Your Little Adventure

by My Only Weakness

First published

[2nd person] When you leave your family to go a live in a new place you meet some new and intresting ponies

Warning
Grammer and spelling mistakes are in this story, You want any explanation go to This chapter

[2nd person]
You were getting tired of living the same old routine and living in a big city. You decide to move to a whole new place. What lies in store for you there?

Your Name is StarGazer



Proofreader for this story is Dakilladj (Or Dak)

Your Life So Far

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Read this first: There may be some spelling and grammar problems during the story, lets see who's man enough to go through this story with commenting on the grammar/spelling mistakes
Good Luck........because you're going to need it


You lived in the city of Fillydelphia nearly all your child hood. You lived with your Mother, Rose Petal, your Father, Frost Bite, your older brother, Jack Hammer and your older sister, Rose Beat.

You were the youngest out of your entire family, including your cousins.

But you were lucky enough to be born a Pegasus

Your Mother and your two siblings were born unicorns and your dad was a Pegasus.


Your Dad

Your Dad had a job at the weather control in Fillydelphia. His cutie mark is a dark cloud with snow flakes coming down from it. Your Dad's coat was a dark brown color. His mane and tail were gray and had a ice blue streak going down it. His eye were a simple dark green.

As much as he wanted to teach you how to fly he was too busy with his paper to teach you, even on the weekends.

Luckily, he was able to get your grandpa (who was the ex-captain of the Wonderbolts) so he taught you every thing he knew about flying and taught you the move that only the the Wonderbolts knew how to do!


Your Mum

Your Mum owns a flower shop in the city. She has worked in that shop ever since she was a young filly. Your Mum's cutie mark is a rose. Your Mum's coat was a light red just like some of the flowers she sells at her shop and her mane and tail were just a simple brown. Her eyes were aqua blue

She would always take you and your siblings to the shop when she had the chance. Your Grandparents on your mum's side didn't mind you being there.

Your Mum also teached your brother and sister how to use magic. Even thought you couldn't do magic you would alway like to watch as your siblings would levitate stuff


Your Brother

Your brother, Jack Hammer, would always pick on you. Mainly because you could fly and he couldn't, But no matter what he would do to you you would always look up to him.

Jack Hammer is 5 years older then you.

Your Brother has the same color coat as your dad's and his mane and tail were to same color brown but a little lighter. His eye were also the same color as your dad's.

His cutie mark was a Jack Hammer. He got his cutie mark when he was messing around with some tools when some construction workers were doing some work on your house. He got he serious trouble with your parents and the construction workers. But now he works at building company.


Your Sister

Your sister, Rose Beat, would always be the one how would look after you. When you were being picked on by other ponies, your sister would always help you. Whenever you were upset, she would always be there to comfort you. She would even stand up to your big brother when he was teasing you.

Rose Beat is 3 years older then you.

Your sister has the same eye and coat color as your mum, but she had nice yellow mane and tail. You would always think she dyed her hair, but she always told you that is was all natural

Your sister's cutie mark is a rose with music notes around it. Your sis was very good at playing instrument from the guitar to the triangle. Name any instrument, she could play it.

Her favorite instrument is the guitar, because she like the way it sounds. She would play it for you whenever you were down and depressed. She would play one song for you that would always make you happy.


You

You weren't a shy Pegasus you always be up for adventure and full off life. You loved to fly really fast to feel the wind going thought you're hair and on you're face.

You had the same color coat as your dad but it was a little lighter then his. Your mane was the same color as your mum's, but you had a little bit of blue in your hair that you got from your dad.

Your cutie mark is a star with ribbons on the side. You got your cutie mark by entering a race. You came first and broke a record. After many years, no one had broke it.


You just turned 22 a couple of weeks ago.

It's Sunday.

You still lived with your mum and dad. Jack Hammer and Rose beat have already moved out. Someday you would work with your mum at the flower shop whenever it got to busy and on other days you would help your dad on the weather control.

After you got done with your work you would drop off some stuff in your room and go outside to fly around the city.

As you soared through the air and looked down at the city below you, you started to think to yourself.

I've been doing the same thing other and other again for the last 12 years. I still haven't moved out and I'm living of mum and dad's money.

You come to a complete stop and hoover in the air scratching the back of your neck

"It's time for me to grow up" You say out loud.

You go to fly back home, but something catches your eye. You turn to a pamphlet on the ground. You don't know what it is about this pamphlet and why it got your attention. You fly down to it and pick it up.

You stand there reading the pamphlet when....

"HEY GET OUT THE WAY TO STUPID KID" Shouts some random old man in front of you.

"Oh, sorry sir" You respond and you fly up into the air.

You fly back to you're house and go up to your room and read the pamphlet

"Ponyville huh?" you say "Sounds nice"

A Moving Song

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Chapter Two

You decide that you are going to move to this town. you were getting tired of doing the same thing.

Lucky there are new house that have just be built

Since it was Sunday you're brother and sister always come round for a Sunday dinner, You though that would be the best time to tell everyone you're moving to this town called ponyville. but the only problem is that you don't know how to tell them

it's now turned 5:30pm and you're parents have gotten back from there work and started making dinner

DING DONG

"Stargazer can you please get that" shouted you mum
"Yeah sure" you said back

You walk out of your room and down the stairs to open the door. You are soon grabbed into a headlock with a hoof rubbing in you're mane

"Hey little brother" said Jack Hammer still rubbing a hoof in you're mane
"Hey Jack Hammer" you manage to say since his arm was rapped around you're neck "Erm can you please let go of me, I'm finding it hard to breath"
"Oh sure"
He lets go of you and you fall to the floor gasping for air
"Oh come on little bro, I did have you in my grasp that hard did I?"
"Yeah you kinda did"
"uh i guess i still don't know my own strength" he while flexing his muscles "Where's Mum and Dad?" he asked
"There in the kitchen" you say as you get back up on you're hoofs

You're brother walks away to go into the living room

As you were about to close the front door someone else says you're name

"StarGazer!" says the voice
You turn you're head to see and mare with a rose coat and yellow mane trotting towards you
"Hey Rose Beat" you say back
She greets you with a hug and you hug her back
"How my little brother"
"He's been good. What about my big sis?"
"Fantastic, Well most of the week wasn't fantastic but seeing my little brother again makes it so much better" she says while hugging you again
"Well I'm glad I'm the highlight of your week" you say hugging her back
"So...I take it that Jack Hammer is here already"
"Yeah...how did you know" you ask
"Well you're mane is a mess so I guessed he nuggied you" she says while have a big grin on her face
"Yeah he did" you say back "so are you gonna stay out there or are you gonna come in"
"Oh yes" she say

She walks past you and walks into the living room to say hi to you're parents and you're brother

You think to yourself
Oh grate, Knowing that I'm the highlight to Rose Beats week, It's making me think twice about moving to this ponyville

You shut the front door and walk into the living room were you're brother and sister are sitting on the couch
"What were you doing Star?" Jack Hammer asked
"Huh?"
"Well it seemed to take you a long time to shut the door"
"Ohh..."
"Is something the matter?" you're sister asked
"No nothing wrong" you say
"Star" your sister says "You're my little brother. I can tell when something the matter" she walking over to you and placing a hoof on you're shoulder
"Nothing the matter Rose Beat. Everything is fine"

Rose beat looks at you with her light blue eye. You start to feel a little uncomfortable because you were never any good at lieing to your sister

"Okay then" she say as he walks back to the couch

You and your siblings started to talk about what they have done in the last couple of weeks.
Jack Hammer got promotion and Rose beat is still creating music

"Dinners ready" said your mum

Jack Hammer of course the first one up and and walking to the table
Rose beat still had her worried look at you as you got up and walked to the table,You tired to ignore her look

You sit with you're family eating you're family dinner talking about whats been happening

As soon as everyone is done eating you think to yourself
Alright you have to do this
As you stand up from you're chair everyone looks at you

"I have saying to say" make the fist thing sound really stupid. Check
With everyone still looking at you you feel like you have a ball in your throat
"There isn't anyway other way to say this so I'm gonna say gonna say it" Pausing to add dramatic effect. Check
"Well?" says you're dad
"I'm moving"
Silence falls thought out the whole table
"You're moving?" says your sister
"Yes I am" you say bluntly
"Were about in the city?" Ask your mum
"Well.....I'm actually moving out of the city" you say
more silence fall on to the table and everyone is giving you look of sadness
"Were to?" asked your brother
"This town called ponyville"
"When......When are you going" asked your sister trying to hold back her tears
"In about three days" you say

You look at your mum trying to hold back her tears as hard as she could

Oh please mum don't cry please

"Well son" you're dad said getting up from the dinner table "If it's really what you want to do then....I'm supporting you" He says putting he hoof on you're shoulder
"Thanks Dad" you say back to him

He pulls you in for a hug and he tightly wraps his arm around you. Soon your Mum joins in on the hug and soon your sister does to


Moving Day

You pack up everything that you need
This is it. I'm finally growing up

you walk down the stairs to see your family waiting for you. Mum, Dad, Jack Hammer and Rose Beat

"You ready to go?" say your dad
you take in a deep breath "yeah"

as you and you're family walk out the front door and walk to the train station. No one has said anything since you walked out the front door.

As you pay for you're train ticket to ponyville and wait for the train your Mum is the first one to speak
"My baby boy is leaving" she says while trying to hold back her tears yet again.
Before you could respond your mum grabs you and pulls you in for a hug. This time she releases the water works and starts to cry.
"Mum come on" you say trying to comfort her "I'm not leaving you forever"
Your Mum lets go of you and look you in the eye
"Just promise me you wright to us"
"Of course I will"

"Well son looks like you're finally growing up" says your dad
"I know it's wired"
Saying that get a chuckle from him.
Soon he pulls you into a hug. The Hug last for about a minute until he lets go of you

"Goodbye little bro"
"Bye Jack hammer"
To you're surprise Jack Hammer pulls you into a hug. For the fist time ever

As soon as Jack Hammer lets go of you, You are then tackled to another hug by your sister
Just like your Mum she starts to cry
"Come on Beat don't be like this"
"I don't want my little brother to go" she says thought her tiers
You don't say anything. You hug you're sister for what feels like 10 minutes

You here off in the distance the trains horn.
"Well look like this is it" you say look to your whole family
instead of saying anything they all join you and Rose Beat in a group hug

"ALL ABOARD" yell's a pony

you turn away from your family and walk towards the pony

"Ticket please"
you hand to pony your ticket and he let you on to the train.

You grab the nears seat and look out the window. Your mum and sister are crying again. You can see your Father and Brother holding back there tears.

As they wave to you the trains starts to move.

You give them one last wave.

You started to feel upset up you remember the song that Rose Beat use to sing to you and you start to sing it to yourself lightly

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=03urFs-B2jU

Once you finished singing the song and see Fillyadelphia is no longer in sight

tears started to form in you're eyes

You slowly close your eyes and drift of to sleep

New Found Home

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Chapter 3

"Hey buddy"
go away
"Come on wake up"
No. never
"Come on you're gonna miss the stop"
OH SH-

You open you're eye's and sit up as fast as you could. You see the same guy you gave you're ticket to standing over you
"Wow I'm sure you're the only pony i seen to get up that fast"
"Yeah. I kinda regret it. It feels like my brain is jumping around"
The man chuckles at little bit
"Were just about to reach the ponyville train station. So you might want to get your saddle bag"
"Okay thank you sir"

You get out of your chair and put on your saddle bag and wait for the train to stop.

You stand next to the door.
"So you moving to this place?" The ticket man asks
"Yeah. But i have know idea what to do. or how to get a house"
"Okay here what you need to do. You need to go to the town hall and tell the mayor that you're moving in. You have to fill out some forms. after you done that she'll give you your new house key. and your all settled in. You got that?"
"Town Hall, Talk to mayor, Fill out forms got it"
"Well good luck to you"
"Thank you sir"
"No problem kid"

The train doors open up and you take a deep breath

Here we go, a new life

Walk out of the train and out of the station

Now were is town hall?

You see a big building in to middle of the town from were you standing

I'm guessing that would be town hall

You walk thought the town see different colors of ponies minding there own business, Some of them gave you a weird look but you assume it's normal since you are the new guy

You make it to the big building in the middle of the town.

Okay you can do this. It's just like your history test

You walk into the building to see a cream colored pony with a gray mane at a desk she seems to be writing down something

"Erm excuse me?" You say
"Yes" say the grayed maned pony
"Are you by any chance the mayor?" You ask
"Why yes I am. Are you moving in to Ponyville? she ask back
"Yes I am"
"Well it's always nice to have a fresh face in our town" She says getting up from desk "I'm mayor mare" she says sticking out her hoof
"I'm StarGazer" you say shaking her hoof
"Well it's nice to meet you. Now if you would like to move here you're going to have to fill out these papers" she says walking towards a file cabinet and pulling out some papers
"Okay then" you say then gripping a quill in you're mouth

You fill out what seems to be hours of paper of information about yourself. You get done filling out the information and hand it over to mayor mare.
"Grate thank you. Now if you could just sign this." She pointing to a piece of paper
"I'm not signing my sole away am I?" you ask
The mayor lets out a small laugh "No. You need to sign this for the deed for your new house"
"Oh" You sign the peace of paper happily
"Thank you every much Mr StarGazer
Mr StarGazer I like the sound of that
"Your new house is number 23 and here is your key" she says with a smile
"Thank you very much mayor" You say with a bow and taking the key and putting it in your saddle bag
"Enjoy your say here at ponyville"
"Oh, I'm sure I will. Thank you again"
"No problem"

You walk out the door of the town hall. Excited to find your new house. But there was one problem, You don't know were everything is

Oh Great, I should of ask her were it is

You walk though the town of ponyville, Lost as a lamb. You come up to a shop that looks like a giant ginger bread house

Sugarcube corner huh? Well I am feeling kinda hungry maybe I could get something from there. And directions

You walk into the shop to see no one behind the counter all that are in the shop are 6 mare's but you didn't really pay much attention to them.

You look around the shop looking for the owners

"Ya lost there sugarcube?"

You turn around to see the 6 mares looking at you

"Yeah I am"
"I take it ya new around here then"
"Yep"
You are then tackled to the floor by a pink pony with a curly mane. Kinda reminds you of candy floss
"OHMAYGOSHYOURNEWHEREOHMAHGOSS-"
you shove a hoof in her mouth
"Please slow down and get off me"
She get off you and run's out the door as fast as you seen anypony go
"Was it something I said" You say while getting off the floor
"No that just Pinkie Pie. She get excited whenever someone new comes into town" said the purple unicorn
"Ohh"
"Well it's nice to meet you I'm Twilight Sparkle. Student of the princess herself"
"Howdy, I'm AppleJack. I run at sweet apple acres. you should come by a some point"
"I'm Rarity. I'm the owner of the carousel boutique"
"Umm....I'm...Fluttershy
"And I'm Rainbow Dash the best flyer in equestira"
"Okay then. My name is StarGazer. It's nice to meet you all." You say
"Whats a hansom stallion like you doing in a place like this" Said Rarity
Back off sister you cant be hitting on me that fast
"Well I'm looking for my new house and I need directions"
"Well what number house is it" ask Twilight
"Number 23"
"I know were that is" Said Rainbow dash "I could show you were it is"
"Well I guess. Thank you very much"
"No problem"She said

The two of you walk out the shop and you fly into the air
"Hey were are you going?" Rainbow Dash asks
"Well were both pegasus so would it be easier if we just fly there?"
"Well I wouldn't get to know you better if we fly, we would be there in 10 seconds, So I would like to walk"
"Well....okay then" you say as you fly down and land next to her
"So tell me about yourself"

You spend the last couple of minutes talking to rainbow dash about what you done in your life

"Well here we are" said Rainbow Dash
You pull the key out of your saddlebag and unlock the door and walk in
"Wow fancy, Thanks for your help Rainbow Dash" you say
"Hey, Do you think maybe we could hang out later?" said rainbow dash
"Yeah Sure, what the time?" You look at the clock that is conveniently placed on the wall beside you "2:00 how about and 3:00 maybe you could give me a tour of the town"
"Yeah, I'll see you then" She says
Before you could say anything see speeds off leaving behind her a rainbow trail

You start to unpack everything that is in your saddle bag: Family Photos, Your certificate that you got when you broke the record,And some more stuff

When you finished unpacking you look at the, 2:25,
I have loads of time
You take a wonder thought your new house
A nice house, A very nice house indeed
Walk back into your new living room and lay on the couch and you fall into a sleep


BANG BANG BANG

you are woken up the a load banging on the door

BANG BANG BANG

"Alright Alright I'm coming" you shout

BANG BANG BANG

"Alright" you say opening the door to see a cyan pegasus stand there
"Hey, It's 3:00"
You look up at the clock that is on the wall. It's 3:00 on the dot
"So it is, I didn't expected you to show up right on the dot"
"Well you thought wrong" said rainbow dash "So are we just gonna talk or are we gonna get on with this tour" she says flying up into the sky
"Oh so were flying this time are we?"
"Yeah, I thought it would be easier with a bird eye view"
"Okay fair enough" you say shutting the door behind you and flying up into the sky

Rainbow dash takes on a tour of ponyville showing you some of the shops and showing were her friend lived.

The time is now 5:00

"Well that was fun rainbow but I guess I should be-" you were cut off the the sound of your stomach growling
"Well looks like your hungry" rainbow says jokingly
"What gave it away?"
"Come on lets go to sugarcube corner" she says waving you to following her

You follow rainbow dash to sugarcube corner and land outside the shop

"Hello there rainbow dash" said a pony with blue fur and pink mane "Who that handsome young stallion behind you?"
Not you too
"This is StarGazer, he just moved here"
"Well it nice to meet you StarGazer, I'm Mrs Cake I own this Shop with my husband" she explains
"Well it very nice to meet you to Mrs Cake" you say
"Now what can I get you kids?" Mrs Cake asks

You look at the menu to see what they have
"I think I'll have a strawberry cupcake please"
"Make that two" said rainbow dash
"Sure thing"
Mrs Cake makes her way back into the back of the store

You feel something grab your leg you look down to see a baby pegasus with brown mane
"Well hey there little guy" you say to the baby pegasus
He soon hit your leg which cause rainbow dash to giggle a bit
"Hey now that wasn't very nice" you say to the baby pegasus

Mrs Cake soon returns with with two strawberry cupcakes
"Pound Cake we do not hit customers" said Mrs Cake
"It's no worries, Any way how much will that be?"
"That will be 7 bits"
You go to pull out some bit you stored under your wing but rainbow dash stopped you
"Don't worry I'll pay for it"
She then hands over 7 bits over to Mrs Cake
"Thank you have a nice day, It's was nice meeting you StarGazer" Said Mrs Cake
"It was nice meeting you as well Mrs Cake" you say back

As you and rainbow dash walk out of sugarcube corner you take a bit out of your cupcake.
Wow this is really good
You swallow your bit and turn towards rainbow dash how shoved her whole cupcake in her mouth
"You didn't have to pay for me you know" you say
She swallows her mouthful ans says "I know, I just wanted to"
Not gonna argue with that, Now how do I get home
"Umm rainbow dash"
"You don't know your way home do you"
"No I don't" you say with a blush
Rainbow dash lets out giggle
"Come one follow me" she flying up into the air
You shove the rest of your cupcake in your mouth and fly up to rainbow dash

You and Rainbow dash fly toward your home, You land next to the door
"Well thanks for showing me around Rainbow" you say
"No problem"
you open the door and about the walk in
"SURPRISE!!!"
You fall back on to your back side
"WERE YOU SURPRISE WERE YA HUH? HUH? HUH?"
you are still in shock from what just happened
"YOU SHOULD OF SEEN YOUR FACE WE WERE LIKE SURPRISE AND YOU WERE LIKE ARRGG, OH BY THE WAY I'M PINKIE PIE" she really fast
"Urm Hi Pinkie Pie i'm-"
"Oh don't worry I already know your name. Your name is StarGazer, Rainbow was telling us about you after she showed you were your house was"
"Really?"
You look at rainbow dash raising one eyebrow which cause her to blush
"wait hang on Pinkie, how did you get in to my house" you ask
"You left your door unlocked"
"Ohh" You say feeling embarrassed
"Well don't just sit on the floor silly come in a join the party"
Pinkie grabs you're hoof and pulls you into you living room, It seems like the whole of the town is in your house.


After the party were every one has left excepted for the Six ponies you first met. They tell you about everything they have done. They told you that they represent the elements of harmony.

But you were more stunned by the fact they defeated Nightmare moon, Queen Chrysalis, Discord and King sombra

After a couple of hours talking everyone when home.

