Cinderella

by Miss_Rarity

First published

Luna as Cinderella- she was in a masked ball until she ran home- but not for the same reason as Cinderella...

Set in the past!

Woona and Cewestia has been invited to a children masked ball. But then Luna runs home... Will the reason be because of a Cinderella tragic tale or something different?

Trapped in the Snow

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Cinderella- Trapped in the Snow

Luna sat in the rug in front of the fireplace, looking quite dumb. That is, until Queen Aeterna entered the room. "Oh, Luna, what in Equestria has happened to you?!" Aeterna shrieked as she looked at her daughter which is, in fact, covered in spaghetti and sauce. "Oh, gosh Luna. Please take a shower. We will go to the spa soon. Which chariot would you like to take?"

Luna's eyes grew wide. "I wanna ride that velvet chariot!" Aeterna just smiled. Luna galloped to her bathroom. The guard in front of her nodded to his friend and smiled at Luna.

"Princess Luna, shall I escort you to your room? It's almost time for you to go to the spa."

"I'd be honored." Luna followed the guard as he led her to her bedroom connecting to Celestia's. Luna curtsied and the guard nodded. Luna just sighed and looked at her room. The wallpaper was celestial, it had a beautiful dark blue and slightly dark pink background ( you know, dark blue at the top, then on the bottom it fades to pink then orange). The blue part is painted with big white stars (the cartoon stars like the Power Stars or Grand Stars in Mario, not real stars like white dots in the sky) and the lower part is filled with sparkles.

Luna took a shower with the new Peachy Apple Bliss bubble bath her auntie gave, wore her simple evening gown, put on her bracelet and wore her hair pin which is also the family accessory which belongs to the Ancients who made this land. She entered her sister's room and rolled her eyes. "Like, come on Tia! It's not the end of the world if you don't look fabulous on your first spa visit!"

Celestia just shook her head. She was just too absorbed. Tia sighed and followed her sister to the chariot. Aeterna stood there with a smiling face. They climbed up the chariot. "We're going to the spa, we're going to the spa, YAAAAYYY!!! We're going to the spa, we're going to the spa, YAAAAYYY!!!" they both shouted. Aetena gave a chuckle and exchanged looks with King Terra.


Luna was seated in the feasting table. They were having Christmas dinner. The three royals in the family was laughing and chatting, except for Luna, who was sitting with a forehoof holding her cheek from letting her face fall flat to the table. King Terra took a look at Luna. His face was lined with worry. "Luna, is there something wrong? You look a bit down."

Luna glanced over. "Daddy, it's boring inside. Can we go to the mall tomorrow? What do you think, Cewestia?"

Celestia nodded. "Yeah! When we go there, we want to buy hoop earrings and toys!"

Queen Aeterna was the one to respond first. "I'm sorry, but the weather team is planning a snowstorm to be held for eight days! But on the eight night the storm will stop and we're gonna go to a masked ball!"

Oh my god, I'm gonna get prince charming!

Celestia gasped happily as Luna made a face. "Tia, what's wrong? You look... very, um, weird."

Celestia snapped out of her thought as she giggled. "Oh, it's nothing..."

"What is?"

"Woona, have you forgotten? We're gonna meet HIM!"

"You mean him as in him!?"

"If it's the him as in the him of the most intelligent, smart, handsome him, then YES!"

"Oh! It's is the him as in him of the most intelligent smart handsome him! To confirm, he's..."

"Girls, keep it down," King Terra scolded in a deep voice.

"PRINCE CHARMING!" they both gushed. Queen Aeterna laughed.

"Alright, whatever girls, but for now, we're trapped in the snow..."

Mardi Grass

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Luna is in the spa and could hardly contain the excitement. It was five more hours till the party! "Alright, we're here!" Aeterna said with a smile. "You may choose your treatment."

"Ooh! Mommy, I want the Velvet Princess Pack!" Celestia cooed.

