The Legend of Sunflare Knight

by SunFlare Knight

First published

A human gets transported to Equestria, becomes and legend, and has a father name Starswirl The bearded. what more could you want.

in this story a young teenager human will set afoot on a greatest journey he will have ever accomplished.

one day a young Human by the name of Hunter Knight will be transported to Equestria over 3000 years into the past, there he will meet the king and queen along with there 2 young daughters, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. after Hunter was discussing with the king and queen about how he was going to return to earth to be with his family, Equestria has something else in mind.

During those years, Hunter (who changes his first name to Sunflare) will create many things to help his ponies and the royal family, while making some new friends along the way, he becomes a Legend, and inspire a lot of ponies with great wisdom, and hope, many ponies including the young ones want to be just like him. while Celestia and Luna been friends with him so long they both might have a certain feelings for him. did I also mention Starswirl the bearded became Sunflare Father. WHAAAAAAT.


Note: The Description to this Story will be updated when new chapters come out, so stay tuned for more updates.


The Rights to The property of (My Little Pony - Friendship Is Magic) belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust. The OC Pony (Sunflare Knight) Belongs to me.

Prologue - A legend is born

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Millinocket, Maine. (Year, 2009.)

“I am going to beat you.”

I am going to beat my cousin in a Nascar racing video game. He always beat me in this game but not for long. “Ha, not a chance.” we are playing in final lap of grand prix, and we are so neck and neck. It was going amazing until the last second, he uses his last boost to finish first place. “Aww come on man.” I was so close to beat him, I totally forgot about his last turbo boost. And once again my cousin beat me in a race. “You did good Hunter; you did become better than the last time. But still you can’t beat the master racer.” he said with a smirk on his face.

To me I just sat down with my arms crossed. “Sometimes I hate you so much.” I said while my cousin just laughing his ass off. His laughter died down when my aunt walks right in our room. “You boys having fun?” she said holding a basket of clean laundry. “I hope you guys aren't fighting.” My aunt said while My cousin pauses the game. “No, I was just showing him, that he can never beat me, since I am a master racer.” “Only because you had one last boost that I totally forgot about, and even if you didn’t I could of win.”

My cousin rolled his eyes from the comment. “True, but still you did become better than the last time.” He said with a proud smile.

Ok so your probably wonder who I am and about my life, well let me tell you. My name is Hunter Knight, I am a 17-Year-old white male with an average built body, and a black faded haircut. For Clothes I wear a gray short sleeve t-shirt with a sunset beach picture on the front, blue jeans, white socks, and Brown outdoor shoes.

Over on my right is my cousin Nick, he is 15 years old, he is also a white male who is a little skinny then what I have, and he is a little shorter than me. He also has a brown spiky haircut with a little of blond on the edges. For his clothing he wears a short sleeve red t-shirt, a black hoodie with a gaming controller symbol that is cut to half when you unzip the hoodie. Blue jeans, white socks, and red and black sneakers. He also has a white pair of headsets rap around his neck, with a cord going down to his right hoodie pocket.

“Yeah, whatever man, keep telling yourself that, I going to beat you in the next round.” I said with a confident look.

“Oh yeah”

“Yeah”

“Boys…” My aunt said, both of us look at her. “don’t forget you guys got to pick up jasmine Today.” Oh, right we almost forgot about that. Your probably wonder who jasmine is, well she is my sister. We basically grew up together, before our parents died. In our life we been staying at our aunt Stacy and uncle Sam’ place for a while. I guess you could say there are like our second mother and father. They been taking care of us since our parents died in an accident by a deer in the road. Yeah, I know right, talk about a bad way to die in a common scenario.

“Sure thing, Auntie, come on Nick lets grab my sister and bring her home, so I can beat you this time.” My aunt and cousin just rolled their eyes from my comment. “Will see about that Hunter.” Nick said. I grab my black zip hooded sweatshirt while he grab my keys. “Also, Hunter, don’t forget to grab some Milk after you grab your sister, ok?” my aunt said. “Sure, thing Auntie.” “Also, your uncle will be home after his shift, so can you grab him a Newspaper while your there as well.” My uncle works as a policeman, but he usually does late night shifts if some of the crews were sick or an emergency with their family. “I got you covered mom.” Nick said. “Thanks boys, be back soon we are having chilly tonight.” Oh no, not my aunts chilly. She makes them too spicy, like way too spicy.