Your living room was a complete mess

Meh I'll clean that up in the morning

You go upstairs and locate you bedroom, As soon as you found it you jump sight into bed. As soon as your head hit the pillow you were fast asleep

Racing a Rainbow

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Chapter 4

You start to wake up from your deep sleep, but something was different, you woke up by yourself

You didn't wake up by the sound of your alarm clock or the sound of your dad walking into your room and waking you up because it was passed 12:00

You sit up onto your new bed and rub your eyes
"Whats the time"
You look at your alarm clock that you brought with you from the move
"12:30 wow"

You pull the covers off you and get out of your bed. You walk into your new bathroom and hop into the shower, You turn on the shower head and let the water run down your fur and think about what your going to do today.

First thing first, Clean up the mess from the party last night and write a letter to Mum and Dad.

You squeeze out some shampoo out of the bottle and rub it though your mane.

And i guess i could go and find a job as well

You rinse out the shampoo out of your mane.

You get out of the shower and grab a towel and rub your mane and coat with it.

After drying yourself off you walk down stairs and into the living room. Still a complete mess from last night.

Well lets get started

Using your wing as a broom you sweep up some cup and party streamers and sweep them into a bag. You take down some of the decorations and put them in to the same bag as the streamers and cups.

You walk out of your front door and put the bag full of party stuff into the nearest bin you could find.

You walk back into your house find a peace of paper and a pen and write a letter to your mum and dad

Dear Mum and Dad

Hey Mum, Hey Dad I just wanted to let you know how i was doing
I manged to get myself a house, The house is pretty fancy, I'm going to have to send you a picture when i have the chance. I met some interesting new people, I met the mayor already i had to fill out some forms about myself. I also met 6 other mares named AppleJack, Twilight, PinkiePie, Rarity, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. Pinkie for some reason trow me a party because i new to the town, It was kinda weird, But hey a party is a party so who am i to object to one.
I hope the four of you are okay without me, Give my Love to Grampa and Grandma

Love StarGazer

You seals the the letter in a envelope and write your Mum and Dad home address and you tuck the letter under your wing.

You open your fount door and trot outside.

As you walk thought the town somewhat knowing your way around you manage to find the post office. You walk into the building, You see a gray coated mare with yellow hair she has bubble as her cutiemark, as was facing away from you sorting out her mail bag
"Excuse me miss" you say walk over her
"Yes" she replies and turn over to you

OH MY CELESTIA WHAT IS UP WITH YOU'RE EYES!!!
Her eye were cross eyed kinda like a derpy kinda of way but you don't let that get in the way off it
You were about to say something but she beat you to it

"Hey your that new pony that pinkie trow that party for right?" she ask
"Yes i am"
"Well it's nice to meet my name is Ditzy Doo"
"Well it's nice to meet you, I guess you already know my name"
"Yeah, StarGazer right?"
"Yep"
"So what was it you come over to talk to me about?"
"I was just wondering how do i get a letter post to Fillyadelphia?"
"Oh that's easy, There a box right behind you that say Fillyadelphia, You just put it in there" she say pointing at a box behind you
"Okay, Thank for your help Miss Doo"
"No problem and Please just call me Ditzy"

You nod and walk over to the box with the sign Fillyadelphia on it. You put your letter into the box,You turn towards Ditzy
"Thank you again Ditzy" you say walk out the door.

Okay whats next on the list? Find a job, That would be a good start

You walk though to town looking for the employment agency
(A/N - I could think of anything to call it okay so shut up)

You continue walking thought the town seeing all the food stands
AppleJack even gave you a friendly wave from her stand and being the nice pony you are you wave back

After a few more minutes of walk still having no luck on finding the employment agency

"HEY STARGAZER!" yell a familial voice
you turn around to see a rainbow colored mane mare flying toward you
"Hey rainbow" you greet her
"Do you want to hang out today?" she ask you
"Rainbow, I spent nearly the whole of yesterday hanging out with you"
"But that was a tour, not really what i would call "hanging out" in my standers"
"Well i have something to do, so i cant really hang out today"

you were about to walk away when rainbow said

"Well how about a race?"
Damn she knows my weakness
you could never back down from a race, NEVER
"You got my attention" you say
"From here to sweet apple acres, You know were sweet apple acres is right?"
"Yeah, it a huge apple farm, it isn't that that hard to miss"
"Okay, But lets make this race a but more interesting"
"And how do we make it interesting?"
"How about this" she says with a sly smile "If i win you have to spend the whole day with me"
"And what if I win?"
"I'll buy you Pinkie shake"
"A what?"
"A Pinkie shake, It's something Pinkie came up with when see was messing around in the kitchen"
"Well...I don't know about that prize"
"What..it's really good"
"Firstly i want to know whats in it"
"She doesn't tell anyone, She says it's a secret that only pinkie is allowed to know. But don't worry everything that she puts in it is edible"
you stay silent
"Oh come on, are you going to accept the race.....or are you gonna be a wuss"
"Alright i accept the challenge"

The two of you get set into a racing positions

"On 3"
"1"
"2"
".......3"

To two of you speed of, You were just ahead rainbow by your tail, You start doing things with your wings that your grandpa told you on how to pick up more speed. Rainbow was still on your tail. What you did to pick up speed rainbow was always a tail away.

You start to get close to sweet apple acres and you were still in the lead. As you get closer and closer rainbow dash starts to get ahead off you.

You reach sweet apple acres. And rainbow dash beat you. You lay on the ground huff and puff trying to get your breath back

"Look like i win, You have to spend the whole day with me" said rainbow dash
"How *huff* did *puff* you get ahead off me?"
"I already told you. I'm the greatest flyer in Equestria" say fly into the air "But i have to admit you did you give a run for my money, how did you do all those cool stuff with your wings, the only pony I've seen do that with there wings are the wonder bolts" Her face then lights up "Were you trained by a wonder bolt?" she say staring into your eyes
"No, it just something a picked up" you say Lets hope I'm getting better at lying
"Well your going to have to teach me how to do all that at some point, Now we have a busy day head of us" she says extending a hoof to help you up which you gladly except


Time - 4:00

After a busy day doing all the thing that Rainbow Dash wanted to do you suddenly remember that you need to get a job

"Rainbow, Do you know were the employment agency is?" you ask
"Employment what?" she say
"Employment agency, where you go to get jobs"
"We don't have one of those, We just have job openings on the bulletin board outside town hall"
"Ohhh, Do you think we could go over there real quick?"
"Yeah Sure"

The two of you fly into the air and fly towards the bulletin board

You land in front of the board and look at all the different options

"So you have any idea on what you want to do?" Rainbow ask
"I'm thinking about taking up the weather team"
"You should join Team C" she says cutting you sentence short
"Why?" you ask
"Because.......They.....Have the best team" she say with a small smile
"Well....Okay then" you take the application for team C of the weather team "So what do i do now?"
"Firstly you need to fill it out, And go over to the post office and drop it into the application box." she say
"Okay seems easy enough. Do you have a pen on you by any chance?" you ask
"No i don't, But sure Twilight does, come one we were about to go there i need to pick up the new Daring Do book" she says while turning around and walking toward Twilight library
"Daring Do? Your telling me that Rainbow Dash, The greatest flyer in Equestria reads a book?" You say trying to hold back you laugh
"SHUT UP!!" she says out loud which causes some ponies to turn there heads "I only read the Daring Do book okay"
"Alright" you say still trying to hold back you laugh

You walk over to Twilight library and Rainbow starts to knock on the door
Soon the door opens and a Purple unicorn stands in the door way
"Hi Rainbow, Hi StarGazer what can i do for you?"
"Hi Twilight, If it not too much trouble could i please use on of you're pens or quills?" you ask
"Of course you can StarGazer" said Twilight and let you in "There over on the desk over there"
"Thank you every much Twilight"

You walk over to the table were the quills are and grip one between your mouth and start to wright down your information
"Hey StarGazer" says Rainbow
You turn your head a look at the cyan pegasus
"Me and Twilight are going to go upstairs real quick Okay, No walking off got it?"
What am i a dog?
You just nod and go back to working on the application

After a couple of second you get done with the applications and just wait there, from upstairs you can hear some voice but you cant make out very well

[Purple text - Twilight]
[Blue Text - Rainbow Dash]

When are you going to tell him?
Not yet Twilight it's only been 2 days
You need to tell him soon Rainbow before some other mare get him because I've seen some mare look at him funny
Well I'm just going to have to find away to keep the other mares off him
I'm telling you now Rainbow, Just tell him soon or you're going to miss your chance

You were starting to get board
"RAINBOW ARE YOU NEARLY DONE?" you shout
"YEAH JUST ON MY WAY" she shout back

Soon the two emerge from upstairs and make there way down. Rainbow had the new Daring Do book under her wing
"What were you to talking about?" you ask
"We were talking about.....How good the Daring Do books are" she says with a blush
Why is she blushing? "Alright then, can we go to the post office now?"
"Yeah sure, Thanks for the book Twilight" said rainbow looking back at Twilight how was standing on the stairs
"No problem Rainbow" She also mouth something at Dash but you couldn't make it out, you were never any good at lip reading
"And thanks for letting me use your quill" you say to Twilight
"It was my pleasure StarGazer" said Twilight

You and Rainbow walk out of Twilight library. For some reason Rainbow was quieter then usual
"Are you okay dash?" you ask
"Yeah I'm fine" she says with a smile
"If you say so"
You and Rainbow start to walk towards the post office
"So do you think I'll get the job" you say to dash
"I'm sure you will, who wouldn't want to have a stallion like you on there weather team" said rainbow
"The weather team back at Fillyadelphia"
"What really? they didn't take you?"
"No, They said and i quote 'Weak flank punk of a stallion' and believe me that hurt"
"Did they really say that" she said with a shock
"Yep"
"Well i don't think you weak flank" she say leaning on you, she soon realizes what she doing and back off blushing

You and Rainbow walk into the post office and walk over to the box that says application, You put the slip into the box, The two of you were about the walk out of the post office until you got stop by Ditzy

"Hey StarGazer fancy meeting you here again" she says flying over to you
"Oh hey Ditzy"
"Wait you know her" Rainbow said look at you
"Yeah, We meet when i was dropping off a letter to my family"
"What have you been up to since we last spoke?" Ditzy ask
"Well i had a bet race with Rainbow Dash, In which i lost" as you say that it brings and smile to Rainbow face
"What was the bet?" ask Ditzy
You were about to say what the bet was but Rainbow beat you to it
"If i won he would spend the whole day with me and if he won i would buy him a Pinkie shake"
You were about to say something again but Rainbow Dash beat you
"We still have lot's to do, Come on Star" she say grabbing your arm and pulling you out of the post office
just before you were pulled out of the door you could here Ditzy say "Okay. I'll see you around"

You were about 10 meters away from the post office and Rainbow was still dragging you by you're arm
"Rainbow were well away from the post office you can let go off me now"
Rainbow lets go off you're arm and blushes again
"So were are we going now?" you ask
"were going to sugarcube corner, I'm hungry"


Time - 4:50

You and Rainbow walk thought the door of sugarcube corner to see pinkie behind the counter

"Hiya you two" she greets you
"Hey Pinkie" Rainbow says
"Hi Pinkie, I never did thank you for that party you for trowing me the other day" you say
"Don't worry about, I love trowing party there so fun"
"I can second that" you say "anyway I'll have a strawberry cupcake please" you say
"And I'll have a chocolate cookie please Pinkie" added Rainbow
"Coming right up" said Pinkie

With a blink Pinkie disappears into the kitchen and with another blink she reappears with a cookie and a cupcake

"How did you do that?" you ask
"It's Pinkie Pie she can do anything" said Rainbow
"That will be 8 bits please" said Pinkie
Rainbow goes to pull out some money but you stop her
"Rainbow i got this one" They you pull out 8 bits and hand them over to pinkie
"Thank you very much"

You and Rainbow walk out sugar cube corner eating your teats

rainbow brakes the silence
"Why did you pay from me?"
"Well you payed for me the first time we got something from there. Just think of it as me repaying you"
"Thanks"
You smile and nod
"So do you maybe want to go to the park and relax on a cloud" ask rainbow
"Sure, Love to"
the two of you fly off and make your way to the park


Time - 5:25

You and Rainbow dash lay down on a cloud talk about how big of a fan of the wonder blots rainbow was

"I just remembered that I'm expecting a letter" she stand up and stretches her wings "Don't worry I'll be back"
Rainbow fly's off leaving behind a rainbow trail

You close you're eyes and go to sleep


Time - 6:45

You slowly open your eye. You try to get up but you feel wight on your right arm and your chest. You look over to a cyan pagasus laying on your arm and her arm across your chest.

You feel your cheeks burn up

You try to wake up rainbow
"Rainbow wake up" you start to poke her
"Ummmmmm"
"Rainbow come on" you start to shake
"ummmm StartGazer"
Wait what? is she dreaming about me?
"Rainbow come on, I would like to have my arm back" you manage to push her off of you which cause her wake up
"Hey whats the big idea? i was sleeping" she says
"The better question is why were you sleeping on me?" you ask lifting an eyebrow
"Well you see......i was flying back here then I noticed you were sleeping, i didn't want to disturb you so i fell asleep as well."
"And why were you sleeping on me" I'm not saying i didn't mind it
"Well you started to shiver, so i cuddled up to you and you seemed to stop and i fell asleep next you you" she said blushing thought out the whole tale
"Your not mad are you?" she ask looking at you with big puppy dog eyes
Damn that cute "No I'm not mad, It just took me by surprise"
"MAIL FOR STARGAZER!!" yells a voice behind you
You jump what feel like 500 feet in the air, you turn around to see Ditzy with a smile on her face and you can hear Rainbow laugh
"Ditzy don't do that" you say
"Sorry, but you have mail" she handing you the letter
"Thank you Ditzy"
she smiles and fly's away

you open the letter and read it
"What is it?" ask rainbow
"I got the job" you say with a smile
"Really that great" she says flying up into the air
you read the letter more
"i start tomorrow and i have to be up by 7:00. Oh this is bogus!" you say out load
"Well hay look on the bright side. You got a job right?" said Rainbow
"Yeah i guess so. Is there anything you want to do now?" you ask
Rainbow rubs her hoof on her chin "How about another race competition"
"You're on" you say
"Best to 10?"
you simply nod


Time - 9:00

You and Rainbow raced for hours, By the end of it you were the victor beating her by 1 point

After a long time of trying to get you're breath back rainbow is the first to speak
"Well *huff* that *puff* was fun"
still unable to get your breath back you just nod
"You have to teach me how to do *huff* those wing tricks you do *puff*"
you nod again
"Well i have to get back and feed tank. I'll see you tomorrow"
"yeah" you manage to say
Instead of her say "see ya" she gives you a hug a fly off before you could respond


Time - 9:20

You make it back to your house and unlock your door, you go up to your room and make sure you set your alarm to 6:30.

You decide you were going to go to sleep now since you were so tired from racing rainbow dash

You head hits the pillow and you slowly close your eyes

Working For Team C

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Chapter 5

BEEP, BEEP, BEEP, BEEP

You were awoken from your slumber by the sound of your alarm clock. You let out a grunt and turned it off.

You get up from your bed and stretch your bones.

You walk over the bathroom and turn on the shower


Time - 6:40

You dry your self off from you shower and head out the front door. Closing the door behind you your stomach starts to grow at you. You to go to sugar cube corner to satisfy the needs of the best that is your stomach. You fly into the air and fly your way to the sugar shop known as sugar cube corner

It only takes you 2 minutes to fly over to the shop

You land outside sugar cub corner and walk in

Behind the counter was Mrs Cake you greeted you with a smile

"Hello StarGazer"
"Hello Mrs Cake"
"What you doing up at this time?" she ask
"Well i got a job, So i have to be up at this discorded forsaken time"
Mrs Cake lets out a little laugh "Don't worry you'll get use to it"
"I don't think so"
"So what can i get you"
"Just a strawberry cupcake please"
"Coming right up"

Mrs Cake walks into the kitchen to go get your teat

"Hiya StarStar"
You look around the shop to see nopony there
"Over here silly"
You look over to see a pink mare standing on the stair case with a big smile on her face
"Oh Hey Pinkie, Did you seriously just call me StarStar?"
"Yep, I just getting board of calling you StarGazer so late last night the perfect nick name hit Me, so now on I'm going to be calling you StarStar is that Okay?" she says
I cant believe she said that all in one breath
Before you could say something back Mrs Cake came back with your cupcake
"That will be 3 bits please"
You hand Mrs Cake your 3 bits and take the cup cake.
You look at the clock on the wall
6:53 I need to hurry
"Look Pinkie i would love to stay a chat but i have to be getting to work"
"Okie dokie lokie"
"Thank you for the cupcake Mrs Cake" You say flying out of the shop


Time - 6:56

You fly your way to the park were Team C meets up

You see 6 other ponies standing and talking to each over

You land away from the group to finish off the rest of your cupcake

"Hey you StarGazer right?" said someone from the group

swallowing the the cupcake peaces you have in your mouth you turn your head to see two mares walking over to you.

One of the mare that were walking over to you had grayish blue coat and was wearing a pink bow in her light blue hair, Her cutiemark were three blue and white dragonflies.
The Other walking beside her had slightly darker coat and her hair was sticking up and had a white streak go trow it. Her cutiemark was a shooting star.

"Yeah why?" you say
"Well since your the newbie in the team we thought we would introduce ourselves" said the one with the bow
"I'm cloudchaser" said the one with the shooting star cuitemark
"And I'm Flitter"
"Well it's nice to meet you two, Are you two twin by any chance?" you ask
"Yes we are" said cloudchaser "anyway i just wanted to ask you-"

"Hey StarGazer" said a voice from behind you
you turn around to see a rainbow maned pagasus
"Oh hey dash. What are you doing up at this time?" you ask
"duh, I'm a part of the weather team as well"
"Oh, that's why you wanted me to join this team. So do you have any idea when the captain is arriving?"
"You're talking to her"
"Wait...What? your the captain?"
"Yep. Now every one line up!" she shouts

Every one who was in a talking suddenly stop a went into a line.

"Now this is the new addition to the team, His name is StarGazer, Teat him like everyone else"
Everyone in the line nods at the same time.
"Now since we have Even number everyone going to be pared up into a team off two so that way we can get the sky cleared faster. Now the team are ThunderLane and Blossmforth, Flitter and Cloudchaser, Sunflower and Roid Rage"
"And what about the new guy?" said a pegusus with black coat and mohawk like mane
"He's going with me, I'm going to show him what to do. Now move out"
Soon everypony goes
"Come with me StarGazer" she fly's up into the air and you follow her


Time - 7:25

After a couple of minutes of Rainbow Dash telling you and teaching what you have to do she leaves you to check up on the other teams.

As you kick the clouds you here a voice call out you're name
"StarGazer"
you turn around to see Cloudchaser flying towards you
"Oh hey...Cloudchaser was it?"
"Yeah. Any way our conversation was cut short thank to Rainbow Dash"
"Okay. But can't it wait until after work?"
"Yeah but i just really want to talk to you"
"I'm all ears"
"Well at that party that Pinkie trow for you on your first day here, I saw you from across the party and....." she come to a stop
"And?"
"Well....your really cute......but i guess you get a lot of mare saying that to you." she say blushing
"No not really. Well i had 3 mares call me that when i lived back in Filllyadelphia, But 2 of them were drunk" saying that makes Cloudchaser giggle "But i did get 2 mare call me handsome on my first day here. which was kinda weird"
after a couple of seconds of silences you were about to kick another cloud when
"Hey do you think we could-"
"CLOUDCHASER WHAT ARE YOU DOING GET BACK TO WORK!!"
Soon Cloudchaser speeds off

you turn your head to rainbow dash

"What did she want?" she asks
"She wanted to talk"
"about what"
"Oh see said something about our first conversation being cut short. She also said that i was cute"
"She did!?!" Rainbow dash said with a bit shock in her voice
"Yeah" you say kicking a cloud "should we being doing our job?"