"I want the Fruits n Flowers pack." Luna joined in. Then, Luna glanced at Celestia, not moving one step from the royal spa ground. Celestia smiled and nodded rapidly and also frequently. Luna breathed.

I don't want a lot for Christmas, there is just one thing I need. I don't care about the presents, underneath my Christmas tree

I just want you for my own, more than you could ever know, make my wish come true, coz baby, all i want for Christmas is youuuuuu

Queen Aeterna frowned. "Alright you two, lets get inside the room,"

Aloe's and Lotus Blossom's great great great great great great great great great great great great...

Three Days Later

Great great great great grandmother, who is currently twenty six years old and single, smiled at the cuteness.


Mommy, we're here! Luna squealed to herself. Herestand the princesses, in the middle of a ballroom. There are two ballrooms, one all regal of white and gold, and one all velvety and warm. "Mommy, where's Tia?" Luna asked. The queen just puffed her chest a little, her face looking proud.

"Oh, she just went on with some colt," the queen smiled.

Luna then saw a plate of hot wings in the far corner. She galloped there. Luna nibbled on three wings, a mango pudding, and a slice of peach cake. Luna looked at the chocolate cake stand. "Oh man, we're out! I guess I'll have to refill it," Luna trotted happily, until her eyes laid on a colt.

"Um, hi!" Luna greeted.

The colt turned around and smiled. "Hi! I'm Prince Alcott of Fillydelphia (I mean, coz, what else?)." Luna giggled.

"Well hi! I'm Princess Luna of, well, Equestria. What brings you to Canterlot?" Oh my stars I'm getting him!

"Not much. My father is here to have a meeting with somepony called Aeterna. Anyway, may I have this dance?" Luna smiled and took Prince Alcott's hoof. They danced for awhile, until Prince Alcott went out to do something.

Luna just trotted happily to get the chocolate pudding cake until she saw a horrifying sight. Isn't that...Alcott? In front of Luna there stood Prince Alcott, with a filly and one hundred gifts beside him. Luna walked past him and formed tears of rage. She ran outside.


Prince Alcott had currently been excused by the mare to do something. (You know what's that thing, right?) He laid his eyes on Tia, and offered her for a dance.

Meanwhile....

Luna was eighty inches to the exit. Celestia was laughing with Alcott. "Oh, you're so funny Alcott.." Tia stopped laughing and glanced at the horizon. That's Luna! Celestia dropped her hoof and followed Luna.

Cinderella's Revenge

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Luna ran to the broom closet (that part came from the story Shining Armor's Wedding Blooper. That's just the short name though, but read it anyway!) on the far right indoor outskirts of the palace. She shut the door, looked at the crystal ensembles (so much for the broom closet) and threw a broom head first. Luna saw the broken wood pieces clattered at the ground, buried her face on her hooves and cried as softly as she could.


Tia trotted in the first of the million halls, worried of her sister. Leaves rustled from the open windows, landing on her evening gown, but she did not care. Puddle water splashed in her mane, and wind blew her unsteadily, but still she kept going on. A tornado of wind blew Celestia to the sides. Must...hold..on...must find Luna... Another tornado of wind blew Tia. Oh..Oh! What is wrong with the guards?! Someone's gotta warn them about closing the windows!

Suddenly, Celestia heard a shriek coming from the broom closet. Tia's eyes widened. That must be Luna! Tia galloped as fast as she could and stared at her sister, knees all flooded. "Luna! Oh Lulu, what has happened to you?" she asked full of concern. Luna sniffled and looked at the bright, worried face of her sister. She cried even louder than before. "Luna! Don't cry! Everypony's gonna come here if you cry!" Celestia hissed. "Now tell me what's wrong or else." she continued sternly. Tia's face was so stern and angry that Luna got shocked and scared. After a few seconds of a severe case of wide eyes and shock, Luna finally gave up.

"Nothing... just a colt you don't know..." Luna murmured.

"And what's his name?!" Tia demanded. The case went on again.

"He's called...Alcott...."