After a 30 minute drive, we arrive at the middle school, where I can see my sister, stand on the sidewalk where the school entrance will be. She is a 11 year old, who has long brown hair, a pick shirt with a alicorn picture in the middle, purple skirt, and a yellow Skecher sneakers. She also has a blue backpack with her own art design on them. As we got out of the car, she came running tours us with a great big hug. “Hi Nick, Hi Brother.” She said in an excited toon. “Hi sis, how was school.” As I said that she doesn’t look to thrilled about out. “what’s wrong sis, did something happen?” God, I hope no one bullied my sister. Middle school was shit when I first went there. “Can I tell you in the car Hunter, I don’t want people hear me cry.” Must be serious. “Sure, get in you can tell me about when go to the shop to grab milk and a newspaper for Uncle Same.”

After about 15 minutes of the drive, she was finishing her story when we pulled in to hanndford. Apparently, a bully did come up to her, asking for lunch money, then calling her names, then he try to steal a neckless, that our mother gave to her before she died. Bully was laugh about her mother not around. I was not happy about that. “Nick, can you go grab the Milk and the newspaper please, I need a word with my sister.” Nick nodded his head in agreement, but before he leave, I whispered in his ear to grab something for my sister as a treat to make her feel better.

He nodded his head again as he got out of the car and went inside. I turned around and look at my jasmine. “Hey, you alright?” she looks up at me and… oh my god those eyes and tears. It just hurt me so much about that. To think someone so low go straight up to a little girl telling her about our parents, it makes me sick.

“Look jasmine don’t let those guys tell you about our parents, I know they died from what happen, and I miss them too. but don’t forget our mother and father will always be with us, in here.” I said while pointing at my center chest where my heart is. “…Sniff… I know… …Sniff… …It’s… …sniff… …just that, it’s been so long, that… …sniff… I just miss them so much.” Now I was getting sad. I decided to get out of the car come to her door unhooked her seat belt and pick her up for a lovable bear hug to calm her down. “I know their jasmine, I know. Things will be tough, but everything will turn out alright.” I said to jasmine while she hugs me tighter and crying on my shoulder, and whispering “how” over my shoulder.

That’s when an idea come to my mind. “You know there is a saying that, when there are things that get rough, you got to look at the bright side to see a clear picture, and to know that you are never alone. Because know matter where you are, there will always be someone out there to be by your side, big or small.” That got Jasmine to brighten up, and what’s that I see, is that smile there.

“And guess what, Nick is going to buy you some Ice cream for you.” Jasmine was now shocked with excitement. “Really, really?” She spoke. “Yeah.” I said in a calm happy tone. “thankyouthankyouthankyou.” She said as she was hugging me tight. “you’re welcome, now go in there and grab whatever you want.” I said while going the other direction.

“aren’t you coming with me?” she asked with a confused look. “In a little bit I am going to just take a little walk to get some fresh air ok, Nick will be in there waiting for you, I will join you in there when I am done.” Jasmine nodded and headed inside to find Nick. Today is a beautiful day for a walk, its sunny, it’s not too hot, not even a single cloud in the sky. I got to admit it such a beautiful day that nothing can ruin it, excepted maybe that dark cloud forming above me, Wait what. I stop and look up the cloud, it was forming in a circle like a small hurricane. Lightning starts flashing all around. Everyone is freaking out and confused as to why did this cloud form out of nowhere.

My cousin and sister came out, they saw what going on, but when they saw me under it, they were shocked. When the cloud start spinning faster and faster its starts forming a tornado with me in middle. Jasmine and Nick scream my name, but after about a minute or two the storm died down, and the tornado is gone. When they went to see if Hunter was all right, only problem is when they reach it, Hunter was not there, only one of his shoes was there. Jasmine was now scared and crying wondering where her brother is. “Nick where is my brother?” she asked while she is scared. “I don’t know?”