Time - 3:30

"Alright everypony, You all done good, I'm going to let you go home now" said Rainbow dash

everypony went flying off, You were about to but rainbow grabbed your attention

"Hey Star do you want to go to sugar cube corner?"
"Umm." you rub your chin "Nah" you go to fly off again but you feel your tail being grabbed
"Please" she says looking up at you
"No Dash"
She looks at you again with the biggest puppy dog eye you have ever seen
Damn it, why is that so cute "Your not gonna stop are you"
she shakes her head
"Fine"
her face lights up and she hugs you
"What was that for?" you ask
"Well......um race you there" she says flying
you shrug and fly after her


Time - 3:35
You land outside sugar cube corner just after rainbow dash
"Ha i beat you" she says
"Only because you got a head start"
"pff whatever" she says walking into the building
you walk in after her

"Hi again Mrs Cake" you say walking in
"Oh hello" she say chuckling "hungry again?"
"No Rainbow dragged me here" you say nudging her
"Another strawberry cupcake?" she ask
"Yes please" you say
"And I'll just have a normal cookie" says Rainbow dash
Mrs Cake nods and walks into the kitchen
"Why do you always get a strawberry cupcake?" asks rainbow dash
"I like strawberry, strawberry's are delicious"
"I CAN SECOND THAT!!!" said Pinkie from out of nowhere
you jump a few steps back "How did you do that?"
"It's Pinkie Pie" said Rainbow Dash
"So the law of physics don't apply with Pinkie?"
"Pretty much" said rainbow dash
"That's right StartStar" added Pinkie
"StarStar?" said Rainbow looking at pinkie trying to hold back her laughter
"Yep that my nick name for him" she says wrapping her arms around you
Rainbow lets out her laugh rolling on the floor
"Aww come one it's not that funny Dashie" said Pinkie
Rainbow soon stops laughing and covers Pinkies mouth
"Pinkie i told you not to call me that"
You chuckle a bit
"Whats so funny Star?" said Rainbow dash looking at you with an angry face
"Nothing.......Dashie" you say with a sly smile
You are soon tackled to the ground with Rainbow pinning you by your hoofs
"Don't. Ever. Call. Me. That" she say getting angrier with each word
"Alright fine"
She get off you and offers you a helping hoof which you except

"Here you go kids" said Mrs Cake
You pay for your cupcake and Dash pays for her cookie and you go and sit down at a table with Pinkie

As you and Dash eat your food Pinkie whispers something into Dash's ears
"Erm Pinkie i think that's something we can talk about upstairs" says dash
"Well lets go then" said Pinkie grabbing rainbow arm and dragging her up stairs

You are left alone at the table eating your cup cake when a pagasus and a unicorn baby's come crawling over to you
"Hello little ones" you say
you just finished your cupcake and all that was left was the paper.
The unicorn baby horn starts to glow. She starts levitating the paper and bring it over to her
"Wow magic at a really young age. My brother or sister couldn't do that when they your age. I'm gonna have to rub it in there face next time is see them."
The unicorn baby shoves the paper in her and starts chewing on it
"I don't think your supposed to eat that" you say extending your arm to get the peace of paper out of the young filly mouth. As soon as your arm get close to the young filly the young colt jumps onto your arm.
"Hey now" you say
The unicorn spits out the paper and also jump onto your arm
You let out a small laugh which make the two babies giggle which make you laugh more

"Pound Cake, Punkin Cake, Get off that young stallion" said a stallion with yellow coat and orange mane.
He come over at toke of the two babies of your arm "I'm sorry sir" he says
"It's Okay, there just having a bit of fun, I'm guess that your Mr Cake" you say
"Yes I am, You StarGazer yes?" he ask
"I am, It nice to finally meet you Mr Cake" you say
He nods and walks away

You sit in your chair for a bit tapping the table with your hoof. You can here some voice upstairs, You assume that it Pinkie and Rainbow, You can barely hear them but there voice are all muffled

[Pink Text - Pinkie Pie] - Duh
[Blue Text - Rainbow Dash]

You have to tell him soon Dashie, Before you miss it
I know Pinkie, What if he doesn't feel the same way?
You never know unless you try
What if he never talks to me again if i tell him
I don't think that will happen, You guys are good friends right?
That's my point what if he just sees me as a friend
You have to try Dash before Cloudchaser get's him
Cloudchaser?
Yeah! I was walking though the park and i herd Cloudchaser and Flitter talking about him
Oh no!
You have to tell him Dashie

You get up from your chair and go to walk out the door. Before leaving to turn to Mrs Cake
"Hey Mrs Cake can you tell rainbow that I've gone home"
She Nods
You walk out of the shop and fly back to you're house


Time - 4:25

You land outside you're house to see a letter just on your door step. You notice that the writing is from your mum, It brings a smile to your face.You unlock your front door and sit down on the couch. You open the letter a read it

Dear StarGazer

Me, Your Dad, Jack Hammer and Rose Beat are missing you so much. I miss having my baby boy around the house. Rose Beat misses her little brother most of her music she been writing is about her little brother moving. Sunday dinner's wont be the same without the fourth member with the family at the dinner table. I'm glad you been making some new friends around the town. Let just hope you got a job by the time this letter reaches you.

You're Dad said the house is a lot more quieter now your not around

We all miss you

Love From Mum

A tear come to your eyes

Knock Knock Knock

You walk over to the door and open it to see Rainbow Dash holding a flier in her mouth

"Hi Dash, Whats that?"
she spits the flier on to the floor "It's a relay race?"
"Huh?"
"Every year there's a relay race in ponyville, four a team, And i think we should enter"
"Okay then. Who else is going to be on the team"
"Well i asked everyone on the weather if they wanted to be in it but the only one who said yes were ThunderLand and" she stops
"And?"
".....Cloudchaser" she say angrily
"Alright then. I'll join"
"Great! were going to meet at the park to train. Maybe you could teach us how to do all those call stuff with your wings"
"I don't know. Something like that takes years of practice"
"Well I'm pretty sure I'll be able do it. see you tomorrow 1:00 got it?"
"Yep see you then"
Rainbow fly's off in grate speed and you shut the door and walk into the front room and pull out paper and pen and start to write a new letter

Practise Makes Perfect......Well Almost Perfect

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You wake up. But this time not on your bed. Not on the sofa either. You woke up in the kitchen but you were on the floor. Getting up and stretch your back putting some bones back into place.

You scratch your back and walk out of the kitchen

"How did i even end up in there in the first place"

You try to think about what you did last night.

You remember that you couldn't sleep so you got up from your bed and walk to the kitchen to get some cookies and milk which Pinkie gave you as a "Welcome to ponyville gift". You warmed the milk and cookies up. You remember eating the cookies and drinking the glass of milk. You put the glass into the sink. you stood there for a while and collapsed on floor and you were asleep

"Oh yeah. Mum did say that i had a habit of sleeping instantly after a cup of warm milk"

You sit on the sofa and patting your knee

"Was there somewhere i needed to be?" you say "The park! whats the time?" you look at the clock which reads 1:25 "Oh NO!" you say flying out the door shutting it behind you

You fly your way to the park

"Lets hope Rainbow isn't mad"

You fly into the park to three ponies standing on a track, One with Rainbow mane facing away from you talking to the other ponies. One with Black fur and another with a shooting star as a cutie mark

You fly other to them

"Hey Rainbow sorry I'm late, Kinda over slept"
She turn to you unimpressed, But still with a hit of happiness seeing you
"Well that's Okay, But don't let it happen tomorrow"she say
"WHAT THE HAY!!" said the colt with the black fur "If it was me you would of bitten my tail off"
"Look ThunderLane, StarGazer here is going to teach us how to move are wings to make us go faster" said Rainbow Dash "Isn't that right Star?" she says looking at you with a big grin
"I guess. But keep in mind that this toke year's of practice"
"Enough chat. Lets do this!" said Cloudchaser flying up into the air
"You might want to stretch first"
"Why?" said ThunderLane
"Because you need to un-stiffen your wings so when you do this wing tick I'm about to show you so you don't pull a muscle in your wings"
"Fine" said Rainbow dash with a huff
"wait one sec. who going when?" ask ThunderLane
"Star is going first so we can get a good start, Then you ThunderLane so you can keep us in first then Cloudchaser then I'll be last so we can get the win" said Rainbow Dash
"Easy enough" you say

After a couple of minutes of the four of you stretching

"All right that should be enough for now" you say
"Great!" say Rainbow Dash flying into the air
"Yeah come on lets do this" said Cloudchaser flying up into the air but the end of her tail rubs under your chin
You blush a little, Your not sure if it was intentional or not
You fly up into the air hoovering next to Rainbow Dash
ThunderLand hoovers over to Cloudchaser
"Okay" you say "So lets do this"


Time - 5:40

After a couple of hours showing everyone how to do tricks with your wings, At doing lap round the track, You all get tired and decide to call it a day

"Alright, Remember to practice everything i told you, Practice make perfect......well almost prefect with this wing trick, but don't practice to much" you say "Dash"
"I wont, Now stop going on about it" she says
"Also we need to be here by 2:00 okay. Don't forget" said Cloudchaser looking at you and ThunderLane
"Okay" said ThunderLand a little annoyed
You simply just nod

The two mare fly away

You go to fly but ThunderLand grabs your attention
"Hey Star, Can i ask you a question"
"Yeah sure whats up?"
"Could stay away from Cloudchaser"
"What?"
"I just say stay away from Cloudchaser, Or else"
"Are you threatening me?"
"Yes i am" he say getting closer to your face "I like her okay and i won't her to like me, If you do ANYTHING to mess that up, Celestia help you!"
Your speechless
"YOU GOT THAT!?!"
"Yes, Alright"
"Grate see you tomorrow" he says patting you he shoulder and then flying away

What the hell just happened?


The Next Day

Time - 1:30

half hour to the race. You fly over to the race track to see hundreds of ponies of different colors.

You land in front some pony taking tickets

"Ticket please" he ask you
"I'm apart of the race" you say
"You need to go over there" she say pointing over to some tents with different colors

you walk over to a table with a orange maned pony with carrots as her cutie mark

"Hi there are you in the race?" she ask
"Yes i am"
"Who's in your team?"
"Rainbow Dash, ThunderLane and Cloudchaser"
Her eye scan the paper she was holding
"Ah yes, and what order are you going?
"Me, ThunderLane, Cloudchaser then Rainbow Dash"
"Okay"she say writing down the order "You need to go stand under the blue tent"
You nod and walk over to the tent

You reach the tent to see no one there
I was curtain rainbow would be here already

After a couple of minutes of waiting ThunderLane shows up
"Hey pal" He says
"Hey"
"So you ready to kick some flank" he say
"You know it" you say cocking a smile
"I think i finally mastered all those trick you show us the other day" he says smiling and flying with wings
"Grate, Let hope the other have as well, so that way well be unstoppable"

After a couple more minutes Cloudchaser arrives
"Hey guys" she says
"Sup" said ThunderLane trying to act like a cool guy
"You guys ready?" she ask
"You know it" said ThunderLane still acting cool
"What about you Star?" said Cloudchaser
You look at ThunderLane giving you a look that say I'm going to kill you if you speak
You just nod

Couple more minutes pass and it was 15 minutes till the race
"Where is she?" says Cloudchaser looking out the tent
"I don't know, Probable sleeping in a tree" says ThunderLane
You start to get worried

8 minutes left till the race and Rainbow Dash enters the tent
"Well it about time Dash" said Cloudchaser
"Umm...guys we have a problem" Says Dash walk up to you
"And what that be?" ask ThunderLane
"You know those tricks that Star was teach us" she says know facing away from you and towards ThunderLane and Cloudchaser
The two of them nod
"Well i was practicing them earlier and"
"You sprained your wings didn't you?" you speak up with annoyance in your voice
She turns her head to you lowering her ears, She look's at you in your eyes and nods
"Brilliant dash, Just Brilliant" says ThunderLane raising his voice at her
"Yeah Dash, Way to go" adds Cloudchaser
Rainbow Dash looks at you like she about to cry, she mouths something to you,This time your able to read it
"Your not mad at me are you?" she mouths
"No" you mouth back
"How are we going to win now" ask Cloudchaser looking at you
You rub your chin and think of something
"I got it" you say
All three off them look at you
"Me and Dash will switch places" you say
"What?"ask ThunderLane
"Dash are you still able to fly?"
She nods
"Okay, So if dash takes the first part and I'll take the last part" you say
"I cant go as fast as i use to" she says
"Cloudchaser, ThunderLand you guys are going to have to put some more effort into your flying, you think you can do that?"
"Yes" said Cloudchaser
"Definitely" said ThunderLane
"Alright I'll be right back" you say flying out the tent
"Were are you going?" ask Rainbow Dash
"Going to ask the orange haired lady to change our order"

You fly your way over to the orange mare at the table
"Excuse me miss, But do you think we can change our order in the race"
"Your lucky, I was about the give this to the race mangier" she says "So whats the new order?"
"Rainbow Dash, ThunderLane, Cloudchaser then Me"
"Okay done" she say after writing the new order down
"Thank you very much"

You fly your way to your teams tent
You walk into face turning to you
"So did you manage to change it?" ask Rainbow
"Just at the last minutes" you say

You spend to last minutes until the race thinking to yourself
Alright you can do this, No presser on you, All you need to do is do the same thing you did 13 years ago, Wining the race and braking the record, The only difference is that you got a three other ponies relying you to secure the victory. No presser at all

you snap back into reality with Rainbow Dash in front of you
"Didn't you hear?"
"Huh?"
"Come on we need to get to our possessions" she say towards to tent door, she turns to you and say "Remember, We're relying on you, Not just the team, nearly half of ponyville have a bet on that were going to win"

she walk out the tent

OH GOD THERE'S PRESSER!!!!

For The One Who Coulden't

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You walk out of the tent, to see lots of ponies standing around the race track, You walk though the crowed of ponies and trot your way to your spot,


Rainbow starts off at the start/Finish line and fly over to ThunderLane who is at the 3/4mi he fly's over to Cloudchaser who is at the 5/8mi, She fly to you at the 1/4mi and you finish the race

You walk over to your spot and stretch your wings because you need to push yourself to the limit this time because your up agents some stallions who look like they can brake the speed of time.

You look over to ThunderLane who looks nervous about the race but of course he trying to hide it.

You look over to Cloudchaser to look focused and ready for her wing to take on a hurricane.

You finally look over at Dash who is looking back at you with worried eyes
you mouth to her "You can do this"
She nods with a smile

The starter of the race walk over and tell every one to start

Every thing goes dead quite.

Rainbow get down into the starting possession. You can see the pain in her face.

"ON YOUR MARKS!!!" shouts the starter
"GET SET!!"
"GO!!!"

All of the ponies fly off. Rainbow Dash is last but see about a tail away from the pony in front of her. She mark her way to ThunderLane still in last place, all the other pony have gone when Dash tags ThunderLane. ThunderLane flys off in a fast speed catching up to the pony in front of him. ThunderLane manages to pass the pony and tag Cloudchaser. Cloudchaser is in 3rd place at the moment but she catching up, She doing all the wing ticks you taught her but it doesn't seem to be helping a lot, She's turning the corner to you. Your stomach starts to turn, word's of doubt go flying though you head
You cant do this
You're going to let everyone down
Cloudchaser fly over to you still in 3rd place and tags you. You fly off with grate speed leaving a dust cloud from were you toke off.Your flying as fast as you could, You were pushing your wings to the limit doing all the techniques your gandpa taught you so many years ago. You were close behind the pony in front off you. You were Reaching the finally stretch, You close your eyes and you feel the wind push against your face and a tear forms in your eye and sweat forms on your face. You open your eyes you crossed the finishing line. You look back to see the other three ponies just crossing the finishing line.

You hear load to screaming and cheering coming from the side and behind you. A pony with a slick back mane and a mustache come up and pats you on the shoulder.
"Well done my boy, You gave your team the victory"
"I came first?"
"Yes you did" she says with a smile

You go responded but you grabbed by a pair of cyan arm rapping around your neck and pulling you in for a hug.
"YOU DID IT, I CANT BELIEVE YOU DID IT!!!" screams Dash
"Yeah nether can i" you say returning the hug
"WE WON WE WON WE WON WE WON" dash screams some more and hugging you tighter
"Yeah we did" you say
After a couple of more seconds Dash hug get tighter and tighter
"Ummm dash I'm running out of air here" you manage to say
"Oh im sorry" she say letting go of you "I'm just so happy that we won!" she continues

"STARGAZER!!"

you turn around to see the two other pegusus from your team fly over to you
"THAT WAS AWESOME DUDE!!" say ThunderLane
"Not really" you say trying to hide you pride
"NO SERIOUSLY, YOU JUST CLOSED YOU EYES AND STARTED DOING SOME STUFF WITH YOUR WINGS AND PASSING OTHER TWO, THAT WAS AWESOME!!" Says ThunderLane unable to control in excitement
You extended your hoof for a hoof bump but he grabs your hoof bring you in for a shoulder hug and he whispers in your ear
"Just because you won this for us doesn't mean i like you, you still need stay away from Cloudchaser"
you just nod
"Way to go Star" says Cloudchaser
"It was nothing, beside if ThunderLane wasn't able to get us in 3rd i don't think i would of done it" you say, You walk off before she has time to say anything back

You walk other to Rainbow Dash who is with her friends
"Well i tell ya Star, That was mighty impressive" say AppleJack
"Thanks, I put my heart out there" you say
"YOU KNOW WHAT THIS CALLS FOR, A PARTY" shouts Pinkie Pie "I'LL CALL IT TEAM-DASHIE-AND-STARSTAR-WINNING-FIRST-PLACE-PARTY" she continues
"That sound nice"you say
"I NEED TO GO SET UP THE PARTY AND EVERYONE IS INVITED!!" she says before running off
"I must say you looked very magnificent on the final stretch" say Rarity
"Well thank you, But..." you pause "I think if it wasn't for dash able to push herself with a sprained wing, i don't think we could of done it without her" you say rapping your wing around her.
You notice dash is starting to blush Aww that's kinda cute
"Well....you know....I'm the best flyer in equestria nothing can bring me down" she says
you chuckle "I know for sure,wait did pinkie say what time the party is?" you ask
Everyone shrugs
"It's at 7:00!!" say Pinkie Pie from behind you
"PINKIE!!" you shout jumping in the air and landing on your back, which cause the whole gang to laugh
"Don't sneak up from behind me like that" you continue
"Why not?" she ask
"because i was in maze as a child and something jump on me and scared me half to death" you say
"Okie dokie lokie, Also you need to give a speech" she says pointing at you
"Me? why?" you say
"because you're the one who won the race and i think the winner needs to give a speech" she says
"Okay then" you say in a worrying tone


Time - 7:15

You walk in to sugar cube corner were pinkies "team dashie and starstar winning first place party" was held, you decided to show up late on purpose

You walk thought the crowed of ponies to get some punch from the table. Your stopped by pinkie
"hey there you are you need to do your speech" she says
"What? right now?" you say

Pinkie shakes her head violently. She grabs your arm pulls you to the stage

"Hey eveypony" say pinkie in the microphone, All head turn towards the pink pony "We have the winner of the race here and he going to do a speech" she continues
Pinkie pushes you in front of the microphone
silents fall in the sugar shop
"well what can i say, I just cleared my mind and went for it" you pause "But i didn't do it for me, I did it for my team, I did for everypony who betted on my team, i did it for my family back home in Fillydelphia but most importantly i did it for Rainbow Dash who sprained her wing, I did it for the one who couldn't" you could hear some pony say aww "Thank you have a good rest of the night" you say finishing your speech.
Claps start and soon the whole room if filled with ponies clapping there hoofs together
You towards the punch table but you are stopped by Two other ponies
"That was beautiful" says Fluttershy
"Thank you, That the only sentence you have ever said to me" you say
"Did you really do it for me?" ask Dash
"Of course i did" you respond with a warm smile which makes dash blush


Time - 9:00

You sit at a table with a cup of punch

One of the songs you used to listen to comes on

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OuheuIDqo6c

Rainbow Dash walks over and sits next to you
"I loved this song" you say
"Really?"
you nod your head "I used to listen to this song all the time"
"Do you maybe....want to dance?" she ask while blushing
"Sure, Love to" you say getting up and extending you hoof to her
She happily grabs you hoof and stands up
You walk her to the dance floor
You and Rainbow Dash dance together to one of your favorite songs
You sing the song under your breath


Time - 11:00

Everypony has left sugar cube corner, All that are left Twilight, Fluttershy, AppleJack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and You

You finish the last sip of your punch
"Well that was fun" you say
"It sure was" said AppleJack
"Well i think we should be getting home" said Twilight
everyone agrees and walk out of sugar cube corner
"I'll see you guys tomorrow maybe" you say
Everyone say there good bye to you, Rainbow Dash hugs you and whispers in your ears
"Thank you, Everything you did today"
you hug here back and whisper in her ear
"Anytime Dashie"
She punches you in the stomach knocking the wind out of you.
"Don't call me that you jerk" she says to you
you get your breath back and say
"Just shearing the love" you say

The other say there good byes to you and you walk down the street to your house.

You reach your fount door and unlock it

You make your way to your bedroom

You trow yourself on your bed and close your eyes

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It been a week since the relay race. You been doing the same thing over and over getting up, going to work, kick some clouds, finishing work.

Rainbow Dash would always offer you to hang out with her, You would always accept the offer. But when you didn't Rainbow Dash would beg you or follow you until you did.


Day - Friday
Time - 2:00

You had the day of work today so you just sat around your house doing nothing. You would play some of the music that your sister sent to you every now again. But the song you would play the most is the song that played at the party. (see last chapter for song). You would play the song out loud. You would even sing along with it some times.

Knock Knock

There was knocking on the door but you couldn't hear it because the music was too loud.

Knock Knock Knock

The knocking got louder but you still couldn't hear it.

You hear something tapping on the window so you turn your head to the window to see a gray pegusus look at you with a angry expression.

