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A young man distraught with the loss of his raven haired twin sister commits suicide and wakes up in equestria,finds love,a P.Oed monarch, and a... Dragonequus?!?! Rated T for gore and launguage. And this is my first story. Please if you don't like don't troll it.
Prolouge
'Time continues and the world spins.
Treasure these little thing because they can suddenly end.
Remember the good.
And slip into eternal rest.....'
A red haired girl sat on a bed as she said this a loud flatline signal beeped replacing the continuos beeping.
As her hand fell and her eyes closed a single tear fell on to a small discord plushie
Ash walked towards the hospital one day after school. He was smiling because his new girlfriend had just asked him to prom.
'I can't wait to tell Summer about this!' he thought happily
As he arrived he walked over to his sisters room- as they were wheeling her out. Ice cold terror washed over him as he saw this.
"M-mom...?" he asked quietly to his sobbing mother.
"Sh-sh- SHE'S GONE!" she managed to wail before breaking down.
His eyes widened brimming with tears as he texted Raven. He then called a cab.
Once he was home he ran to her room.
"Summer....." he sobbed as he picked up her guitar that was worn at certain frets.
He turned on her iPod and turned it to her favorite song and the song she won first prize at a world-wide talent show.
He subconsciously started strumming and singing.
I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house
That don’t bother me
I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out
I’m not afraid to cry every once in a while
Even though going on with you gone still upsets me
There are days every now and again I pretend I’m ok
But that’s not what gets me
What hurts the most
Was being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was tryin’ to do
It’s hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go
But I’m doin’ It
It’s hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and I’m alone
Still Harder
Getting up, getting dressed, livin’ with this regret
But I know if I could do it over
I would trade give away all the words that I saved in my heart
That I left unspoken
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
Not seeing that loving you
That’s what I was trying to do
He sighed as he put the guitar down. He looked at her nightstand and saw a slip of paper on a box. It wasn't there yesterday.
'She must've written it when she was home gathering her clothes.' he decided as he read the paper
To Ash.
Do no open untill it is past my time.
Tears brimmed his eyes as he opened the box where he gasped.
Inside was a beautiful scrapbook that help all of their pictures.
It started with their first birthday and went to when they first discovered My Little Pony.
He cried as he reached the end where there was a bracelet and a letter.
The bracelet had the words "Life is a treasure" on it.
He put it on and read the letter.
Dear Ash
Don't cry during my passing. I've known this was coming for ages. Your support helped me the most. The laugh you gave me when you brought me all the ponies you could find to the day we just sat there and bawled about the inevitable. I am in a better place now. Remember our song? Barbecuing Barbie? Try that. It always made us laugh. Remember our wild Friday nights? Remember the good not the bad dear Ash. I will watch over you untill the world ends.
Love your angel
Summer.
As he sat staring at the paper he felt tears streaming down his face at this he closed the scrapbook and took the box which rattled into his room. He looked and saw all of her money. The hundred dollars she collected.
He finally broke down as he lay on his bed tears streaming down his face and he sat bawling screaming her name.
Ash sat staring at the wall.
'How long has it been? A month?' he asked himself sadly.
"She was going to die.. Stupid Liver Cancer!!" he yelled punching the door
He looked at his most recent picture. It showed him and Raven at the prom.
He was wearing a black suit with a red rose. Raven had a hot pink rose in her hair.
He smiled as his phone buzzed.
"Hi Raven!" he said cheerfully
"Hey... Um this isn't working out for me... I'm sorry.. We can't be together..." she said bluntly.
He gasped as he dropped his phone and started to sob.
"IT'S BEEN A FUCKING MONTH!!! THAT BITCH!!"
He picked up Summers guitar and started to strum Mr. Brightside
He finished singing as he put the guitar down .He closed his eyes and opened them.
He had snapped.
He spent that night writing his final letter. He didn't have any reason left to live so why bother.
He felt a lick and saw Summers cat Pearl look at him with worried eyes.
He smiled and picked her up
"I wonder what I did wrong?" he asked her. "My sisters gone... My girlfriend just dumped me.... Why?" he asked as he went on the computer and turned on the first my little pony episode and watched all of season one and two.
