighs, right on her cutie marks. Trixie insanely struggled in the strong ropes.
“You can’t escape the tickles!” Twilight taunted.
She then made the brushes tickle the insides of her thighs in which she squealed louder than ever. Not to mention brushes where still tickling her back hooves. Trixie’s heart pounded in her chest, she panted trying to catch her breath Twilight stopped, and leaned down again , and blew the longest, loudest, biggest raspberry ever, right in the middle of her belly. Tears rained down Trixie’s face, she kicked and bucked, but they just wouldn’t break.
Twilight blew another huge raspberry on her belly and Trixie squealed with helpless laughter.
“I CAN’T BREATHE!!!!!!!! AHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAH! GAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!” She screamed again.
Twilight continued to torture Trixie; she wrapped his hooves around her and tickled her furiously. Tears were now pouring down her face, soaking the bed sheets that she laid on.
Trixie’s vision was blurry due to the fact, that there were so many tears forming at her eyes. She couldn’t see what Twilight was going to do next.
Twilight used some long feathers to tickle under Trixie’s front legs.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA NO PLEHEEHEEHEEHEESE!!!!!!” she squealed
Trixie sputtered and coughed, she still laughed intensely.
Twilight had to use more rope to hold her still, she was struggling so much that the rope was starting to loosen. Now Trixie was almost completely immobile.
Twilight replaced the feathers with brushes, Trixie laughed and choked on her breath, sweat poured down her body she tried begging but the only noise that came out was laughter and coughs.
Twilight tickled her faster; Trixie swung her head back and forth struggling to break free of the restraints that pinned her down.
“Look at you so great and powerful, tied on a bed with mere ropes and laughing to death…” Twilight said Trixie tried to use her little magic skills to throw a nearby book at Twilight’s head. Twilight easily dodged the projectile.
“Just for that I’m going to make you SUFFER…” Twilight laughed
Twilight got a spinning sander device and placed it upon her waist
“Please don’t do this to me, Urg uh ARH!” Trixie begged as she struggled.
Twilight switched on the device and Trixie was in tears, her laughing was heard throughout the entire library.
Twilight moved the spinning device up her belly, then moved it over to her left side. The sensation caused Trixie to use all of her might to break out, she wasn’t that strong, and the ropes still held her. Twilight moved the device over to her right side, and the sweat and tears came down faster now.
Trixie started screaming for help.
“There’s no one coming for you, you know.” Twilight taunted.
After an hour of non-stop tickling Twilight stopped for a minute, Trixie blankly started at her, the tears still came down her face. She moaned “Untie me….please…” She let out a few coughs.
“Don’t think I’m done with you yet!” Twilight stammered.
“Twilight started to furiously brush both sides of her ribcage, she was so tired she could barely laugh, she was out of sweat and tears. She laid upon a soaked bed due to tears and sweat. She had used up all of her little strength so she could no longer struggle. Trixie did the only thing left that she could do
Pass out.
Twilight laughed, as she untied the unconscious Trixie, she opened the library door carried her out, then took a pitcher of ice cold water and dumped it on her head, she woke up struggling to stand.
“Now get outa here, before I decide to change my mind!” Twilight yelled
Trixie slowly walked away in pain and agony, Twilight continued to laugh, even when she closed the door.
I'm sorry again for the shortness of this story, and the huge wait. Don't just tell me which pony I should tickle next, please, please give me an idea, I don't do any Inappropriate stuff, so any Idea's I find offencive, will not be considered, Just please give me some idea's Keep in mind that I do Original Charecters. just make sure the creator says yes.