A Night At The Bar

by Mikenew1221

First published

Alex Mercer has been living in Equestria for a couple of months now. He finally made enough money to buy a house in ponyville. One night he decides to go to the local bar to get his weekly buzz. What he didn't count on is the night ahead of him.

Alex Mercer has been living in Equestria for a couple of months now. He finally made enough money to buy a house in ponyville. One night he decides to go to the local bar to get his weekly buzz. What he didn't count on is the night ahead of him.

This is a mature story because of the language and suggestive themes.

Also this is my first story. So hate is expected.

They Call Me A Monster

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Just another night at the bar....


I walked in the door. The overwhelming smell of booze filled the air.
It was a stereotypical bar scene. Stallions were hoof-wrestling and mare's were, as usual, being flirted with.

I looked for the a open seat on the counter stools. Occasionally I would get a few glances from mares and stallions.
after a hour of waiting, I sat next to a rainbow maned Pegasus, A electric-blue maned unicorn, and a flamed maned Pegasus sat next to the rainbow one.

As I sat down next to them, They gave me uneasy glance's. But after a few seconds of glaring, They just shrugged and went on with their conversations.

A waitress came up and asked what I wanted.

"Give me your strongest drink." Was my reply.

"One Everfree Kidney Killer, coming up!" With that, She trotted over to the shelves and brought the bottle to the counter.

She started to pour it into a mug. "No need to do that. I like drinking from the bottle."

She only nodded in agreement and scooted the bottle towards me.

"Thanks." With that she went to the next drunk.

"Whoa thats pretty strong, You sure you can drink that?" I looked to my left. The Rainbow Pegasus had apparently stopped talking to the fire maned Pegasus. She was eyeing the bottle in my hands.

"Yea... I've had alot more abuse to my system." Was my only reply.

I turned the bottle up and let the alcohol flow into my mouth. I drank for a few seconds, and set the bottle down.

"Whoa dude! That's pretty hardcore!" To my right was the electric-blue unicorn.

"Thanks I guess..." Awkward!

"Yo! Rainbow Dash, SpitFire, You see this Stallion?"

"Yes vinyl, We see him..." Was her reply.

"Im not a stallion." I said with a deadpan look.

"Well, what are you then?" She cocked a eyebrow when she asked me.

"A monster." I said as cold as winter.

"What do you mean by that?" Rainbow Dash asked.

Apparently I had the attention of the three mares.

"You don't want to know..."

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After five long minutes of convincing them to stop harassing me. They just finally gave up.

I still had 2/4 of my drink left. I Lifted the bottle up and drank the rest of it.

I ordered at-least 3 more until I Had a good buzz going.

I had made 'acquaintance' With the 3 mares. They were some what decent.

After a few drinks they were all drunk, spitfire was going on about something, And vinyl and I were talking about music.

I was having a pretty good time.

"Hey girl, you're looking fine!" I looked over too rainbow dash. Some douche bag was hitting on her and was really starting to piss me off.

"Why don't we head towards the bathroom. I promise you'll like it!"

"No thank's ass wipe." She was obviously getting annoyed.

Just when I though Mr. Desperate was about to leave, He grabbed her by the mane and pulled her off her bar stool and started heading towards the bathroom.

That finally made me snap.

Just as I was getting up, Monster by skillet started playing.

"HEY ASSHOLE!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. Everypony turned their heads to see what was happening.

He turned around to face me.

"What the fuck do you want?" He still had rainbow in his grasp.

"Why don't you let her go and get fuck out before I give you a closed casket funeral."

Rainbow was terrified. I even saw Vinyl and Spitfire give me a worried look.

"HA! Your just some tall freak! What the hell are you going to do to stop me from getting pussy?"

Apparently his goons/friends were there with him. After a few seconds, I was surrounded.

I knew this would be a life or death fight.

The first goon ran at me with a knife and was yelling insults.

The sickening sound of metal and flesh filled the air.

I heard a few gasps and screams.

I didn't even feel his little knife in my gut.

Everyponies eyes were on me. Even the goon who attacked me.

I cracked my neck and smiled.

"Big FUCKING mistake."

My arm morphed into a claw, And I grabbed his head with enough force to hurt him. But not to kill him.

"Y-Your T-The-" He was scared shit less.

"Monster of ManeHattan? Ding Ding Ding! You win!"

"Now heres your options. 1. Let her go, leave and never come back. 2. I kill you and your friends. 3. I make you regret even being born."

They all chose option one and ran out the door.

After they cleared out, I morphed my arm back into my normal hand and went towards Rainbow Dash. She started backing away from me.

"Rainbow Dash its me. Alex, Remember? I'm not going to hurt you." She seemed to have calmed down a little when I said that.

"H-How did you do that?" She asked nervously.

"Like I said. I"m a monster." I said sarcastically.

Vinyl and Spitfire came over to help Rainbow Dash up.

Rainbow Dash was the only one to say something to me.

"Thanks."

They were obviously drunk and were in no shape to go back to their houses. They got at least 5 feet out the door and fell over.

I sighed and went over to them.

"Need any help?" I asked.

No response.

They must of either passed out from intoxication or by me showing my true self. Or both.

I picked the three of them up and carried them to my house.

I opened the door and carried them to the living room. I set them on their own individual couch and turned the lights off.

Tomorrow is going to be one hell of a day.