"I can't watch season 3..." he muttered to himself..
He heard a whisper telling him to watch it for her.
He watched season three untill the sun came up and he smiled at the plan he came up with.
The next day he took a knife to school. He planed to find out why it wouldnt work out. That when he saw them
Raven was with Bryan the sports star of the school. EVERY GIRL wanted him. He saw them making out.
He marched right over to her and slapped her.
"WHAT THE HECK?!?!" she yelled rubbing her face.
"YOU THOUGHT IT WOULD BE OK TO DUMP ME AND GET A BOYFRIEND THE NEXT DAY?!?!" he yelled in rage and took out the knife and made it catch the sun.
"A-ash..." she said her eyes wide with fear.
"YOU HEARTLESS WOMAN!!" he screeched taking a threatening step towards her.
"YOU FUCKING SLUT OF A BITCH!!! YOUR A FUCKING WHORE WHO ONLY FUCKING CARES ABOUT YOUR FUCKING SELF!"
Her eyes relized what he was going to do.
He smiled as he. Ran towards her and sliced her neck...
He closed his eyes and smiled. He saw that he had knifed her boyfriend. He started to cackle maniacally and stabbed her heart and tore it out. Smiling still he ripped it in half and used it to choke everyone else. When he was done he relized what he did and put the knife on his wrist carful not to hurt the bracelet he slashed. It was deep and blood gushed out inmedietly. He smiled at the pain and went deeper. He heard a grinding noise as he relized he hit bone. He went to the other side angreat bone there to. He did the same thing with the other wrist and smiled as he felt himself slip.
The last thing he saw was Summers face.
Ash groaned as he opened his eyes and let out a scream.
Sitting right infront of him was a female dragoneqqus.
"Did I scare ya'?" she asked inbetween giggles.
"WHAT THE FUCK YOU BITCH!?" he yelled trying to stand.
"Well sorr-ey!" she said rolling her eyes." Well who the hell are you?" she growled
"I'm A- Night Ashes. My name is Night Ashes."
"Ok- fine. Go find another idiot to yell at." she said before dissapearing.
"Um that was akward..." he said as he took a step. He looked down and saw a midnight blue hoof.
"WHAT THE HECK!" he screamed look ing at himself. "I'm a pony!" he said joyfully as he looked up. "A unicorn!" he said happily as he looked at his flank.
"Ok that's cool!" he said looking at his cutie mark. A bloodied butcher knife.
He then realized somthing as he sat down.
"Summer...." he started to cry.
After five hours of crying he started to walk on- sniffling of course untill he found a little house.
"Hello??" he called and saw that nobody was there he walked forward.
He reached the kitchen and opened the fridge. Inside was a hayburger.
"Oh yes!" he exclaimed and he picked up the burger with his teeth and ate it.
He continued to explore and once he was done he went into the bedroom where- on the bed were the scrapbook and bracelet.
His eyes watered up as he put the bracelet on.
He lay in bed and tried to lift up the scrap book. Instead he lifted up a book on magic. He looked over the side of the bed and gasped as he saw a few books.
"History of Equestria: a what to know guide, Magic for foals, The Sun Emporer and Lunar Republic- all important figures, and- The element of Harmony..." he said as he read the titles.
"I guess I should learn history first..." he said as he opened the first book.
He read untill he fell asleep- the book was in his arms.
The next morning he woke up with a pair of lavender eyes glaring at him.
"And just who are you?"
EIRLIER THAT DAY
"Uggggg..." groaned a dragoneqqusess.
She blinked open her eyes and instantly recognized the area- and the feeling.
"I'm in equestria! And I just woke from a coma." she said Remembering the feeling she had multiple times before.
"Ok... My name is Summer and I recently... Died from cancer!" she exclaimed realizing what happend
She looked around and saw a midnight blue stallion asleep a few feet away.
"Omg a pony!! I must think of a name!!" she said excitedly as she started to think.
"Hmm Chaos Mist!" she said excitedly as she got close to the Ponys snout and looked into his eyes.
He soon woke up and screamed.
Did I scare ya'?" she asked inbetween giggles.
"Um yeah!" he said trying to stand.