You get up and walk over to the door and open it
"Hey Ditzy" you greet her
"Do know how many time's I've knocked?" she ask you clearly annoyed
"No" you say
"At lest 5 times"
"Sorry the music was a bit loud" you say scratching the back of your neck "So what brings you here?"
"I have a letter for you" she says reaching into her bag
"Why didn't you just leave it on the door step like you usually do?" you say
"Well you have the day of don't you?" she say
"yeah"
"Whats the point of leaving it on the door step when your inside your house?"
you blush to the fact you've been outsmarted "I guess your right"
"Well here you go" she handing you the letter
"Thank you, have a good rest of the day" you say back to here before she flys off

You shut the door and start to open the letter.

You start to read it

Dear StarGazer

Were having a family get together on the weekends, It wont be the same if the youngest of the family isn't there. We all need to see our little one. It's going to be at Grandpa and Grandma lake side cabin so please come along just outside Fillydelphia. You're big sister needs to see you face again

Love From Mum

The letter comes with the picture of the lake side cabin

You always loved going to your Grandpa and Grandma lake side cabin. You loved jumping into the lake and the fresh air.

You start to pack some of the stuff you need. But you can't forget the most important thing, an extra pillow, your Grandpa and Grandma would always set up the rooms but they only have two pillows, You can never sleep on one two pillow so you decide to bring a extra pillow.

As you pack some extra thing to take with you. like headache pills just in case your brother decide that he going to whack you around the head. You hear an knock on the door.

You walk downstairs and open the door to see a cyan mare standing there
"Hey you doing anything tomorrow?" she ask you, like she does most of the time
"Yes i am" you say
"Really? what you doing? maybe i could come along" she says
"No i don't think you can come dash"
"Why not?"
"Because I'm going to the cabin to spend the weekend with my family. Kinda like a family gathering" you say
"Where is this cabin?" she ask
"Just out side Fillydelphia, why?"
"I'm i not aloud to ask?"
"It kinda weird how you just asking random questions"
"Well can we at lest hang out today?" she asks
"I guess i can spend sometime with you before i leave tomorrow" you say grabbing your key and some money, shutting the door behind you
"So what do you want to do?" she asks
"Well I'll need to get a train ticket for Fillydelphia first, so can we do that?"
"Yeah sure"

The two of you fly other to the train station. You buy the train ticket for tomorrow.

You and dash walk away from the train station

"So now what?" you ask
"You like pranks?" she ask you
"Yeah, Why?"
"How about we go a prank some ponies" she says with a devilish grin
You to start to get a devilish grin on your face, You nod and the two of you fly off


Time - 8:00

You and Rainbow Dash a laughing your guts out on a cloud
Trying to get your breath back from all the laughter you have done to day
"My side hurt" you say while laughing
"My jaw is starting to hurt" says Rainbow Dash while laughing

After you two calmed down from all the laughing you try and get your breath back, You noticed that Celestia sun is starting to go down.

"Hey dash that was fun and all but i need to get back home and continue packing and plus i need to catch the train early as well" you say standing up
"Okay...." she says with disappointment in her voice
"I'll guess I'll see you in two day" you say spreading you wings
"Yeah i guess" she say still disappointed that you have to go

You fly away from the cloud and fly your way home

You land in front of your house and unlock the door. You shut the door behind you and you walk upstairs to your bedroom and continue pack some extra stuff. You have to reset your alarm you 6:00 so you can catch the train.

After a couple more hours of you playing some of your sister music you decide to go to sleep.


BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP

Your dreams are invaded by the dreadful sound of your alarm clock. You open your eyes and turn it off. You make sure that you turn of your alarm fully so it doesn't go off then your away.

You grab your saddle bag and strap it on your back. You remember to to put your keys in your saddle bag so your able to get in to your house when you get back from your family gathering. You grab you train ticket. You walk out the front door and fly your way to the train station.

You wait for your train still half asleep. You close your eyes for a few seconds. As soon as you open your eyes the train is at the train station. You walk over to the train door and hand the man your ticket.
"You do know that you were sleeping while standing up right?" the ticket pony tells you
"I was?" you say with shock
He just nods

you find an empty seat, You unstrap your saddle bag and place it on the seat next to you. You go to close your eyes again because you know that this is going to be about an Two hours and a half journey to Fillydelphia. You close your eyes and go to sleep


Time - 8:30
You open your eyes to see your reaching Fillydelphia train station
What timing
You get up from your seat and strap on your saddle bag and walk over to the train door.
the train comes to a stop
The doors opens and you walk out of the train and walk out of the train station. You stand outside the train station and look around you
"Well back to Fillydelphia Star, But you wont be here for long" you say to yourself

You walk thought the City looking at all the building, You walking on one path and that was the path out of Fillydelphia, You walk out of Fillydelphia and and continue your way down the road. You keep walking for what fills like hours. Your hoofs start to get tired so lift you hoof of the ground you flap your wings,your about 5 center meters of the ground. You hoover your way down the road until you meet a dirt path. You land you look at a forest, You take a gulp you lift you hoof off the ground still 5 center meters away and hoover your way thought the forest.


Time - 11:00

As you hoover your way to your Grandpa and Grandma cabin you get the feeling that your being followed, You look over your shoulder every now and again just to make sure that SlenderPony is not following you.

A couple more minutes of hoovering thought the forest you start to get the smell of a lake. As a lake starts to come into view of to the left is a cabin. You land on your hoofs an trot your way over to the cabin

You knock on the cabin door

The door opens at revile a elderly pegusus mare with a brown coat and a blue mane.
"StarGazer" she says with delight pulling you in for a hug
"heya Grandma" you say returning the hug
"Come on in everyone is waiting for you" she says letting you in

You walk in to the cabin unstrapping your saddle bag and setting in on the stairs

You walk walk into the living from were all head turn towards you
"STAR!!" shouts you sister running up to you
She tackles you with a hug before you could say anything, Her hug was tighter then rainbows was when you won the race.
"Hey Rose Beat"
"I missed you so much" she says squeezing you tighter
"I missed you to" you manage to say
She hugs you tighter and tighter, It feels like your eyes are about to pop out of it sockets
"Can you let go please" you squeeze out
"Oh sorry" she says letting go of you "i just missed having my little brother around"
"I know you did" you say rapping your wing around her

You are then put into a head lock with a hoof going threw your mane
"Hey there little brother, i missed putting my bro in a headlock" said Jack Hammer
"Hey Jack, I missed you two" you say
He lets go of you

You then turn around and walk over you your mum
She pulls you into a hug as well
"How my little baby boy" she says
"He's doing good"
She hug for what feels like five minutes

after she lets go of you, you ask
"where's dad and Grandpa?"
"There outside on the balcony preparing the BBQ
You walk outside to the baloney to see your Dad and Grandpa setting up the BBQ

You clear your trout which grab there attention
"Hello son" says your Dad walking over to you and pulling you in for a hug
"Hey Dad" you say returning the hug
"StarGazer you young stallion you"
You let go of your dad walk walk over to a old pegasus with a gray coat and brown mane
"Hey Grandpa" you say hugging him
"How have you been my boy, how life in ponyville" he says
"Well has about to got back in the front room and tell everyone. If you would like to join us" you say pointing to the front room
"Of course i would" he say walking pass you and walking in to the front room
"What about you dad?" you say turning to your dad who is still trying to set up the BBQ
"Yeah i will, Just let me set this up" he says
"Okay"
You walk in to the front room and sit next to your big brother and sister.
"So tell us everything" said Your Grandma

You simply nod and tell everypony what you you have done when you moved to ponyville


After telling everyone your story, your dad says that he better get the BBQ fired up and get some food ready

Your Dad, Grandpa and brother walk out onto the balcony

"You find any mares that you like?" ask your grandma
you blush at the question "No, not yet Grandma" you respond
"What about the Rainbow Dash, from what you told she seem nice" say your mum
"Yeah, well i haven't met anypony who is right for me"
"Well don't worry I'm sure you'll find one eventually" said Rose Beat stroking your mane
"Thanks sis" you say laying your head on her shoulder
"So what about your new house you haven't told us about that yet" said your mum
"It was very fancy when i first walked in, but now.....not so much" you say lifting your head off your sister shoulder
The three mare laugh at your statement
"So what have you four done while i was away" you ask
"The same old same old" said your mother
"Well what have you and Grandpa been doing Grandma?" you ask
"We've been doing nothing really"
"You guys have such interesting lives" you say sarcastically
"don't get cheeky" you sister says punching you in the arm lightly

"The food nearly done" you hear your dad say from the balcony
the four of you get up from the sofa's a walk towards the balcony

Knock Knock Knock

"StarGazer can you please get that" say your Grandma
"yeah sure"

You walk to the door and open it, You eye widen, Standing at the front door was a familiar cyan pegusus with a huge smile on her face

"RAINBOW DASH!?!?"

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"RAINBOW DASH!?!?"
"surprise" she says happily
"W-What are you doing here?" you ask still in shock
"I just thought i would accompany you"
"Rainbow this is a family gathering"
"So" she says
"Family. Gathering. do you not understand"
She just looks at you
"Hang on, Did you follow me here?"
she nods her head happily
You face hoof

"StartGazer what taking so long?" you here your Grandpa call from the front room
"Nothing Grandpa" you call
You turn back to dash
"Look dash go home now"
"Why?"
"because-"
you get cut of by your Grandpa
"Come on boy, The BBQ nearly done" he walk over to you he notices Rainbow Dash standing at the door way "Who this?" he ask you
"Grandpa this is Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Dash this is my Grandpa"
"Oh your Rainbow Dash, The one who had the sprained wing"
"Yes i am sir" rainbow dash say
Rainbow Dash widen when she suddenly realized who your Grandpa is
"wait a minute are you Ice Storm, former captain of the wonder bolts" she say with delight
"Why yes i am" your Grandpa says proudly
"You never told me your Grandpa was a former wonder blot captain" she says look at you
"That right young miss, I fact i taught StartGazer here everything he knows about flying" he says wrapping his wing around you
"So you did lie to me, You were taught by a wonder bolt" she say still excited
"Alright enough chit chat,Come on Grandpa" you say walk away from the door
"Well you be joining us this weekend miss Rainbow dash" said you Grandpa
Him saying that stopped you in your tracks, You turn around with your eye widen
"Yes i am" she say smiling
"Grate, it will nice having you hear" He says stepping a side and letting Rainbow in
"Thank you very much" she say walking int he cabin
You roll your eye and make your way to the balcony with Rainbow Dash close behind you

You walk into the balcony to see you dad behind the BBQ with your brother while you sister, Mum and Grandma are talking
You stand in the door way
"Everyone" you say and everyone turns there head toward you "This is Rainbow Dash" you walk onto the balcony revealing Rainbow Dash behind you
"Hi there" your sister is the first to speak
"Hi" says Rainbow Dash
Your mother walks over two her
"Will you be joining us?" she ask with a happy tone
"If it's not to much trouble" say Rainbow stretching the back of her neck
"Not at all" say your Mum "Come on and meet everyone" she say


After Rainbow Dash has met everyone and you all had something to eat all of you walk into the front room
"You know I think I'm going to stay out here for a while" your sister say standing out on the balcony

Every one walks in to the front room and has a seat on the sofas, You sit next to your brother and Rainbow Dash sits next to you.
"So Dash, How do you know Star?" ask your Dad
"Well when he first moved to ponyville he had a bit of trouble finding his house, so i showed him where it was and he became friends" she says
"Well, i take it you must be a huge wonder bolt fan?" asks you Grandpa
"Yes, I love the wonder bolts-"
You zone out because you heard it all before

You decide to go out on to the balcony with your sister

"Hey there big sis" you say walking over you Rose Beat you has her front to leg on the railing
She turns her head and smiles at you
"Hey" she says back
"So why did you decide to stay out here?" you ask
"Well you know, i just love to look at the lake" she says
The two of stay quite for a while
"You know, i couldn't sleep for Two days when you left" she says braking the silence
"Really?"
she nods
"I was scared"
"About what?"
"I thought that you where going to get hurt, That you might of been attacked by some pony in that town"
You just look at her
"I was scared by the fact that my little brother may be seriously hurt in this town you moved to" she say looking like she was about to cry
you wrap your wing around her
"When you finally sent us a letter i was so happy, Just reading about what you've been doing and reading that you were fine made all the feeling go away"
"Well I'm glad" you say resting your head on the top of her head

After a couple of minutes Rainbow Dash came walking on to the balcony

"Hey guys" she say
"Oh hey Dash" you say
"Oh, i don't think we met probably, I'm Rose Beat" she extending her hoof
Rainbow Dash shakes her hoof "It's nice to meet you"
"Your the one who had the strained wing right?"
"Yep, I glad you all know by that" Dash says jokingly "Your his Big sister right?"
"Yup and I'm proud to be" say Rose Beat
"I would be proud to have a little brother as awesome like StarGazer" she say
"oh come on, Enough" you say blushing
"So what you guys talking about?" Dash ask
"Apparently Beat here was scared that i might of gotten hurt in ponyville" you say nudging your sister
"What am i not aloud to worry about my little bro" Beat says
"Well i a sure you that you had nothing to worry about, Everyone is nice in ponyville"
"Well i did some research, and i saw an article about monsters attacking ponyville"
"Oh well....That started when my friend Twilight moved in" said Dash scratching the back of her neck
Rose Beat look unimpressed
Dash looks at you, It look like she asking for your help

"Star, Can you help us move this" you hear your Dad say from Inside the cabin
"Yeah" you say "Be back in a minute"

You fly into the cabin, You mother points to the outside of the cabin

You look out the window to see Your dad, Grandpa and Brother trying to push what looks like a boat

You fly outside and help push the boat


Rainbow Dash and Rose Beat conversation while you push the boat

"So you like my little brother" Rose beat says with a smile
"Yeah he's my friend" Rainbow dash responds
"No, I mean like like"
Rainbow Dash starts the blush
"You have a crush on my little brother don't you?" says Rose Beat
Rainbow Dash blushes even harder
"I see the you were looking at him, Don't deny it"
"Okay yes i have a crush on him" rainbow dash says nearly shouting it out loud
"I knew it" Rose says "Why don't you just tell him?" ask Rose Beat
"Because i don't know how he will take it"
"Believe me" say Rose Beat putting a hoof on Rainbow Dash hoof "He will be fine when you tell him"
"But I've been making it so obvious that i like him" Dash says
"My bother had lots of mare falling for him but he's never noticed, He not very good at reading mares"
"But what if he just sees me as a friend?" Rainbow asks
"Well we got to find away to make him look at you then more then a friend"
"How? wait did you just say we?" she ask
Rose Beat nods her head "Look i don't do this for any mare who like my brother, But you seem like a nice mare that would treat him nicely, So I'm going to help you" Rose Beat enplanes
A smile start to creep up on Dash's face
"But you got t promise that you'll treat him right" Rose Beat says
"I promise"
"Okay. Here's what you do"


The four of you push the boat into the lake
"Well done boy's" says your dad
"It's wasn't a problem for me" says Jack Hammer flecking his muscles
You roll your eyes
Your dad gives you look
You know exactly what that look means, You smile and nod your head

Jack Hammer was to busy focusing on the muscles to notices what you and your dad were about to do

The two of you grab Jack hammers arm and fly up him up into the air
"what are you doing" Jack Hammer ask
He soon realizes what you to are doing
"NO NO DON'T NO!!" he beg
You and your dad let go of him, Jack Hammer falls into the lake crating a big slap in the water
You and Your dad laugh in the air and as Jack Hammer comes to the surface of the lake
"Oh real funny" he says swimming to the shore
You and your dad are still unable to control your laughter

After you and your dad stop having your laughing fit you fly over to the balcony were Dash and Rose Beat were standing.

"Guess whose back" you say landing next to rose beat
"Hey" says Rainbow Dash happily
"What were you two talking about when i was away?"
"Girl stuff" say Rose Beat
"Alright then"


Time - 11:30

After spending the rest of the day swimming in the lake and doing some stuff with your family, Everyone decides it was time to go the bed.

Your Grandpa and Grandma set up with room
Mum and Dad would have one room
Grandpa and Grandma would have there room
You and Jack Hammer would have one room
since Rainbow Dash showed up she would have to share a room Rose Beat

"Goodnight eveypony" said your mum
You all say good night in unison

you happily jump into your bed and pull the cover over you

You go to close your eyes
"You know that Rainbow friend of yours is kinda cute"
"Okay..." you say
you go to close your eyes again
"But she not my type"
"Good night Jack Hammer"
"Do you think I'll ever find a special somepony?"
"yes now good night"
you turn facing away from him and closing your eye


Time - 2:15am

"StarGazer"
you feel your bed rock
"StarGazer"
you lift your head of your pillow
"Huh? wha"
"Rainbow had a nightmare"
you turn around to see Rose Beats standing there
"So.." you say
"She was calling out your name"
For Celestia sake

You get out of your bed and walk over to Rainbow Dash and Rose Beat room

You walking into the room to see Rainbow sitting on her bed with her head in her hoofs
You walk over to her
"hey are you okay" you say walking over to her
When you stand next to side of her bed she wraps her arm around you and cry's into your chest
You sit down on her bed with her bearing her head into your fur
"Hey...it's okay" you say running a hoof threw her mane trying to comfort her
"It felt so real" she says threw her tears
"It was only a dream" you say still trying to comfort her "You want to talk about it?"
"We were walking thought the forest and" she says trying to regain control "and Slender Pony come out ans he attack us, You pushed me out the way and he was killing you" She then started to cry again
"Hey it's okay, it was only a dream, nothing going to hurt you or me" you say as she still cry's into your chest

After a couple of minutes Rainbow finally stops crying, she looks up at you

"You okay now?" you say smiling at her
She nods, letting go of you
you go to get off the bed but she grabs your arm
"Do you think, maybe you could sleep here tonight?" she ask
"What in your bed?"
she nods
"Well....i guess i could"

You lay down on the bed
rainbow soon wraps her arm around you again and bearing her head into your chest
"Goodnight" you hear her whisper
"Goodnight Dash" you whisper back

You close your eyes and drift off to sleep

I love you

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Time - 11:15

As you escape the dream world you hear voices, you continue to have your eyes close and listen to the conversation
"shh, your going to wake him up" says a curtain cyan pony
"Okay I'm sorry" says a voice you can easily tell is your sister

You can still feel Rainbows arm warped around you and her head on your chest, But it feel like she watching you sleep

You start you open your eye and you are blinded by the light, You look down to your chest and you were right rainbow as looking at you

"Morning sleepy head" she says to you
"Morning, You sleep well? you know after your dream" you ask her
She nods her head "Thanks to you i did"
"Well that's good"
She continues to look at you with her big eyes
Wow, her eyes are beautiful now i got the change to look at them
"Umm, Dash"
"Yeah?"
"Do you think maybe..."
"Yes" she says getting closer to you
"Maybe..."
She get closer to you, her face nearly touching yours
"Yeeessss" she says with half closed eyes
"Do you think maybe you could get off me please"
she then back away from your face
"oh.yeah" shes letting go of you
you get of the bed and walk towards the door
"Thank again Star, for helping me sleep"
"Anytime dash" you say turning around walk out the door backwards

You turn back around and walk down the stairs

You enter the living room
"Morning Star" first says your Mother after she swallows her mouth full oats
"Morning everypony" you say back walking past them and trot your way to the kitchen

In the kitchen you get out a bowl and some oats, you pour the oats into the bowl and walk you back into the living room

As you enter the living room you see that rainbow dash has taken a seat next to your sister and they were talking about something
Wow these two are getting along well

You take a seat on the coach next you your brother

You dig in to your bowl of oats

"Where were you last night?" your brother asks
"umm" you say with your mouth full of oats
"When i woke up from a dream about 3:00 in the morning and i noticed you weren't in your bed, And i know you weren't in the bathroom either" he says looking at you
You swallow you mouth full of oats
"I was in Dash and Rose Beats room"
"Why?" he asks you
"Rose Beat came into our room and woke me up, She said Dash had a nightmare and she was calling out my name during, So i went into there room and tried to comfort dash, I manged to her down calm her down but she wanted me to say with her for the night, So i did" you explain to your brother

After you finished your bowl of oats you get up and walk to the kitchen

You wash out your bowl and leave the bowl in the sink

You walk out the kitchen and go to sit down but your stopped by your Dad
"No need to sit down Star"
"Why?"
"Because your going to help me get some set up ready for tonight" He says
"What are we doing tonight?" ask Jack Hammer
"Where doing a camp fire tonight"
"Awesome I love camp fires" say Dash
"I guess you can help Me and Star as well Dash" says your dad
"Love to" she says
"Grate lets go"

The three of you walk out of the cabin

"So what do we need first Dad?" you ask
"Well there are 8 of us for where going to need a lot of stuff"
"Like what?"
"Well if you two go into the forest and get 4 logs and a lot of fire wood"
"Yep sure thing, Come on Dash" you say walk towards the forest
You get to the edge of the forest, You turn around to see Dash shaking
"Come Dash there's nothing to afraid of, Slender Pony isn't real"
Dash is still shaking
You wrap your wing around her
"Come on, I'll be with you the whole time were in here" you say comforting her
She take a breath "Okay" she saying looking at you


