Different Places

by Fab

First published

Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are dragged into another world, since Twilight Sparkle tried a new trick that threw them into another world. Now they are left to go and fight dangerous creatures together..

Since twilight tried her new trick releasing another world portal, Fluttershy and Rainboww Dash walked past. They got caught in the portal and now left to find equestria again.

I might release 5 chapters, depending if you like it or not.

This was my first story, I was thinking about finishing.. It was really bad. So it's cancelled.

I hope you enjoy the first part of the story. You're left wondering what happens next?

Chapter 1: Twilights Spell.

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Well, it was just a normal day in Ponyville, nothing gone wrong until Twilight was trying a new spell to another universe. Not near Equestria but a spell that Princess Celestia wanted Twilight to learn. RD(Rainbow Dash) were practising a new technique that she wanted to do. Fluttershy was cheering for her and doing everything she could to support her.

"Hey, Fluttershy?" Said the blue pegasus flying down from finishing her last cloud spin.

"Oh.. Yes Rainbow?" Screeched the timid yellow pegasus.

"Would you try and cheer louder?" Screamed RD as loud as she could.

"I'll try my best.." Said Fluttershy.

Fluttershy was trying to scream(cheer) loud enough for RD's performance. Well, it wasn't really a perfomance-performance, but RD wanted to succeed to show the Wonderbolts how good she was at flying.

The timid pegasus took a deep breath "Yay"

"Your going to cheer for me like that?" annoyingly screeched RD.

"Louder"

"Yay"

"Ugh, never, but your still my friend and thats all that counts" Peacefully says RD.

"I'm glad i'm your friend rainbow"

They flew across ponyville, Twilight was trying to do her spell, they were flying past. They giggled a quick hello, and watched Twilight do her spell. RD was curious and accidentally dragged fluttershy beside her. She continued to fly through the portal. Eventually she made it through with Fluttershy by her side with a confused face. Also the portal closed down, it was too diffucult to do it more than once, said in Twilights book.

Twilight gathered the other 3 to come discuss with her. They had no idea, all they knew is that twilight came to their houses saying: "Come.. to my house.. in half an.. hour please" they were confused. The other 3( Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie pie) came in half an hour. Which was at 3:00 (At pony time.)

"What in the hay is going on Twi?" Bursted out of AJ (Applejack) as soon as she got there.

"Yeah! you were like a zombie when you came to my house!" Giggled Pinkie Pie.

"Oh dear! Your mane is a mess, darling! Oh also where is Rainbow dash and Fluttershy?" Asked rarity politely.

"You see, I tried my latest spell from Princess Celestia and she told me to practise it but, Rainbow Dash dragged Fluttershy and herself inside of it" Answered Twilight

"Oh!!!" Answered all the 3 mares.

Twilight had guilt of what had happened, she wishes she never told them about Rainbow Dash & Fluttershy, even though they might of found out themselves..She could of not told them until it was urgently needed. But probably would find out themselves.

"Thats terrible!!" Rarity gasped.

"Eh! They can find a way back to Equestria.. can they Twi?" Calmed AJ

"I'm not sure.." Twilight whispered.

"Maybe we can set up a-" Pinkie pie got cut off.

"NO!!!" The others shouted excluding Pinkie Pie.

They were worried about Rainbow dash and Fluttershy, about were they went.. and if they would get back..

"But there might be.. loads of dangerous creatures out there. Poor them will never survive!, someone get my fainting couch.." Rarity remembered.

There was dangerous creatures.. where they went.. Nopony knew where they were.. Nopony dared to go through the portal and save them..

"Well thanks for the meetin' Twi.., I'll, see y'all tomorrow.." Sneezed applejack "Achoo!, Bless me.

"Me too.. I wish I could stay but I have some dresses to make for a show in manehattan, Bye!" Rarity reported.

"Me too! I wish I could stay and chat about Fluttershy And Dashie!! And I can!!"

"Thank goodness pinkie.. someone will chat to me about it..

"Yeah, so what happened?" Giggled Pinkie

"Ok, long story short, Fluttershy, Dash stop by and watch me do spell, dash drags Fluttershy into the portal with her, the end" Twilight replied

"Well.. I can be miss serious sometimes twilight! Just kidding, but intense story.. You know where they are?"

"No?.. Im not a.. track robot.. or a robot or something?"

"'Y'Know Twilight, I always thought you were one..

Fluttershy and RD were waking up in a mysterious place, dash's hoof still hooked around Fluttershy's hoof, it just had to be that a Ursa Major had to be standing right infront of them, pretending to not notice them until they woke up.

"My head.." Whispered Fluttershy.

"Where are we?" Started RD

"Um.. Rainbow? Look behind you.." Warned Fluttershy

"What?" Sighed RD

" A Ursa MAJOR!!!" Screamed Fluttershy

"A what..? Fluttershy.. They dont exist!" Laughed RD

"Maybe you want to look behind you then..!" Shrieked Fluttershy

" I'll look then! There's nothing to be afraid-" Stopped RD

"Run.." Requested RD

They flew in different directions trying to distract it, RD flew and asked Fluttershy try to do the stare on it. She was scared alot.

"Help!" Fluttershy screamed.

The Ursa Major had broken Fluttershy's wing.

"Im coming!!" RD Promised

RD grabbed the Ursa Major's attention and swooped round and round until it got dizzy and fell. She grabbed Fluttershy in the nick of time.

She wrapped a leaf around her wing that she found from a tree.


