Equestria Girls: Revenge on Sunset Shimmer

by IceDragonKing

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Can Twilight and her friends save Sunset Shimmer from a vengceful girl and her friends?

Two years ago, Freezia is one of the most popular girls in Canterlot High. But her life was completely ruined by Sunset Shimmer. And now, she had returned with her new friends to make Sunset pay for what did she had did to her with don't know that Sunset is now completely reformed.

* This is two weeks after Equestria Girls: Special Holidays Comic.
* The Equestrian counterpart of Freezia is the Dark Siren from the story name Island of Colossa.
* The counterparts of the humans in Naga College are the Nagas from the Naga Empire.

Exchange Students

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Chapter 1 Exchange Students

In an Alley...

"There she is..."Whispered A Girl in Cloak, standing behind her a two boys in cloak. They are watching at a girl with red/orange haired, that girl is none other than Sunset Shimmer.

"When do we abduct her?" asked Boy #1.

"Not yet. Just spying where did she go!" said A Girl in Cloak.

"But this is almost the time that we must go home!" said Boy #1.

"This is the final round of today. Then, we will go back to our homes. Regardless that she's lead us to her apartment or not," said A Girl in Cloak.

"Fine..."Said Boy #2 and he's follow her with the other cloaked boy. They are following Sunset Shimmer to wherever she go. Sunset's walking into the boutique of Rarity.

And she's walk out with Sweetie Belle and welcome her into the boutique. The trio are very disappoint in what did they found.

"So Freezia... can we go homes now?" asked Boy #1.

"... okay..." said Freezia and she's walk separate from them back to her house. While the others walk into the alley.

Next day, at a college known as Naga College, in the Music Room...

"BULDEO! MOR! MANG! APPU!" said Freezia.

"What now, Freezia?" asked Buldeo.

"I got this for all of you!" said Freezia and she's drop a paper on the desk.

"What is it?" asked Appu.

"New plan! We're going to Canterlot High in the exchange program," said Freezia.

"Did the Principal, CEO or-"Asked Mor and then Appu punches him at shoulder to stop.

"Just Principal," said Appu.

"But Mr. Vasuki is both Principal of our college and CEO of Naga Company," said Mor.

"Quit it guys! And focus!" said Freezia and all four them turn to listen to her.

"We're going to sneak in. Trying to be closest with Sunset as much as we can. And when she's drop her guard, BANG! I will have my revenge on her!" said Freezia.

"And we will have the money that you had promised us if we help you!" said Appu.

"Then it's settle. We're going to back to my former school!" said Freezia.

"KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!"

"Huh? Come in!" said Freezia and two boys walk into the room.

"Heard that you got a paper to sign in on the exchange program. Me and Ranjan wanna join!" said The Boy.

"*Sigh!* Okay Kaa... you and Ranjan can come with us," said Freezia and she's give them the paper to sign in.

"Now let's give this to Mr. Jacala Nag," said Kaa and he's walk out with Ranjan.

Meanwhile, in Equestria, at Castle of Twilight...

"Ooh... I'm always love to works but... this is too much now..." said Twilight.

"Since the whole Treasure Planet incident, who could have thought that Equestria will have a lot of provinces in space in a short time," said Spike.

"Look at all of this! Request to bring back the colorful mushrooms from the Province of Coltstile, need more weapons to defense Zebragoza, capital city of Province of Aragon.

And then this! More food and water supply for the colonies of Haylencia and Marenada in Province of New Equestria," said Twilight as she's drop two requesting messages

and looking around herself, there are still a lot of requesting messages around her.

"You better do that one, Twilight. That sounds very serious," said Spike.

"I know I just... I just... need a day off!" said Twilight.

"Why don't you let Princess Celestia and Princess Luna signing these stuffs?" asked Spike.

"I don't want to bother them. You know that," said Twilight.

"Hey wait! Why don't you copy the signature of yours and put them on all of these requesting messages?" asked Spike.

"That is nice idea!" said Twilight and she's use her magic to copy her signature and put them on all requesting messages.

"Now, as all work done. We should go for a rest!" said Spike.

"How about a vacation? At Canterlot High..." said Twilight.

"Sound nice to me!" said Spike.

Return of Freezia

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Chapter 2 Return Of Freezia

Next day, at Canterlot High, the Front lawn...

"We all are so happy to meet you again!" said Pinkie Pie as she's hugging Twilight.

"Hi there, Twilight..." said Sunset as she's wave her right hand to her. Then, turn to look at the others with a little sadness on her face.

"You're still upset about that, Sunset?" asked Applejack

"We all already said that we're very sorry for all awful things we did to you," said Fluttershy

"What had happened?" asked Twilight

"Long story, Twi," said Rainbow Dash

"Just a trouble that caused by Sweetie Belle and her friends and she is the one who get blamed," said Rarity.

"AAAAHHHH!" screamed The Crusaders as they are running away from The Almoravids.

"Ustedes tres se va a pagar por las fotos que ustedes tres aviso colocado en el Internet!" said Jafar.