Time - 1:00


As you and Dash come back from the forest with logs and sticks on your back, you see that your dad has set up a ring on rocks
As you walk up to your dad
"Dad were back we got the logs and fire wood" you say to him as you get the wood and logs off your back
Dash did the same as you
"Good work, Now if you put the 4 logs around the stones those well be the place we sit"
"Eye Eye Captain" Say Dash
Your dad chuckles

You and Dash set up the logs around the stone circle your dad has set up

From the cabin balcony your sister say
"Come on you three lunch is ready"
The three of you fly up and land on the balcony
"It's not perfect but i guess that will do for now" you dad say
You whisper to Dash"My Dad get very OCD when come to camp fires"
Dash lets out a little giggle
Celestia damn it that's cute


Time - 8:00

You spent most of the Day talking to your family waiting for time to go by

Your dad notices the time
"well come on lets get this camp fire started" you dad says standing up and walk towards the cabin door
As all 7 of you get up and follow your dad you see you mum walk towards the kitchen
"Mum where you going?"
"I'm just getting these"
You mum pulls out a bag of marshmallows

You and your mum walk to wards the camp fire you see everyone had taken a seat
The fire was already lit
Grandpa and Grandma on one log
Rose Beat and Jack Hammer on another
Dash is sitting on one by herself
and you guess that your mum and dad are going to sit on the other one
You walk other to the log that dash is sitting on
"I guess I'm sitting next to you" you say as you sit down on the log
"yep looks like it"

Your mum opens the bag of marshmallows and your dad hand everyone a roasting stick

As the 8 of you roast your marshmallows you dad says the most unusual thing

"So how about a camp fire song"
Rose Beat face lights up and she conjures up a guitar
"So hows going to sing?" ask Grandma
"I think Star should" says your mum
"No no no,i cant sing" you say
"Yes you can" says Rose Beat "Remember when we used to sing together"
"Come do it little bro" say Jack Hammer
soon the whole family and Dash start say "Do it" repeatedly and the same time
"Alright fine"
You clear your trout

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbhSmZDh0r8

As you finish the song every one starts the clap

You stand up and take a bow


Time - 10:00

As You, Dash and the rest of the your family start talking about random things your Dad again says something unexpected
"How about we end this on a scary note"
Everyone just looks at him
"Who got a scary story?"
"Oh i got one" says your brother

Your Brother was a wiz at tell scary stories

There was once a family who lived just outside a forest, There youngest daughter had a stuffed doll, The doll had a red dress and a rose hair, One day as the family where out on a picnic the young girl feel asleep, The family left the picnic sit because it was about to rain, The dad carried the girl on her back but they left the doll behind, As the rain pored down lightning hit the doll, The doll came to life, As it got up from the mud i began to walk to wards the young girls house, The doll entered the house by climbing threw the window, The young girl dad was a lumber jack and he left his ax on the table, The doll toke the ax and started climbing the stairs, The doll started sing "1, 2, 3, 4 I'm coming up the stair, 1, 2, 3, 4 I'm gonna kill you all" You doll opened the young girl door and walked over to her, the doll then sung again "1, 2, 3, 4 I'm going to set you to sleep" The doll chopped the young girl head off, The doll then walked over to the the parents house and did the something to them, The doll set the head of the pony's on the table and left the house. They say the doll is still out there wondering the world, The doll could be anywhere, So you better make your to lock your bedroom doors tonight, Because this is the night where is all happened

Everyone around the campfire was frozen in fear, You look over at dash to was shacking violently

"Well.....That was good Hammer" says your dad

You wrap your wing around her but she is still shaking and she doesn't even look at you

"I think you may of broke dash" you say

You wave a hoof in front of her, But she still doesn't respond

You think of the only way to get her back to reality,

"OH MY GOSH DASH LOOK OUT" you scream

Dash jumps in the air and she wraps her arms around you shaking in fear

"Welcome back to reality" you say
"You jerk why did you do that" she letting go of you
"Because i thought Hammer broke you with his story" you say
Dash starts to blush

"Well i guess it time we all went to bed" say your Grandpa getting of the log

Your dad puts out the fire with a bucket of water

the 8 out you walk into the cabin and head up stairs

Everyone says good night to each other

You and jack hammer walk into your room and lay down on the bed

"Goodnight little brother, try not to have nightmares from my story"
"Goodnight big bro" you say close your eyes


Time - 2:00

"StarGazer" you hear a voice whisper
You open your eyes and see a worried look but you don't know who it
"Who there" you say still half asleep
"It's Dash"
You rub your eyes "What is it this time?"
"I cant sleep"
"And what do you want me to do?"
"Can i sleep with you tonight?"
"Dash...how old are you?"
You see tears start to form in her eyes
you sigh "Okay,i guess you can" you say scooting over and letting some room on your bed
You see a big smile on the face of dash, She get into your bed and she immediately wraps her arm around you
"Goodnight, Star" she says with her head on your chest again
"Sleep well Dash" you say closing your eyes and drifting of to sleep

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Chapter 11

Time - 10:35

You wake up to see Rainbow's head on your chest and her arms around you with a smile on her face

You look over to your left to see your brother sitting on his bed with a huge smile

"Well Well Well” he says
you start to blush
"Oh, come on little bro, you two look cute together"
You ignore him and look down at Dash,
Awww she looks of peaceful
"You know little bro, you have to teach me how to get girls to do that"
you just roll your eyes
Rainbow starts to wake up
She lifts up her eyelids slowly revealing her beautiful eyes
"Well good morning" you say to her
"Morning" she says back to you with a smile
The two of you look into each other’s eyes

"I'll leave you two alone" your brother says walking out the room

"Err Dash, can you maybe get of me please?"
"Can we just stay like this for a while?"
"But we-"
"Please?" she cuts you off and looks at you with her trademark puppy dog eyes
"I guess we can" you say
A smile appears on her face

You lay on your bed with dash's head still on your chest,
After what seems like 10 minutes dash speaks
"What do you see me as?" she asks
...That was unexpected
"Well where do I begin? you’re a cocky Pegasus who calls herself the best flyer in Equestria"
"Only because it's true"
"I also see you as the very talented, caring, wonderful pony, and I wouldn't want you any other way"
She blushes
"What do you see me as?" you ask her
"I see you as the most caring, loveable, and the sweetest, Pegasus I have ever met"
You smile
"Dash can you get off me please?"
"No"
"Dash come on, we need to get to the train back to Ponyville"
She groans and gets off you
You get out of bed, grab your saddle bag, and you strap it around you. The two of you walk down the stairs and enter the living room, where your family looks at you

"Well, I guess this is goodbye, again"

As your family all say their good byes, you hear them all say 'it was nice meeting you' to dash

The two of you walk out the front door and into the forest. You give your final wave to your family and disappear into the forest

As the two of you emerge from the forest and walk your way down the street, dash smiles and says
"Race you to the train station"
"You’re on" you reply


Time - 10:40

You land at the train station before dash does
"I win"
"Only because you did those wing tricks, that help you go fast, you cheater"
You chuckle
"So when is the train coming?"

As if on cue the train horn blows
"Right now" you say with a smile
The train stops in front of you
You and Dash hand your train tickets to the ticket pony and he lets you on
You find two seats, you sit down in one and dash sits in the other

"So how long is the trip?" dash asks you
"About an hour and a half"
"Alright, good" she rest her head on your shoulder "Wake me up when we get there" she says closing her eyes
"Will do"


Time - 12:10

"Dash" you say shaking her lightly "we're here"
"huh?" she says opening her eyes slowly
"We're here"
"really?"
"Nope"
"You jerk"
"I'm only joking, we're actually here"
The train comes to a stop, you and dash get out of your seats and head towards the door, the door opens revealing 5 other ponies
"YAY, YOU’RE HOME, YOU’RE HOME, YOU’RE HOME" says pinkie bouncing up and down
"Yes pinkie we are" says Dash
"How was your trip Star?" ask twilight
"It was alright, too long for my liking" you say as all seven of you walk out the train station
"And how are your parents?" Rarity asks you
"They’re fine, good, and healthy, although my sister was scared that I might have gotten hurt while I was here"
"Well that's not going to happen, Ponyville has all types of nice ponies" says Applejack
(A/N I don't know how to type in a way that sound like Apple Jack)
"That's what I said"
All you laugh as you walk though Ponyville
"Since you guys are back, you know that this calls for?"
All you stay silent. You all know what’s coming
"A PARTY!!!"
"How did I know?" you say
"I GOT TO GO SET UP, SEE YOU GUYS LATER"
Without any warning she speeds off

As the six of you walk through the town walking, talking and laughing you reach your house
"Well it was nice seeing you guys, but I think I'm going to have a quick nap before the party"
In the corner of your eye you can see that dash is a little upset
"See you at the party" says Twilight
"Yep see you guys there"

You unlock your door and walk into the house
OH DEAR CELESTIA it's exactly the same
You walk upstairs, to you bedroom, unstrap your saddle bag, fall onto your bed and close your eyes


Time 3:00

You wake up to some knocking on the door
You lift yourself up and walk down stairs, you walk towards the door and open it, on the other side of the door was a Pegasus that you were told to stay away from
"Hey Star"
"Er, Hey Cloudchaser"
"So the rumors are true, you’re back"
"Yes I am, Now that you know that the rumors are true, what do you want?"
"I just thought I would stop by and see how you were doing"
"Good"
You just wanted her to get away from you, not because ThunderLane told you, but it’s just didn't like her
"Are you going to invite me in?"
"Nope"
She giggles "You’re silly"
You roll your eyes
She just looks at you with a smile
You sigh and open the door a bit wider
Without you saying a word she walks into your house
Rude
"This is a nice place you got here"
"Yes, Now if you could just-"
"Take a seat? Love to" she saying cutting you off and walking into your living room
How rude is this pony?
She takes a seat on one end of your sofa
You sigh again and take a seat opposite her
"How are your parents?" she asks you
"Good" you say
"What’s the matter? Don’t you want to talk to your friend Cloudchaser?" she says while pouting her lower lip
If you’re trying to be cute, it's not working
"No not really"
She giggles again "you’re funny"
You roll your eyes, raised as a good stallion you get up from your seat
"Would you like a drink?"
"Yes please"
"Anything in particular?"
"Just water please"
You walk into your kitchen and pull out a glass from the cabinet. You fill the glass with water from the sink and walk back into the living room, handing the drink to Cloudchaser
"Thank you" she says taking the glass
"You’re welcome" you say sitting back down

After she finishes the glass she looks around the room
"Hey, what’s that?" she asks pointing at your certificate
"Oh, it's just a certificate I won"
"What for?"
"When I broke a record"
"For what?"
"A race"
"When?"
"When I was 6"
"What is the time?"
"Cloudchaser, if you just came here just to waste my time and ask stupid questions, now is not the time"
"Sorry"
You look out the window to see ThunderLane staring red hot daggers at you
"I think you should go"
"But I hav-"
"Go" you say pointing towards the door
She gets up from your sofa and walks towards the door,
You hear the door open and close
You continue looking out the window, ThunderLane is on longer there

You look at the clock 3:15

You decide to go upstairs and continue your nap


Time - 6:30

You wake up again to knocking on the door. You walk down stairs and open a door, standing at the door is your favorite neighborhood Rainbow Dash

"Hey dash, what brings you here?"
"The Party duh"
"What?"
"The party it started 15 minutes ago"
"Really? I thought it started a 7:00"
"Well it didn’t, Come on we need to go, Pinkie hates it when her guest of honor is late. She starts freaking out"
"Oh, okay" you shut the door behind you and the two of your fly off to sugar cube corner


The two of you land in front of the sugar cube corner and walk inside
"Oh goody your here, I was starting to get worried that the two of you weren't going to show up so I got scared that the whole party was going to be ruined and-"
"Pinkie, it's fine you know I wouldn't miss one of your parties" you say trying to calm her down
She takes in a deep breath and exhaled
"Okay, NOW LET’S GET THIS PARTY STARTED"


After you have a drink of apple cider and dance around, you sit at a table and ThunderLane comes up to you
"Hey Star can I talk to outside for a minute"
"What for?"
"I just want to talk"
"Then why can’t we talk here"
"Because it’s something I don't want others to hear"
"The music pretty loud, I doubt no one can hear you"
"Come outside damn it"
"Okay Okay"
The two of you walk out of sugar cube corner
"This isn't about Cloudchaser is it?" you ask
"No, it isn't" he leads you to the back of the shop "and by no, I mean yes"
3 other ponies come out from the shadows
"I knew it"
"I told you to stay away from her and you do the exact opposite"
"I didn't want her in my house alright, she just walked in"
Soon you are surrounded in a circle
"Grab him"
You are then grabbed by two of the ponies, you try to break free, but they’re much stronger then you are, they then lift you up on to your hind legs
"I'm going to enjoy beating the snot out of you"
"ThunderLane look you don't need to-"
You are then cut off by ThunderLane kicking you in the stomach, you let out painful grunt. He kicks you in the stomach again.
They let go of you and you fall to the floor in pain
"Aww did that hurt? Well this will hurt more"
He then kicks you in the stomach again and you roll on your back, ThunderLane then stomps on your right arm with force, you scream out in pain. One of the ponies covers your mouth with his hoof. ThunderLane walk over to your right hind leg and stomps on it, you scream again but the scream doesn't come out because of the pony covering your mouth. ThunderLane does the same thing with your left legs, stomping on them.
"Grab his wings" he barks at the other ponies "Keep his mouth shut" he says to the pony covering your mouth

The two ponies extend your wings and hold them to the ground, you try to flap your wings but to no success, they’re too strong for you

ThunderLane walks over to your right wing
"I hope you enjoyed the times you been flying, because those were your LAST" he then stomps on your wing
You scream out in pain, which gets out into the air
"I TOLD YOU TO KEEP HIS MOUTH SHUT!!" ThunderLane yells
"Sorry I slipped"
ThunderLane then walks over to your left wing and does the same thing.
You scream again, but it doesn't get out into the air this time
"Get him up"
The three ponies get you up on to your knees
ThunderLane bucks you right in the jaw,
Little bits of blood fly out of your mouth
He bucks you in the Jaw again
More blood flies out your mouth
"Is three the lucky number? Well, let’s see if three will end it"
He is about to bucks you again,

"What do y'all think you’re doing?" says a huge voice with a southern accent

You look over to see a huge red coated stallion with an angry look on his face
The ponies that are holding you let go and you fall to the hard floor
ThunderLane and the other ponies fly off into the night sky

You try to get up onto your hoofs, but your legs were badly damaged
"STARGAZER!!" you hear 6 voices call out
"Are you Okay dear?" asks Rarity with a very worried tone
You vision is very blurry
"Star speak to us" says Twilight with the same amount of worries
You go to say something, but a pool of blood comes out of your mouth
Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie scream
"OH MY CELESTIA, ARE YOU ALRIGHT?" shouts Apple Jack
"Star come on speak to us"
You have no idea who said that
Your vision become more blurry then it was and all you see are blurred colors and your ears start to ring

Soon everything goes black and you feel yourself hit the floor. You hear some muffled screams and gasps

A Kiss That Could Brake A Comatose

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You open your eyes slowly and see nothing, but a white void. You sit up with out any problems. You feel your wings
"My wings are fine" you say out loud. You feel the bottom of your mouth "And my mouth is no longer bleeding, Where am I?"
"You're in purgatory" says a female voice
You look up to see a pegasus mare with a coat and a halo descending towards you
"Purgatory? so I'm dead?" you ask the mare
"Not quiet" she looks at you with a smile "Luckily, you've have been given a second chance"
"Second chance? but i haven't done anything to deserve one" you say to her
"Really?" see pulls out a list "Well according to my list, you've done lots of things that deserve one"
"Like what?" you ask her
"You made friends with a colt who had no friends when you were 6, You helped your brother get out of trouble with the police, You help your mum and dad with their work, when they didn't ask for it, You helped an old lady get here purse back, You helped Rainbow Dash when she had a sprained wing, and You comforted dash when she couldn't sleep" she puts her list away. "If all that doesn't deserve a second chance, i don't want what does" she says smiling at you
you smile back

BEEP


"What was that?" you ask
"That must be your cue to leave"
you get up on to your hooves
"Before i go, Who are you?" you ask her
"I'm your guardian angel" she says with pride
"I have a guardian angel?"
"You sure do"

BEEP

"Thank you" you say
"Keep yourself safe" she says to you

You are then hit by a big flash of light


you start to hear voices but you can't tell who they belong to
"Doc it's been 6 days"
"I know"
"Is there anything you can do to wake him up?"
"unfortunately not were just going have to wait and see"
You open your eyes slowly you are blinded by the light but you're eye quickly adjust
"Just tell us doc is he ever going to wake up?"

You sit up slowly and you see Twilight, Fluttershy, AppleJack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie standing at the door and facing the opposite way, You see your doctor smiling at you

"Yes he is" he says happily

The six of them all turn to you and their faces all light up with smiles
"Star! you're awake" shouts Rainbow Dash as she flies to the side of your bed and pulls you in for a hug
her arm squeezes around you and she adds pressure on to your wings, causing the most pain you have ever had
"OWW" you scream out
"Oh sorry" she lets go of you "I'm just so happy that your awake"
"As are we" says the doctor walking over to you "Now StarGazer, your wings are broken and the bones in your hooves are badly damaged. So you may not be able to walk as well as you normally would be able to, but don't worry your hooves will heal and you'll be back to your normal self. You are one lucky young man. You'll be out of here in about a week and a half, But when you do get out of here, no flying for 6 weeks"
"6 weeks?!?!" you yell out, You grab your pillow and bury your face in it, while mumbling curse words
"Aw come on now sugar cube, it could of been a lot worse, you could of been killed" Apple jack says patting you on the back
you lift your head from the pillow "yeah, i guess you're right"
"I'm also going to put you on some drugs to help you recover faster" your doctor says walking towards the door "I'll leave you all to your love fest" he says smirking
"Thanks doc"
He nods and walks out the door

You lay back down onto your bed
"How long was i comatosed for?" you ask
you look around to see dumb founded faces on five of the ponies around your bed except Twilight
"Unconscious" you explain
"Ohhhh" they all say in unison
"About 6 days" says Twilight
"6 days?!?" you say sitting up like a bolt. Massive amounts of pain, rush though your body, forcing you back down
"Yep" AppleJack says "Rainbow Dash has been sitting next to your bed thought out those six days, just waiting for you to wake up"
you turn your head and look at dash
"Really?" you say happily
"Yeah, i wanted to give you something" she says blushing
"Then why didn't you just leave it on the little table, I could've just opened it later"
"it isn't something you open"
"Then what-"
Dash cuts you off by grabbing your face and pulling you in for a kiss. Her lip locking with yours, you tense up at first but then you slowly regain your composure and you close your eyes.

You feel dash's tongue dance around your lips, you open your mouth slowly but her tongue enters your mouth and starts to dance with your tongue.

