Confusing. Just confusing.

by Horacy

First published

Story about two ponies confessing theirs love to each others.

Two ponies named Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle have feelings for each others for quite a time now but are scared to confess them to each others. Author and pink pony helped in it of course.


This is my first story here so I'm open fore some criticism in the comments. Also my English isn't the best so watch out for bad grammar. I'm sorry if this story isn't appealing for you in any way. My bad then :fluttercry:

Warning! 4th wall-breaking involved! You have been warned!


Cover art by BJLouisiana2014 from Deviant Art

Suprising visit and writing the chapter together

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The day in Ponyville was very calm and everything was in place where it belong. Only one thing was strange. But no one knew what was that. One thing just wasn't normal. But what was it? Or what is it? Maybe it's still there, but we can't see it? Who knows?

Anyway, the day for all the ponies in Equestria were very smooth. Exept for Rainbow Dash. She should be at her flying routine at the moment, but she was in her home all day. She was thinking about one issue she has. That issue wasn't just a normal problem. No. It was something bigger. something more complicated.

It was problem about ... love.

Yes, about love. Beacuse why not?! Why it always is problem about love?! Because why not, so stop asking and continue reading! Jeez!

So, back to Equestria.

Rainbow was lying on her bed, thinking. What can she do to tell that certain pony about love what she have to that pony? What should she do? Every one kept telling her that she should just tell that pony. Just like that. Everything will be fine. You will see. They telling her.

But. Even if this seem to be easy, Rainbow Dash just can't go and tell that pony 'Oh! Hey. Ya know, I love you. let's go on a date'.

Rainbow smirked when she thought about this accually happen. Then, she heard her stomach singing a ritual song about wanting food. She got up from her bed and began heading to the kithcen for some daisy sandwiches she bought yesterday.

That pony's face in that restaurant, when she said that she want 6 sandwiches to be delivered to her home was heavenly. But about some arguing she said that it was a joke and took these daisy sandwiches with her to her home by herself.

When she opened the fridge she just bursted "What?!" when she saw that there weren't any sandwiches left. 'Did I ate them all yesterday?!' she thought. She then closed the fridge with loud *THUD* and started heading to grab something to eat in Ponyville. Why? Because she ain't a cooker!

5 minutes later.

Rainbow was standing in front of her favourite restaurant. Well, it accually wasn't restaurant but a funny constuction what looks like funky shed. Rainbow got closer and said "Hey there buddy!"

Pony in that shed turn around and smiled when he saw his loyal customer. "Hey Rainbow. What can I do for you?"

"Can you make me daisy sandwich on takeaway?"

"Sure!" He then turn around and said when started getting components "But you don't want this masterpiece delivered to your house right? You still remember that I'm an Earth pony."

"Oh! I already told you that! It was a joke." Two of them then started giggle when Rainbow finished "But your face was worth it!"

"OK, OK. You got me back then. I really thought that you want me to deliver these sandwiches to your home. I then thought 'bout throwing them and screaming 'Rainbow! I have your sandwiches!' Ha ha ha." Rainbow bursted laughing at that.

In about a while pony from shed turn around facing Rainbow Dash and held a daisy sandwich in hoofs and said "Here you are Rainbow. It will be 3 bits."

She put bits on the corner and took sandwich saying "Thanks. Bye" and she flew to her home.

At the same time.

Twilight Sparkle was heading to Rainbow's house when she saw her flying above. She screamed to her friend to get her attention. In about ten seconds flat Rainbow Dash was standing in front of her with sandwich in her hoof. She then said with mouth full of flavors form daisy sandwich "Heya Twi! What's up?"

Twilight just raised her eyebrow and said in confused tone "You where flying around eating sandwich?"

Rainbow Dash felt embarrassment. She just felt her cheeks getting hotter. Mainly because of standing in front of the pony that she had a crush on.

Wait... oh no! what have I done! I betrayed to you that she love Twilight! I wanted to keep it for a while longer but well, what's done is done. Back to Equestria!

Rainbow Dash just stood there in front of Twilight. Cheeks red. Twilight just stood in front of her, confused. She waved a hoof in front of Rainbow's eyes to get her attention. Dash blinked and looked at Twilight, cheeks more red than before. Then she answered "He-yeah. i w-was hungry s-so i just came here to g-get something to eat, heh."

Twilight's brow get higher if that's possible. "Rainbow are you sick. It is a little chilly but I tought that pegasi have more resistant to cold than other ponies."

Rainbow just stood there, unknow what to say. She was red all over her face. She didn't know what to say. She was scared. 'Wait, Rainbow scared? Never!' she thought, but then she looked at Twilight and she said in her mind 'Yep! So scared! I'm sooo bucking scared!!'

But should Rainbow just told her about or be a chicken to the end of her live? No, she must tell her. She have the perfect occasion.

Then she took a deep breath and said.

"Noooooo!"

Wait. It wasn't Rainbow Dash.

Then from the computer screen what was standing on author's desk came out Pinkie Pie screaming "You won't finish this story. I won't let you!"

I fell of my chair and looked at my desk. Here, was standing Pinkie Pie, very angry. And what are the rules of the Bronies Fandom?
1. Don't make Fluttershy cry.
2.Don't make Pinkie Pie angry.
3.If you screwed up first or second rule Pinkie will come to you and bucking end you!

Yep, I was screwed!

"Pinkie Pie?! What the hell are you doing here?! You can't be here! It's impossible! You are impossible!" I screamed and then hooped on my bed and pull my quilt on me leaving only my face uncover.

Pinkie was just giggling and said "Oh author, you're very funny! I think I said why I am here. I won't let you finish this story. And i'm not impossible, I'm just Pinkie! All brony fandom know that!"

"Wait, you know about brony fandom?"

Of course you silly. You don't know how this fandom started?"

I shook my head and then get off of my quilt and sat on my bed like normal human would. Pinkie then came closer to me, sat down and told me "Well, it started long log time ago, In a magical land of-"

"Can we skip that part? I heard it 5 times already."

Pinkie sighed and continued "Ok then. You know Lauren Faust right?"

I nodded my head in confirmation and kept listening her "Well some years ago i appeared in front of her. We had a little talk and then she said she will do a serial with me and my friends called My Little Pony. I was working with her back then but when she said that she don't want to continue this I came back to Equestria to my friends. That's about it."

"So you, Twilight, Celestia and every one are real?! And even Equestria is REAL?!"

"Well duh, what was you thinking. That someone just thinked 'Oh I know, how about this! We make a serial with little ponies!'?"

"Accually, yeah." At that comment she was laughing very hard. I giggled some times.

When she calmed down she said "You humans are strange. Every one think the same."

"Well, I am very sorry 'bout that you little fluffy pony" I said in the most hilarious tone i could get. Pinkie just smirked and said "Oh don't you start it!"

"Okay, wait. I have one more question. WHY THE HELL YOU SAID THAT YOU WON'T LET ME FINISH MY STORY?" i said, maybe a little too loud because Pinkie Pie was know hugging tightly my pillow.

"Because you're story is a crap. I know what you wanted to add there and i'm telling you that you can't just end it where you wanted to end it." she quit hugging my pillow and was standing on my bed. "You need to make that story a little more shocking and adventuristic and more interesting to read. And i know what I'm doing. I helped a lot of writers already and knowing that it's your first story, it is, was and will be my duty to help you." Then she lightly giggled and hopped on my chair and was facing my computer screen.

I came beside her and said "So, what you've got in mind?"

"I'll show you. Take a seat and watch me in work *happy horse noise*"


Here in Equestria would be very sunny day at the moment ... but it wasn't. It accually was very windy and rainy.

Twilight Sparkle was lying on her bed, in her home, reading books. She loves reading when it's raining outside. At this moment books were everything what meant something to her. But her assistant Spike came to her room and said slowly "Twilight. I'm sooo boooreeeed!"

Twiligh, with anger in her eyes looked at him and told him "You know what I will tell you so why you came here?!"

"Because there are no more books what I would like to read! C'mon Twilight, do something with me! Maybe some cooking or even clean the library! I would love to clean the library!" He then jumped on her bed and started jumping up and down. (yes up and down. Only Pinkie can jump left and right.)

Twilight with annoyed tone told him "Library is clean at the moment and you already cooked a cake with jewels And i really want to read this book at THIS moment so please, go."

Spike get off of Twilight's bed and left her room. Twilight looked at her clock and then continued reading her book. In silence.

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*

She then heard knocking on the window. She looked at it and saw Rainbow Dash who was signalising with her hooves that she want to come in.

Twilight sighed and opened the window with her magic. When she wanted to start telling her something, Rainbow Dash flew to her. Well it would accually be something normal but Rainbow was all wet.

Twilight jumped off of her bed and told her a little louder than normal "Rainbow! You're wet! Get off of the bed, I'll get you a towel so please don't soak my bed."

Rainbow Dash landed on the floor this time and with embarassment and little blush said "Heh, sorry Twi. I''l just stay here." and then she sit on the floor with wide smile.