Equestria over 3000 years in the past.

In the land of Equestria we see a castle in the center of the Everfree jungle, in the castle through a small window we see a young 16 year old White fur alicorn mare with a flowing pink mane and tail, with golden crown and golden shoes, she also has a Sun logo on her flank. Her name was Princess Celestia. In her room we see Celestia running around. It looks like she is preparing for something or looking for something. In the corner of her room, we see another alicorn who is 15 years old. but instead of white and pink, we see a blue fur alicorn with a flowing cyan mane and tail. She was also wearing a dark crown on her head, and she wear light blue shoes. She also has a moon crest logo surrounded in black fur on her flank. Her name was princess Luna.

“Tia, thou are worried too much, I know thou is trying to find our mother’s earring, but couldn’t she just buy another one at the market?” Luna asked from her sister panic attack. “No lulu, that earring was much more than that. It was from our great grandmother. It meant so much to her and if I don’t find it, mom is going to kill me.” Celestia said while still panicking. Then another thing pop in her head. “What if she banished me, or puts me in a dungeon, or banished me and put in a dungeon, what if.”

..SLAP..

“ow Luna why did you do that?” Luna slaps her sister in her left cheek. “thou need to calm down sister.” Luna said as she took a deep breath to continue. “I will help you look for it.” Celestia look at her sister with hope. “Really Lulu, thank you.” Luna nodded. “No problem sister, if we could think really hard from where we start to where we place it back I am sure we will find mothers earring in no time.” Luna said.

“what’s this I hear about my daughters losing my grandmothers earring.” A voice called out. Celestia and Luna froze with fear knowing whose voice was that. There in a doorway was a tall golden alicorn with a sparkle mane and tail that starts from gold to midnight purple. Same thing on her ankles and shoes as well. She also wears a golden crown with red rubies on them. Same thing on her golden collar. For her mark on her flank, she has a swirling galaxy. Her name was queen Galaxia. “Mother, its not what it looks like.” Celestia said in fear.

“Really, because it looks like you were trying to find my other earring from my grandmother that she gave me on my birthday when I was few years older than you.” She said in a not so thrilled voice.

“Well... you see… I …sigh… I’m sorry mother, I know how much they mean to you but, they were so pretty I just want to see how I look like with great grandma earrings. I sorry I lost one of them, I hope you not mad at me.” Celestia said

“Well, I am a little disappointed, but I understand where you’re coming from.” Galaxia said.

“Wait you do?” Celestia asked. Galaxia nodded her head in agreement.

“Yes sweetie, I did the same thing when I was a little younger than you.” Galaxia said.

Celestia was surprised to see her mother did the same thing when she was young. “However, if you want to wear my grandmother’s earring all you got to do was ask ok. Do you understand Sweetheart?” Celestia nooded “Good in the meantime.” Galaxia said while using her horn to grab the earring that was under Celestia nightstand by her bed. Celestia and Luna were surprised when both there mouths dropped.

“How did you, when did you.” Celestia couldn’t find the right words, while there mother giggled.

“Like I said, I did the same thing when I was little, my grandmother put a tracking spell on it so me, or in this case YOU, doesn’t lose it again.” Galaxia said

Celestia and Luna both sigh of relief and smiled. “I am glad that you have found it, and I am so sorry for losing it mom” Celestia said apologizing her mother.

“It’s ok Tia, I know my grandmother would be happy for you to wear her earrings, and I know how much you want to look your best, especially my two beautiful princesses.” Galaxia said as she come over to her daughter and give them a big hug.

“Thanks mom.” Both Celestia and Luna said.

“You’re Welcome, Girls.” Galaxia said with a smile.

Suddenly the moment stops when they heard thunder in the sky, when they look at Celestia window they see a swirling cloud above the market area. Celestia was about ask her mother what was going on, until she sees a figure coming out of the cloud and onto the ground hard.

“Guards” Galaxia ordered her personal guards to see what’s the commotion.

“Yes, your Majesty, what’s wrong?” one of the male guards asked.