"I'm Chaos Mist by the way! Call me Chaos!" she smiled
"I'm A- Night Ashes. My name is Night Ashes."
"Ok- look I have to go." she said before dissapearing.
She flew over to a small clearing and sat down.
She created a chocolate rain cloud and started to think.
"Why did that pony seem so familer... I think I'll spy on him!" she said excitedly as she poofed behind a tree by the clearing she saw him in.
"No..." she said as her eyes widened. Because sitting there was her brother screaming her name bawling.
"Ash..." she said. She was about to go comfort him but somthing stopped her.
"I need to form a plan..." She said before slithering of. Before she left somthing caught her eye.
"It's the bracelet and the scrapbook I made!" she said shocked. She looked around for a place to put it and saw a small house.
"Perfect!" she exclaimed as she teleported there. She put the things down, gave him some books, and made him a cheese burger.
"Now to make sure he finds the house..! I'll send him off that way!" she exclaimed as she reached into his mind and gave him a small push.
"Now to watch.." she said as she turned into a butterfly.
She watched him untill they fell asleep.
She smiled as she fell asleep. They were together agin.
Together in harmony.
AHHH!" Ash screamed as he backed away from the owner of the eyes.
"Who the hay are you?!" the female voice asked.
He eyed her. She was a purple unicorn with a pink mane.
"GET OUT!" she yelled.
He picked up his stuff and ran- only to stumble across a bloodied ,battered,dying sky blue unicorn.
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"H-help Trixie..." she muttered weakly.
He had been able to teleport a leaf to him last night so he focused teleporting a glass of water.
Once it appeared he pushed it to her lips which she greedily drunk.
He then teleported some hay.
This process went on untill she could stand again.
"Thank you." she said gratefully.
"Your welcome! I'm Night Ashes by the way. What were you doing here?" he asked
"Trixie was run out of a town called ponyville. All of Trixie's things were smashed and lost. Including Trixies bits." she She sighed sadly,
"Well why don't we stick together? I'm lost and this is all I have." he said
"Trixie would like that." she responded
"Ok let me set up a shelter and I'll go find us some wood." he said as she nodded
He soon built a little hut with leaves and twigs.
"Now you stay here." he said as she nodded
He started to wander around the forest looking for food.
He soon came across a big apple tree which was overflowing with apples.
He gave the tree and hard buck and quickly made a few baskets to carry them in.
He walked back to the camp where he found a small spring in the middle.
"Trixie I found a ton of apples!" he said as a beautiful wet Trixie came from behind the shed.
"Oh! Those look wonderful Night!" she said enthusiacly.
"Tri- I mean I made a spring." she said happily.
"Oh! Thats great!" he said as he put the apples down.
"I also made a little food room." she countinued as she pointed her hoof towards a small hut.
He nodded and put the apples in it. As he walked out he came nose to nose with Trixie.
"Oh I'm sorry!" Trixie said as she pulled away.
"oh it's fine- lets hit the hay." he said as he stiffed a yawn.
She nodded as they went into a blissful sleep.
When Ash woke up Trixie was still asleep so he went into the forest only to come face to face with the dragoneqqus
"Oh hey Ash." she said
"How do you know my name!" he said as she covered her mouth.
"Well no hiding it know.." she sighed sadly.
"Hide what?!" he said angrily.
"Err ash.." she began
"WHAT?!" he yelled
"It's me- Summer."
Tears were running down Ashs face as he jumped into her arms.
"Summer!! I've missed you so much!" he said as he was bawling.
"I have to Ash." she replied a soft smile on her face.
"Did you arrive the day I died?" he asked and she nodded.
"Yeah not to pleased about that." she said sternly
"You do know you can't tell me what to do- right?" he said laughing
"No- I'm a dragoneqqus- I can do anything!" she said as she snapped her claws.
He was instantly covered in chocolate rain.
"Oh yeah?" he said as he moved the cloud over her.
"Oh. It. Is. On!" she said as she was getting drenched
They had a chocolate cotton candy fight untill Trixie walked into the clearing and screamed
"NIGHT! THATS A DRAGONEQQUS!!" she screeched
"Trixie- this is a friend of mine- meet Chaos mist." he explained.
"O-ok... I'm Trixie." she said hesetently reaching a hoof out.
"Well hi!" Summer said shaking it.
"Want to have some cotton candy?" he asked her and got an eager nod. He then passed the cloud over to her.
"She's nice!" Trixie said with a mouthful of cotton candy.
"Yep! Now let's go for a walk!" he said she nodded and they set off together.
They soon reached a lake where he sat down with her.
"can you swim?" he asked and she nodded her head.
He then knocked her in and jumped in after her.
"hey!" she growled playfully and splashed him.
"CANNON BALL!!" Summer screamed as she jumped in.
"AHHH!" they both screamed as they were splashed by a wave of water.
"CHAOS!!" he yelled as he tackled her.
They played like this for a while untill it got dark.
"Let's go back to camp." Ash suggested and they all nodded.
Once they got back to camp they started to roast marshmallows.
"Hey Night- I have a question for you." Summer said waving him over.
He trotted over to her and asked "What is it?"
"Do you think you can free discord?" she asked
He nodded his head and focused on the statue and teleported to it.
"Ok...." he said quietly as he channeled his energy
The stone started to crack and as soon as the stone was gone a loud cackle was heard.
"Muahhahahahahahah!!!!"
"Now today a young girl named Katie Story went missing...." the news reporter on the tv said
"Hey JAMES!" a young girl yelled in her brothers ear.
"What?! Say it louder my eardrums didn't burst." he said rolling his eyes.
"It's the season ten primere! " she said as she snatched the remote and turned to channel pony.
"You couldnt tell me that Autumn?!" he said annoyed.
"Hey you two- SHUT UP!" a third yelled. "I'm trying to listen to music and read!" she said showing them a book.
"Why? No love for ponies Jade?" Autumn teased
Jade threw her Braille book at her.
"Sheesh. Overreact much milky?" James teased.
"Your going to pay for that!" she said with a smile.
"SHHHH IT'S ON!" Autumn yelled and they sibling sat down to watch... Or listen in Jade case.
A small rusty colored wolf pup curled up on Jades lap and closed his eyes and gave what looked like a smile.
Jade whose eyes were closed the entire time opened them. They were a light blue milky color.
She sighed and picked up the pup.
"Oh Rusty..." She whispered as a tear fell.
He whined and licked it away.
She put him down on what she thought was the floor but was a table and walked upstairs into her room with Rusty following.
As the show countinued a picture started glowing. In the pair picture were a pale girl with orangeish blond hair and a pale boy with jet black hair. On the bottom read rip Ash and Summer.
As Jade got to her room she closed the door and let it all fall.
"Why.. Why am I so different?!" she sobbed sadly. Rusty whined and lay her head on Jades lap.
"Why!? Milky...Brighteyes... Animal... Trash.. Useless...." she sobbed listing the names she was called.
Now James and Autumn knew nothing about this. She never told a soul.
The twelve year old sighed and moved her hand on to a knife. It had blood stains on it.
"Why is this my only get away?" she sighed as she rolled up her shirt and made a small cut. Her stomach was covered in scars.
She put the knife down and went downstairs.
"Where'd you go Brighteyes?" Autumn asked
She screached in pain at that. The cut she made was way to deep.
"WHAT THE FUUUUUUCK?!?!?!" she screeched as she almost fainted
But at that second all the pictures with Summer and Ash in them glowed and all three of them were engulfed in a bright light.
When the light vanished Autumn,James, Jade and Rusty were gone.
"I must thank you friend. I expected to be in there much longer." Discord said with a cakle.
"Yeah if we stay here your going to the moon." Ash said as his horn glowed
"Come now-" Discord started only to be cut off by a bright light.
When the light faded three foals were knocked out on the ground.
"Look we need to go!" Ashe said as he levitated the foals onto his back.
"Fine..." discord said as he teleported them to the image that Ash was going to teleport to.
The second he appeared there were two screams.
One of joy and one of terror.
"DISCORD!" the two females screeched
Summer tackled him in a hug while Trixie was poised to attack.
"Ahhh.. A female dragoneqqes..." he said happily.
"NIGHT ASHES WHAT DID YOU DO?!" Trixie screamed angrily.