She slowly brakes away and looks into your eye

"What, What was that for?"
"Because I love you. Ever since we were talking, when I was showing you where you house was, I know i felt something for you"
you smile at her "I love you too"
She then locks her lips with yours again

"Alright love birds, that's enough" you hear AppleJack say
but the two of you ignore her and continue kissing
"StarGazer" you hear Pinkie say, but her voice is very quiet and has a upset tone
You break away from the kiss and look towards Pinkie

Her hair was straight and her mane and coat were a very dull pink
"I'm sorry" she says
"What are you sorry for?" you ask her
"If it wasn't for me throwing the party, this wouldn't of happened"
"No Pinkie, it wasn't the party, ThunderLane threatened me to stay away from Cloudchaser, but Cloudchaser came by my house and just walked in, ThunderLane was looking in though my window and he got some guys to beat me" you pause "Pinkie, it wasn't your fault"
"So you're not mad at me?" she says looking at you
"No, of course not" you say and then pull her into a hug
She hugs you back. Her bright pink soon comes back, Her mane soon returns back to it curliness, and a bubble personalty returns

You turn back to Dash who has a smile on her face

"Well it's nice to see you're awake" says a big stallion voice
You all look over to the door to see a red stallion walking in
"How you holdin' up partner?"
"Better then i was at the beat down"
"Well that's good to hear"
"I don't even know your name, but thank you for scaring off those goons" you say to the stallion
"The name's Big Mac and think nothing of it, besides i think those thugs won't be doing anything for awhile" he says to you
"wait, are you saying you got revenge for me?"
"Eeyup"
"What did you do Big Mac?" ask AppleJack
"I just showed them what happens when you mess with one my sister's friends" he says with a smile
"If there is anything i can do to repay you, just say it" you say to him
"You can get better, that's what you can do" he says back to you
"No, that's not good for enough, you work with AppleJack at the farm right?"
"Eeyup"
"Well maybe i could help out at the farm a bit"
"Well i guess you could, but only when you're one hundred percent" he says to you
you nod
"Well we better be getting back now AJ" Big Mac says
"Okay, Get well soon Star" she say walking towards the door
"I'll try" you say "ohh and Big Mac" you say catching his attention
he turns his head to you
"Thank you again"
he nods his head and walks out the door


Time - 6:00

You spend the last couple of hours talking with your new marefriend and the other four elements of harmony
"Visiting time is over" says the nurse poking her head thought the door way
Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie all walk out the door while dash stays by your bed
"Miss Rainbow Dash I presume your staying here again"
"Yes I am nurse" she says
"No, Dash your going home" you say to her
"But-"
"No buts Dash, You've been here for 6 days; you deserve to go home, take a shower, have something to eat, and get a good night sleep" you say cutting her off
"But you-"
"I'll be here in the morning, In fact I'll be here all week" you say cutting her off again
Instead of saying anything, she locks her lips with yours again
She breaks away leaving you hungry for more
She stops in front of the door way and turns to you, she blows you a kiss and then walks out the door

You smile and lay your head down on the pillow
Today was a good day, Kinda
You close your eyes and drift off to sleep

Calm The Aches, Stop The Shakes

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Chapter 13

Time - 10:45

You open your eyes to a beautiful site, Rainbow Dash with her gorgeous smile
"Morning Twinkle" she says
"Twinkle?"
"You know that nursery rhyme? Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" she looks at you with her wine colored eyes "You're my little star" she says and then kisses you on the forehead
"And you're my little Dashie" you say sitting up slowly so you don't cause yourself any pain
"Wait Dash don't you have work?" you ask
"Nope, I asked for a month off so I can take care of you" she says and then nuzzles you on the cheek
"Ohh, I hope I'm not interrupting anything" you hear a voice come from the door
You look over to the door to see a nurse
"Not at all" you say
"Mr. Stargazer, I know you just woke up but you need to take your pills" she say walking over to a small table with a bottle and a glass of water
"Okay nurse" you say
She hands you the glass of water, shakes the bottle so two of the pills fall out and hands you the pills. You put them in your mouth and take a drink of water; you swallow the water with the pills
You hand the water back over to the nurse and she puts it back on the table
"Now that wasn't so bad now was it?" you hear dash say
"Thank you nurse" you say
She nods and walks out the door
You lay back down on the bed with your head on your pillow, letting out a groan
"Are you okay?" Dash asks
"Yeah, It’s just my wings" you say
"Well maybe a kiss will make it better" she says putting a kiss on your lips
The two of you close your eyes and kiss each other

"Well, Well, Well" you hear a voice say
You break away from the kiss and look over to the door, you see your doctor standing there
You blush a little
"It nice to see two love birds" he says walking into the room
"Hey doctor......I don't know your name" you say
"Doctor Stable" he says walking over to you
"What you doing here doc?" asks dash
"I'm just checking on Stargazer’s wings to see if there healing properly" he says "Now Star if you could please sit up"
"I'll try" you say sitting up slowly
You manage to sit up but little amounts of pain fly though your body
"Okay now if you turn your whole body towards Dash"
You nod and sit towards Dash, she smiles at you and you smile back
All of a sudden you feel great pain in your wings
You let a cry of pain
"Sorry about that" your hear your doctor say
"Be careful will you" dash says with a tone of anger in her voice
"I'm sorry but that’s how we need to check the wings"
"By causing pain?!" dash says more annoyed
"Dash it’s okay, He just doing his job, Sorry about her Doctor Stable" you say
"It's okay; I would act like that if somepony hurt my friend’s wings when he's been unconscious for six days"
After a couple of minutes the doctor finishes checking on your wings
"Well they seem to healing properly, it there anything else I can get you while I'm here?"
"Yes, Can you get some pain killers or something because my hoofs are starting to ache a bit" you say
"Certainly" he says and then walks out the door
"Why didn't you ask me? I could have got them for you" Dash says
"Because they only started aching now and the doctor was leaving anyway" you explain
Your stomach then starts to growl and you hear Dash giggle a bit
"Do you want me to ask the nurses to get you some of their food?" Dash ask
"No, I can't eat that stuff" you say
"Why not?"
"Because the last time I was in a hospital, I ate that stuff and nearly died" you say
"Really?" Dash asks in shock
You nod
"Well maybe the stuff here is different than the stuff at Fillydelphia"
"Maybe, but I don't want to risk it"
"Well Pinkie did say that she was going to bake you a get well soon strawberry cupcake" she says smiling
"That sounds delicious" you say "But I don't think I'm in the mood for a cupcake at the moment"
"Well she did say that she was going to drop it of at some point today, so how about I go to the shop and get something there?"
"Alright" you say
"Do you want anything in particular?"
"Just a hay sandwich please" you say
"Okay, I'll be back in a minute" she says, kissing you on the cheek and walking out the door

Soon your doctor comes back
"Where’s she going?" he ask
"She’s just going down the shop to get something to eat"
"Okay then, Here are the pain killers, these won't stop the aches but they will calm them down"
He hands you the glass of water and takes out one of the pills
"Take one of theses when your hooves start to ache again"
You put the pill in your mouth, drink some more water and swallow the pill
"Thank you doctor"
You see a nurse standing at the door way
"Doctor Stable, Doctor Kiva needs your help"
"Okay Nurse RedHeart" he says and then goes out the door

Soon rainbow dash walks in with a bag of food and a little orange filly with purple mane and tail
They walk over to your bed and dash puts your hay sandwich in front of you
"Hey, who's this?" You ask
"This is Scootaloo, Not only is she my number 1 fan she's also my apprentice" she says running a hoof though the young filly hair
"Well it nice to meet you Scootaloo" you say to the orange filly
"It nice to finally meet you to, during our practice Rainbow Dash would always talk about you"
You look over at dash who is blushing
"Really? What has she been saying?" you ask Scootaloo
"She been saying how good you are at flying and how cute you are"
You look over at dash again who blushing even harder
Scootaloo jumps up on your hospital bed
"How did you end up in hospital Mister Stargazer?"
"Well little filly" you say "Never make a deal to stay away from somepony because soon enough that deal going to come around and bite you in the flank"
Scootaloo lets out a little giggle
"Did you fall out the sky?" Scootaloo ask
"Well, No, I got attacked in the back ally of sugar cube corner"
"That must have been horrible"
"Oh it was"
Then Scootaloo face lights up
"You and Dash are marefriend and coltfriend, right?" she asks
"Yeah" says Dash
"So maybe when you get out of here, you and Dash could teach me how to fly"
"You know that’s not a bad idea" you say
"But Star remember what the doctor said, you not allowed to fly for 6 weeks” dash says concerned
"I know, after those 6 weeks of course"
"Dash told me that you broke a record when you were my age, is that true?" Scootaloo asks
"It sure was"
"Could you tell me what the race was like?"
"Yeah, of course" you say a clear your throat "I was getting ready to start the race, three other colts were there, and my biggest threat was Bonet"


Time - 3:30

You tell your story and eat your hay sandwich
Scootaloo was full of joy
"Wow that was amazing do you have any more stories?" she ask
"I don't think Star has time for more stories Scootaloo besides your Mum and Dad said you need to be back by 4:00" Dash says
"Oh yeah right" Scootaloo says with disappointment in her voice
"Mister Star can you make two promises for me?"
"Yeah what is it?"
"One: Promise me you'll teach me how to fly with Dash"
You nod
"Two: Promise me you'll take good care of dash and treat her right, She’s like my big sister"
"I Promise Scootaloo"
She smiles and get off the bed
"I'll fly you home Scoots" Dash say lowering herself so Scootaloo can get on her back
"Be back in a minute" Dash says and walks out the door with Scootaloo on her back
You feel a little tired; you lay your head on your pillow, pull the covers over you and close your eyes


Time - 3:55

You open your eyes slowly to see Dash at the side of your bed with a daring do book in her hoofs
"Well hello" she says looking over at you
"Hi" you greet her "when did you get back?" you ask
"Ten minutes ago"
You sit up slowly and pull the covers off you
"And where did you get that daring do book?" you ask
"When I got back I noticed you were asleep, I didn't want to wake you so I flew home quickly and grabbed a few books and flew back here"

You then start to shake violently

"Are you Cold?" Rainbow Dash ask
"No" you say still shaking
"Then why are you shaking?" she asks with concern
"I don't know" you say
"Hold on I'll get a nurse" Dash says, flying out of the room
A couple of seconds later dash comes back with a nurse
"What’s the problem?" the nurse ask
"I don't know, I can't stop shaking"
"Are you cold?" the nurse asks
"No"
"Hang on one second did you fall asleep at all?" she asks
"A little bit" you say
"I see, you need to take these pills before you go to sleep"
"Okay, but can you make the shaking stop please? I'm starting to get a headache" you say
"Yes, Hold on" she walks out the room as fast as she could
"That was stupid of you" Dash says
"I didn't know was supposed to take them every time I go sleep" you say still shaking
The nurse returns with a bottle of liquid, she then pours it on a small tea spoon
"Open" she say
You open your mouth and the nurse pours the liquid in your mouth and tells you to swallow
You swallow the liquid; it had a horrible taste and stings your throat on the way down
After a couple of minutes you stop shaking
"I'm going to leave the bottle here just in case you forget to take your pills again"
The nurse then walks out the room


After a couple more minutes talking with Dash, Pinkie soon enters the room
"Hiya, you feeling any better today StarStar?"
"Better than I was"
"Well that's good to hear" she says happily "I also baked you this" she pulls out a cupcake from out of nowhere and puts it in front of you
The cup had the word 'Get well soon StarStar' written in frosting
"Thank you Pinkie"
"No problem, I was also going have a song for you, but I couldn't think of one"
"Don't you like to sing?" you ask
"No, I love sing!"
"You like to sing-a about the moon-a and the June-a and the Spring-a?"
Soon the whole room erupts with laughter, and you start to laugh as well
"You've been waiting to do that for a long time, haven't you?" Dash says though her laughter
"Yes, Yes I have" you say though your laugh
You all stop laughing and try to get your breath back but you all look at each other and start to laugh again

After a couple more minutes of laughter you all calm down and catch your breath back


Time - 8:00

The visiting time is over, Pinkie leaves but Dash stays by your side
"Um Dash visiting time is over"
"I know, I'm staying here"
"Are you sure"
"Yep, who’s going to remind you to take the pills?"
You just stare at her
"Hint, Hint" she says
You still look at her and then your brain clicks "Oh right"
Dash giggles a bit
You reach over to the table, pull out two pills from the bottle and grab your glass of water. You swallow the pills
"Scoot over" you hear Dash say
"What?"
"Scoot over; I'm not sleeping in that chair like I did for the last six days"
You shrug and move over giving some space for Dash
Dash gets in the bed and snuggles up to you, the bed is clearly not meant for two ponies
"Let hope I don't have a Slender Pony dream again" Dash says
"Slender Pony isn't real" you say to her
"He is too" she says back to you
"No he isn't, that’s like say that the mythical Devman is real"
"Oh, Shut up a go to sleep" Dash says putting her head on your chest
"Alright" you say reaching over to bed side lamp and turning it off
"Good night Twinkle"
"Good night Dashie"
You both close your eyes and drift off to the dream world

Getting Out Of This Darn Place

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Chapter 14

Being in the hospital for a week and a half really did a number on you

But luckily you were able to get out the bed and stretch your hooves a bit, you walk slower than usual because of what ThunderLane did to your hooves, you would fall most of the time because your balance isn't that good. The doctor says to give it couple of weeks and you'll be back to your normal walking pace in no time.

You had forgotten to take your pills once or twice, mostly every time you decided to take a quick nap. The nurse don't seem to be impressed by you forgetting

Nothing brings a smile onto your face like Rainbow Dash does when she walks into the room. She would visit you every day and sometimes stay the night with you. The two of you would spend most of the time talking or making out.....mostly making out. The rest of your friends would drop by for a visit every now and again and talk.


Time - 2:00

"Can you believe you’re finally getting out of this place?" says Dash excitedly
"I know, it felt like I've been stuck in here for years" you say getting of the bed slowly not trying to cause yourself any pain
"You ready to go Mister Stargazer?" a nurse says wheeling in a wheel chair
"Why did you bring that in? He can walk fine" Dash says
"Hospital rules Miss Rainbow Dash"
"You can't argue with hospital rules" you say walking over to the wheel chair
"I didn't follow any rules" Dash says
"High school and a Hospital, there's a difference" you say sitting down in the wheel chair
"Whatever"
"You ready to go Mister Stargazer?" the nurse asks
"More then I'll ever be"

The nurse wheels you out of the room and down the hall and you see the door
Sweet freedom
But you stop in front of a desk
"If you could just sign here please" the nurse says putting a clipboard and a pen in front of you
You sign the initials of your name and your hoof print on the dotted line
You are then wheeled out the hospital and you see the rest of the gang waiting for you
You get up from the wheel chair and you nearly fall over, but you manage to save yourself at the last second
"Now remember to take these every time you wake up and every time you feel like taking a nap" the nurse says handing you a bag
"Okay nurse"
As soon as you reach for the bag it get surrounded by purple aura, you look over to Twilight whose horn is glowing
"Don't worry, I'll hold these for you" Twilight says smiling
"Thanks" you say and start to walk away from the hospital with your marefriend and the rest of your friends, you are a bit slower than they are because of your damaged hooves
"And remember to stay off those wings" you hear the nurse yell
"Will do" you yell back
As you continue walking you feel like you’re about to fall over
You start leaning to one side, you were about to fall over when one of Dash's wings extends and wraps around you
"Don't worry I got you" she says, nuzzling you on the cheek. You nuzzle her back
"Now that Star is out of hospital we should throw a party" Pinkie says with delight
"That's sweet of you Pinkie but I don't think I'll be up for a party this time" you say
"Well that's okay; I wouldn’t want to put you thought any more pain"
The seven of you walk thought Ponyville slowly making their way to your house

You hand Rainbow the key and she unlocks it for you
You walk in with Dash behind
"Thanks for your help everypony, I hope I wasn't keeping you back from doing anything important" you say
"Don't worry about it darling we’re happy to help" Rarity says
"Remember to take your pills" Twilight say handing the bag over to you
"I will" you say
The five of them walk away and Rainbow Dash shuts the door
You make your way into the living room and lay down on the sofa
"I missed the comfort of the sofa"
Rainbow Dash giggles
The feel a sudden pain in your back and you sit up
"Are you okay?" she asks
"Yeah, just my wings" you say and lay back down
"Do you need any pain killers?"
"No I'm fine"
"Do you want a drink or something?"
"Dash, you do realize you don't have to do this right?"
"I know" she says and then sits down on the edge of the sofa "I want to" she then starts playing with your mane "What type of marefriend would leave their coltfriend hanging when he just got out of hospital?" she continues, locking her lips with yours
After a long make out session you get up from the sofa and walk to the stairs
"Where are you going?" Dash asks
"I'm going to have a quick shower, I stink"
She giggles at your comment "Okay"

You walk upstairs slowly and walk over to the bathroom
You unwrap the bandages taped around your wings and you get into the shower and turn it on
You let the water run down your body and your mane
Your eyes are soon covered by cyan
"Guess who" a seductive voice whispers in your ear
"Um.....King Sombra" you guess jokingly
You soon feel your ear being nibbled on and hooves rubbing on your wing
"Dash, what are you doing?" you ask
"Do you want me to stop?" she asks whispering in your ear
"No" you say "but what are you doing?" you ask again
"I'm going help you get clean, now keep quiet and let me do everything" she says whispering in your ear
You obey her commands, and keep quiet while to she cleans you
You feel her hooves run down the feathers of your wings
Best. Shower. EVER

After a couple of minutes of Dash rubbing you clean the two of you step out of the shower. You grab two towels, you hand/hoof one over to dash
"I hope you enjoyed that" Dash says as she walks past brushing her tail under your chin
You throw the towel on your head "I sure did"
You start to rub the towel against your mane and coat
"We'll have to do it again" Dash says giving you a wink
You blush slightly hoping dash didn’t noticed
"You look so cute when you blush" Dash say smirking
She noticed

The two of you walk out of the bathroom and walk down the stairs into the living room
As you walk into the room your hooves fall out from under you and you collapse to the floor
"Oh my gosh, are you okay?" Dash says rushing to your aid
"Yeah, yeah I'm fine" you say getting back up to your hoofs with the help of Dash
"Are you sure? That looked like a nasty fall"
"I'm fine, just little bit of pain, but I'm fine"
"Well maybe a kiss will make the pain go away"
Before you could say anything you get pushed on the sofa with Dash lips connecting with yours
Dash is sitting on your lap as you to kiss

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

You and Dash stop the kiss
"Darn it" dash says very annoyed
"Well I better go get that"
"Or we could wait for them to go"
"I guess we can"

The two of you sit there Dash is still on your lap, you wait for the pony to leave

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"I don't think this pony is going anywhere" you say
"Well I'm pretty sure it can't be that impotent"

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"I know you’re in there" said the pony knocking at the door
"Is that Ditzy?" you say
"I think so" Dash says replying to your question
"Come on, I got letters for you"
You try to get up but Dash refuses to get off your lap
"Dash, Can I get the door please"
"No" Dash says
"Please" you say trying to give the sad puppy dog eyes
She shakes her head
"PLEEEEEEASE" you say trying to make your eyes bigger than they were
"Fine, only because I'm the best marefriend ever" she say getting off your lap allowing you to get off the sofa "And because you’re so cute" she continues and then kiss you on the cheek


You walk towards the front door and open it
"Took your time" Ditzy says annoyed
"Sorry, I kinda did just get out of hospital so maybe you could cut me some slack"
"I guess here’s your mail" she says handing over a bunch of letters to you
You gladly accepted the letters
"Thank you very much" you take the letters from her grasp
Ditzy nods and flies away
You shut the door and walk back into the living room
You were about the open one the letters but Rainbow grabs you and places you onto the sofa, she sits on your lap again
"Now, where were we" she say looking at you with her eye lids covering half her eyes
"I don't think I remember" you say jokingly
"Well I sure do"
She then presses her lips onto yours and the two of your continue the kiss


Time - 6:00

You and Dash sit on the sofa, you’re sitting at an upright position and dash's head is on your lap, you two sit there quietly. You run your hoof though dash's mane
You stomach rumbles breaking the silence which causes Dash to giggle
"Looks like somepony’s hungry" Dash says poking your stomach
Dash stomach soon joins your stomach in the rumble noise
"So are you" you bopping her on the nose
Rainbow lifts her head off your lap and gets off the sofa
"I could cook us something"
"Are you sure, because if I remember correctly you told me that you nearly burnt down your high school while you were in cooking class"
Dash just stares at you
"Shut up" she says
You chuckle a bit
"I guess I could go to the shop and get something"
"That would be the safest option"
"I'll be back" she says kissing you on the nose and going to the front door
You hear the front door shut
You get up and walk towards the scattered letters on the floor
You pick them up and walk back to the couch, most the letter are get well soon cards and others are just pay checks

About a minute later Dash comes back with a bag with steam coming out of it
"What’ve you got there?" you ask
"Well I went to that new take out place and I got some soup that helps bones heal quicker"
"Really?" you ask
"That's what I said" she says walking over and to you pulling out a soup bowl and flask
She pours the soup out of the flask into the bowl and hands it over to you; you look at the hot liquid
"What’s the matter?" Dash asks sitting next to you and pouring a bowl of soup for herself
"This soup looks a little weird"
"Come on just drink it" she says and then brings the bowl to her lips and drinks some of the soup
"How does it taste?" you ask
"It’s pretty good, try it"
You hesitate for a bit
One sip couldn't hurt
You bring the bowl up to your lips and let the hot liquid flow into your mouth
You swallow
"Well"
"That's really tasty"
You bring the bowl back up to your lips and continue drinking the soup


Time - 10:00

You and Dash didn't do anything for the rest of the day. You just sat around on the house, you took some pain pills when your hooves started to hurt, But you and Dash would pass the time by making out

You and Dash sat on the sofa with Dash head on your lap again
You let out a yawn
"You tired?" ask Dash
"mmhmm" you say nodding
Dash lifts her head of your lap
"Well do you want to head off the bed?" she asks
"I guess, you’re staying the night right?"
"Yep, I can't just let you spend your first night out of the hospital alone" she says and kissing you on the nose
You get up from the sofa and walk towards the door to go upstairs
"Where are you going?"
"Upstairs, to go to bed, why?"
"Aren't you forgetting to take something?"
"What?"
Dash points at a bag on the table
"Oh yeah" you say walking over to the bag
You pull out a boxttlewith pills in them, you get a glass of water from the kitchen and swallow the pills with water
You walk out of the kitchen, Dash is no longer in the living room, you walk thought the room and walk towards the stairs, you walk upstairs and into your bedroom
Dash is already in your bed
You walk over to the bed and lay down pulling the covers over you
"Goodnight Dashie" you say and you feel dash lightly hit you on the arm


Time - 1:00

"Star"
You feel a hoof poking you on the back
"Star, Star are you asleep?"
"Not anymore" you say still half asleep
"Good because I need to talk to you"
"Whatever it is can't it wait until morning" you go to close your eyes but Dash continues poking you on the back
"Go to sleep Dash" you say starting to get annoyed
"It can't wait I need to get this of my chest"
You turn around to look at her
"What is it?"
"Well. You know when we were at your grandparent’s cabin"
You nod
"And I said I couldn't sleep because of a bad dream and because of the scary story"
You nod again
"Well, I lied about that"
"You lied?"
"Yeah"
"Why?"
"It wasn't my idea it was your sister’s"
You just stare at her
"I told her that I had a crush on you and she said that I should fake being scared so I can get close to you" she explains "You’re not mad at me are you?" Dash asks
You turn to face away from her
You then feel a pair of arms wrap around you
"Please don't be mad" you hear Dash say
I'm not mad, I just want to see what you'd if I pretend to be mad
You then feel Dash start kissing you on the cheek
"Don't be mad" she says kissing on the cheek between words
"I can't believe you" you say
You feel Dash arm unwrap around you
"I can't believe you would think I would be mad" you turning around to face her
"Wait, what?" Dash asks
"Did you honestly think I would be mad at you for that?"
"Well...I...”
You cut her off kissing her on the lips
"I could never be mad at you" you say breaking away from the kiss
You lay your head back on your pillow
Dash wraps her arms around you and buries her head in your chest like she did when she was pretending to be scared when you were at the cabin
"Good night Dash" you say, kissing her on the forehead, closing your eyes and drifting off to sleep

Calming Her Down

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Chapter 15

You lay on your bed looking up at the ceiling lost in your thoughts while Dash is sound asleep with her arm wrapped around you and her head on your chest

What if my hooves never get better? What if I'm not able to fly again? Is my racing career over? NO! I can't think like that. The doctors said that they going to heal and I'll be back to normal In 6 weeks. This is all Thunderlane’s fault. That reminds me, I need to get back on him, and He should know, I play for a team that shouldn’t be messed with.