In a while Twilight came back wiht a towel for her rainbow colored friend.

When Rainbow was dry she still was sitting on the floor when Twilight was lying on her bed looking at each others, smile never leaving Rainbow's face. Twilight then said in much calmer tone than before "Rainbow, when you're dry you can lie beside me, you know?"

"Oh yes, yes I'm coming." said Dash and then she hooped to the air and then landed on bed beside Twilight with little blush.

Twilight saw her blush and said "Rainbow everything alright? Accually why you came here?"

Now Rainbow was burning red and Twilight even more confused. Silence filled the room on about 5 minutes, then Rainbow Dash took big breath and said "Twilight. I came here to t-tell you ... that I ... l-love eh, you."

Rainbow red all over her and Twilight with big eyes and a small blush on her face were looking at each others. In each passed second Rainbow was thinking about running from here and Twilight was thinking what she should do. Second after second passed like hours. No one moved or said anything.

When Twilight wanted to tell something Rainbow cut her and said "It's ok Twi, I'll just leave." and then Rainbow bolted through the door and Twilight heard someone's *OUGH* beside that door's noises.

She ran down to the hall and saw Rarity with Spike on the couch. Rarity had the pack of beans from frezer on her head. She then saw Twilight and said "Oh hello darling, can you please tell me why Rainbow Dash bolted like that by your door throwing off of me my umbrella?"

Twilight looked at Spike and he jumped off of the couch and walked to his room, then said "You're doing this again Twilight. I will be waiting tomorrow for something for that as always." And by that to mares were alone in the main hall of library.

"What was that?" asked Rarity.

"I'll tell you another time."

Then Twilight sat beside Rarity and said "Well Rainbow came here and told me that she love me."

Rarity squeak and gave Twilight a tight hug then said "Oh darling, it's marvelous, I'm so ... wait, so why she ran off li- You refused her?!"

"Accually i wanted to but she didn't let me started my sentence."

Rarity hold her hooves on Twilight's cheeks and said very slowly "Twilight, tell me. Were you 100% sure that you don't like her that way?"

"No, i wanted to tell her tha-" Twilight didn't finished because of Rarity slaping her on her cheek.

"*OUH* What was that for?!"

"For hurting Rainbow's feeling darling." Then she sighed and looked at window. Twilight followed her gaze but saw just Ponyville.

When Rarity turned back to her, she said "Twilight, you need to fix this but for now, tell me. How are you feeling when she's beside you? When she is offering to help you. That kind of stuff."

Twilight was at lost of words. She accually didn't know if that will help in any way, but she just said what she found important to said "Well. I always like when she's around. Just looking at her makes me feel happy. How she's acting. How she impressed me sometimes. How happy she is." Pause. "When she's happy ... I'm happy. I like her ... colorfull mane, her eyes. And when she's beside me I fell very ... calm and safe. And I always have this funny feeling when she speaks my name. It just ... just ... c-correct. Oh no. I *gulped* love her. What have I done?! I broke her heart and mine as well. Ohh, why I was so blind! NNGH!" She wrapped her hooves around her head and sobbed a little.

Rarity wrapped her hoof around her comforting and said "It's okay darling. Better late than never. But now you need to find her and make it up to her. Explain that you didn't know or didn't realize that until now. Be honest with her." She then stood up.

Some second later Twilight stood up as well. Then she said "But R-Rarity. I don't know where she flew off! How I'll find her?" She now stood beside Rarity, her face all in tears.

Rarity hold her hoof to her chin, looked at window and said "Well, I think that Rainbow should be somewhere near Ponyville but not in. Maybe ... Sweet Apple Acres? I remmember when she said that she like to spend some calm Times here, to lie on some trees. You should go check there first... So Twilight, are you re-?" She cut herself off when she couldn't find twilight anywhere. She then looked at the doors which were opened. Not like before. "Pff... so Twilight couldn't wait huh? Well, I could gave her my um... wait. OH NO! MY UMBRELLA!" and she then bursted outside as well to search for her umbrella. Well good luck Rarity. I think you should search in some shops, for a new one. It's windy. The umbrella flew off already.

2 minutes after Rainbow bursted from Twilight's

Rainbow Dash landed on the one of the all of apple trees that was the highest, or just in the highest spot on that hill. Anyway, she landed, sat down, and cried.

Is Rainbow Dash tough? Yes!
Is Rainbow Dash awesome? Yep!
Is Rainbow Dash amazing? Hell yeah!
...
Is Rainbow Dash ... scared? ......... Yes. Yes, she is.