“Tell my husband that a storm appear above the market and a figure fell from it. Also get the others guards to grab Starswirl and a doctor. We don’t know what creature that fell from the sky, but it could be also injured.” The guard Saluted and left to find the two.

“Mom, can we come, we want to make sure it isn’t hurt.” Celestia said worry for the creature.

“Yeah, mother please, we promise we won’t be in the way.” Luna said who is also worried about that creature.

Galaxia sigh “Alright, but you are to stay right next to me ok.” The teen girls nodded in agreement from their mother decision. then they took off to the market. Who ever this creature is I hope he or she is not a threat?

Chapter 1 – Meet The Royal Family.

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Equestria – Castle Market

Celestia’s POV

I am so happy that my mother and I settle our differences with the whole lost one of my great grandmother earrings Incidents. I still feel bad about that, But I know I need be responsible for my actions and fix my mistakes. Either way I am just happy my mother forgives me and found the missing earring.

But right now, we have another issue of our Hooves, during after my mother and me made up, a huge thunderstorm form in over the market. When my mother, my sister, and me look outside of my window a raging thundercloud form, but what we also saw was a figure falling from that cloud and on to the market road.

My mother Call one of her personal Guards to go fetch our father, My teacher Starswirl, and a doctor. I just hope the creature that fell didn’t hurt itself too much.

I decided to accompany my mother as well with my sister, to see what this creature is, and make sure it isn’t hurt. When we got ourselves to the market, we already see my teacher and the doctor, my father must be on his way in a moment. When we reach the scene, my teacher saw us, and he wave at us to come over. “Your majesty, thank goodness you’re here.” Starswirl said. he also saw she wasn’t the only one to see the incident. “I see you brought your daughters with you. Good to see you Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. How are your girls coming along with your magic defense spell’s?” Starswirl asked both me and my little sister.

Me and My sister have been Starswirl Students for 10 years. We been working on making and learning all different spells, from levitation spell’s, to teleportation, to offense spell’s (like blast beams, energy balls, etc.). now we are working on our defense spell’s, (Like Plasma Shields.). “We are doing ok, well mostly me, my little sister is still having trouble.” I said as I look back at my sister, while she gave me a glare. “I still can do it Tia, it’s just. not everpony is as skilled as you are.” Luna pouted with jealousy. “Yeah, sure you can lulu.” I said with a smirk on my cheek.

“Girls. Let’s not argue, right now we have a situation on our hooves.” Oh, right the creature, I still hope it’s okay. “So starswirl what type of creature did you find, also is it badly injured, and more importantly is it dangerous?” My mother asked with concerned and worried.

“Come let me show you.” Starswirl said as we follow him in the market. When we got there, a lot of are citizens being block by our guards surround the crater. But there seems to be one pony missing. “where’s dad?” I asked as I look around.

“He is on his way Celestia, something about a hydra attacking a new village called Ponyville.” StarSwirl said. My Eyes Widened with fear and worry. Starswirl saw my eyes knowing my fears for the ponies in their new town. “Don’t worry Celestia Your father already handled it, the hydra is back where it belongs, and the ponies are safe.” Whew that's a relief. I'm glad dad can be able to handle any situation. “Anyway, let me show you what we found.” Starswirl said. As we walked right close to crater what we saw was something we have never seen before, it looks like a hairless monkey except for the top of its head. what's also interesting is that this creature is also wearing clothes, maybe it's intelligent. if it is intelligent, we could have like a new species in our world this will be great to learn something new from his/her kind. as for me, my mom, and my sister, stand right next to the crater, The doctor Was checking the creatures vital Organism to make sure it isn't injured.

While starswirl the bearded was investigating the creature’s physical form. “The creature seems to be alright except for his right arm which is a bit sprained, but don't worry it should be fix with this healing spell." The doctor Said as he perform a healing spell on the unconscious creature. "but judging by the way he's wearing clothes I say he's intelligent.” Starswirl said. so, it's a boy, that’s good, I'm glad they can figure out what gender he is. “How long do you think he is going to wake up.” my mother said.

just when they were about to answer, a small groan Was heard that means the creatures getting up. “Everypony keep your distance let's not startle it. Celestia Luna get behind me.” My mother said as she protected us behind her wings. While the rest of these citizens stayed behind the guards to keep their distance.


Hunter’s POV

I don't know how long I was out; I don't even know what happened. All I can remember was that there was this unusual cloud That form a small hurricane but turn into a tornado with me in the Middle. then somehow, I was lifted in the air, and then everything went black. but all I can say is one thing in my mind “How the hell am I still alive” There was a lot of questions Circling around my head many possible theories. as I was about to get up, I see something that through my eyes was off, I don't remember there were a lot of trees, fields, and some mountains in the distances, of course we only had one huge mountain. Then again, the storm could have flown me far, but that's still kind of the question that meets to “how am I still alive” in this situation. As I was getting up checking around the place, I heard some whispers and or gasps behind me.

as I turn around, I saw Something I never seen before. They look like small horses or in this case ponies but what confused me the most was that they have more colors than regular ones on earth. But something was off about them that got me confused. some of them were wearing raggedy old clothing, others were wearing metal armors and or jewels. but what I saw is something I never seen before I am not sure If my eyes were tricking me or if there real. What I see are ponies that have a horn on their heads, they must be unicorns’ the other ones have feathered wings on their backs, which is clear they are Pegasus, and I am guessing the rest of them look like regular ponies. what I saw was something much more magical and beautiful then meets the eye, there are three individuals that do have both Pegasus wings and a Unicorn horn, I am not sure what they are called, but they also seem to be much taller except for the two ones that are sort of around my height.

Wow I have never seen such a beauty and majestic creatures in the world. I don't think I'm in Earth anymore, did the storm teleport me to a new world? if so, maybe they might be able help me, if they do speak English, I mean they do look like a citizen people or in this case ponies, and I am in a new world, so there could be any possibilities. If I want to be able to get back home, I need their help. hopefully they’re not a threat to me, but I'm guessing by the judge of their looks I think they're scared of me because I'm new here or I'm an alien in this world. OK Hunter let's see if we can be able to get their help if not well, I hope Jasmine can be able to handle her own……. OH NO Jasmine, I hope she's OK, Nick please take care of her until I get back.” Hunter said in his mind.

“Um H-Hello.” Hunter said, not sure if that was the best way of greeting. But as I said that the whole crowd gasp and whispered.

“Hello there, let me introduce myself, my name is Queen Galaxia, I am the leader of Equestria as well as my husband, King Cosmo, but he is on his way for a moment so you should be able to meet with him soon." The Queen Said.

“These two are my daughters, the one of my left is my oldest Princess Celestia. And the one on my right is my youngest Princess Luna. Girls say hello.” The Queen said to her two daughters.

“Hello” Celestia Said in a chipper voice.

“H-Hi” Luna said with a bit of nervousness.

"and these two on your left on my daughter's teacher, Starswirl the bearded, and this here is doctor Red Cross. The first doctor in Equestria, and one of the best." The queen said as I look at the bearded wizard looking unicorn, and a brown fur unicorn with a black mane and a red cross mark on his flank.

“May I ask what creature you are, and your name.” The Queen said.

“Oh m-my name is Hunter Knight, and I'm a human.” I said to the queen.

“it's wonderful to meet you Mr. Knight.” The Queen said.

“Please, you don't have to call me Mister or my last name just Hunter would do.” I said the queen, as she nodded her head to understand.

“Very well, may I ask, how did you get here.” The queen asked.

I explained everything to the queen about how it happened from the day of my sister and me talking to where I was going outside to take a walk for fresh air and an unknown storm coming in brought me here. The queen had been listening to my full explanation.

“That is peculiar, I don't know why it brought you here, but I'll see what I could do, so me and my husband could find a way to bring you home.” The queen said. Let’s Hope so, I hope my family will be alright.

“In the meantime, come let me bring you to the castle until we can figure out a way to bring you home. I will inform my husband about this." The queen said. As I follow her and her 2 daughters to the castle.

“Thank you, your highness.” I said to the queen

“Please you don’t have to call me your highness or your majesty, call me Galaxia.” Wow, does she really trust me? I never thought a royalty would let me just say their name instead of your Highness or Princess or queen or etc.

“Oh um, sure Galaxia, thank you again for your help.” I said thanks to the queen.

As we about to get in the castle another one of those ponies, with wings and a horn, lands right in front of us. “I heard the commotion is everyone ok….” The male pony said when he looks right at me. He must be King Cosmo, judging by his fur, his whole body is looks like a cosmic galaxy, which looks super cool. “Um honey, who or what is that thing.” The king asked.

“His name is Hunter Knight, and he is a Human.” Galaxia said to her husband. “Where did he come from?” The King asked. “I will explain everything while we are in the throne room.”

As we got the throne room, I asked the king and queen what type of ponies they are, they are call alicorns, a combination of Unicorn, Pegasus, and earth pony. I got to admit, it would be nice to do magic and fly at the same time. As the king, queen and their two daughters sit on their thrones, I explained everyone again to the queen and king how I got here. The king was very intrigue about other worlds out there. “Fascinating So you’re telling me that you were trapped in a storm that came out of nowhere and somehow it brought you to our world?” The King asked me. “Yes, that's basically what happened, I'm just still kind of unsure as to how it happened.” I said to the king, I could have been abductive by aliens, or a wormhole in the sky decided to wake up and take me for a ride.

“Well, whatever or who ever brought you here, could have a reason why, I am just not sure. But in the meantime, let me see if I can get you back home.” The king said.

“Aww but do we have to, I kind of like him, he looks cute.” Celestia said to her father. I blushed from her complement, Cute?! I have never been called cute before, but she does looks adorable. I thought while the king walks right up to me. “Now, now Celly.” Celly? That’s an interesting nickname. “We all know that he really needs to get back to his family. Especially his sister.” The king said to her daughter. "Besides his parents must be worried about him,” oh right they don’t know. I really do miss them. “Your do have parents worried about you right?” the king asked while looking at me.

The king didn’t understand what I said when I mumbled. “What was that young one? I didn’t quite hear you.” The king asked.

“My parents died when I was young.” By then the whole family gasped. “They died to a car accident when my sister and me were home when our aunts babysit us. they were going on a date when a deer came running on a road where mom and dad drive to their location. My uncle got a call from the hospital and explain what happened. when we got there, they- they.” I couldn’t say anymore, it was too much for me and mostly for my little sister. As I was starting to form tears, Celestia and Luna came running down with tears as well towards me and gave me a hug for comfort.

“I am **sniff** s-so sorry **sniff** t-that had t-to happened to you at a young age.” Celestia said in sadness.

“I agree with Tia, I am sorry that has to happen to you and your sister.” Luna said while she hugs me tight. I am not going to lie their fur is soft and warm. plus, they smell like flowers and Cake? which I like a lot.

“Thanks for comforting me girls, it means a lot.” Celestia and Luna wiped there tears away and smiled.

“Anything for a friend, Hunter.” Celestia said. Friend?! they consider me as a friend. I didn’t have many friends in school, except my cousin who I look up to as a brother. But a friend to these girls, it just warms my heart.

"Wow really, you consider me as a friend?” Celestia and Luna nodded “Of course Hunter, you’re nice, honest and very caring (not to mention cute and Handsome) we will always be there for you Hunter. Right Luna?” Celestia said looking at Luna while she nodded her head with agreement. “Yes, thou will always be our friend. And thou will be sure we will always be by your side.” Luna said. As I start to have tears, not by sadness but by joy.

“Wow girls that means a lot, thanks.” I said smiling to the girls as they smile back.

“I am glad that my daughters have taking a liking of you, you’re a very noble pony -er- person Hunter. Now let’s see if we can get you home.” The king said. But before we started, we were interrupted with glass breaking and some dog like creatures came crashing in. The guards and the king and queen were getting ready to fight. However, two came behind Celestia and Luna and grab both of them with ropes and a brown bags. Galaxia and Cosmo saw their daughter's being taking.

“CELESTIA, LUNA LET THEM GO.” The Queen cried out to the dog creatures. When the King and queen were about the get their daughter's back, they were hit by debris from the castle walls. “If you want your precious pony Princesses back, give us 100,000 gems and we'll let them go.” The dog creature said, but before they leave, he turns back towards them. “We will be waiting at the entrance near the market, bring me the gems or they die.” He said as him and his pack leave the scene with Celestia and Luna crying for help. “Mom, Dad, Hunter, Help...” Celestia and Luna Screamed in unison, and just like that there gone.

After queen Galaxy and king Cosmo got out of debris, they called out the guards and tell them to grab the money, so they can save their daughter's. While the rest figure out a plan to stop these creatures in case they try to hurt their Celestia and Luna. I couldn't just let them take Celestia and Luna, they are my friends and I would never leave any of my friends, or family behind. while the king and queen discussing the plan to stop the dog like creatures that took Celestia and Luna, I decided to follow them and stop them. I may have done some marshal arts when I was a kid, but I hope my skills are enough to take down some bad mutts, and hopefully rescue Celestia and Luna. also there is this burning feeling is my chest that is somehow giving me strength, I don't know what it is but hopefully it will help.



Mom, dad if your listen, please give me your strength.

Chapter 2 – Rescuing Celestia and Luna. The Prophecy Begins. Part 1

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Hunter POV

I've been running to find this entrance ever since Celestia and Luna have been captured by these weird dog creatures, I know that it might be risky even though I don’t know what they have for weapons, but I can’t just let them take my friends and get them away for it. I mean like capture princesses, so they get money, to them they think its easy, but to me, I call that a dumb move, and not only that, but they plan to hurt them as well, not on my watch.

I do remember hearing them say they will be at the entrance near the market area. If I recall, I did see an entrance door like when I woke from this place. So maybe they could be there, I just hope my hunches are correct and I hope the girls are alright.

As I got to the market, I could see some ponies who are worried when they saw some of those dog creatures went by. However there stands got wreck, probably those dogs decided to take something for the road. I decided to help and make sure no one is hurt. “Is everypony alright?” I said to the pony citizens, they all heard me, and Their eyes widened when they saw me. “You’re that Human we saw during the queen and the princess’s investigation, what was your name again?” one of the ponies said to me.

“Hunter. The name is Hunter Knight sir. But that’s not important right now, I just want to make sure everypony is alright.” I said to the pony. “Oh, we are doing okay sir, and so is my shop. but thank you for your concern, I just don’t know why these diamond dogs came here for.” The pony said. Diamond dogs?! So that’s what they are. I wonder why. I was about to ask the pony citizen when I heard a scream coming from one of the ponies that have an apple logo sign above there stand, but what I also saw was one of those diamond dogs trying to rob the stand.

“Give me your apples pony, or else.” The diamond dog said to the mare with an appleseed on here flank. “No, I am not going to let you take my apples.” The mare said to the diamond dog. The diamond dog was getting angry and decided to grab the mare by the neck. “I can do whatever I want, when I want. Give me your apples or I will cut your throat out.” The dog said as he grabs his knife and point it up on her neck. I look at the ground and found a big rock and throw it at his head. The dog drops the mare and his knife and grunted. “Who threw that?” The dog said. “I did” I said to the diamond dog, Then he look at my direction.

“Who are you and what type of creature are you? You look like a hairless monkey.” The diamond dog said to me. “That's not important right now. what's important is you hurting that mare and I do not like bullies who hurt beautiful mares.” The mare blush from what I said. The diamond dog got angry and growl. “You want to protect this mare; you want to play hero; you got your wish freak.” The diamond dog said as he starts running towards me, getting ready for a fight. The ponies and the mare I was protecting, were worried for my safety.

With that, the diamond dog made the first strike, throwing his fist out in a punch for my face, only to be blocked, the same with the following punch, before I seized the chance to land a strong front kick to the chest, then a flying kick to the side of his head.

Disoriented, and taken by surprise, the diamond dog stumbled, before he pulled himself together and runs after me, jumping up in a flurry kick, only for me to dodge the attack, countering it with a high kick, knocking the Dog out of the air. Furious, and humiliated, the Mutt picked up a knife lying on the ground, and swung it at me, only for I to block the weapon, then dodged it when he swung it again. Catching his hands, I twisted the Diamond dog arms, before I succeeded in disarming his weapon.

In a desperate attempt to escape, the dog tried to kick me, but I managed to block it and did a round house kick to the stomach, falling on his back, before flipping themselves back up. The Dog charged after me, throwing out a flurry of kicks and punches, But I skillfully dodging and blocking all his attacks, while backing up against a stand. The dog throws a kick at me, only to strike his foot through the bottom wall of the stand. I quickly moved to the side. Thinking fast, I found a sling shot and the rock I threw, I grab them both pull the string and the rock far back, when the dog got his foot out of the stand I released my hold, causing the rock to fly forward, striking the dog in the face. The dog wobbles a bit until he landed face first on a wooded wheelbarrow full of manure, striking him unconscious.

The Ponies and the mare I saved were shocked an amaze with my skills, it took them a few seconds before they start to cheer. After the cheering died down, I went to check the mare and make sure she was alright.

“Miss?” I asked in a calmer, gentle tone as I helped her up. “Are ya alright?”

“Yeah, I’m fine,” she replied. “Thanks to you.”

I smiled knowing that she and everypony is safe. “Good, I am glad that you are alright, but right now I need your help can you tell me where the entrance is, I need to save my friends Celestia and Luna from those Diamond dogs.” As I say that to the mare, Everypony Gasps when they heard me. “Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are captured.” One of the random ponies said.

“Yes, that’s why I need to rescue them. They are my friends; do you know where the entrance is? They say that’s where they’re going to be.” I asked anypony, hopefully they know where it is.

“I do.” The mare that I saved said. “It’s down that way, just keep going straight and you should see the entrance.” The mare said pointing the direction with her hoof. “Thanks.” I said to the mare.

“You’re welcome and thank you again for saving me and my stand. My name is Appleseed.” Appleseed said.

I smile at her. “it’s lovely to meet you, my name is Hunter, and you’re welcome.” I said to the mare. I think I just made another new friend.

after the whole fight the diamond dog and saving a mare who I just made another new friend scene, I continue my way to the entrance and rescue Celestia and Luna, hopefully they are ok.


Celestia POV

Captured. That’s all I could say, we were captured by diamond dogs, and they brought us next to the entrance near the market. My sister and I were in the same bag together, I hug my sister for comfort because she was scared, I am scared too but my mother and father told me to be brave for me and Lulu. We sat here waiting for our parents to arrive with some guards incase things get messy; at lease I hope we won’t come to that. I can hear the Diamond dogs getting frustrated. “Where is Skull, he should be here by now.” One of the diamond dogs said.

“Patience Grunt, he said he went to go grab a snack.” The other replied. “But it doesn't take 30 minutes to grab a snack, I hope that Idiot didn’t get captured.” I could just hear the diamond dogs getting annoyed, I wish we could escape but, there wasn’t much I could do, other than holding my sister for comfort. the dogs were getting angry. “Ok that’s it, they are taking too long, if were not going to get our gems.” The diamond dog said as he grabs me and Luna out of the bag.

“Then they are not going to have their precious Princess’s back.” He said with a smirk while the others laugh, I was now scared. “No please, you don’t have to do this.” I replied with mercy, unfortunately for my sister she is trembling with fear.

“Oh, but I want to, You guys have been stealing our gems for the past weeks and we are sick and tired of you Ponies to take what was ours in the first place.” He said as he grabs his knife and puts it near my neck. “This is it, any last words princess?” I have no words for how scared I am.

I close my eyes getting ready for final blow, when all of a sudden, a rock came out of nowhere and hit the diamond dogs’ knife off his paws. “AHH” The diamond grunted and drop me. After that, another rock hit the other diamond dog that held my sister in there. I quickly grab my sister and hide behind some barrels to get away from them. When we got to a safe distance, me and Luna look who was our savior. And to our surprise, it was none other than our Human Friend.

“Hunter?!” Me and my sister said at the same time.



To be continued

End of part 1