Bedeviled Derpy

by Hoops

First published

Derpy has a deal with Discord and becomes discorded and captures ThunderLane and Dr. whooves, The foals have to try and save them

First: This will not conflict with my story Doctor Whooves and Thunderlane
Second: Thunderlane is in the TARDIS when all the sudden he hears Derpy talking to someone in a mirror...He spys on her. (because who wouldn't:derpytongue2:) He notices she is talking to Discord! Then she ties Thunderlane up... When she comes back Thunder notices that she has the Doctor kidnapped! Now the foals have to try and save Thunder and he has to gather his old friends from filly school to help him.




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Derpy whats going on?

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Well you already know me if you have read my other stories. But yesterday Derpy was acting strange. Ill tell the story...

"Guys I'm going out for a while." Doctor said as he left the Tardis.

I was just sitting in my bed with the foals, Dinky and Rumble, we were playing truth or dare when I heard Derpy talking to someone.

"Truth or dare Thunder?" Rumble said.

"Shhh quite I'm trying to listen to Derpy." I replied as I put my front hoof on Rumble's mouth.

"Who is she talking to?" Dinky said.

When Rumble got my hoof away from his mouth he repeated

"Truth or dare Thunder answer!" Rumble said.

"Fine dare." I said trying to make him shut up.

"I dare you to go see whats Derpy is doing." Rumble said.

I stopped and looked at him. "No you know I don't do that!" I said.

"I dared you didn't I?" Rumble said as Dinky started chanting "Do it, Do it"

"Fine. But you both have to do a dare when we get back." I said.

"We?" They said.

"Yup your coming." I said. When we got to the opening of Derpy's room she was putting clothes on. She covered her bad eye and the started talking to someone in the Mirror. It was Discord. The foals went back to the room. I kept watching. Then suddenly Derpy came out of her room. She looked at me. I looked at her. She went back in her room. I was trying to get away but she was coming for me. She had ropes. I bet you can guess what happened next. I blacked out.
Twenty minutes later Derpy came back with the Doctor tied up. He had tape over his mouth. I didn't

"Derpy are you insane?" I said " What are you doing?" Then she stared at me with her devilish eyes.

"You Doctors are all alike. YOU ALL HATE ME!" She said

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Foals perspective now :)

"What are we going to do!?" Rumble said. "My brother has been, well kidnapped!"

"You think this isn't hard for me too! My sister just kidnapped the Doctor and your brother!" Dinky said.

"I didn't mean that... Anyway we need a plan!" Rumble said.

"Well, I think, if we find the elements of harmony we could turn her back!" Dinky said as she admired her statement.

"Last time I tried to use the TARDIS to find the elements of harmony I ended up seeing how I was born.. It was horrible." Rumble said.

"Why did you need the elements of harmony?" Dinky said puzzled.

"When my brother was Discorded." Rumble said acting like it was nothing to him.

"Oh.. well ok well-." Dinky said but was interrupted by the door opening.

"Run." Rumble said.

Derpy tried to grab the foals but they were to fast and went through her legs. Derpy grabbed Rumble as Dinky grabbed a bat. She couldn't decide. She knew her sister was Discorded, but she still loved her.

"What are you waiting for! Hit her." Rumble said.

With much thought she knocked out her sister. She was going to wake up. The two foals punched in numbers and the actually got the right time zone.

"Now, who should we find first." Dinky said.

"Well we need to find Rare Find, Soarin, and Luna's #1 guard, also know as Quest Find." Rumble said.

"Lets find Quest first." Dinky said" Just incase Derpy comes looking for us. Plus we are already in Canterlot."

So the foals travel all of Canterlot. A lot of people asked where Derpy and Thunder are. They said they went to get ice-cream. When they got to the castle, Quest was sitting at the gate.

"Quest find! You need to help us-" Rumble got interrupted.

"Who are you foals! State your identity!" Quest find said.

"It's me Rumble, Thunderlanes brother! This is Dinky, Derpy hooves sister." Rumble said.

"Hmm whats Thunder's favorite movie?" Quest said.

"Pon-E. Everyone knows that." Rumble said.

"Whats Derpy's favorite movie?" Quest said.

"Ponians." Dinky said.

"It is you guys!" Quest said after much thought about the answers.

"Will you come with us?" Rumble said.

"Well, we need to ask Luna." Quest said.

"We get to meet the princess?!" Rumble said very excited.

"Yup now follow me." Quest said.

So the foals followed Quest through out the whole castle. You don't realize how big the castle is until you are in it. When they finally reached Luna's room Quest does a special knock and the door opens.

"Hey Luna, I was wondering If I could take the next few days off?" Quest said.

"Why must you leave?" Luna said. "And who are these foals?"

"Well apparently Derpy got Discorded so they need my help turning her back. She has kidnapped the Doctor and Thunderlane." Quest said.

"Well that seams urgent. You may be dismissed from your duties." Luna said.

"Yes!" Quest said.

"Luna may we stay for dinner?" Dinky said.

"Wait what?" Quest said.

"Sure! I love company!" Luna said. "It gets lonely up here."

"Well I need a nap, In tired." Rumble said.

"Me too!" Dinky said,

"Hey Luna, do you want to make this like old times and let me guard you again?" Quest said.

"Sure!" Luna said in a cheerful mood.

TO BE CONTINUED