So why is Rainbow Dash keep telling everypony that she isn't scared of anything? Well, a loyal friend is a friend who never let his/her friends hanging down. Rainbow is a loyal pony. And if everypony think that she isn't scared of anything, then Rainbow is more loyal pony to them. They know that Rainbow will help them in everything. Simple is that.

But ... even Rainbow isn't scared of anything. She is scared of one thing.

For living her life without special somepony, somepony she love .... but don't love her like she do.

Her thoughts were closed. Only one thing kept repeating in her mind ... 'She rejected you.'."

"Rainbow Dash!" she heard. She looked down and saw Twilight Sparkle. Lovely pony, but so mean. Not mean like mean, but mean in a psyhical way.

She landed on the ground in front of her with red eyes, full of tears. She didn't mind about looking weak. She only wanted to be alone ... forever. Well she don't want that but she have no choice. She saw that Twilight was crying before as well. She said in hurtfull tone "Why were you crying? I am the one who should cry here."

"Rainbow, I'm sorry. I was stupid and b-blind a-and *sob* i hurted you ... so bad. If not Rarity I wouldn't know t-that i truly l-love you t-too. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. *sobs and tears falling on the ground* I was stupid that i threw your feelings like trash. I will do everything to repay you for that, b-but ... is there any chanse that you s-still l-l-love me?"

And here we are. Twilight was looking at her with her eyes full with tears on Rainbow's eyes with a little tear as well.

But there were some questions. Is Rainbow still angry on her? ... no. She just can't be angry at her.
Is Twilight lying to Rainbow to just make her happy? ... nah. Twilight isn's a good actress.
Is Twilight really love her? ... If not then she wouldn't cry that much. Right?

But the final question is. Is Rainbow want her back? As a mare-friend? Is she still want to love her, cuddle her, kiss her and everything?

Seconds passed, minutes and they stood here, in rain.

Then Twilight just hung her head low, turned around and said "I understand. I'll go then. Goodb-mmHHMM!" Twilight was cut because of Rainbow's lips meeting hers.

Twilight was melting here in Rainbow's embrace. But ... she felt safe. That strong hoof around her neck, pulling her to kiss and these soft lips of Rainbow's. That felt amazing to Twilight. That was a pony with who she want to spend all her life. She closed her eyes and pressed her lips harder to Rainbow's.

Rainbow's eyes shot open. She looked at Twilight's face and smiled to the kiss. She then closed her eyes again and went with that amazing feeling.

In Rainbow's and Twilight's mind was only one thing. To not let apart ever again. That really is truht what they saying. Single kiss mean more than thousand words. There wasn't need of any words or sentences. Nothing like 'I love you' or something like that. The kiss was everything to them at the moment.
The kiss was the most important thing to them at the moment.
The love to each others was the strongest one in all of Equestria.

The end.


"Wow! Pinkie! It really is an amazing story! You are the best! Thanks for help!" I said to Pinkie who was now bouncing on my bed. I didn't know that my bed was good to bouncing on it. But well, this is Pinkie Pie.

She then stopped bouncing, looked at me and said "I know right! It was super duper fun writing this chapter with you. When I was helping someone in writing good story it always was ONLY my job, but you helped me in it too. You had part in it too. So, congratulations!" and then she shot confetti from her party cannon. Where she was hiding it, I had no clue but who cares! It's party time!

"Heh, ok then. Wait here I'll grab something from my kitchen."

"Ok! *giggles*" and then i rushed to my kitchen to grab something ... fun.

When i was standing in front of my fridge I opened it and grabbed the best alcohol i had: Jack Daniel's. I headed back to my room and saw confetti everywhere. Pinkie was standing on my bed with a big smile and a piece of paper lying beside her.

"What's you have here Pinkie?" I asked and then put alkohol on my desk.

"You first! Is it some hard alkohol?!" she said with a big eyes.

I looked at the bottle and then back to her. Then I said "We can say that. And what's on that paper you have here?"

Then I saw a little red blush on her cheeks. She grabbed that piece of paper in her mouth and hold it steady for me to read it.

When i read it my cheeks get hotter as well, but her face was all red now. On the paper were four simple words: Me, you, bed, now!

I looked at her with a smirk on my face and then nodded to her. She just smiled even wider and jumped on me then kissing me. My eyes got bigger but in a meaning of time I closed them as well.

Then i put her on my bed, totally forgotting about that alcohow what was standing on my desk. And then I ---- SCENE MISSING!!

THE END.