"No one insulted the Emir of New Kingdom of Valencia and can getaway with it!" said Ibn.

"If you don't mind, I have to go and help Apple Bloom out from trouble," said Applejack and she's running after them.

"Wait for me, Applejack!" said Rainbow Dash.

"I won't let those guys hurt my little Sweetie Belle!" said Rarity and she's running after them with Applejack and Rainbow Dash.

Later, in one of the Hallways...

"So Equestria already go on space colonization now?!" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Of course, with the help of the Nagas," said Twilight.

"So how many colonies that your empire have now?" asked Applejack.

"Three provinces," said Twilight.

"And how many planets that one province have?" asked Rarity.

"The last time I check is... I don't remember now," said Twilight.

"It's okay, Twilight. We are also happy that your empire is now-" said Fluttershy and then she's accidetnally walk bump into someone.

"Oh! Very sorry! I didn't watch the way!" said Fluttershy.

"It's okay. And my name is Kaa. This is my best friend Ranjan," said Kaa and Ranjan gives her his hand and pull her up.

"You two must be the exchange students," said Sunset.

"There are more five of us at the Musical Room now," said Kaa as he's point his thump behind him.

"I would like to be the first to go greeting them!" said Sunset.

Later, at the Musical Room...

"So when do we do it?" asked Appu.

"Not until when she is alone!" whispered Freezia.

"What?!" asked Mor.

"We still have to wait?!" asked Mang.

"We all wanted to finish the job now!" whispered Buldeo.

"We all have to make sure that no one will suspect about us! Including Kaa and Ranjan!" whispered Freezia

"Hey you five!" said Sunset and then she's notice that the girl who sitting at the center look familiar.

"You looks familiar..." said Sunset as she's looking closer.

"Because I am..." said Freezia.

"Wait! Are you...?" asked Sunset.

"Freezia! YES! I AM THE GIRL WHO YOU HAD RUINED LIFE!" shouted Freezia.

"Freezia! I am very-" said Sunset.

"PROUD OF WHAT YOU DID TO ME! OH YES! YOU ARE! YOU STOLE FLASH FROM ME! YOU RUINED ME DURING THE FALL FORMAL! AND YOU TAKE MANY OF MY STUFFS AWAY FROM ME!" shouted Freezia.

"Freezia! Calm down, please!" said Sunset.

"Why should I?! You're no reasonable jerky girl" said Freezia.

"Freezia! Please stop!" said Sunset.

"You're nothing but a worthless piece of meat that even the dogs on the street don't want to eat!"Said Freezia and this makes Sunset can't hold her feeling and crying out and run away from her.

"Nice trying to make us go no being suspect, Freezia," said Buldeo.

"Oops. Sorry... I just... got angry..." said Freezia.

"Whatever. Just make this job get done," said Buldeo.

Weird Accidents

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Chapter 3 Weird Accidents

Later, in the Library...

"So what's the first plan?" asked Buldeo.

"The accidents," whispered Freezia.

"You mean make Sunset hurt like it was an accident?!" asked Mang.

"Absolutely!" whispered Freezia.

"Sound nice to me," whispered Mor.

"Aww! But I want to do the punching-thing!" whispered Appu.

"That would be second plan," whispered Freezia.

"Fine..." whispered Appu.

"Then let's do some accidents!" whispered Buldeo.

"No wait! We must make no ones suspect us first!" whispered Freezia.

"And how can we do that?" asked Buldeo.

"Just follow my plan," said Freezia.

At the Front lawn, near the Horse Statue, sitting under it is none other than Sunset Shimmer who is crying for being yelled by Freezia.

Then, her friends arrive and quickly rush to her and comfort her. They quickly ask why did she crying.

"Are you okay, Sunset?" asked Fluttershy.

"For me, I think you're not," said Rarity.

"Please tell us what took your smile," said Pinkie Pie.

"I... I just met the exchange students..." said Sunset.

"And they being bad to you?" asked Applejack.

"Not entirely... one of them is a former student of our school," said Sunset.

"And who could that be?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Freezia..." said Sunset.

"WHAT?!" asked Rarity.

"Are you all surprise?!" asked Sunset with tears still come out from her eyes.

"She is a very popular girl! She is also nice and a very lovely girl. She can't be rude and nasty!" said Rarity.

"But I think she is now. But can't blame her for her current behavior. I am the one who "pushed" her two years ago.

So that is mean I'm the one who responsible for her being bad like this," said Sunset.

"Well... that's kind of true. Back two years ago, you are completely bad, nasty, jerk and-" said Rainbow Dash and Applejack hit her on the shoulder.

"But she has no right to yelled at you like that. It is she now who is the bad one," said Twilight

"What did she yelled at you, darling?" asked Rarity

"She's called me "a worthless piece of meat that even the dogs on the street don't want to eat"," said Sunset and those words make Fluttershy, Twilight, Pinkie Pie and Rarity go shock.

"Well... those are very nasty words," said Rainbow Dash.

"What are you going to do before she's going to yell at you?" asked Twilight.

"I was about to apologize for the terrible things that I had done to her," said Sunset.

"From what did she just did to you. I don't think she's deserve it," said Rainbow Dash.

"But I have to set things right. If I just let her see me around with my good actions, I think she might be able to want to talk with me again," said Sunset.

"That might work," said Applejack.

"And of course, we will help you," said Twilight as she's offer her a hand to pull her up. Sunset's grab her hand and Twilight pulling her up.

Later, in the Hallways...

"Here she come!" whispered Mor and Mang quickly pour the water from the bucket on the floor. Sunset and her friends walk toward to the wet floor.

They all don't know what are lying ahead and then Sunset steps on the water and she's slip up. Her head is about to hit the floor

but Rainbow Dash and Applejack quickly grab her at arms and pull her up slowly.

At the Corner...

"I don't believe it!" said Freezia.

"What is it, Freezia?" asked Appu.

"I'm not familiar with the purple-haired girl but the other five are once hated Sunset as much as I do.

Actually, the last time I saw them. They don't even like or wanna talk with each other," said Freezia.

"It's two years. Everything can change, Freezia," said Buldeo.

"So... what's next?" asked Mor.

"I'm not giving up on the first plan yet! I still have other few tricks!" said Freezia.

Later, at the Computer Lab, Sunset is about to open the door and unbeknownst to her. Freezia and her goons put a bucket filled with leeches on the door.

But then, Sheikh Suleiman walks nearby her and when Sunset's open the door. The bucket filled with leeches is splash on Sheikh Suleiman.

Sunset quickly goes into the Computer Lab before thing will go uglier than it is now.

Later, at Lunch Time in Cafeteria, Sunset is eating her salad and mash potato and then turn to talking with Fluttershy. Unbeknownst to them, Freezia is under the table

and she's crawl up and put the chemical that mixed up by herself into her soda. Then, Rainbow Dash mistakenly grabs glass of soda of Sunset and drink it. Then, Rainbow Dash starts to

feel dizzy and fall to unconscious. Two hours later, she's wake up in the Nurse's room and found that her body is covered with pimples with the pus come out from them.

Later, at the Evening...

"Okay girls, time to go home now," said Rainbow Dash.

"From what I did I heard from all of you today, it's really weird," said Twilight.

"Yeah... it's look like that someone was trying to hurt Sunset," said Applejack.

"I think I know one. Freezia and her goons!" said Rainbow Dash.

"We can't just decide yet, Rainbow," said Fluttershy.

"Yeah!" said Pinkie Pie.

"Oh! Why is that?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"We have no evidence to use to against them! This whole pranky-thing can be caused by anyone!" said Rarity.

"Yeah... you are right... but they are still my prime suspect!" said Rainbow Dash.

"You're just angry that you found yourself got the pimples after two hours nap," said Applejack.

"Whatever. We have to do everything to protect Sunset," said Twilight.

"Thank you but I don't want to bother any of you," said Sunset.

"Oh dear! It's no trouble at all!" said Rarity and she's hug Sunset and then others join the hug. Behind them, Freezia and her goons are watching

from the dark of the corner. Freezia is still can't get rid of curiosity in these six girls. In her head, she's thinking that why are they being nice to her?

She is nothing but a bad girl who had ruined everyone lives. Whatever, this made her revenge plan on Sunset Shimmer go harder than she had thought previously.

But she didn't pay much attention of how did they become friends, but her attention is how to get rid of Sunset with her and her goons don't get suspect from them.

Escape from the Joinings!

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Chapter 4 Escape From The Joinings!

Later, at Freezia's mansion, in the Garage...

"So... what's the next plan?" asked Buldeo.

"Following her..." said Freezia.

"And how are we going to do that with her out of our sight? Because the last time we did, we lost her," said Mor.

"With the help of my latest invention..." said Mang and he's show them three red chips with blades in shape of X on them.

"And how can those help?" asked Appu.

"We all know that the robots that created by Naga Company, the Joining. When they are in inactivate mode,

they will be in form of being sit down with legs, hands and head sticking with," said Mang.

"Let me guess. You're going to upload these chips into three robots, aren't you?" asked Freezia.

"Of course!" said Mang.

"And what program that chips have?" asked Buldeo.

"All Joining have the chips that program that order them to defense its owner. But just defense, not elimination," said Mang.

"But these chips of yours. They will break that rule," said Freezia as she's smile out in evil.

"Absolutely!" said Mang.

"Oh Mang! You're such a genius!" said Freezia and she's kiss him on the cheek.

Later, in the Dead of the Night, at Room of Sunset in an Apartment...

"KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!"

"Hmm? Haa?" asked Sunset and she's come out from the bed and walk to the door. She's open the door and found a box before her with paper "Special Delivery to Sunset Shimmer".

"Special Delivery to me?" asked Sunset and she's open it and found three robots in the box.

"What are these things?" asked Sunset.

Meanwhile, at Freezia's mansion, in the Garage...

"Revenge Time!" said Freezia and she's grab one of the remote controls and sit on the big pillow along with Buldeo and Mang.

Mang quickly opens the televisions that link to each eyes of the Joinings in the box. Then, they press on the green buttons on the remotes.

In the meantime, at Room of Sunset in an Apartment, all three robots stand up out from the box, grab their laser spears and aim them to Sunset.

"Uh-oh!"Said Sunset and she's quickly run to hide in her bedroom. The Joinings following her, blasting the door and go inside. Then, the three robots have her cornered.

"Okay... umm..." said Sunset and she's looking around of what should she use to defense. Then, she's saw her trash can nearby. She's quickly grab it and throw it to them.

When they fall to the ground, she's grab the key of her room and quickly make her way to the door. She's run out of her room, locking the door and runaway.

She's run out of the apartment to outside. Outside, the weather becomes rainy and the sound of thunders are crashing in the sky.

Sunset is looking around to find a way to house of one of her friends. She's decide to go on the right side of her. As she's running away, the Joinings jump out through

the window of her room and jump down from upstairs and starting to run after her. Sunset is running as fast as she can, she's go into an alley and hide in a trash can.

The three killer robots run passed her. When she's see no any sign of them, she's slowly come out and quickly run to the nearest house of one of her friends.

As she's running, the weather starting to go worse. The air become colder, the rain is starting to raining heavier and the sound of the thunders are louder.

When she is about to give up, she's saw a house of her friend. It's Sweet Apple Acres! Sunset quickly run toward to it. She's stand near at the mailbox, trying to find a way to go in.

Then, she's heard a noise of foot steps coming from behind. She's turn to see that the Joinings that sent by Freezia and her friends are now coming closer to get her.

Ran out of choice, Sunset found an envelope in the mailbox. She's quickly open it, press her hand into the mud and writing the message on the back of the paper. Hope that Applejack will get it in the morning.

When she's finished, she's put it inside the envelope and put the envelope back into the mailbox. When the robots arrive, they use their laser spears to hit her at head.

Sunset falls down to unconscious and they carry her back to Freezia's mansion.

Meanwhile, in the Garage of Freezia's mansion...

"Okay boys... it looks like we have a very special guest tonight!"Said Freezia and she's smile out in evil way.

Breaking News!

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Chapter 5 Breaking News

Later, at Freezia's mansion, in the Private Zone 468...

"Here your money. About how to share, I let that up to the think of you guys," said Freezia as she's give them a bag of money.

"And don't your parents are going to kill you if they find out that you used their money without their permission?" asked Buldeo.

"My family are billionaire and also the descendants from at least five of the noble families from England since the time of Age of Discovery.

Most are the governors of English colonies in Virginia and New England. So we have too much of money in the safe to count in. So they won't know anything," said Freezia.

"Whatever. It's good doing business with you," said Buldeo and he's take the bag of money with him and he's leave with his friends.

"Now..." said Freezia and she's turn to look at tied up Susnet. Sunset have nothing but fear and feeling of hopeless in her.

"Time to close the Black List!" said Freezia with evil smile and she's walk to the door and go out.

"But not tonight... I want you... to suffer from hunger of food, water and fear of yours first!" said Freezia as she's closing the door and then she's walk away.

Next day, at Sweet Apple Acres, the Sun is rising and the rain had been stopped for a few hours ago. Applejack and Apple Bloom walk out from their house to get the letters.

"Now let's see what we got today," said Applejack and she's walk with Apple Bloom to the mailbox and grab the letters inside out.

They walk back inside the house and go straight into the kitchen where Granny Smith and Big Mac are eating their breakfast.

"Bill for electricity..." said Applejack and she's give it to Big Mac.

"And junk mails... a lot... like other day," said Applejack and she's drop them into the trash can.

"Hmm..." whispered Apple Bloom as she's eating a toast. She's looking at one of the junk mails. She's suspect that why the mail got the mud on it.

After finished her toast, she's stand up and grab it out from the trash can, open it and found the note that wrote by Sunset last night.

"BIS SIS!" shouted Apple Bloom and Applejack quickly run out from the bathroom with towel wrap around her body.

"What is it, Apple Bloom?" asked Applejack and she's give the muddy letter to her big sister. She's read it. Then her eyes go wide

and run into her room very fast and grab her phone and calling to her all of her friends.

"Rainbow! Called everybody! We got a trouble!" said Applejack.

Later, at Sugarcube Corner...

"Here!" said Applejack and she's give them the letter filled with message wrote out from mud by Sunset.

"We have to do something!" said Fluttershy.

"Like what? We're just the ordinary girls!" said Rarity.

"And who are responsible for this? Surely the robots can't just walk to front door," said Pinkie Pie.

"I think I know one! Freezia and her goons!" said Rainbow Dash.

"But we have no evidence!" said Twilight.

"Yeah... you can't just decided that they are behind this because they hate her," said Applejack.

"But what if they are?" asked Spike.

"Then we're going to rush out of here and rescue her!" said Rainbow Dash.

"Good thing that today is Saturday. We have the whole day to use for," said Applejack.

"So where should we start?" asked Twilight and then four familiar persons walk into the Sugarcube Corner. It's the goons who are working Freezia.

"What can I get you four?" asked Mrs. Cake

"Four milk teas and the eight of fried breads," said Buldeo and Mrs. Cake go get what they asked for. Then, she's hand over them two bags of snacks and drinks that they wanted.

"Okay guys. Let's move!" said Buldeo and he's walk out from the shop with his friends with two bags of snacks and drinks.

"Should we go after them?" asked Applejack.

"As that we have no other prime suspect..." said Rarity.

Later, at the Counter...

"Here the money," said Pinkie Pie as she's drop the money that she had gathered from her friends, except for Twilgiht. Because Rarity volunteered to paid for her instead.

"Thank you. See you all soon," said Mrs. Cake and the girls quickly run out from the shop and go after Buldeo and his friends.

After run out from the Sugarcube Corner, the girls are running after Buldeo and his friends back to their lair. In an old, abandoned Toy Factory.

In the Old Toy Factory...

"This can't go better than this now!" said Buldeo.

"We're rich now! And we can buy whatever we wanted!" said Mor.

"Speaking about that, who want to go buy tickets of the newest premiere round of Frozen with me?" asked Mang.

"I believe it would be... all of us! AHAHAHAHAAA!" laughed Appu and he's go to drink his milk tea.

"How about a such violent film called "Butt get Kicked"?!" asked A Voice and they all turn to look at the owner of the voices.

It's revealed to be Rainbow Dash and her friends are standing behide them.

"How did you found us?" asked Buldeo.

"How about you tell us what did Freezia is up to?!" asked Rainbow Dash.

"We knew that you helped her in her revenge against Sunset!" said Applejack.

"And what are you girls going to do? Flirting us to dead?" asked Appu.

"Nice question..."Said Applejack as she and Rainbow Dash grab their own hands and make them go cracking.

"If you are strong enough, go on!" said Buldeo.

One Fight Later...

"Ooh..." moaned Mor and Mang.

"And I thought that Freezia is a scary girl..." said Appu.

"What a shame! I was just defeated by the pathetic girls?!" asked Buldeo as Rainbow Dash is standing on him.

"Now let's talk again. What did Freezia want to do with Sunset?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Easy... vengeance is her!" said Buldeo.

Rescue Mission!

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Chapter 6 Rescue Mission!

Freezia's mansion, in Private Zone 468...

"Hungry aren't you?" asked Freezia as she's looking at the chained Sunset. She is now very hungry and her body is very dirty.

"Want some bread?" asked Freezia as she's hand over her a piece of bread. But when Sunset is about to grab it,

Freezia's pull her right hand out and make Sunset fall on the floor hard. The chain that tied her up at her left leg is very heavy.

She sees that this is too much for her but if it's going to make Freezia feel better, so she doesn't want to stop her to get her revenge.

"I should have end you when those robots captured you but... I think get rid of you by myself make me feel better!" said Freezia and she's take a bite on the bread.

"I like this side of you, Sunset. You're now look like a disgusting rat that I always knew that you are!" said Freezia and she's turn back on her and walk away to the door.

"I will let you suffer for a little more. At midnight, your fate will be sealed! Oh wait! It is already sealed! AHAHAHAHAAA!" laughed and she's walk out and close the door,

lock it from the outside and imprisoned Sunset in the room that have nothing but darkness. In the darkness, Sunset is secretly crying for the end of her life that will come at midnight.

Meanwhile, at Sweet Apple Acres...

"Psss...!" whispered Pinkie Pie and the girls are starting to wake up.

"It's time!" said Pinkie Pie and they all quickly get up, go to the bathroom, change their clothes and sneak out from Applejack's bedroom through the window.

"Okay girls! First, we go ask the aid from The Almoravids. And then, we go to Freezia's mansion, release Sunset and teach Freezia a lesson about the price of kidnapping someone!

So... any of you have questions?" asked Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's raise her hand up.

"Can we cut the part of teach her a lesson?" asked Fluttershy.

"Absolutely! That sounds a bit too violence!" said Rarity.

"How can you tell? Because you're not yet even see what I'm going to do to her" said Rainbow Dash.

"We're suppose to make her understand that Sunset is now no longer the bad girl. If we hurt Freezia, then we're no different from her," said Twilight.

"Fine... but if it's really necessary, I have to do what I have to do. Got it?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Well... that sounds good to me!" said Applejack.

"But why should we ask The Almoravids to help? Because... they are kind of... violence people," said Rarity.

"They are being as the front! As that they are luring all guards of the mansion to them, we will sneak in and set Sunset free!" said Rainbow Dash.

"And you really believe that fourteen of Muslim kids that arms with baseball bats, hockey gears and little firework stuffs can handle all of them?" asked Applejack.

"Hey! They didn't called themselves The Almoravids with no reason!" said Rainbow Dash.

"And the reason is what?" asked Pinkie Pie.

"They never been defeated easily! I do research about the original of the name and found out that during the time of 1086 to 1094, the time when they conqured Southern Spain.

They never been defeated by any Christian armies until the combined army led by El Cid had defeated them in 1094," said Rainbow Dash.

"I don't believe it! Rainbow Dash is good at history?!" asked Applejack.

"THIS IS THE END OF THE WORLD!" shouted Rarity.

"Calm down Rarity..." said Spike and she's rubbing his head against left leg of Rarity.

"So... are we done "out of line"?" asked Twilight.

"What do you mean by that, Twilight?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"It's mean that can we go rescue Sunset now?" asked Twilight.

"Oh yeah! Right! But first! Go and find The Almoravids!" said Rainbow Dash and she's run with her friends out from Sweet Apple Acres.

Later, at Temple of the Almoravids...

"Okay girls. Let gets in!" said Rainbow Dash and she's walk into the home of The Almoravids with her friends. As they're getting closer, they keep hearing the Arab-theme song and the voice of party louder.

"It's sound like that they're partying!" said Pinkie Pie with a big smile on her face. Then, they all get in quitely. What are they seeing before them is very unexpected.

"Who are those girls?!" asked Rarity as she and her friends are looking at three Moroccan girls in costumes for Arab Dancing Girls and are dancing in way that very seductive.

Surround by them are The Almoravids and four boys from school who were invited by them to join.

"What are you four doing here?!" asked Rainbow Dash and then one of them, Francisco Pizarro turns to look at the girls.

"What are you girls doing here?" asked Francisco.

"You're not yet answer me too! Why you, your brother, and you two friends are here?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Just here for fun!"Said Alonzo and behind him, Hernan Cortes and Gonzalo Pizarro are nod to them as the confirmation.

"Whatever... we're here to talk with those Muslims! If you guys don't mind, we have a work to do!" said Rainbow Dash and all four of them step aside and let the girls go inside.

"So... what are you ladies wanted us for?" asked Jafar

"Want those dresses? I presume," said Sokurah as she's pointing at the three Moroccan Girls in Arab Dancing Girl costumes.

"Not even close," said Applejack

"Speak about them, who are they?" asked Rarity

"Aisha, Aixa and Zaida. We rescued them from the slave traders from the other day," said Sheikh.

"As that they are homeless now, we give them home and food at here. In return, they perform the dance for us free," said Ibn.

"So... what are you girls doing here?" asked Jafar.

"We're going to ask you to help us in a very dangerous mission silly!" said Pinkie Pie.

"Help us free Sunset Shimmer. She is now a captive of a spoiled rich girl!" said Rarity.

"Can you help us?" asked Twilight.

"Pleaseeee!"Said Fluttershy.

"As that she helped us with the fear about Christians. Of course, we will help you girls," said Jafar.

"Can we join this mission?" asked Hernan.

"Please!" said Francisco, Gonzalo and Alonzo.

"Alright everybody! Here is the plan!" said Rainbow Dash.

New Deadline of Sunset Shimmer!

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Chapter 7 New Deadline Of Sunset Shimmer!

Later...

"Okay! Let's go!"Said Rainbow Dash

"I'll go get Muhammad!" said Al-Mu'tamin and he's run to the back of the temple. Then, he's come back with ostrich with a chariot.

"That is Muhammad?!" asked Applejack.

"He is an ostrich?" asked Rarity.

"And where did you get that bird from?" asked Francisco.

"Those slave traders who had Aisha, Aixa and Zaida. They are about to kill it to eat it as special meal.

But me and my friends rescued him alongside with those girls," said Al-Mu'tamin as he's rubbing on head of Muhammad, the ostrich.

"So what are you going to use it for?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Use to look around the mansion," said Al-Mu'tamin.

"Sound good," said Twilight.

"Then let's go rescue Sunset!" said Rainbow Dash.

"YEAH!" shouted Everyone.

Later, at Freezia's mansion, they arrived at the front of mansion. Al-Mu'tamin gets on the ostrich chariot and riding around the mansion to investigate.

And then, he's return and tell them about the force of the guards that he had found around the mansion. But the best part of his story is that the guards are the Joinings.

"We're not going to give up! We will go in and take Sunset back! No matter what!" said Rarity.

"But our force is too small!" said Ibn.

"Just keep them busy as long as you guys can do!" said Rainbow Dash.

"We will do as fastest as we can!" said Twilight.

"Then good luck. Hope that Allah will watch over all of you," said Jafar and he's turn to his gang and go get their stuffs.

"Good luck girls," said Francisco.

"And be careful," said Hernan and he's walk away with his friends, following The Almoravids.

"Okay girls! Follow me!" said Rainbow Dash and she's running to the wall of the mansion.

Meanwhile, inside the Mansion, at the Training Room...

"HAH!" shouted Freezia as she's swinging a sword around herself as a practice. She's keep imagine that Sunset Shimmer in form of the "raging she-demon" keep appearing and she's slash them several times.

Everytime she slash them, they disappear into the red smoke. Her mind is now filled with nothing but anger and her body is cover with sweat as she's keep slashing at her own imagination.

When the last get slashed, she finally return to reality. She's open her eyes and found herself cover in sweat. Later, she's go to take a bath and change her cloth. After finished,

she's return to the Training Room to get her favorite sword, The Wave, before she's going to sharpen her sword, the noise of the alarm rang.

Freezia's quickly run to the monitor room and saw that The Almoravids and her Joinings are fighting at the gate of her mansion. She's quickly change her mind, she think that if these guys go passed,

they might discover Sunset Shimmer. So she's decide to not to wait at midnight to cut head of Sunset. She's decide to cut her head now.

Meanwhile, in the Garden...

"Okay! All clear!" said Pinkie Pie and she's jump out from the fountain and roll herself around for three times. Make the others laugh out for a little.

Except for Rainbow Dash, who is still don't understand of how did Pinkie Pie can communicate through the walkie talkie while being in the underwater.

"As she's said! Time to move!" said Applejack and she's run to the door of the mansion with her friends. Rarity using her credit card to unlock the door.

They all quickly go inside and starting to looking around. Unbeknownst to all of them, their is a threat following them from behind.

Outside, in the Garden, there is a Joining seeing a door being left open. It's Joining 4226 and it's quickly make it way to the door.

What will you Choose?

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Chapter 8 What Will You Choose?

In the Living Room...

"Well... there is nothing here," said Applejack.

"We need to think deeper. This place must have a personal jail or something else like that," said Twilight.

"And where would it be?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Twilight! This place is not such a small place like Pinkie Pie's house!" said Rarity.

"But we need to find Sunset now! Before... before... before..." said Fluttershy and her tears starting to coming out from her eyes.

"How about ask that guy?" asked Pinkie Pie and she's point to Joining 4226. The robot walking closer to them with the laser spear began to glowing.

"Hey! Look up there!" said Rainbow Dash and the robot quickly looks up on the ceiling and then she's kick at the between legs of the robot, take its spear and blast it at head.

As the girls are amazed by the actions of Rainbow Dash, they someone is running to them. They all quickly run to hide behind the furnitures. They are looking at the door of the

living room and then they saw Freezia's run passed the room with a sword in the collar on her back. The appearance of the sword make the girls shock from what will happen to Sunset.

"You think that she... she..." said Rarity.

"She can't do that!" said Applejack.

"I don't think she dare to... didn't she?" asked Spike.

"Then we must follow her now!" said Twilight and she's get up and run after Freezia with her friends.

Freezia's run out from the backdoor of her mansion and run through the backyard and go into the field

that has the plate with the words "Private Zone" on it. Then she's run into the hut with number 468 on the door.

The girls cross the line into the Private Zone but as that there too many of huts. They can't know now which one that Freezia is in.

"How are we going to find her now?!" asked Rarity

"Let me take care of that!"Said Spike and he's starting to sniffing around. When he's smell the odor of Freezia and he's lead the girls to hut with number 468 on the door.

In the Hut, Underground Jail...

"Looks what I got for you, Sunset..." said Freezia and she's show her the favorite sword that given by her ancestors.

"This sword, The Wave, had passed on hands from generation to generation. Since the time of Norman conquest of England, and passed

to the nobles in the Royal Court of England during the Age of Discovery that go to established the colonies in Virginia and New England.

My ancestors used this sword to fight against the Normans, the natives of Virginia and New England in the Age of Discovery and also

used during the Siege of Yorktown during the American Revolutionary War. The Wave has been covered with blood of trillion of people since the Medieval Age.

This is no ordinary sword. For my family, it is the greatest object and also the honor of the family. It carried by many noble people throughout the history.

And you should be honor to be slashed by it. By the way, to reclaim my pride and my honor. That is the reason that make this sword become a weapon of choice of mine," said Freezia as she's looking at The Wave.

"Well..." said Freezia and she's swing it to her right side. Sunset looking at the sword with terrified in her eyes. She's know that what will happen after the conversation ended.

"You took everything away from me, Sunset Shimmer. And now... I will take all back!" said Freezia and she's put the sword to the front of face. Use both hands to carrying it.

"Start... with my HONOR!" said Freezia and she's slash at Sunset but then the sword hit something that make a noise of clang instead. They both surprise from the sound and they open their eyes

and saw Rainbow Dash using the laser spear that she took from Joining 4226 to stop the sword before it will slash at head of Sunset. Behind Rainbow Dash,

five girls and a dog standing behind with their faces filled with shock, fear and horror of what are they seeing before them.

"How... how could you?!" asked Fluttershy.

"You did this for what, Freezia? For what?" asked Applejack.

"To reclaim my honor! To have my justice!" said Freezia with tears come out from her eyes.

"Why don't you just... just... just... oh... I don't know what to say now," said Pinkie Pie.

"Of course, how should you all know?! You all are not the descendant of the great noble families! This girl had destroyed my reputation! I'm going to take it back!"Said Freezia

"By have her killed?! Are you serious?!" asked Rainbow Dash.

"And don't you wanted? I heard about you five. Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy. Your friendship was broken because of this girl!

And none of you want justice?!" asked Freezia and then she's turn to look at Twilight and Spike.

"As for you! I don't know who you are but I believe that you at least must have a conflict with Sunset before! Why don't any of you want the revenge?!

This monster had destroyed the honor of all of you, destroyed your friendship, ruined your lives and publicly humiliated all of you!" said Freezia.

"Because it's not the right thing to do," said Applejack.

"We all once hated Sunset but now... she is one of our best friend," said Rarity.

"Revenge and justice never been the same. And if you killed the one who was once bullied you, that is mean you had gone bad as that one is," said Twilight.

"Or maybe worse than that bully, if you ask me," said Rainbow Dash.

"Freezia that I known is a sweet lovely girl who care in her friends and have a good heart," said Rarity.

"You helped a lot of students in school when you're at Canterlot High. Remember when you volunteer to help me to clean the Bug House?" asked Fluttershy.

"Yeah... I remembered that. I am the only person who volunteered," said Freezia.

"And remember about when I need the model for my latest fashion line?" asked Rarity.

"Of course. I am the first girl who volunteered to try it," said Freezia.

"And if you really still is the person that we known from that day. Then prove it!" said Rainbow Dash.

"Drop your sword and set free of Sunset now!" said Applejack.

"You must give the one who once hurt you a change. You have to see that Sunset is different now," said Twilight.

"Yeah! She is no longer that baddie-jerky that you know in the old days," said Pinkie Pie.

"Why? What about my honor? What about the reputation of my ancestors? And what about everything that she took from me?!" asked Freezia.

"You really think that your ancestors will proud of what you did?" asked Rarity.

"Yeah! Killing an innocent and defenseless girl! What a good reputation, huh?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"An innocent girl?! This is a monster!" said Freezia as she's point her sword to face of Sunset.

"I think the only monster here are you!" said Applejack.

"What?! How dare you?! I am the descendant of the five great noble families from England!

The right wielder of The Wave! I am no monster! The noble one can't be a monster!" said Freezia.

"The power of being the noble or the rich of you can't help you! Those are just the outside of you!

But it's about the inside of you! If you truly are the noble one as you said, then do like what Applejack said," said Twilight.

"I... I... I..." said Freezia as she's looking at the sword. She's taking time to think and then she's know what to do.

"GGGAAAAHHHH!" shouted Freezia and she's slash the sword to Sunset. The girls covered her eyes because they don't want to see the dead.

*CLANG!*

The sound is surprise the girls. They open their eyes and saw Sunset is standing up and Freezia's drop down the sword.

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Chapter 9 Epilogue

Next day, at Sugarcube Corner...

"Yo Freezia!" said Buldeo.

"How was the vengeance?!"asked Mor.

"Was you did it?" asked Mang.

"Nope." said Freezia.

"What?!" asked Appu.

"You just let her go?!" asked Mang.

"What knock that kind of sense into you?" asked Mor.

"The kind that had reached my heart," said Freezia and the the six girls walk up to her.

"Hi Freezia," said Sunset and she's give her a box.

"A box?" asked Freezia.

"Might be a trap!" said Appu.

"I think it's not," said Freezia and she's open it and she's found the unexpected things. It's her stuffs!

Her belongings that Sunset had took away from her two years ago had finally come back to her!

"I believe these all are yours," said Sunset and Freezia's stand up and quickly hug her with tears come out from her eyes.

"Thank you, Sunset. Thank you, all of you," said Freezia.

"Hey Freezia!" said Ranjan.

"There is someone wanna meet you," said Kaa and then Flash walk out from behind of them and go to meet his first ex-girlfriend for first time into two years face-to-face.

"Hi Freezia..." said Flash with a blush.

"Umm... Hi... Flash..." said Freezia with a blush. Behind her, Twilight is kind of jealous but she's trying calm down and not go mad.

"Well... are you... busy today?" asked Flash.

"Of course not! Why do you ask?" asked Freezia.

"Well... I have two tickets for the newest premiere round of Frozen. Do you wanna come?" asked Flash.

"OF COURSE I WILL!" shouted Freezia and she's jump to hug Flash very hard.

"It's look like that we're not the only guys who will go to watch that movie today," said Buldeo.

"What about you girls?" asked Ranjan.

"We wanna go but we have no tickets," said Rarity.

"No worry. We got this!" said Kaa and he's show them six tickets to watch the newest premiere round of Frozen.

"Well... as the ticket-problem is solved now. Then, let's go!"s aid Twilight.

"YEAH" shouted Everybody.