Chapter 2 Coming Soon.

Chapter 2 Surprise Trailer Thing

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RD and Fluttershy, they have been through a Ursa Major, defeating it, and all they remembered, was their great friends, Twilight casting a spell and them going through it. They had a bit of memory loss.

"Fluttershy? Are you okay? You look bad.." Admitted RD well wrapping the leaves around her wing.

" I'm fine rainbow. I just have a few scratches on my belly, from that I'm fine." Explained Fluttershy

"I didn't even notice them!! I'm so sorry! This is all my fault.." RD Sobbed as mumbling "It's all my fault.. Im so sorry.."

" It's not your fault.. Um.. Uh..?" Fluttershy Mumbled as she dried RD's tears and told her "It's okay, it was a accident."

RD calmed down and finished "I'm glad to have you as a friend, Flutters.."

"Me too, now lets go.. Tame all these creatures..?, and then get back to Equestria and live happily ever after with our friends?" Breathed Fluttershy

"Ok!

Chapter 2: Where Are We?

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RD and Fluttershy, they have been through a Ursa Major, defeating it, and all they remembered, was their great friends, Twilight casting a spell and them going through it. They had a bit of memory loss.

"Fluttershy? Are you okay? You look bad.." Admitted RD well wrapping the leaves around her wing.

" I'm fine rainbow. I just have a few scratches on my belly, from that I'm fine." Explained Fluttershy

"I didn't even notice them!! I'm so sorry! This is all my fault.." RD Sobbed as mumbling "It's all my fault.. Im so sorry.."

" It's not your fault.. Um.. Uh..?" Fluttershy Mumbled as she dried RD's tears and told her "It's okay, it was a accident."

RD calmed down and finished "I'm glad to have you as a friend, Flutters.."

"Me too, now lets go.. Tame all these creatures..?, and then get back to Equestria and live happily ever after with our friends?" Breathed Fluttershy

"Ok!" Added RD

The 2 mares had been through a tough adventure so far.. What would upcome them next? Manticores? Dragons? What pony would know?

Back to the mane 4

Pinkie and Twilight had been chatting about what happened and things. It's finally the morning, Applejack and Rarity came over, since Pinkie had stayed all night with Twilight and got about, 1 hours sleep.

"Howdy Twi, find any way to get Flutter and Rainbow back?" Applejack Continued.

"I know Applejack it's simply dreadful that they have gone.." Rarity Interrupted.

"Well.. I have discussed-" Twilight got cut off.

"Yeah! We discussed like all night!" Pinkie pie screamed

"Well, I was about to say that Pinkie.. Until you interrupted me.." Twilight mumbled

"Well you best carry on then!" Pinkie Giggled.

"Well, the good news is that the Rainbow and Fluttershy are safe-" Twilight got cut-off

"Thank-" Rarity got cut-off aswell.

"The bad news is I cant teleport them back.. They are in a different place.. and if I opened the portal.. They would be far from there by now." Twilight Mentioned

The 3 ponies were saddened, even Pinkie Pie, that the fact their FRIENDS had to get back to equestria themselves.

"Oh dear! Can you try and look in books and try to find at least a spell" Rarity Continued

" I've already looked.. I cant find anything.." Twilight Sighed

"Ah don't think Ah have crossed any spells, since Ah am a earth pony after all." Applejack Complained

"Right.. Can we bake cupcakes?!" Pinkie snorted

"No! Not now pinkie.." Rarity explained

"Could we help Flutters by feeding and looking after her animals?" Rarity Remembered

"Of course.. If she gets back she wants her animals to be happy and healthy.. Doesn't she?

"Of course sugarcubes." Applejack replied

Back to Fluttershy And RD

They were about to go around a rocky corner.. What could be facing them there?, They finally approached the corner.. They saw

"A manticore!!" Fluttershy screamed.

The manticore chased RD and Fluttershy was sitting in a corner, and the Manticore approached Fluttershy, she tried

"Ok mr manticore.. Can you just go away? We wont do any harm to your? Home? Anything please mr manticore.." Sobbed Fluttershy

"Fluttershy! Use your stare!" RD Shouted

"I'm trying!" Fluttershy Screeched

Fluttershy had a really hard time doing her stare.. She didn't know if it was right after the vampire bats attacking. But she finally did it.

"Hey you! Who do you think you are trying to kill people! I'd just have to find your mother and tell her what you have been doing these past couple nights!" Fluttershy Shouted at the Manticore while doing the stare against it.

"Go Fluttershy!!" RD cheered

"I didn't know I had that in me.." Whispered Fluttershy

"Well I'm glad you did, because it saved our lives." Reasoned RD

"Wow.." Fluttershy Breathed

"Theres a big shadow around the corner! -Eep!-" Fluttershy Shivered

"I'm sure its nothin' " RD Replied

They went around the deep, mysterious big-shadowed corner well, thats what Fluttershy called it

" A deep, mysterious big-shadowed corner..? I mean, do we have to go through it?"




Chapter 3 Cancelled

Leaving it here.

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Sorry, I need to cancel this series. It was my first story and thought it was bad. I hope you enjoyed chapters 1,2 anyway. I am cancelling it because I know all the grammar mistakes, also I have learned much since I ever first started this story.

So yeah.. I just cancelled this series.


Hope you enjoy your fimfiction account and other stories,

Fab

P.S. I will be making BETTER stories than this! So be excited like Pinkie! :pinkiehappy: