> The Beginning :Rewrite > by TheDragonSage > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Chapter One - Creation > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Prologue       Have you ever wondered if there was ever a Before, prior our universe, was there another universe?, or was it the same nothingness before Creation.      While they did not have those answers, they were about to make it happen, One was a blonde, sun-kissed blonde spiky hair, he was tall nearly six feet tall, had sapphire blue eyes, and wore a tattered black, but mostly orange clothes.      The Other had dark black hair, in a oddly shaped hairstyle that pointed towards his right, charcoal black eyes, robes that were held up by strange large, purple rope, and was around the former’s heart but a bit shorter.     They both had a same expression, utter look of Dispair, in front of them...was nothing, nothing but the void, how did this happen?     They fought, they fought the one known as the Rabbit Goddess, a celestial being that came down from a distant space, and ate the the Chakra Fruit from the thing called the God Tree, Shinju.     For the past few days, these two, the names being, Naruto and Sasuke, have fought the Kaguya, who has before been placed in what should’ve been her eternal prison, The Moon, in these days fought her.       In the End, even when three of their comrades that went with them in battle fell, they won, but in the end, Kaguya, knowing she probably would never get her chance at freedom again to steal the life forces of every living being, especially if no one will be capable enough to even GET to this dimension.      So in the end,...she just finished herself, and if she could created a Truth Seeking Orb so large without any sort of consequences that could destroy a dimension,...what do you think would happen if she used her full life force to power it.     Six Path Chakra, it was truly a mysterious and powerful force, those who had it, could very well be called a god, those who had it, no longer followed the laws of nature.     The term God Tree from where the Chakra Fruit came from was not inaccurate, it was quite truly a divine existence, when Kaguya had it, she was called a Demon and a Goddess, when Hogoromo had it he may as well been a god, that all shinobi’s would think of him as a god if he was still more widely remembered in the current age of Shinobi.      Even their reincarnations, who were the Sons of the Sage of Six Paths were in some extends gods, a god isn’t when you can’t die, but when you can exist after death,...if of course you don’t kill yourself with that chakra in the first place.     The Truth Seeking Orbs, were truly a terrifying ability, for even touching one disturbs your chakra, And say should you lose an arm to it, it will no longer exist, this Orbs could most definitely by called Anti-Immortality.     But what truly makes these Orbs incredibly horrifying is that, anyone that doesn’t have Sage Path Chakra flowing through them….they get erased, not even their souls will be able to go to the afterlife for it was erased to utter oblivion along with the body.      Before the Death of Kakashi, he used the remaining amount of chakra along with Sakura fusing her own chakra into him, caused both Sasuke and Naruto to survive by the energy going right through them, intangibly speaking, and only became touchable when Kaguya’s final move move past them.       Everyone,...was dead, thankfully the attack was concentrated, and people who died, they died from the blast that destroyed the material realm, not actually touching them, so they instead died and headed to the afterlife rather than be erased.     They both continued to stare out into the Abyss, after what felt like hours, they finally looked at each other, neither of them speaking out loud, but both knowing what each other wants to do.     They were effectively gods, they both had Six Path Chakra, even if they died they would simply exist after death like hogoromo did, while sasuke’s was only visible in one eye, naruto’s was a lot more distinctive when in use.     Actually that is wrong, while Naruto is using Six Paths Chakra, it isn’t actually all that different from his Sage Mode, the only key difference?, there was no orange coloring around his eye, just the toad/Kurama eyes.     The glowing bodysuit thing was actually mostly from Kurama, Which speaking of which, when Naruto touched her along with sasuke, he was able to pull their conscienceness out of Kaguya, but not a lot of their chakra, so in the end, they will be asleep, recovering from this for a Verrry Loooong time.     ….they wanted to create a new world     While theoretically Naruto can do it by himself, he would rather want to use it in conjunction with his brother in all but blood for stability.     They both understood that they shouldn’t recreate the human race, for the their whole existence humanity mostly ever only waged war and death, so in the end they decided a whole new sentient races to their new world.    