Dhey's shopping trip

by NeightDuskDhey

First published

What happens when a crystal pony enters a magical balloon store?

NOW UPDATED AS OF 23rd OF APRIL!
This story may be familiar to some ponies that's because it is a remake/sequel to a story by Kaiden, entitled "calami's shopping trip" it's story 4 in his balloon tales series.
This version though is a remake/sequel... Mostly sequel.

Dhey was searching for supplies one day, until he is told of a store with unbelievably real looking pony balloons. He goes to have a look, what follows is unimaginable!!

This version has: male protagonist , over 550 more words.
This updated version of my version of his story ( confusing) now has a bit of back story, better grammar and wording, and a little more of an idea of the entire story around this shop which may come in a sequel! Or spin off or what ever.


Please read the original here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/158562/balloon-tales

1:Dhey goes shopping

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Dhey was walking through canterlot, the crystal Pegasus was in need of some supplies for a journey he was about to embark on, as he adventured through a market he came across a small earth pony with a very well made pony shaped balloon, the details were incredible, from body structure of the balloon unicorn right down to it's amazingly moulded mane and tail.

" excuse me?" Asked Dhey " where did you get that amazing balloon ?" He always had a fascination with objects highly detailed, especially inflatables or dolls " well from down that alley, there is this big store! I think the man working there said he was off to try make a new balloon, a crystal pony! Im going to see if dad will let me get it when it is finished!" Dhey thanked him and the little colt trotted off happily the balloon bobbing behind him. With that Dhey went off toward the long alley towards the store, he trotted over and the doors where unlocked...

Dhey went into the store, the first thing he noticed was the many rows of balloon ponies! And being quite a large store it had shelves upon shelves of them, they were only two shelves on ether side of the building making it seem like a hallway of balloons, in the middle now and again where Pegasus floating in the air, held in position by the string around there leg ,they were so well detailed it made him smile, they all had a great posture and a beaming smile "ohh" he saw a pink one, with pink and yellow mane, it was floating in the air in a nice flying position big smile on it's shine latex face, he flew up and batted at it, watching it wobble in the air, this made him smile, he looked at the price tag, was a fair price and the owner was so proud of them he would stick how long it had been in the store for " 7 weeks" he said " wow they last so long!" Another tag said 2 years!

Dhey was a dark blue crystal pony, he never saw this kind of stuff at the empire, shame was no crystal pony balloons here yet they would of been a incredible thing to see, what with how the regular non crystal ponies look, the crystal ponies would have to have something really special to make them seem more realistic and shiny... Soon enough as he hovered he felt something latch around his right legs hock "wha?" He looked down and saw it was a string. He shook his leg to try get it off, but it didn't move " heheh" he smiled as he flew about shaking his leg, bumping into some of the merchandise , they bounced about a bit Dhey could hear squeaking, for some reason couldn't help but giggle! A nice feeling was overcoming him as his mind was getting more peaceful but also a lot more enjoyable to be in.

As Dhey flew about in a random pattern his leg was being coated in latex! He stretched his leg, it was more stretchy somehow as the latex traveled up and started coating his hip, seams growing in there proper place. Dhey stretched a bit and instead of a squeak he heard a odd noise, he looked down to see he was bleeding where a seem was growing, he whimpered a bit " help!" He called out! His other hooves were now being coated in thick rubber, it was fairly quick as soon as the legs were done, his plot was being coated, he could feel insides being filled with air, latex quickly climbed onto his tail and coated it fully, now just looking like moulded latex air for sir to fill, the flapping of his wings caused his ballooned legs to wobble and speak as more of his torso is coated, before long he stopped flapping his wings and found he begun floating!

Soon enough the string reached it's limit and he bounced back a little, this was as high as he would ever go again when of course he was tied down, he tried to stop giggling as his wings were coated and fixed into a flying posture along with his legs, happy thoughts kept forcing there way into his brain, he looked over his body, he was totally latex, his insides would feel like they would explode but in the end they would just fuse with his new rubber skin, making it thicker, and of course to make room for the helium, his skin unlike the others was a lot more shiny and seemed to have glitter all over it, and a nice touch was in different light his skin reflected the light differently, like his crystal body did. He found himself giggling again as the latex was now assimilating and converting his mane into a proper rubber infallible part along with his neck, the details were a little simple but amazing for a balloon, just like the one he saw earlier.

He kept trying to fight the thoughts being pumped into his mind but even with how hard he fought the mental changes,his own thoughts and mind were easily being pushed aside and done away with as the new thoughts entered his brain, as wrong as what was happening felt and was, he couldn't stop the happy thoughts from being forcefully pumped into his brain. soon enough he smiled widely as he was at a peace of mind, he understood he was a party balloon and it was his job to make ponies happy, as these solidified in his brain his face is soon coated in thick rubber, the lovely wide smile on his face was now permanent. He was in mid flight position and his legs In a nice posture,forelegs up front nicely, back legs in a position for as if he was floating there... Dhey was now floating in the empty shop waiting for the owner to return and give him a price so he could be bought and make somepony happy.