What would happen, if Marty was sent to Equestria when the lightning struck the flux capacitor, instead of sending him back to 1985?
What kind of random adventures await for the irish bug? Will Pinkie Pie end up on earth? Was that just a major spoiler for a future chapter?
Well, read this and find out!
Rated Teen for language in next chapters, no Marty X Pony action, he has a GF. You guys make me sick, JK lol. Might add more characters in the future (he he future) The ones in character tags are the ones that will surely show up in the next chapters. Feels a bit rushed I know. I am new to writing.
“Come on, COME ON! YEARRH” Marty said desperately, before smashing his forehead against the steering wheel. The time machine wasn't turning on. And if it didn't worked he wouldn't be able to see his family and Jennifer again.
Suddenly, for some reason unknown, right after he had banged his head against the wheel, a mighty roar came from the motor of the DeLorean.
Marty gasped in happiness and stomped the gas, the car started to move forward, and began to gain speed. He could see the Doc, on the other end of the street, plugging back the cable in that served as a bridge between Hill Valley’s Clock Tower and the 2 lamp posts, each in one side of the street. The cable had been unplugged thanks to the trunk of a tree that had previously been hit by thunder, and broke down. Quickily, the car accelerated to the required speed, required for time travel that is.
The car reached the 88 mph in no time and started to glow. Sparks came off from the sides and wheels of the car as it approached the cable between the 2 poles.
1985, here I come Marty thought to himself, while shutting his eyes tight. Suddenly a loud boom and a blinding flash appeared around the car, and he was nowhere, or nowhen, to be seen afterwards.
“It worked!, It really worked!” Exclaimed the Doc, running towards where the DeLorean made contact with the electrified cable. Now, there were only 2 parallel burning tire marks.
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October 26th
Loud cracking noises, like those of storms, starting to sound in the outskirts of Ponyville. Twilight Sparkle, Celestia’s protégé, noticed this and turned her head to where the noise came from, just to see a blinding light.
“What was that?” She asked to nopony in particular. And being the curious and nosy pony she is, decided to take a look.
“That was odd, there are no storms scheduled for this month…” Said Twilight to herself, while she trotted to where the explosion had happened, which in fact, looked more like an inverted explosion.
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“Ugh, the reentry is so bumpy” Said Marty, while rubbing his sore forehead. “Doc should fix that as soon as possible, I’ll remind him”. He then started to look around, confused as to where, or when, he was.
What the hell is this place? Some sort of meadow? This doesn’t look like Hill Valley, or Lyon States at all. I guess I should take a look around and ask for directions He thought. Right after that he decided to open the DeLorean’s wing-door, making a slightly futuristic sound as he did so.
“Hello? Is anybody there?”
“Hello? Is anypony there?” Both Marty and Twilight said at the same time
Marty then saw Twilight, and Twilight saw Marty. Both gasped and passed out…
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“Mom, mom is that you? I had a terrible nightmare. I dreamt that I traveled to a different place, and there were talking animals…” Marty said, slowly regaining consciousness.
“Don’t worry, you are safe now in my cottage” a mysterious female said.
“Your cottage?” Marty responded, with a look of confusion on his face.
Then, the mysterious figure turned on a candle, only to show that she was in fact, a yellow Pegasus.
“AHHHH, you are my, you are my… what are you?!”
The Pegasus was taken aback with the reaction of the unknown creature. She hid behind her pink mane and shyly whispered something “Flustshshs…”
“What was that?”
“My name is flushshhs”
“What?!”
“Fluttershy”
“Ok Fluttershy, what are you?”
“I am a pegasi”
“You mean a Pegasus?”
“No, pegasi”
This is nuts... a talking midget yellow horse with wings... This is probably a dream, or one of Doc's crazy mind invading devices. I should probably cut it down with the Pepsi free...
“Ok, ok. And, where am I?” Asked Marty.
“You are in my cottage, at the outskirts of Ponyville”
“PONYVILLE?” Yeah, pretty sure I am dreaming.
“squee!” Squeaked Fluttershy, before hiding behind a chair in the room
“What’s going on up there, are you ok Fluttershy? Did the creature hurt you!?” A mysterious voice said from downstairs. “I am coming!”
The door opened with a thud and a purple unicorn went in the room.
“Ok creature, stay away from Fluttershy!” Said the unicorn, while levitating a wooden drawer with her glowing horn.
“I haven’t done anything!” Marty said with a look of fear on his face.
“Explain all the shouting then” she said, putting the drawer pack on the floor.
“I am just confused, this is just probably a nightmare…”
“A nightmare? As in dreaming?” Said the purple mare, with a look of disbelief on her face.
“Yeah, I mean, you are a talking horse, that can use magic, and she is a pegasus” Marty said.
“Who are you calling a horse!” - "I am a Pegasi" Said Fluttershy shyly, again - “I am a pony, a unicorn pony. If anypony should be confused, that would be us. What are you?” She said.
“What am I? What do you mean with that? I am a human or course”
“And how did you get here hiu-men?”
“I came in a time machine that Doc Emmett Brown invented”
“A TIME MACHINE?!?!!”
Marty jumped from the volume of the unicorn’s voice. “Yeah, a time machine”
“Amazing” The mare said.
“I don’t know why I am telling you all this. You are obviously a dream after all”
“I am no dream!”
“Prove it”
“Ok, I’ll prove it” Said the mare, and then she levitated a plastic cup that was over the little nightstand next to the bed, and hurled it towards Marty's face.
"OUCH!?! What was that for?!” He exclaimed in overreacted pain.
“See? You are not dreaming” Said the purple unicorn.
“Wow, this is heavy…”
“Excuse me, but… what’s heavy, is there a problem with Equestria's gravitational pull in your time?”
“What...? No, this situation, of course. I don’t know where I am, or when I am”
“Well, this is the year 1001 CR. Today is the 26th of October. And you are in the outskirts of Ponyville, in my friend’s cottage”
The unicorn said, with a small smile on her face, like if she knew everything.
“Wait a minute, wait a minute! Uh, are… are you telling me that this is the year 1001? And I am in a different world where ponies can use magic and speak?!”
“And fly…” Fluttershy said quietly, while coming out of her hideout after realizing that he was not a threat.
“Great Scott…” The hiu-men said while staring at the wall with his eyes wide.
A couple of seconds passed, and the unicorn decided to break the silence with a question, more of a request actually.
“So, do you think you can show me the time machine?”
“I’ll show it to you if you can help me. If you can get some scientists and get them to work on the time machine then maybe I’ll be able to go back to my world. I warn you though, it is unlike anything you’ve seen before, probably. So the chances that scientists from this world can fix it are low”
“I am a scientist myself, I could try to fix it”
“I guess you are my only hope now, what’s your name anyway?” The creature asked
“I am Twilight Sparkle, and what’s your name”
“Twilight, I think his name is Calvin” Said the quiet pegasi, before Marty could answer the question.
Oh god, not this again Marty thought. He really needed new underwear.
Well guys, this here is the first fic I am openly publishing. I am well aware of my bad English, that happens when you are born in a country where the main tongue is Spanish, and you learned all the English you know from Vidiagaems. Please, tell me what you think, and how I can improve. I know you guys are swell. So please criticize me, that's the only way I'll ever improve.
EDIT: So, I kinda fixed some crap here and there. Changed the year and some words. I'll continue fixing it later, but not right now since homework n stuff. Stay gold. Also, if you put your mind toit, you can become potato.
Hey guys, the new chapter is here. Thanks for all your supportive feedback, I'll try to take into consideration all your advice. Now, sit back, read and enjoy I guess.
"Hey Calvin, can you tell me about your world until we get to the Time Machine?" Said Twilight, making the cutest curiosity face ever.
"Huh? Oh yeah sure, and for the 10th time, my name is Marty, Marty McFly. Not Calvin" Marty replied to the unicorn with a frown on his face. "What do you want to know?"
"Oh yeah sorry, I keep forgetting. Anyway, who is Doc Brown?" answered the mare. Right before Marty could answer, she summoned a quill and a notebook and began writing down everything the human said.
"Well, Doctor Emmett Brown is a scientist and a good friend of mine. People often call him crazy because of his inventions, but as you can see, he is smart, I mean, he made a time machine! And out of a DeLorean!" Said McFly.
"I see... and, what is a DeLorean?" Said Twiraitu Sparkaru, with glowing eyes, ready to absorb information like a sponge.
"A DeLorean is a car, a vehicle, for transportation. And a bitchin' one for that matter" Said the human.
Twilight gasped at the language used by the human.
"Is something wrong?" Asked Marty
"Yes, we ponies do not use foul language" Said Twilight, with a bit of indignation (not quite Rarity though)
"Foul language? What did I say?" Marty asked. He couldn't remember any insulting words said previously by himself.
"What? you did not even notice? You said... the b word..." Said the purple unicorn, with a whisper.
"B word? Oh, do you mean bit- oh yeah, I'll try to keep that in mind, we humans use a lot of foul language, as you called it. It basically became part of our normal daily speech" Said Marty with an embarrassed look on his face.
A couple of minutes passed by, filled with questions and answers. Marty then was able to see the time machine, cleverly disguised as a bush.
"Oh, we are here" Remarked Marty "Here it is, the DeLorean" Finally, doesn't this mare get tired of asking? Marty then proceeded to open the door. Twilight could not take her eyes off the car, she was too excited about this.
"Wow, it's an amazing device!" Exclaimed Twilight.
"Well, as you can see" Marty said, while trying to turn on the car "the ignition broke down, and even if we managed to fix it up, I'd still need 1.21 Jiggawatts of electricity to time travel" Said Marty
"1.21 JIGGAWATTS?!" Shouted Twilight.
"Yes I know, only a bolt of lightning can generate that much, and you never know where one is going to fall"
"What do you mean with that? You'd need atleast 8 bolts of lightning to generate that much" Said Twilight.
"8?!?! It's already hard enough to get one, and we need EIGHT?!" replied Marty.
"Yeah, that's going to be tricky, but we do know where lightning hits. After all, the weather team controls the weather"
"What?"
"The weather team is a group of pegasi that take care of the weather"
"So, you mean that ponies control the storms?"
"And all the other weather phenomena"
"Woah, that's heavy duty"
Weather control... holy shit.
"That word again, Heavy... why is everything so heavy in your world. Anyway, we should probably take your time machine to my lab" Said Twilight with a serious look on her face.
"Yeah, that's probably the best thing to do right now" Replied Marty with a confused look on his human face.
I can't wait to get back home, I just hope we can fix this up.
Short chapter guise, I'll try to update this every 2 days. Damn design school and all that homework. Anyway, hope you enjoyed the little references and. I'll try to make a big next chapter. I have something in mind. If you checked out the blog you'll know what I am talking aboot.
To go to the library, Marty and Twilight had to go through Ponyville. Luckily, she knew an invisibility spell, but could only cast it once and she thought it to be a better idea to cast it on the DeLorean. That left Marty visible, and that didn’t cause such a good impression on the other ponies that were doing their unusual business on the main streets, what I am trying to say is that they acted the same way as when Zecora came to Ponyville for the first couple of times. They ran away cowardly and that made Marty feel a bit uneasy.
One pony however, found the new creature rather fascinating, so she decided to follow it and Twilight to the library, very cautiously while doing so. Marty and Twilight felt like being followed, but every time they turned around to see if there was a pony on their tail, they saw nothing.
Wow, that was a close one Thought the mysterious pony, which happened to be a green unicorn with a Lyre cutie mark. I knew they were real, and this is the proof I needed. Who is crazy now? Dumb science ponies.
“Come on Marty let’s hurry up” Said Twilight, with a nervous look on her face.
“I am going as fast as I can, pushing an invisible car is not as easy as it seems” Replied the human, with a rather annoyed voice.
“Alright, there’s the library. I will have to teleport the car to the basement. It shouldn’t be easy, but with a bit of concentration I think I can do it” Said the purple unicorn, with a serious look on her face. “I just hope Pinkie is not around, I won’t be able to concentrate if she is”
“Who’s Pinkie?” Asked Marty.
“She is a friend of mine, a hyperactive earth pony. She works at the local bakery” Replied Twilight. Behind them, the mysterious pony was hiding by an apple stand.
“Ermm, ‘xcuse me?” Said an orange coated, blond maned earth pony. She was wearing an Stetson Hat, and had some freckles on her tanned face.
“Eeeep!” exclaimed the mysterious pony. She hadn’t noticed the apple vendor and was surprised by her presence. “Oh Applejack, you scared the horse-shoes out of me!” Said the pony after relaxing a bit.
“Whatcha up to Lyra?” Asked the pony known as Applejack.
“I am checking on the human, look! They are real! There’s one with Twilight right now!” Said Lyra, excited. “I knew they were real, I knew it! And nopony ever believed me!”
“Well I’ll be damned, them humans do exist it seems” Said Applejack, with an amused look on her face, and a curious tone on her voice.
“Of course they are, isn’t that fascinating? This is great new- wait, where is he?” Said Lyra.
“Oh, I think he jus’ went inside the library with Twi’” Replied Applejack.
Meanwhile, inside the library…
“Wow Twilight, that was cool, how did you do that?” Asked Marty in amusement.
*deep breathing* “Just practice” *more breathing* “and studying” *more breathing* “a lot” Replied a tired Twilight. “I think I am going to pass ou-“ Twilight couldn’t finish what she was about to say. She fainted and fell on the floor, causing a loud thud.
“Twilight? Jeez… I better take her to her bed” Said Marty to himself, with a worried look on his face I hope she’s alright.
“Who’s there?” Someone asked. It had the voice of a scared child.
“This is not what it looks like, she fainted I swe-” Replied Marty, but was cut by a lizard-like creature that jumped on him and started to scratch his face with sharp claws.
“STAY AWAY FROM TWILIGHT YOU MONSTER, YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!!!!” Shouted the creature, while biting and scratching Marty on the face.
“Jesus Christ! She just passed out, I didn’t do anything I swear!” Exclaimed Marty, while trying to shake off the lizard. He then grabbed it by the tail and threw it across the room, hitting a wall and fainting from the impact.
“Shit… I hope Twilight doesn’t get mad” Said Marty as he took Twilight and the lizard on his arms and carried them to the bedroom.
Outside the library…
“What in tarnation is going on in there?” Asked Applejack to nopony in particular, as she heard the screams and hitting that went inside the library. “Sounds like trouble. Lyra, go git Rainbow, we might be needin’ her help if that human thang is hostile” Said Applejack to Lyra, which nodded in return and took off to find Rainbow Dash.
“DON’T WORRY TWILIGHT, I’M COMMIN’!” Shouted Applejack at the top of lungs (lol full life consequences). Then, she ran as fast as she could towards the library, and once she reached it, she bucked the door with all her power, breaking it.
“Where are you hiddin’ monster?!” Asked Applejack.
“Jeez I am not a monster, damnit. Twilight just fainted after teleporting the… uhhh”
“what, what did she teleported?”
“That’s not important, what I am trying to say is that I didn’t do anything!”
“Why is Spike unconscious then?” Asked AJ, throwing a menacing look at Marty.
“He attacked me after seeing that Twilight was knocked Out” Replied Marty “So, before he could harm me anymore, I grabbed him by the tail and hurled him across the room, and he kinda hit the wall with the back of his head” Finished Marty, with an embarrassed look on his face.
A couple of minutes passed, and AJ decided that Marty was being honest. She stayed there with him, asking some questions, and sometimes answering his own. But ten minutes later, a cyan pony passed through the window at an amazing speed, and tackled Marty on the ribs, leaving him panting on the floor, trying to catch some air, to no avail because before he could, Rainbow got on her hoofs, turned around and… bucked him right in the face, leaving him unconscious.
“Rainbow, what the hay!”
“Oh my gosh, did that monster hurt you or something?”
“He didn’t! He isn’t a monster. Everything was a big misunderstanding!”
“What?”
“Sweet Celestia, look at the poor creature. Well, Ah guess it wasn’t yer fault, you jus didn’t know”
“Oh horseapples, I hope he’s okay”
“Ah suppose he is, he’s jus out. C’mon let’s take ‘im to the guest room”
“K”
Meanwhile, outside the library…
“Come on girls, hurry up! I want to see the human again!” Exclaimed an excited Lyra. “A human, in Ponyville! This is so awesome, even if he is hostile!”
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“Luna, are you seeing this?”
“Yes sister, interesting creature Twilight has found”
“Indeed”
“Shall we pay it a visit?”
“Ah Luna, I was thinking we should”
Well guise, chapter 3 is here. Not as long as promised, but I hope you enjoy it. I’ll have another one ready soon enough, probably tomorrow or Friday. Isn’t it funny how trouble seems to follow Marty anywhere and anywhen?
Also, if you find any spelling mistakes, or out of place words (or just massive fuckups) let me know so I can fix that.