You turn your head and look at Dash, who is still sleeping

Aww. She is so cute when she's sound asleep. I do have to thank ThunderLane for one thing, If I was never hospitalized she probably never of admitted her feeling for me

You start stroking her mane while still in your thoughts

She has been by my hospital bed though out those six days while I was comatose. Man I love that word, mainly because many ponies don't know that it means. I need to do something to repay her. What would she want? new sun glasses? A new hat? A new wonderbolt poster? THAT'S IT. She loves the wonderbolts probably more then she loves me, but I'm okay with that. I'll get her wonderbolt tickets and not just any wonderbolt tickets, I'll get her backstage passes. Yeah she'll love it.

You stopped stroking her rainbow mane

"Don't stop" Dash says still with her eyes closed

You can't tell if she’s talking in her sleep or if she’s awake

She’s probably talking in her sleep again

"Stargazer" she says with her eyes closed

What kind of dream is she having?

"I told you not to stop" She says opening her eye slightly
"Not to stop what?" you ask
"Running your hoof thought my mane. I love it when you do that"
"Oh I'm sorry" You say then continue stroking her mane

Dash smiles, and closes her eyes again

I need to get those tickets. Sooner rather then later


After a couple of minutes of lying on your bed stroking dash’s mane you decide to out of bed. You manage to get dash off you. You walk downstairs mentally saying 'ow' with every step.

You walk your way to the kitchen and take your pills

You decide to play some music. You make sure not to play it to loud because you don't want to wake Dash up again.

You begin to get lost in your thoughts again

Alright I need to think of a plan to get the tickets without dash realizing. The wonderbolt’s next show is next month. Somehow I need to get away from dash so I can get to Cloudsdale

KNOCK KNOCK

You snap out of your thoughts by the sound of knocking on the door

You walk over to the front door and open it. Standing on the other side of the door is the mare that caused the trouble with ThunderLane. You just stare daggers at her

"Hi" she says
"YOU!!!!" Dash shouts from the top of the stairs
You turn around to see dash flying down the stairs
"THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!" she screams
"How it is my fault?" Cloudchaser says generally confused
"IF YOU WOULD OF JUST STAYED AWAY FROM STAR HE WOULD HAVE NEVER BEEN IN A HOSPITAL BED!!"
"What are you talking about?"
"THUNDERLANE TOLD STAR TO STAY AWAY FROM YOU!!!"
"He did?"
"YES!!!" dash shouts as loud as she could
"Dash calm down" you say
"NO THIS IS ALL HER FAULT!!"
"Dash stop" you say trying to pull her away from the door

Dash looks likes she about to pounce on Cloudchaser

"I'm sorry" you say to Cloudchaser, closing the door
"What were you saying sorry to her for?" Dash says still angry
"I'm apologizing because of the way you’re acting"
"What? I can't be mad at some mare because she the reason my coltfriend was in hospital?"
"Dash she didn't know"
"I don't care if she didn't know, she going to pay"
"What can I do to calm you down?"
"There nothing you can do" she yells at you
"Not even this" you grabbing her face
"Hey what are you-"
You cut her off with a passionate kiss on the lips. She tenses up first, then she softens up

You break away from the kiss and stare into her eyes
"Did that work?" you ask
"A little bit" she says smiling at you
"A little bit? Well that's not good enough"

You grab her hoof and walk out the front door. You walk thought Ponyville dragging rainbow dash with you. You nearly fall over a couple of time but you still continued with your walk to your destination.

"Star where are we going? You’ve been dragging me for a while"
You stop and let go of dash’s hoof
"I have no idea" you say turning around to her
Dash giggles a little bit
"What where you trying to do anyway?" she asks
"I'm trying to calm you down"
"I'm am calm" she says with a little bit of anger in her voice
"That didn't sound calm"
"I promise you I'm calm"
"Really?" you raise an eyebrow at her
"Yes really"
"If you say so" you pause and look to the left

You get an idea to make sure if she really calm or not

"Hey look, there goes Cloudchaser"
"WHERE?! I'LL RIP HER WINGS OFF" she shouts
"Looks like you aren’t calm after all"
"Alright fine, I'm just a little angry"
"A little?"
"alright fine" she says sitting down and crossing her arms

You rub your hoof under your chin
Idea~♪

You grab dash's hoof again and make your way over to the Carousel Boutique
"Why are we going here for?"
"You'll see"

You open the door to the cloth shop to see Rarity working on a dress.

"Rarity I need you help" you say getting Rarity's attention
"What can I help you with dear?" she says walking over to you
"Rainbow here is a little angry....well I wouldn't say a little, I would say EXTREMELY angry.....not even that, she's-"
"Your pushing your luck Star" dash says cutting you off
You turn to dash giving a small smile
"Okay bottom line, I need you to find away to calm her down" you say turning back to rarity
"I don't know"
"Come ooonnnn" you say in a begging tone
"Well there is one way, but you have to do something for me" she says
"Well that depends on what it is you want me to do"
"I have my little sister and her friends over and I can't watch them and fill out a order at the same time"
"I see where your getting at, you want me to look after your sister and her friends"
Rarity nods her head
"Sure I can do that"
"Thank you so much" she says and then walks past you and talks to dash

"Now dash there only one way I like to relax"
"And what would that be?" Dash asks
"A trip to the spa"
"WHAT?! no I'm not going to some spa"
"Come on dear it the least I can do for StarGazer and I'm not taking no for an answer"
Dash shots daggers at you and you feel like you life is in danger
"Come on let us go" Rarity says grabbing rainbow's hoof and walking her to the door
"I'll kill you later" rainbow says to you
"Oh rarity, before you go, do you have any painkillers?"
"Yes, they are in the top right cupboard in the kitchen" she says before closing the door

You walk into the kitchen and take some painkillers. You here some noises coming from upstairs. You make your way upstairs to investigate the noise

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You walk upstairs to investigate the noise that you herd earlier. You hear three little voices come from a room.

You open the door to see three little fillies sitting in the middle of the room. One with a white coat with pink and purple hair, another had yellow fur and red hair, and the other you've known as Scootaloo.

The three filly's turn their heads towards you
"Hey Stargazer" Scootaloo says with a smile on her face
"You know him?" The white coated one says
"Yeah, he's Dash’s coltfriend"
"Oh right, Applejack told me that Rainbow had a coltfriend"
"What was that noise you made earlier?" you ask
"Well we were trying to get our cutie marks as stuntponys"
"And how did that go?" you say already knowing the answer
"Not very well" The white coated filly says "Wait. Where did my sister go? She the one, who was supposed to be watching us"
"Well your sister has gone to the spa with rainbow and-"
"What? Rainbow Dash would never go to the spa" Scootaloo says cutting you off
"I know, but it was Rarity's idea of calmer her down"
"So who’s keeping an eye on us?" the pink and purple maned one asks
"I am, it’s kinda of a favor for Rarity"
"Well now that we know who's looking after us. You need to leave" The yellow coated says walking up to you
"Why?" You ask
"That’s Cutie Mark Crusaders business" Scootaloo says
"Cutie mark what?"
"The Cutie Mark Crusaders" They all say in unison, in high pitch voices, that make you ears hurt
"It’s a club we made on getting our cutie marks"
"Right. Anyway I take it your Rarity's little sister" you say pointing to the white coated unicorn filly
"Yep, I'm Sweetie Belle"
"Nice to meet you Sweetie Belle and you must be Applejack’s sister"
The yellow filly nods her head
"I'm Apple Bloom"
"Nice to make your acquaintance"
"What does that mean?" Sweetie Belle asks
"It basically mean 'nice to meet you' but in more fancy way"
"Ohh"
"Now if ya'll excuse us Mister Stargazer, we need to get our cutie marks in back flipping" Apple Bloom says
"No, you are not doing that" You say
"Why not?" Scootaloo ask
"Because I have the job of keeping an eye on you, and I’m not going to let you hurt yourselves by doing some back flips"
"But-" they all say
"No buts"
"Fine" Scootaloo says sitting down and crossing her arms
"What do we do now?" Says sweetie belle
"Well instead of killing yourselves, how about we go to the park?" You suggest
"Yeah!" Says Sweetie Belle happily
"That's a great idea; maybe Stargazer could give me a lesson on flying" Says Scootaloo smiling at you
"Er Scootaloo" you say pointing to the bandage taped and rapped around your wings
"Ohh right"
"So, the park it is" Apple bloom says

The three fillies run out the room giggling and you hear them running down the stairs. You hear a thump from the floor below

"Oww" The three fillies say together

You chuckle to yourself as you walk out the room and down the stairs


You and the three fillies stand in the middle of the field

"So, what do you girls what to do?" you ask them
"How about we get our cutie marks in parachuting" Scootaloo suggests
"How are we going to parachute?" Sweetie Belle asks
"Maybe Star could lift us up and-"
You cough loudly getting their attention
"What?" Apple bloom says
"First thing, Scootaloo I can't fly at the moment" you say while looking at Scootaloo, "Second thing, how about NOT killing yourselves trying to get your cutie marks? Cause it's clear that it didn't get to you the first time I said it"
"Okay, so what do we do now?" Asks Sweetie Belle
"How about a game to hide and tag" You suggest
"Hide and what?" Apple Bloom asks
"Hide and Tag. It’s something my sister, my brother and I used to play when we were your age"
"Okay, how do we play?" Apple bloom says looking up at you
"Well the three of you hide while I count to 15, and I try and find you. If I find you, you have to run away from me, if you get away you have to hide again. But If I get you, you have to help me find the others" You explain "Got it?"
The three fillies nod
"Okay" You cover your eyes with your hoofs and start counting


"Wow she is one good hider" You say walking thought the park with Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom
"Yeah, she always gets the good spots" says Sweetie Belle
"We've checked nearly every spot in the park, she can't be far" Says Apple Bloom looking up at every tree you walked past
"We've checked all the bushes, trees, flower beds and benches. Where else could she be?"

The three of you stand quietly and think

You notice a bush moving of in the distance with a small purple tail sticking out of it

"Follow me" You say a walking behind a tree
"What is it?" Sweetie Belle asks
"You see that bush over there" You say pointing to the bush
They both nod
"Well Scootaloo made a bush costume and she’s walking around"
"Clever" says Apple Bloom
"So what are we going to do?" asks Sweetie Belle
"Here's what where going to do, we are going to sneak up on her"
"How?"
"Well you see how she’s heading towards that tree over there?" You say pointing to the tree
"Oh, so we need to get there before she does" Says Sweetie Belle taking the words out of your mouth
You nod
"Now I'm relying on you two to catch her because my hooves feel like they’re going to give away if I run after her" you explain
They both nod with determination on their faces
"Let’s go"

The three of you sneak behind every tree and bush trying not to be seen by Scootaloo

Because Scootaloo was trying to blend into her surroundings, she had to stop nearly every two seconds, which made it easier for you, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom to get to tree before she does

You make it over to the tree and hide behind it hoping Scootaloo didn't see you

She moves closer to the tree, which means, she didn't see you

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle start to giggle a bit
"Shh" You say quietly "We don't want her to know we’re here" you say whispering to them

They cover their mouths and get ready to chase Scootaloo

As soon as Scootaloo gets close to the tree You, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle jump out from behind the tree.

Scootaloo jumps out of her bush costume and starts to run.

Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and you run after her. You could’ve easily caught Scootaloo even with your damaged hooves but you always thought it was more fun chasing her.

The girls giggled as they ran, which brought a smile to your face and you laughed along with them.

Soon Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle jump on Scootaloo bringing her to the ground.

The girls laugh while they lay on one another.

You tap Scootaloo on the head

"Got ya" you say
"Alright you win" she says
"Can we do another round? That was so much fun!" Sweetie Belle says getting off the ground and looking up at you
"Please" asks Apple Bloom
"Of course we can"

The three fillies faces light up with joy

"Now since I got Sweetie Belle first, she has to count" you say
"Okay" She covers her eyes with her hooves and start counting

You, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo run off in different directions


You sit in a ditch hiding from the Cutie Mark Crusaders

After a couple of minutes the bush starts to shake

You get yourself ready to run

Instead of three fillies coming out from the bush, a ferret jumps out and walks over to you

"Hey little guy" you say to it
The ferret wraps himself around your leg
"Aww he likes you" a soft voice says
You look up to see a yellow Pegasus with a smile on her face
"Hey Fluttershy, what brings you here?" you ask
"Well I was taking some of my animals back to my home, when Benny ran into the bushes"
"Benny?"
"The ferret"
Benny soon un-wraps himself from your leg and then looks up at you
"Oh right, Well I'll tell you something, he sure is cute" you say, patting Benny on the head
"What are you doing in here? If you don't mind me asking"
"Oh well I'm playing a game of Hide and Tag with the Cutie Mark Crusaders"
"Well that sounds nice"
"Oh can you do a favour for me?" You ask her
"Sure. What is it?"
"Well I need your help with-"

You hear three little voice getting closer

"Stay quiet" You say whispering to Fluttershy

The bushes start to shake

And three filly jump out
"There you are" Sweetie Belle says
"Get him" shouts Scootaloo
"Got to go, Talk to you later" you say to Fluttershy, jumping out of the ditch, vaulting over a bush and running thought the field

You don't run as fast as you usually do, because you want to give the crusaders a chance to catch you

As you run your hooves start to ache and you feel like you’re going to fall over. You manage to keep yourself from falling to the ground, but at this point the crusaders have managed to catch up to you.

You look behind you to see the crusaders just about to grab your tail. You swing your tail away from them and keep on running

You start to slow down because you want to get caught.

You get tackled to the ground by the three fillies who lay on top of you. They all giggle and you start to laugh with them because there laughs are so contagious

They get off you and you get back onto your hoofs

"Another round?" You ask them
They all nod their heads
"Alright, Sweetie Belle who did you get first?"
"Apple Bloom"
"Okay Apple Bloom-"
"Stargazer!" You hear a certain voice you know really well cutting you off

You turn around to see cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane standing in a position, like she going to charge at you

"You are SO dead" She shouts spreading her wings

"Uh Oh"

"I don't see this much as a punishment"

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"Uh Oh" you say as you are walking backwards

Dash takes three more steps towards you

You turn around and run for your life. You look back to see if dash is chasing you, but she wasn't there. You look ahead of you to see dash there.

You stop and run back the way you came

Dash lands in front of you standing in a position as if she is going to tackle you

"You really think you can run from me?" Dash asks

"Well, what if I use my wings?" you say teasing her

Dash gets out of her tackling position and looks at you with a confused look in her eyes

"But...you can't, the doctors said" she says actually thinking that you were going to use your wings

She fell for it. RUN

You run of in a different diction then before

You are then tackled to the ground with both of your hoofs pinned to the ground by Dash

You look at her with worried eyes

Dash raises her hoof

You close your eyes. Preparing yourself for the eventual impact, while instinctively turning your head to the left

Instead of getting a hoof to the face, you get a kiss on the cheek

You look up at Rainbow Dash who has a smirk on her face

"You didn't actually think that I was going to hurt you, did you?" she asks
"Yes" you say with a hint of fear in your voice
"You're so cute when you’re scared" she says giving you another kiss on the cheek
"So I'm not in trouble?" you ask her
"Oh you're in trouble, although you’re just going to have to find out what your punishment is when we get back to your house" she says in a smirk
"I can't tell if that's a good smirk or a bad smirk" you say

Dash giggles and presses her lip against yours

While you and dash kiss, you hear two little 'Awws' and then a 'Eww'

You and Dash stop the kiss and see three little fillies staring at you

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle look like they’ve seen a kitten and Scootaloo making a face like she’s about to throw up

"What?" you ask
"That was so cute" says Sweetie Belle


You walk Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle home while Dash is giving a flying lesson to Scootaloo

After you drop the girls home you walk over to Fluttershy's cottage

You knock on the door three times and wait

Soon the door opens and a yellow Pegasus stands there

"Oh hi Stargazer" she say greeting you
"Hey Fluttershy" you greet her back. "Anyway I'm here to ask you something"
"What is it?" She ask
"Well I need your help getting me to Cloudsdale"
"Why?"
"Because I want to get Dash a thank you present for stay by my bed when I was unconscious" you explain
"That's sweet. What are you planning on getting her?" Flutter Shy ask
"Well I'm planning on getting her some wonder bolt tickets and back stage passes"
"That nice of you"
"So are you going to help me?"
"How am I going to get you up to Cloudsdale?"
"Well you see since I can't use my wings. I guess I could ride on a cloud"
"That seems like it could work"
"Great so how about if we fly up there tomorrow?"

Flutter shy nods

As you are turning around to leave, Fluttershy shy grabs your shoulder and turns you towards her

"You know, you're a really good coltfriend"
"Thanks, I try"
"I wish there were more colts like you"
"Thanks...I guess"

You and Fluttershy look at each other

Soon it starts to get really awkward

"WHAT ARE YOU TWO DOING!!!" a voice calls out

You turn around to see Rainbow Dash floating in the air with her arm crossed

"Nothing" you say

You hear Fluttershy's door slam shut

"Are you cheating on me?!" She asks
"NO! What would make you think that?"
"Well the fact that I just caught you and Fluttershy looking at each over funny"
"Well you’re wrong, you just happened to come at the wrong time"
"You think she's prettier than me don't you?" she say slowing descending to the ground and sitting down looking at the floor
"No, what would make you think that?" you ask sitting next to her
"Because it's true" she says still looking down at the ground
"Well it's not" You say wrapping an arm around her "You're the prettiest mare I have ever laid eyes on"
"Really?" she says looking up at you
"Of course" you saying pulling her in for a hug "You're the only mare I want to be with" you then lock your lips with hers

You break away from the kiss

"Your adding double to my punishment aren't you?" you ask, already knowing the answer

Dash nods with a smile and then connects her lips with yours again


You and Dash get back to your house and you collapse on the sofa

Dash sits on your back

"What are you doing?" You ask
"Getting myself comfy" she says
"Let me rephrase the question. Why are you sitting on my back?"
"Because you take up the whole sofa"
"All you had to do was ask, and I would’ve moved"
"Well I just got myself comfy, so I'm not moving"
"Is this part of my punishment?"
"You could say that"
"I never did ask, how was your trip to the spa?" you say with dash still sitting on your back
"Terrible"
"How so?"
"They put me in a mud bath, and they insisted on massaging my hooves"
"What’s so bad about that?"
"I hate ponies touching my hooves. It makes me want kick the air repeatedly. Just like the way you jump 10 feet in the air when somepony sneaks up on you"
"Do I really jump 10 feet in the air?"
"Yeah you do. It's really cute"
"So you don't like ponies touching your hooves" you say with a smirk
"Don't you get any ideas" she says shooting a death glare at you


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Alright. Tomorrow I'm going to Cloudsdale to get those tickets, But I got to find a way to get there without dash noticing. Maybe I could sneak out early in the morning while Dash is still sleeping. That sounded the most reasonable,

after thinking of other schemes that you know wouldn’t work.

