by TJ1122334

First published

A spur of the moment decision sends Artimus and his sister Dawn, on a dangerous path.

After living with the Yalnız tribe for the majority of their lives, Artimus and his sister Dawn, seeking adventure, decide to leave in hopes of a better and more interesting life, but with war looming on the horizon, will it really be a good choice? Little do they know, they are going to soon become entangled in a war they never knew existed, tough decisions will follow, that may ultimately decide the fate of both their lives, and those of their nation.

First story, which means let loose with all the criticism, I'm hoping to improve. So telling you to go easy with the criticism is just pointless. Hope ya' enjoy it!