"I only got my sister a love.." he said but instantly covered his mouth.
"Sister???" Trixie asked curiously all terror and anger washed away..
"Our real names are Summer and Ash and we are twin siblings. Because we are actually-" Ash began but was cut off
"Humans. My finest creation of chaos I must say." Discord finished as he was being smothered by Chaos.
"Yeah.. Now Trixs please make three more beds... These three appeared behind us." he said pointing his horn at the foals.
Trixie gasped and was off like a rocket while Ash tried to wake them up.
"Wh......." the lime green unicorn said as she stirred and opened her eyes and let out a scream.
"WHAT THE FUCK?! I HAVE FOUR LEGS?!?! WHAT THE HELL?!" she screamed blinking her milky blue eyes
"Shut up Jade I'm trying to sleep... James your on my tail.. Wait. TAIL?!" the hot pink unicorn filly jumped up
"IM A PONY!!" she screeched as she jumped into the air
The midnight blue pegasus colt stood up and flexed his wings.
"Sweet.. Pony!" he said excitedly.
The two saw there sister and instantly were at her side.
"Hi.. My names Ash and this is Summer." Ash said to the little foals.
"I'm Jade and these two are James and Autumn." Jade said with a smile.
"We had a older bro-"Jade started but was cut off by joyfull yips as Rusty ran to her.
"Rusty!" she said nuzzling her pup.
"As I was saying . We had a older brother named Ash and an older sister named Summer... Ash died of cancer at the same time as Summer." she said
"Well then Jade. I'm your older brother. But I actually took a knife to my wrist." he said
"DISCORD!"
(A random but nessicary bit!)
Katie Story was trotting down a street with Bevca and Patrick.
"Sooo Arrowhawk.... What you want to do today???" Katie asked Patrick with a wink
"I have an idea.... What about you think Glitter Sparkle??" she asked Becca.
"Lets go to the woods. I want to create a radio!!" she exclaimed jumping in the air and Levitating her friends as she ran towards the forest.
"DISCORD!" the sun goddes yelled loudly
"How have you escaped!!" she yelled. "And this time your on the moon. In stone. ALL OF YOU!"
"I released him." Ash said walking up to her face. "And I plan on having him stay like this." he said boldly.
"Oh?" she said unamused "Why is that?"
"Because I LOVE HIM!" Summer said bowling her over
The sun goddess's eyes widened as her horn flared to life and then out of the Shadows came a cloaked figure.
"WE DEMAND TOUGH TELL US WHO TOUGH ARE!" The new figure said using the royal canterlot voice.
"Umm no you big loud mouth nightmare!!!!!" Summer said
"WE ARTH NO NIGHTMARE YE FEINDISH BEAST!" she yelled her horn flaring.
"Ok Mrs. Evil Nightmare Queen of the Moon." she said flicking a claw.
"WHAT DID THOUGH CALL US!!" she yelled on the verge of tears.
"I SAID YOUR A EVIL NIGHTMARE MOON!" she said
Luna broke down right there and started to bawl
Summer just laughed as the Lunar entity sat bawling.
"You need to lighten up Moony!" she said lifting her up untill they were face to face.
"It's called a joke!" she laughed drenching her in chocolate milk.
"Mabey miss solar flare over here can tell Us what to do Moony!" she giggled as the others stood- jaws wide. Discord was crying with laughter.
"Her fatness.." she said howling.
"Wh-?!" Celestia said gaping
"You need a treadmill!" she said howling
That snapped Celestia,With the strength the sun she shot a blinding white beam at the five ponies.
Summer was frozen in a field of magic and closed her eyes- ready. Then in panic for his family and friends Ash's horn lit up and his eyes turned white. The solar entities froze.
"That's-" Celestia started before she was cut off by a similar occurrence happening to the female dragoneqqus.
A bright light engulfed them all and in a flash- the only things that remained were the Princesses.
During this teleportation an error occurred. The two adult unicorns separated from the rest of the group as they appeared. While the others woke up in the everfree next the Moonlight Path and her friends the unicorns woke up in a library.
"TRIXIE!"
I'm sorry this story's been practically abandoned but I plan to get into it soon. I've had a very whacked up summer so do not think I have abandoned it!