You feel the weight of Dash getting off your back which snaps you back into reality

"Get in the shower" she says to you
"What?"
"Get in the shower" she repeats
"Why?"
"Because it's part one of your punishment"
"Part one?"

She nods and the points to the door leading up the stairs

With a sigh, you get up off the sofa and walk past Dash. You think of all the things that dash might do to you as you climb the stairs, walk into the bathroom, and turn on the shower

Dash soon enters the bathroom

You get the bandage off your wings and get into the shower

You feels dash's hoof run down your body

"I don't see this much as a punishment" you say
"Be quite and let me do everything" she says, she then licking your face
"Yes ma'am"

You feel her whack your flank

"I told you to stay quite or do I need to whack your harder?" she asks seductively into your ear

You shake your head

"Good boy"

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You slowly open your eyes to the sun beaming on your face.

Your head is pounding for some reason.

You look over at Dash, who has her arm tightly wrapped around you, with a huge smile on her face.

What did we do last night? All I remember is that we got out of the shower, came into the room, and Dash turning off the lights

We didn't do it, did we?

You look over a Dash who is mumbling in her sleep

You look at the time

8:35

I guess it would be time to get going. One problem. How am I going to get out of Dash's death grab?

You grab on to one Dash's arms and lightly take it off you.

You slowly sit up from the bed not trying to wake dash up.

You walk down stairs and walk into the kitchen to take your pills

You grab as much money as you can, put it in a bag, put that bag in your saddle bag and walk out the door

You close the door slowly so you don't wake her up.


You make your way over to Fluttershy's cottage

Fluttershy is attending to some animals and she doesn't notice you arrive

One of the animals that she is attending to is Benny the ferret

Benny sees you and runs towards you

Fluttershy looks over to see where Benny had run to. She sees you and smiles

"Hi Stargazer" she says
"Hey Fluttershy. You ready to go?" you ask
"Yes, I just need to feed angel, I'll be right out" she says walking into her cottage

You look down at Benny who looks up at you with his big eyes

You pat him on head and he wraps himself around your leg

Soon Fluttershy comes out of her cottage

"You ready?”
She nods

You look down at Benny again

"Sorry little one, you're going to have to get off me"

He unwraps himself and runs to the other ferrets

Fluttershy walks over to you

"I think he likes you" she says, giggles
"I don't blame him" you say with a smirk
"Should I get a cloud?" Fluttershy asks
You nod

She flies into the air, grabs a cloud and brings it over to you

She lowers the cloud to the ground so you can get on

You jump on the cloud

"Are you going to be okay with this?" she asks
"I think I'll manage" you say to Fluttershy
"Okay then" you point your hoof up in the air and shout "ONWARD!"

Flutter Shy giggles and pushes the cloud

You lay down on the cloud and try to enjoy the ride

This feels really weird


You lay down on the cloud with your chin on the cloud

"Are we there yet?" you ask
"No" says Fluttershy

"Are we there yet?"
"No"




"Are we there yet?
"Yes"

You lift your head up to see that you and Fluttershy are in fact almost at Cloudsdale.

A city that you have never been to before. You couldn't believe your eyes. It is amazing seeing it for the first time.

Fluttershy bring you closer to the city and it's a lot bigger then you imagined and a LOT bigger then how your dad described it

Fluttershy brings the cloud lower to the floor of the city so you can get off

You jump of the cloud and look in awe of the city.

You didn't notice but your mouth was wide open

You hear Fluttershy giggle
"Is this your first time being here?" she asks

You're speechless, so you just nod

You feel Fluttershy hoof under your chin and she reconnects you lower half of your mouth with the top half.

"This is amazing" you say
"Should we go to the area?" Fluttershy asks
"Yeah"

You and Fluttershy walk through Cloudsdale making your way towards the area.

Cloudsdale was a lot more impressive than Fillydelphia. The buildings are made out of clouds and the place is filled of Pegasus of all sizes.

"We're here" says Fluttershy "Um...I'll wait for you out here"


You nod and walk inside and see a line at the ticket booth

You approach the line

You wait in the line, periodically turning your head from side to side looking around the area. It was bigger than you imagined, but the area seemed a bit out of shape and hasn't looked like it had been refreshed for a while

"The one in Fillydelphia's better" you say to yourself

Some Pegasus turn their heads towards you giving disappointing looks

"Hey Punk!" a female voice calls out from behind you
You turn around to see a yellow Pegasus mare with green mane and tail
"What did you just say?!" she asks with a hint of angry in her voice, getting all up in your face
"What’s it to you?!" you say with the same hint of anger in your voice
You give her a 'back off look' because you hate other ponies getting in your face
She backs off a little
"I for one love every square inch of this city and I won't have it dissed" she says
"What the hay are you talking about?"
"You made fun of the area, saying 'the one in Fillydelphia is better'" she says quoting you
"Only because it true" you say with a smug tone
"Cloudsdale is the best city there is"
"Really?" you ask
"Yeah really"

Get ready for a meager insult

"If it is the best city" you pause "Then how come it's never hosted the Equestria games while Fillydelphia has" you say raising an eyebrow and giving a smirk

You hear ponies behind you gasp

The mare in front of you widens her eyes

You are then grabbed by some ponies who are dressed in black

"Get out" one of them says
"What? Why?"
"Just get out" the other one says as they drag you towards the door
"There has to be a reason" you say defending yourself

They chuck you out the door of area

"Don't you come anywhere near here for the next fore weeks Fillydelphia boy" one of them say then walks back into the area

You get up and dust yourself off

"How did they know I'm from Fillydelphia?" you ask out loud
"Your accent may've gave it away" a passing colt say answering your question

I don't have an accent

You spot Fluttershy sitting on a bench with some birds

You walk towards Fluttershy who is too busy with the birds to notice you walking towards her

You sit down on the bench

"Oh you're back" she says turning towards you "Did you get the tickets?"
"No"
"Why?" she asks
"Because I got chucked out" you say crossing your arms
"How?" she asks again
"Because I may of dissed the fact that Cloudsdale never hosted the Equestria games"
"They threw you out for that?"
You nod
"And I'm not allowed back in until my four week suspension is over"
"Well what are you going to do now?"

You put your hoof to your chin and think

"Maybe you could get the tickets for me?" you ask Fluttershy
"What? Why?" she says
"Well you’re the only one who can get them for me"
"Why can't we just go back home?"
"Because I kinda left without telling Dash and she'll probably bite my head off" you say

Fluttershy still looks unsure

"Please Fluttershy" you say in a begging tone and pleading eyes
"O-okay"

Your face lights up with a smile and you reach inside your saddlebag

You get your sack full of bits out of your saddlebag and hoof them over to Fluttershy

She takes the bag

"All you have to do is ask for two wonderbolt tickets and backstage passes" you say
"O-O-Okay" she says then gets up a walks towards the area

You wait on the bench and hope for the best


You sit on the bench waiting for Fluttershy

On the bench next to you are two mares who look about a year younger then you, giggling every time they look at you

After a while you thought it was kinda cute. But after a while it started to get REALLY annoying

You look over at the mares through the corner of your eye.

They seem to be staring at you a bit more weirdly

You turn your head towards them and they still look at you

One of the girls had red coat and yellow mane, kinda like your sister’s but darker. The other mare has a blue coat and white hair

"There something I can help you with?" you ask them
"Oh...I...Like your mane" the yellowed maned one says
"Thanks...I guess"
"How do you get your mane to do that?" the same one asks
"Naturally?"
"I like your accent" the blue coated one says
"I don't have an accent" you say

The girls giggle

"Yeah you do" the blue one says

You shake your head

"Yeah you do. You’re from Fillydelphia right?" the yellow maned one asks

You nod

"You have that Fillydelphian accent" she continues
"Yeah, you don't weird Fillydelphian accent" the blue one says

They both get up, walk towards you and sit next to you

"You have that sexy Fillydelphian accent" says the blue one with half closed eyes

Your cheeks start to burn

"You got a marefriend?" the red one asks

You nod your head

"Well I bet she's not as fun as us" the white maned one says

They start to lean closer to you

You spot Fluttershy come out of the area and you bolt towards her

"Fluttershy" you say startling her "Did you get the tickets?"
She nods and pulls the tickets and backstage passes from under her wing
"You're a life saver Fluttershy" you say bring her into a hug
She hugs you back and whispers
"You're welcome"

You break the hug, take the tickets and put them in your saddle bag

You look over at the two girls on the bench and they wave to you

"I think we should go" you say to Fluttershy

She nods and you both start walking


You and Fluttershy walk out of Cloudsdale

Fluttershy flies up into the air and grabs a cloud and bring it towards you

You jump on to the cloud and get yourself comfortable

You nod to Fluttershy then she starts to push the cloud back to Ponyville

"So, how much do you want to bet that Dash is going to freak out?" you ask Fluttershy jokingly
"A lot" she says with a giggle

You chuckle


Fluttershy lands the cloud just outside your house and you jump off

"Wish me luck" you say to Fluttershy, while opening the door

You give her a wave and then close the door

You walk into the living room to see Dash who looks very angry

"Where have you been?!" she asks angrily
"Cloudsdale" you say
"Why?"
"To get you something for being at my bedside when I was unconscious"
"You didn't have to" she says
"Oh, Well then" you reach into your saddle bag "I guess I got these wonderbolt tickets and back stage passes for nothing" you say pulling out the tickets

You get tackled to the floor and looking up at Dash who has pinned your hoofs to the ground

She starts kissing you repeatedly on the cheek
"THANKOUTHAKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANK"
"It's okay" you say

She then connects her lips with yours

You and Dash kiss for what seems like minutes

"Oh did I interrupted something?" a voice says

You and Dash look over to see Pinkie standing there

"What are you doing here Pinkie?" asks Dash
"Well its Loopy Loops birthday today and there is going to be a party tonight and you two are invited" she says happily
"What time?" you ask
"About Nine o'clock"
"Okay, we'll see you there" you say
"Awesome" Pinkie says and the walks out the door

You look back up at Dash who looks down at you

You two don't say anything and you resume the kiss

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Chapter 19

"Come on Stargazer we've got to go" you hear Dash shout from downstairs
"Alright hold on" you shout back

You walk down the stairs to see Dash waiting

"Take your time" she says

You just roll your eyes

"Come on we’re going to be late" Dash say opening the front door

You and Dash walk out the door

"Get on" Dash says
"Huh?"
"Get on my back"
"Why?"
"Because it’s faster for us if I fly you there" she explains
"Are you sure you'll be able to carry me?" you ask
"Sure I can, you're not exactly the heaviest thing in the world"
"True"

Dash gets down low enough so you can get on her back

You climb up on her back

"You ready?" she asks
You nod

She flies off without any warning and you nearly fall off

"Did you have to go without telling me?" you ask, with a hint of fear in your voice

You hear Dash laugh


You've been at the party for about two and half hours. You've had a couple of drinks of cider.

You stand outside of Sugarcube Corner because somepony spread stuff in your face and you went outside to cough and get some fresh air.

"Psst"

You look around to see what the noise was

You start to get a little freaked out because you're the only one outside

"Stargazer” the voice whispers

You turn around to the alleyway beside Sugarcube Corner

You see a face peeking out of it

"Hello?" you ask the pony in the alleyway
"Come here" the voice says
"Oh-No I'm not going anywhere near that alleyway"
"Alright fine" the voice says

The pony steps out of the alleyway and walks towards you.

That pony happens to be Cloudchaser.

"Cloudchaser?" What are you doing?" you ask, as she walks towards you
"This" she says

She then connects her lips with yours

You push her away instantly

"What the buck are you doing?"
"I love you okay, and I know that you’re dating Dash, but I don't want you to" she says, pushes her lips against yours

You push her away again

You look over at the door to see Dash in tears

"Dash! It's not what you think!"
"He's right Dash" Cloudchaser says "It's more than what you think, we’re in love"
"WHAT!! Dash don't listen to her"

"IT'S OVER!!!" Dash screams and flies away
"DASH WAIT!!!" you say, running after her

You run as fast as you can, but you can't keep up with her

You stop to catch your breath, with tears in your eyes

"You monster" you hear a voice say

You turn around to see Pinkie, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity and Twilight staring at you with fire in their eyes

"What?" you say ,still with tears in your eyes
"How could ya' do such a thing" Applejack says walking towards you "She's the element of loyalty, she would never betray you, and you go an break her heart" she says stopping meters away from your face
"I didn't-"
"She just caught you red hoofed, kissing another mare" Twilight say join Applejack
"You have to listen to me"
"We don't want to listen to you, you....you...meanie" Pinkie Pie adds

A tear starts to fall down your face

She all shake their heads and walk back to Sugarcube Corner

Fluttershy stops and looks at you

"And I thought you were different" she says, walking back with her friends

You stand there in complete shock as tears fall down your face


A day had passed since the party

You walk down the streets of Ponyville with your head down. Everypony is looking at you and whispering to each other

You only have one place in mind, Rainbow Dash's cloud home

"You have a lot of nerve coming around here" a southern voice says

You lift your head up to see Applejack

You just look at her

"You are the worst type of pony there is" she says

You don't say anything

"Dash didn't do anything to ya' and you just go a ripe out her heart" she says

She gets close to your face

"Who the hay do you think you are?"

You push past her and walk

"Yeah you keep walking Fillydelphian boy" you hear her shout

You walk past the carousel boutique with your head still down

You hear the door open

"YOU!"

You look up to see Rarity trotting towards you

"What do you think you’re doing?" she asks with anger in her voice
"Walking" you say without any emotion
"Well listen to me I don't want you anywhere near my shop. Okay?" she says getting really close to your face

You start to get a bit ticked off because of how close she was getting

"And you listen to me, I don't need you or your stupid curled mane getting up in my face, so play it safe and GET OUT OF MY FACE!" you say

She backs off with fear in her eyes

You snort some air thought your nose and walk your way down the dirt road


You stop and sit on the dirt floor, looking up at her cloud house

"Dash!" you shout
"Dash!!" you shout again
"Dash please!!!"

A yellow head pops out one of the windows

"She doesn't want to see you" she says but you can't hear it
"What!" you shout
"She doesn't want to see you” she says louder, but you still can't hear it
"What!!"
"SHE DOESN'T WHAT TO SEE YOU” Fluttershy shouts
"Can I at least explain myself first?!" you ask while shouting

She shakes her head

"Fluttershy will you please let me see her?" you ask

She shakes her head and then closes the window


For the last couple of days you've been trying to get dash to talk to you again. But no luck.

You sit in the park looking down at the ground

You've been sitting there for about two hour

In that time Twilight and Pinkie also had some words for you

"Howdy partner" says a big southern voice

You look over your shoulder to see Big Mac walking towards you

"You going to yell at me to?" you ask looking back at ground
"Nope" he says sitting next to you
"Then what do you want?" you ask looking at him
"I'm just here to talk to ya'" he says
"Well go ahead"
"I'm not saying what you did was right but-"
"That's the thing Mac, I didn't do it" you say cutting him off

He just looks at you

"I guess you’re just like every pony else, you’re not going to listen to me" you say looking back at the ground
"That's where you’re wrong, I'll listen to ya'"

You look at him with surprised eyes

"Continue" he says

--Later--

After you told him your story, he just looks at you

"You don't believe me" you say
"Ah' believe you"

You look at him with another surprised look

"But ah' don't think my sister or her friends will"
"I know" you say with a sigh

You two sit there looking up at the sky

"I have one question for you Mac"
"What would that be?" he asks
"How come they won't listen?"

He shrugs

--Later--

You and Mac have been sitting at the park for an hour talking

Mac gets up onto his hoofs

"I best be getting back to the farm"

You just nod

"I'll see ya" he says

You nod again


Celestia’s sun starts to go down and you still sit in the park looking up at the sky

"Stargazer!" a certain purple unicorn’s voice calls out

For buck sake

You get up on your hooves and turn around to see Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy

"What have I done now?" you ask
"You-"
"What? Am I breathing your air, I'm sorry I'll just stop breathing and die" you say, getting up and walking away
"Stargazer we just-"
"I don't need it" you shout
"Well fine, If you’re going at act like that-" you hear Applejack shout but you can't make out what else she said


You sit on you sofa looking up at the ceiling

KNOCK KNOCK

You get up from your sofa and walk towards the door

You open the door and an angry face instantly slaps your face

Standing on the other side of the door is Cloudchaser

"You've got a lot of nerve!" you say angrily
"What?" she ask
"You think you could just ruin my relationship and come to me like nothing happened?" you say getting angrier with each word
"What do you mean?" she asks
"Oh I don't know? The fact that you kissed me in front of my marefriend and told her that we were in love" you say even angrier then ever
"But we-"
"I don't want to hear it Cloudchaser! Do me a favor and STAY AWAY FROM ME AND GET OUT OF MY LIFE!!!" you shout with your face as red as a pepper

Tears start to form in Cloudchaser eyes, but you didn't care

She flies off and you hear her sob

You slam the door shut and walk towards your table and slam your hoof down on it

I've had enough of this town

You pack up all your things. You don't need to worry about the Wonderbolt tickets because you know that dash has them

Just as you were about to leave your house, you stop and think

You turn around, take a piece of paper and write a letter to dash

You finish the letter and put it in your bag

You walk out the front door with your keys

First stop, town hall

You walk thought the town. No pony is around which is good for you

You stop in front of town hall

You take a breath and open the door

Mayor mare looks up from her desk and looks at you

"What can I help you with-?"

You cut her off by throwing your keys, which land on her desk. You leave town hall without saying a word

Next stop Twilight house

You walk your way to Twilight library

"Hey Stargazer" a male voice calls out

You don't stop you just keep on walking

Buck off ThunderLane

"I heard you upset Cloudchaser" he says hovering beside you

He cracks his neck

"Get ready for another beat-"

You cut him off with an uppercut to the chin

You know that you knocked him out but you don't stop to admire your work

You walk toward Twilight's house and knock on the door

The door opens and Twilight is reviled

"What do you-?"
"When your next gathering with Rainbow Dash?" you ask
"Why?"
"Just tell me"
"In two weeks"

Perfect

You reach into your saddle bag and pull out the letter

"Give this to Rainbow, when you have your gathering" you say handing her the letter

She takes the letter from you and you walk away before she could ask any more questions

You walk towards your final stop. The train station

You buy a ticket back to Fillydelphia

You wait for the train to arrive with a blank mind

--Later--

After waiting for what feels like hours the train finally arrives

The train stops and the door opens

You walk towards it

"Tickets plea-"

You cut the ticket pony off by handing him your ticket

You take a seat and look out the window

Goodbye Ponyville
Goodbye Everypony
Goodbye Rainbow Dash.....I love you

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End Song (Because why not)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BLVkuyhnEj0

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Epilogue

--Two Weeks After You Left--

AppleJack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rainbow Dash walk into Twilight's library for their get together

"Welcome Everypony" Twilight says greeting her friends

Should I really give Dash the letter? Twilight thought to herself

She looks at Dash and sees how upset she is

"Rainbow, I have a letter for you" Twilight says hoofing over the letter to her
"Who's it from?" Dash asks taking the letter
"Its from StarGazer, Speaking of which has anyone seen him lately?"
"No, It's like he vanished into thin air" said Rarity

Rainbow Opens the letter faster then could Celestia

Dear Rainbow Dash

I know you won't listen to what I have to say, so maybe you'll read what I have to say.

I'm sorry, I'm living in a world of regret. But you have to understand that it wasn't my fault. CloudChaser kissed me. I pushed her away as soon as her lips connected with mine. You know that I would never betray you. Like I said you're the only mare I want to be with.

By now you're probably wondering where I am. I've gone back to Fillydelphia. It wasn't you that drove me away, it was your friends. I couldn't have them screaming in my ear at every chance they got.

These may be that last words I'll ever get to say. I love you. I'll always love you and nothing will change that

StarGazer

Tears started to form in Rainbow Dash's eyes she she reads the last sentence of the letter

"What did it say?" asks Pinkie
"He's gone back to Fillydelphia" Rainbow says still looking at the letter
"Was there a reason?" asks AppleJack
"It said that you guys drove him away"
"W-We did?" Twilight says in shock

Dash nods her head slowly

"I just feel awful" saids Fluttershy
"Me too" adds Rarity

Dash look down at the letter again

"I love you too" she says under her breath

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Alright a another thing i need to add, I have Dyslexia,
And why is a guy from England with Dyslexia writing a story when he's not very good with spelling?
Because I'm board.

A message to NextGamer: I get it alright need someone to edit my story, NOW SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH


I swear to god I might as well cancel this story

A Sequel? OH SHIT!!!

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So, I'm thinking about redoing this whole story. Because there is SO much more that could be put into it.

For example: Have Rainbow Dash fall for you over time instead of instantly

Having Cloudchaser play more of a part in the story

What do you think?

Also leave suggestions in the comments about adding to the story

And If you want to be the editor/proofreader for it, just let me know (winkey face)

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So some of you might not know that the re-write is up so here you go

Re-write