Burning Desire

by McProky

First published

A tiny human wakes up to find himself in the service of Nightmare Star

A human wakes up, unable to remember what has happened before. He realized he is to become a personal pet for Nigthmare Star, as she demans some attention.

A commissioned piece written for Emu34b

Contains: Licking, Saliva, Tongue-job, Maw play

The Burning Desire

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“Wake up, little one.” Was the first thing the tiny has heard. Before opening his eyes slowly, he could sligthly warm, soft ground giving out to his weight, sort of like a pillow. He then opened his eyes to find himself laying naked, on a huge plane made of white, furry material. Before he could look around more, he heard a loud giggle coming from above him, almost as if coming from the skies. He slowly craned his neck up, seeing a huge, white neck adorned with golden jewelry connecting to a huge head. The huge, deep purple eyes of the giant creature looked at him with a happy expression. “Why hello there, little one. I’m glad you are finally awake!” Said the giant with a smooth and pleasantly seductive voice.

The hoof suddenly rocketed above, towards the eye level of the giantess, the massive purple eyes looking directly at the inch sized naked body of a tiny human. The tiny male was scared, not sure what will happen next. The giantess was looking very scary, with flowing fiery mane, huge purple eyes with a slit, and golden jewelry all around her body. Then the giantess smiled wide, revealing a set of pearly white teeth, sharp as dagges, behind the leathery lips. She parted her lips slightly, revealing a huge, squishy tongue, coated in a thick layer of saliva. Then the giantess talked, letting a waft of her peach smelling breath was over the tiny.

“My name is Nightmare Star, I am the ruler of all of Equestria. While I don’t really care for the name of my pets, I am in a good mood, so I will ask you for your name, please.” She said. She then moved her hoof, along with you towards her massive ear, where you screamed your name, which was barely hearable to the giant pony.

“John you say? Quite a cliché name, don’t you think?” She said as she moved you back before her massive face. Suddenly, she moved you sligthly closer to her massive snout.

“Now that formalities are over, you will do as you are commanded, John. I have chosen you to be my maw pet. You will massage the inside of my maw with your body. If you do well, I will reward you with pleasure, and life. But if you will fail at your task...” Nightmare Star paused, her expression shifted to a more grim, scary expression. She then levitated a green grape from the table outside of your viewing range, moving it towards her mouth. She opened her mouth wide, revealing a dark maw, full of perfectly clean, and gorgeous and sharp teeth, with saliva hanging from the roof of her mouth all the way towards the tongue, and with lots of saliva between her teeth. She then gracefully levitated the grape between her back teeth. Slowly but surely, she pressed down. The skin of the grape burst open with a loud, squishy noise, as the liquid inside the grape slowly pooled onto her tongue, leaving the skin of the grape to be crushed between teeth. Then, she swallowed. A terrifying sound echoed around the tiny, as the crushed grape traveled from the maw towards it’s acidic demise in Nightmare Star’s stomach.

After that, she looked at tiny John with a lustful expression on her face, talking with her seductive, sweet voice, “Do we have an understanding, little John?”

The tiny gulped and shook his head up and down. The giantess smiled and enveloped John in her magical aura. “Well then, off you go to work, I have a piece of the grape stuck between my teeth, go clean it.” Nightmare Star said. And with that, she carefully placed John next to the dirty teeth. The soft, squishy tongue grazed the skin of the tiny, the texture and the taste buds massaging his body, as he dug his hands into the remains of the crushed grape, removing it and throwing it into the tongue.

Meanwhile Nightmare Star made more saliva so the remains can casually slide down her esophagus. John looked at how easily is slid off into the darknes of her throat. He was afraid, so he started to clean all of her teeth.

After about an hour of hard work, Nightmare Star was pleased with the result, and as a gift, she gave John a thing that would please nearly everyone. John was tired from massaging the giantess’ gums and cleaning her teeth, laying in the middle of her soft, squishy tongue, listening to the breathing of hers, smelling the sweet, peachy smell of her breath. Suddenly, the tongue started to shift around him, the texture grinding agaist his bare skin, especialyl agaisnt his member. She enveloped his entire body in the soft, smooth tongue, making sure John is as hard as possible. She slowly walked towards a mirror, then slowly opening her maw, revealing spotless teeth, tons of saliva, and one naked tiny being pleasure by the movements of the tongue.

She wanted to see his pleasure, so she levitated him right before her lips, as she slowly positioned the tip of her tongue to land directly against John’s penis. She then started to give the penis little licks, which slowly turned into full body licks. She then put him between her leathery lips and started to suck on his tiny little body like it was a piece of hard candy. John was in such a pleasure he couldn’t handle it anymore, and and with his trembling body, he released a load right onto the tip of Nightmare Star’s squishy tongue. This was the best orgasm he ever had, and he was glad he got it from such a gorgeous, gigantic goddess such as her.

Nightmare Star just giggled, and seductively blew her sweet, peachy breath over the tiny John, “I expected more of such a tiny creature such as you. I can’t even feel this seed of yours. Such a pity. But no matter, you have done a great job inside my mouth, and for that I will let you live one more day.”

John then watches as she swallowed once again, her mouth clean of excess saliva and his seed. “Time for you to return to the place you belong to, and have a little rest. I will require more from you soon.” Nightmare Star seductively said, as she levitated John back into her mouth, dropping on top of her tongue, where he quickly fell asleep after such hard work. He felt this was his true home.