They spoke with each other, for the past hours, ignoring their basic needs, and had a whole new list of ideas, sasuke himself thought of create things like dragons and Kirin personally he wanted to create.     While Naruto thought of creating Draconeques, and Alicorns, the two not wanting to cause chakra to be used for any wars that may happen, so they separated the two energies that create chakra.     Many are under the impression that chakra is the life force, which while correct is at the same time incorrect, chakra is created in the system similar to the blood veins, and only really connect the Energy of the Mind and the Energy of the Body.     So in order to stop with the misuse of chakra, they stopped its existence without leaving their creations lifeless, the body can still survive without Spiritual Energy while the Mind can still survive without Physical Energy.    Nodding, in their heads, imaging what they want to create in a form of a illusion, and when they corrected all of the mistakes in it, each using one of their hands to create a Snake Seal, they both made a hand sign and in unison said, “Creation of All Things”     And all of the sudden, in the void, something impossible happened, a bright shining light appeared and all around it, a new planet, as well as the sun, the stars, the moon, the mountains, the water, the animals, they have all appeared, life being breathed into this illusion, becoming reality. For all things considered, those who gain Six Path Chakra, are no longer bound by nature, as Obito has pointed out when he temporarily became a Jinchuuriki, the world, save for the animals, was still empty, and as ironic as it seemed, they understood what they now needed to do. They have to play gods... > Chapter 2 - Spirits > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 - Life     Last time we have been here, we have witnessed how there was Genosis, now we shall witness where the very first life...was created, in this scenario, they were called…The Spirits of the Genesi.     In the land, where the color fresh green reigns supreme, sapphire blue in the ocean and sky, red in the magma and ash, the planet itself was quite alive.      If someone were to come now, they would assume that this place has existed for numerous years, yet...they couldn’t possibly be farther from the truth, seeing as this place was only created a few hours ago.     And its Creators?, currently debating on a topic, at this moment they are currently sitting on grass, across from each other, cross legged, in the grassland, miles away from any trees.       “Look, I understand your concerns, but think about it, what joy in life would there be if there is no Chaos?, how would you like it, if you ended up doing the same thing over and over again every day, it would be so borinnnng,” said the blonde fellow, trying to get his best, at the moment only, friend to see his side.       “I will repeat once more, I don't want to, in the future, deal with a being, literally, made out of chaos, and even if it’s interests would not be of destruction, I still don’t want to deal with an, personality wise,  younger you, Naruto,” glared the ravenette at the, now named, Naruto.     “Really sasuke?, are you still mad about the time in our 10th year when in the park I got you-“ Naruto started, while snickering, but had to stop midway to dodge a lightning bolt created by his glaring red/purple eyed friend.    “Yes, and I forever will remember that,...unspeakable event,” growled sasuke, still sore that the blonde managed to get one over him like that...which none of you will hear off.    “Well, yes, a little too much Chaos CAN be bad, but come on, you have to admit that too much Order can be just as bad,” Naruto, trying to convince his stingy friend.    Sasuke just stared at him, a little more and it would’ve looked like a deadpan,...though, regrettably, he had a point, too much Order can always be just as bad as too much Chaos.     While he still didn’t want to deal with what will no doubt be his greatest headache,...he didn’t want a world where everything just kept repeating.    “Fine,...but it better not be a copy, personality-wise, of a younger you, I don’t even want to think of that happening, dobe,” he relented, reluctantly.     And now annoyed seeing as how his idiot brother was smiling right now, a little more and his blonde friend would be finding a nasty Kirin right on top of him.   *Time Skip - several months*     They have continued on, and in the end, they have created several beings, I have spent quite a bit of time, thinking what to create and what to not even consider, and the end result?    Discord, Draconequus Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony    Layla, Pegasus Spirit of the Night and Dreams    Dagrun, Unicorn Spirit of the Day and Healing    Ereshkigal, Earth Pony Spirit of the Earth and Nature    Ruiji, Dragon Spirit of Fire and Strength Iskra, Kirin Spirit of Lightning and Emotion    At the beginning, Sasuke wanted to create a race of what resembled his Kirin which he would obviously call Kirin, but honestly he has no idea WHY most of the next races ended up having at least SOME form of horse on them.    Seriously, they started with the creation of kirins, which somehow lead to a horned horse to a winged one, it became apparent that the main race will apparently be horses,...on second thought ponies fit better as they are simply too small...except potentially the Spirits when they age up.     In this amount of time several races were created...with most having some part being Equine in nature, with exceptions such as buffalos, griffons, dragons etc.    The ponies in this world were small, the tallest one only reached up to his waist while the Pony Spirits could potentially be around his torso, as of now...they were tiny,...which lead to his current predicament.    “Daaaaad, Eresh is pulling on my ear, HELP ME,” said a four legged lightning blue furred creature with what looked like a lion mane on her neck, she has a branch-like horn on top of her head, she also possessed dark grey eyes, which by the way, his and naruto’s creations had, for whatever reason, large eyes.    This world is mostly filled what they call magic, or at least what the ponies called it, to be honest they didn’t particularly care what they call it, seeing as it was simply disconnected chakra since Yin and Yang energies are not connected, therefore they just allowed them to call it whatever they want...no matter how childish.    As sparks of lightning danced around the Kirin, he named Iskra, in irritation, you could plainly see another four legged creature on the irritated Kirin Spirit, this one had green fur, as well as flowing Dark green Hair with Ocean Blue eyes.    While Ereshkigal didn't have anything that made her different from her siblings she was, quite obviously, strong, so much so that kirin she has pinned below her couldn’t even struggle all that much, as the Earth Pony Spirit is currently on Iskar’s back and playfully biting and pulling her ear.    “Daaaaaad, pleeease,” she groaned in utter annoyance, she looked pleadingly at him, you can even see little tears falling from her eyes, her very large eyes,...which sort of looked like they belonged to a puppy.    If you would have looked around you can see they live to have other humans would see as an old traditional japanese house, with inside being filled with picture frames filled with images of him, naruto, and their creations.    It had furniture such as couches, book shelves, desks, and even a kitchen as well as a bathroom, it had windows where you can see the mountains that stretched far and wide, with the twilight sky to be viewed as of now.    You can also see a very much sunny colored Unicorn, currently using his...magic, to lift a book he literally created out of nowhere to make sure he wouldn’t forget anything that the old world had information on, as much as he disliked it, there was a chance he could forget something.    The human mind was never made to remember quite well over a century, so he might as well write it before he had a chance to start forgetting, he was currently sitting on the couch just reading one of the mentioned books on physics,...he honestly wasn't expecting this but if he likes it, why not. He had burning orange eyes, in the pupil it looked like someone set it on fire in red lighting, he looked in the paged think with big interest, and does look like he is enjoying it, though in the end, he was very much ignoring two of his sisters that are on the wooden floor. He can hear the other ones playing in the back of the house, outside, knowing he would withstand that look his creation is giving much longer, he sighed and stood up from his armchair and towards them, when he got to them, he picked up the two, rather light, little ponies that barely reached to his knees. "Alright, Ereshkigal, that is quite enough for play fighting for now, how about you two go outside with the rest, i'm sure whatever they are doing is just as interesting," he said sternly, to his grinning green creation, while the other looked quite relieved on being saved from her pinned position. "Fine, i guess your right, even if i do still want to win the fight for the billion time," she said, teasingly to the kirin, who turned away, with red cheeks, "and WHY do you believe you would win?!" she said, quite annoyed, as he set them down on the floor once more. "Well seeing as you had to call dad over you might as well have called quits...sparkles," she giggled, which she quickly ran when Iskra literally burst in blue lightning, running after her earth pony sister, at the moment naruto was busy making sure everything in he nature's side was working. Sighing once more in relief, he went back to his seat and picked up his book that he was reading before the interruption, just as he was gonna continue reading, a pie literally came flying towards his face, now covered in cream, his hand clenched as he crushed the book and screamed out the one name that was currently his bane in existence, and in the distance can be heard a howling laughter. DISCOOOOOORD!!!!!