The second that struck the time Luna said that made Tia gasp. She had no reaction but in her head her mouth fell down. "Oh, I can't believe that jerk! But that prince's plan is gonna backfire when we take care of it!

Now it was Luna's turn to hang her mouth. "You know him?"

Tia just gave a sheepish grin and replied. "Uh...yea, sure!" Oh darn it, I thought he'll be my Prince Charming for the heck of it! "Now get up and show him that princesses just wanna have fun! (this part helped out by the song 'Princesses Wanna Have Fun' by Blair on Barbie Princess and the Popstar. So, my fic is inspired by other works.)"

Luna nodded. "And Tia? You look crazy. Get another shower while I ask the chef to make cake."


It was late at night, preferably ten to twelve. Luna nodded to Tia, which is hoof in hoof with her. Luna appeared between the horizon when Tia is about to accept her dance. "Well, well Alcott. Look who decided to show up."

Alcott gasped. "No no no, wait! This is all a misunderstanding!"

It's time for Tia's act. "Oh really? A misunderstanding? Oh my, how tragic!" Tia hit Alcott's chest with her hoof. Then the third filly showed up.

"My, my Alcott! I knew in your eyes this will happen. Playcolt! But I shouldn't just let him flee with only a hoof kick, right girls?"

The princesses nodded and was feeling more evil than ever when she joined the two. "What shall we do to him, then? I suggest putting a blog post in the Fillies Everywhere site. Being the first victim, of course." Luna suggested.

Soon, the filly spread a mischievous grin. "Good, but not good enough. As the owner of the online show Shake Your Tail, I'd be honored to make it as a movie. So, broom closet?" The girls nodded and carried Alcott to the broom closet.

"Hi! As you know I'm Princess Carla, and we're in Shake Your Tail! Herewith the princesses of Equestria, we show you Prince Alcott of Fillydelphia!"

"He's the jerky playcolt, and I guess he made a big mess of himself!"

"One million people should know!"

"And now for our new event, Splotch a Cake! Luna, if you would do the honors." Each filly took cake and threw them to Alcott.

Carla posted the video and turned off her laptop. "So Alcott, I hope you learnt your lesson. Now you know what Cinderella can do. It's over."

And to Luna's shock, Carla crowned Luna with her Cinderella crown. Alcott cried and galloped away to his chariot. (Please get back to the ballroom and play This Is Our Big Night!)

(Bonus Chapter) World of Mischief

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Luna casualy strolled down the terrace with Nanny Blackberry. She was wearing her Cinderella crown, and as the host of her, Celestia and Carla's sleepover, she gets to plan the activities. After a quick round of omelettes, they will be having a burger cooking class Blackberry as the host/chef and Chives as an assistant. "Nanny Blackberry! Can I, Cewestia and Cawrla go to the dining hall for awhile? You can place the equipment and slice the vegetabwles first!"

"Why, sure , sugar. Just don't make a mess!" They galloped inside as a mischievous grin spread ear to ear on Luna's face.

Picture a filly chariot is moving out from the palace. You know why? Cuz it is now. "Go to the Fillydelphia castle!" Luna commanded. Alcott soon appeared before the horizon. "My, my, how splendid! If it isn't Prince Charming?"

"L-l-luna...! Oh, please! Please! Mercy on me, Your Majesty! You've got all you wanted! All..oh, oh PLEASE!" Alcott shuddered. Well, a filly in a Cinderella costume appeared.

"Don't you dare touch my pretty Alcott! He's mine!!" she shrieked.

"Hello Cinderella. Oh wait. That's me."

"You, mayhap have won this round, but me and my dearest Alcott don't have time for you!"

"So you care about each other? Ha ha ha, I spit at that! How tragic!"

Alcott swoop the alicorn's hooves and carried her as they flew away. Luna grabbed a dropped nail polish bottle. Soon, Carla- short for Carmen- whispered something to the two rulers. "You remember that handsome prince called Sombra? Shall we go?"

The girls smiled and galloped to Krustallos' and Amemond's castle.